北师大版（2019）选择性必修 第一册Unit 1 Relationships Writing Workshop课件 (共24张PPT)

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邀请信
Unit 1 Relationships
Writing Workshop
By the end of this section, students will be able to
1.master the writing skills of the invitation letter and complete a high-level composition of this kind.
2.enhance students’ interest and confidence in the writing and learning English.
Learning objectives
Brainstorming
Definition:
An invitation letter is a type of letter that is to invite the receiver to take part in certain activity.
activities
a birthday party
the graduation ceremony
a wedding ceremony
the Spring Festival
a photography exhibition
an English speech contest
arts festival
the closing ceremony
a tea party
a New Year’s party
a drawing exhibition
the opening ceremony
a paper cutting exhibition
a farewell party
a talent show
a get-together
a talk show
Mid-autumn Day
the school’s 50th anniversary
例文赏析
假定你是李华，是你校英语角负责人。你校将于下周日在学校操场举行英语角活动，请你给交换生Bill写一封信，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.时间和地点
2.活动的目的和主要内容。
要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
---全面审题
写作分析：
首段: 发出邀请的目的
主题：邀请的具体内容
结尾：期待接受邀请
Dear Bill,
I’m Li Hua, the person in charge of the English Corner of our school. We’re throwing an activity to improve their spoken English. So I’m writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
As scheduled, the activity will be held on our school playground next Sunday. Some wonderful performances like storytelling, word puzzle and English jokes will be presented for us to enjoy. What’s more, any exchange student who attends the activity will receive a special gift made by our students as a souvenir at the end of the party.
We will feel much happy if you could come and enjoy it.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
开门见山
主题内容
期待回复
A letter of invitation
Ending
express your __________
Beginning
state your__________
Body
give detailed ______________
1
2
3
purpose
information
expectation
reasons
Part 1 : Beginning
—state your purpose
activities
throw a party
celebrate a festival
organize a contest
hold a ceremony
put on a show
host an exhibition
celebrate an anniversary
arrangements
significance
Part 2 : Body
—give detailed information
Body(activity)
time，place
detailed activities
如果你能接受我的邀请，我将不胜感激.
我们真诚地期待着您的光临。
请尽早确认您的参与。
如果方便的话，你一定要出席。
如果你有空的话,希望你不会拒绝我的邀请。
—express your expectation
I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation.
We are sincerely looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
You are surely expected to be present if it is convenient.
Hopefully, you won’t decline my invitation if you are available.
Part 3 : Ending
典例示范：
假定你是李华，你校将举办陶艺展。请你写封邮件邀请你的外国朋友 Tim参加，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步：
审好题定方向（限时3分钟）
定主题
定文体
定要点
定人称
定时态
邀请外国朋友参加陶艺展
邀请信
1.说明写信目的
2.介绍陶艺展的安排及意义
3.表达期望
陈述写信目的时用第一人称
介绍展览的相关情况用第三人称
以一般将来时为主
第二步：
谋布局写好句（限时12分钟）
列框架（2分钟）
列要点、写句子（8分钟）
句子提升（2分钟）
主题：邀请外国朋友参加陶艺展
开头:说明写信目的
邀请你参加陶艺展，了解中国传统文化。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm writing to invite you to join in visiting a pottery exhibition to help you underst and traditional Chinese Culture, as you always want to know about.
participate in
(
)
利用定语从句和高级词汇替换技巧
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm writing to invite you to participate in visiting a pottery exhibition where you can understand traditional Chinese Culture, as you always want to know about.
第二步：
谋布局写好句（限时12分钟）
列框架（2分钟）
列要点、写句子（8分钟）
句子提升（2分钟）
主题：邀请外国朋友参加陶艺展
开头:说明写信目的
主体:介绍陶艺展的安排及意义
1.陶艺展的时间、地点:
____________________________________________________________________________________
The exhibition is scheduled to start at 2 p.m. next Saturday on my school playground, and it will last two hours.
下周六下午两点在学校操场开始，持续两个小时
1.利用强调句
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is at at 2 p.m. next Saturday on my school playground that the exhibition is scheduled to start and it will last two hours
2.状语从句的省略
As scheduled, the exhibition will start at 2 p.m. next Saturday on my school playground and lasting two hous.
第二步：
谋布局写好句（限时12分钟）
列框架（1分钟）
列要点、写句子（8分钟）
句子提升（1分钟）
主题：邀请外国朋友参加陶艺展
开头:说明写信目的
主体:介绍陶艺展的安排及意义
2.介绍活动安排:
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
展出在这一领域享有盛誉的艺术家们的130余件陶艺作品。
Over 130 pottery works will be displayed in the exhibition. They are made by artists who enjoy high reputation in this field.
1.定语从句
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Over 130 pottery works that are made by artists who enjoy high reputation in this field will be displayed in the exhibition.
两个定语从句重复
2.分词作后置定语
enjoying
第二步：
谋布局写好句（限时12分钟）
列框架（2分钟）
列要点、写句子（8分钟）
句子提升（2分钟）
主题：邀请外国朋友参加陶艺展
开头:说明写信目的
主体:介绍陶艺展的安排及意义
2.介绍活动安排:
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
10位幸运观众将有机会在老师的指导下制作陶艺作品
10 lucky audience will have the chance to make their own work under the guidance of teachers.
opportunity
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to invite you to participate in visiting a pottery exhibition.
As scheduled, the exhibition will start on my school playground at 2 p.m. next Saturday. Over 130 pottery works that are made by artists in this field will be displayed. Besides,10 lucky audience will have the opportunity to make their own work under the guidance of teachers. In a word ，the exhibition will help you have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
Hopefully, you won’t decline my invitation if you are available.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三步：巧衔接成篇章（限时1分钟）
Practical Writing
课堂限时练
假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过感恩节(Thanksgiving Day)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：
1. 出发及返回时间；
2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Lucy,
——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Lucy,
I’m writing to invite you to visit the elderly people in the nursing home on Thanksgiving Day.
On that day, We are starting off at 9:00 on Sunday morning and coming back at around 4:00 in the afternoon. There will be many activities , which we hope will make them happy. We plan to make dumplings with the elderly people. What’s more, We have also prepared some performance for them, such as singing, dancing and playing games.
We do hope that you could manage to attend it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
aspects of a good invitation letter
structure
content
language
handwriting
Write a composition after class and hand it in tomorrow
Homework