(共19张PPT)
Unit 3 The internet
Reading and Writing
浦江县第二中学
Lead-in :Watch a video
What problems are mentioned in the video
Identity theft
(身份盗窃)
Information leakage
(信息泄露)
Wire Fraud
（电信诈骗）
What can you do to protect yourself
while surfing the internet or using a variety of apps (Online safety)
Never spread rumors
Never share personal information
Be careful when following offsite links
Never arrange meetings with strangers
Seek help when necessary
2
From the internet
What type of passage is it
comments
A blog
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 1 and find out the main idea of the blog post
1
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
Introduction Something about the writer and the topic
_______ _____________ 。
Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
To make the composition more persuasive
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 2 and find out 3 guidelines the author provided
1
Body Give some tips on online safety, explain them in detail and give the reasons.
dos don'ts
If…leave the site immediately
protect your privacy
be polite
post comments/click on anything
give out your address/
phone number
How are the guidelines connected
besides; in addition; additionally; moreover; furthermore; what's more; on top of that;
first of all; to begin/start with; in the first place; first and foremost
lastly; most importantly, last but not the least; in the end
Signal Words
organized and persuasive
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 2 again and find out 3 online troublemakers the blog post mentions.
1
Identity theft
Troll
Cyberbully
a common and serious problem
explanation
…is a person who …stir up ...
definition
Like a troll...however..
comparison
How does the writer end the post
A. By asking questions.
B. By answering questions.
C. By asking and answering questions.
D. By asking readers to write comments.
√
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 3 and choose the best answer.
1
Ending End by asking the readers to write comments.
strong interactivity(互动性)
Why do we have comments in a blog
To put heads together and come up with more ideas
To hear different voices from the outside world
Blog post
Title
introduction
Body
Ending
Tell the main idea.
Introduce the topic.
Background information.
Guidelines/ suggestions/ tips
Use linking words to express clearly.
Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Add details. （Examples/Definitions/Comparison)
Ask for comments.
A summary of a blog post.
besides; in addition; additionally; moreover; furthermore; what's more; on top of that;
first of all; to begin/start with; in the first place; first and foremost
lastly; most importantly, last but not the least; in the end
Signal Words
Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety.
Online shopping sites
Use a website you are familiar with.
Use strong passwords.
Don’t use public computers.
Social networking apps
Don’t post personal information.
Don’t believe everything.
Be polite.
Online chat rooms
Don’t give out too much information.
Never meet someone you met online alone.
Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post.
假如你是李华，请你就 “Online Shopping Safety”这一话题写一篇英文博客发表在校英文网站上。内容包括：
1.引出话题(introduction)
2.提出建议(body)
(1) 挑选你熟悉的购物网站；
(2) 使用强密码；
(3) 勿使用公共电脑。
3.邀请读者分享经验。(ending)
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Online Shopping Safety
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
仿写
Online shopping safety
Introduction :
Today, I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times--__________________________________. (你如何在网上购物时保持安全). I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
how do you stay safe while shopping online
_________(首先), you'd better use the website _____________________(你熟悉的).It is easy for us to try a new website , but ________________(出于安全原因)，shopping at a familiar website is _____________.
First of all
which you are familiar with
for safety reasons
a better choice
Second, remember to ___________________(使用强密码).It’s better to use _________________________________
(数字和字母的组合),_________________________________
________.(这样能有效保护你的身份不被窃取)
use strong passwords
a mix/combination of numbers and letters
which will protect your identity from theft
effectively
Body:
Third, don't use public computers, ______________________
_____________.(你的隐私会被记录在你的电脑上). If so, ___________________________________________________
(你将更有可能成为网络挑事者或网络恶霸的目标)
you will be more likely to become a target for a troll or cyberbully.
in the computer.
________________________________(只要你遵循这些安全忠告)，you will have a better chance of being safe while shopping online.
So long as you follow these safety tips
Ending :
你有什么关于网购安全的好建议可以分享吗 请在下方发表您的评论。
Do you have some better tips for online shopping safety to share Post your comments below.
your privacy will be recorded
Online Shopping Safety
When it comes to shopping online safety, as an experienced netizen, whose net age is more that 10 years, I’m sure that I know one thing or two. Here are some tips for you.
