(共23张PPT)
Unit 4 Fun in the Sun!
Developing the Topic:
Reading for Writing
(Writing about your favorite sport)
1. 基于写作目的、文体和要求,分析课文结构,列出所描述运动的内容要点;
2.绘制思维导图,谋篇布局,拟定框架,完成写作任务;
3.通过自评和互评,学会反思,改进文章结构、内容和语言。
Talk about one sport or activity. The following questions may help you.
1. What’s your favorite sport or activity
2. Who do you like to do it with
3. When do you do it
4. How often do you do it
5. Where do you do it
You may begin like this:
My favorite sport is ... I often play it with ... And I ...
Pre-writing
1. Look at the pictures, what can you see
2. Try to introduce a favorite sport to your partners!
An Essay
Title
Beginning
Body
End
题目
开头
主体
结尾
文章结构包含哪些部分?
Look at the title of the essay, guess its content.
1. The main idea
2. Try to underline the
important information.
Read the essay carefully and answer the questions:
1. What is the writer’s favorite sport
______________________________________________________________
2. Where is the writer’s hometown
______________________________________________________________
3. When does the writer often ski
______________________________________________________________
The writer’s favorite sport is skiing.
The writer’s hometown is Altay./The writer’s hometown is Xinjiang, China.
The writer often skis in the beautiful snow season.
Read the Title & Beginning together and complete the chart.
My Favorite Sport
I’m from Xinjiang, China. My favorite sport is skiing.
Where Xinjiang, China
What Favorite Sport
ski
*hometown
*travel
mountain
*turn
*move
make turns
v. 滑雪(运动)
n. 家乡;故乡
v.,n. 旅行;游历
n. 高山;山岳
n. 转弯;机会
v. 转弯;转身;翻;成为
v. 移动;搬(家)
转弯
Read the Body together and fill in the blanks.
The body includes __________ .
Para.2 is about __________.
Para.3 is __________.
A. Setting of skiing B. More about you and the sport
A&B
B
A
Activity 1
Read the text and complete the setting chart.
The setting of __________________
skiing
Place:
Weather:
Time:
in the mountains
in winer/in the
beautiful snow
season
sunny
Skiing has a long history in my hometown, Altay. People travel here to ski in winter. I often ski with my friends in the beautiful snow season. It is sunny today. My friends and I are skiing in the mountains. I’m good at making turns. And my friends move very fast.
I also enjoy watching skiing games on TV. I can learn a lot from it.
阿尔泰(地名)
adj. 美丽的
v.&n. 旅行
n. 高山
擅长......;
精通......
v.享受;欣赏
v. 移动
1. body
2. history
3. hometown
4. season
5. sunny
6. fast
n. 身体,主体,躯干
n. 历史
n. 家乡,故乡
n. 季节
adj. 阳光充足的
adv. 快,迅速
adj. 快的,迅速的
Read the End together.
I love skiing. It’s lots of fun!
作者对于滑雪的态度/作者认为滑雪是怎样的?
我喜欢滑雪。滑雪乐趣无穷!
Activity 2
While-writing
仿照Activity 1 ,尝试画一个关于你自己最喜欢的运动的setting chart吧
Hint
What is your favorite sport
Where are you from
When do you often exercise
What do you think of it
...
根据你的setting chart来写一写吧
An Essay
Title
Beginning
Body
End
我最喜欢的
运动
来自哪里+最喜欢的运动是......
运动的环境+更多运动的细节
你的感受
Post-writing
给同学们展示一下自己的成果吧!
Excellent
Good
Fair
More improvements needed
I am from Liaoning, China. My favorite sport is playing ping-pong.
Playing ping-pong is a very good exercise for people’s health. My friend Xiaoxiao likes playing ping-pong very much. We play ping-pong after school every day. On sunny days, we play it outdoors. On rainy days, we play it indoors.
I also like watching ping-pong games on TV. I always watch it with my family.
I love ping-pong. It’s lots of fun!
My Favorite Sport
Title
Beginning
Body
End
范
文
赏
析
I am from Liaoning, China. My favorite sport is playing ping-pong.
My Favorite Sport
先简单介绍自己
再说明自己最喜欢的
运动
Title
Beginning
①
②
Playing ping-pong is a very good exercise for people’s health. My friend Xiaoxiao likes playing ping-pong very much. We play ping-pong after school every day. On sunny days, we play it outdoors. On rainy days, we play it indoors.
I also like watching ping-pong games on TV. I always watch it with my family.
Body
Setting of sport
More about you and the sport
I love ping-pong. It’s lots of fun!
End:
回顾一下,文章主要分为哪几部分?
Title
Beginning
Body
End
一篇文章都包含哪几个部分?
Body中包含什么?
写作短语积累:
Setting of sport
More about you and the sport
have a long history有着悠久的历史
in my hometown在我的家乡
in the mountains在山里
make turns转弯
enjoy doing sth.喜爱做某事
watch skiing games on TV通过电视看滑雪比赛
Title, Beginning, Body, End
1. Make your final draft in your exercise book.
2. Invite your partner to rate your final draft.