First, it is highly recommended that you use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Download familiar app or software like taobao. In addition, when registering a shopping website, you might as well use a strong password and keep it well. Furthermore, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers. Last, great importance should be attached to installing a firewall to watch over your information. A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet.
Do you have any good tips about shopping online safely？Your ideas are welcomed below!
Sample writing1:
Today, I want to blog about shopping online safety, which has drawn wide attention nowadays. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
Shopping online embraces many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy whatever you’re interested in without going outdoors. When shopping online, you can choose from varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Nevertheless, some people hold the belief that its drawbacks overweigh its merits. Initially, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. In addition, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not urgently needed.
From my standpoint, the Internet is a double-edged sword. Only if we use the Internet more normatively，can we shop online more safely. What’s your opinion about shopping online Post your comments below!
Sample writing 2:
Sample
Evaluation Criteria 评价标准 items Scores (25’)
Contents内容(10’) Introduce the topic
Include examples, comparisons, or explanations
Ask readers to leave comments or suggestions
Structure (6’) The tips and suggestions are well organized(有条理的) by using signal words
Include transitional sentences过渡句
Language (6’) Advanced高级的 expressions or sentence patterns句型 ; grammar or spelling mistakes
Others (3’) Handwriting书写
Let's polish the passage.
Homework:
1. Polish your writing
2. Find more ways to stay safe online教学设计
课程基本信息
学科 英语 年级 高一年级 学期 秋季
课题 必修第二册UNIT3 THE INTERNET Reading for writing
教科书 英语必修2
教学目标
Students are expected to write a blog post about suggestions on protecting online safety; Students are expected to view information online more critically and objectively； Students will be aware of the importance of protecting online safety and being polite; Students are expected to scan the passage and get the basic structure and language feature of the blog post.
教学内容
教学重点： Stimulate students to have a good understanding of how to write a blog post. 教学难点： Cultivate students to write a blog post with the correct structure and the proper language.
教学过程
Step1 :Lead-in : 1):Watch a video What problems are mentioned in the video Information leakage (信息泄露) Identity theft (身份盗窃)Wire Fraud （电信诈骗） 2):Think and share What can you do to protect yourself while surfing the internet or using a variety of apps (Online safety) Never spread rumors Never share personal information Be careful when following offsite links Never arrange meetings with strangers Seek help when necessary What type of passage is it A blog Step2 :pre-writing : Read paragraph 1 and find out the main idea of the blog post. Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
（Introduction---something about the writer and the topic） Read paragraph 2 and find out 3 guidelines the author provided
1):dos:If...leave the site immediately
protect your privacy be polite
don'ts:post comments/click on anything give out your address/phone number Body:Give some tips on online safety, explain them in detail and give the reasons.Define new words or key terms.) 2)How are the guidelines connected
Signal Words
first of all; to begin/start with; in the first place; first and foremost:besides; in addition; additionally;moreover; furthermore; what's more; on top of that;
lastly; most importantly, last but not the least; in the end
organized and persuasive 3):Read paragraph 2 again and find out 3 online troublemakers the blog post mentions. Identity theft--------explanation
Troll-----------definition Cyberbully---------comparison 4)Read paragraph 3 again and choose the best answer. How does the writer end the post A. By asking questions. B. By answering questions. C. By asking and answering questions. D. By asking readers to write comments. Ending End :by asking the readers to write comments.
Why do we have comments in a blog
To hear different voices from the outside world To put heads together and come up with more ideas 5）summary summary of a blog post
Title-----Tell the main idea. Introduction----Introduce the topic./Background information.
Body-------Guidelines/ suggestions/ tips
Use linking words to express clearly
Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful
Add details.
Ending-----Ask for comments. Step 3 writing ①Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety. Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post. Online shopping sites
· Use a website you are familiar with.
· Use strong passwords.
· Don't use public computers. Social networking apps · Don't post personal information. · Don't believe everything. · Be polite. Online chat rooms
· Don' t give out too much information.
·Never meet someone you met online alone.. ②Students organize their own drafts. ③Students exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist to help their partners revise his/her draft. Step 4 Homework 1. Polish your writing 2. Find more ways to stay safe online
