2025年高考总复习英语 第三部分题型备战 专题八 概要写作[配套课件]
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专题八 概要写作
2025年高考一轮总复习
第三部分 题型备战
一、题型要求
概要写作题型要求根据所提供的材料写一篇 60 词左右的内容
概要。其中所提供的短文词数在 350 词以内，所选材料的题材和
体裁没有限制。
二、命题分析
一般来说，体裁以说明文、议论文为主，辅以记叙文等文体；
题材则以考生熟悉的话题为主，段落相对较清晰。这一题型主要
考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时
考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体
结构的把握能力。具体来讲涉及三项核心能力：
一是提取文本的关键信息(即要点)。
二是用自己的语言对关键信息重新措辞。
三是清晰、有逻辑、连贯地呈现要点。
三、评分标准
(一)评分原则
1.本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。
2.评分时， 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档
次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于 40 和多于 80 的，从总分中减去 2 分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现。
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性。
(3)上下文的连贯性。
(4)对各要点表达的独立性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应
视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
档次 描述
第五档(21－25) ——理解准确，涵盖全部要点
——能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成
的概要结构紧凑
——完全使用自己的语言
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第四档(16－20) ——理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
——所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但
完全不影响意义表达
——比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所
完成的概要结构紧凑
——有个别整句抄自原文
(续表)
档次 描述
第三档(11－15) ——理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
——所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影
响意义表达
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使上下文内
容连贯
——出现两句以上整句抄自原文的现象
(续表)
档次 描述
第二档(6－10) ——理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
——有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意
义的表达
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少
连贯性
——出现两句以上整句抄自原文的现象
(续表)
档次 描述
第一档(1－5) ——没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
——有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响
了意义的表达
——缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯
——多个句子抄自原文
0 分 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容
无关
(续表)
例
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman, author of The
A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We've gone
to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to
be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're
building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the
opposite.Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's
insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of
not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still, don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough
praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like
they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see
no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise Experts say that the quality
of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and
focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your
child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“We should
especially recognise our children's efforts to push themselves and
work hard to achieve a goal，” says Donahue, author of Parenting
Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really
Matters.“One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end
product that matters.”
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if
he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort
regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and
not the outcome can also mean recognising your child when he has
worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report.But
whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be
proportionate (相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into
it.
【文章大意】
父母对孩子的表扬过多或过少都会带来不好的影响，恰当的
表扬应着重表扬孩子做事过程中的努力而非结果，并建立在实际
情况的基础上。
【段落大意】
第一段：主要介绍了父母从过去批评孩子到现在过度表扬孩
子，而过度的表扬也会对孩子造成伤害。
第二段：主要论述了在批评与表扬孩子方面不要走极端，不
表扬孩子也不好。
第三段：主要论述了什么是高质量的表扬，对孩子的表扬要
真诚，并且注重孩子努力的过程而不是只关注结果。
第四段：归纳总结，点名表扬应遵循的原则，也就是鼓励与
表扬应该与其付出努力的程度成正比。
【参考范文一】
It is no easy job to educate children.Parents are wrong from strict
discipline in the past to excessive praise today.(要点 1) Considerable
praise helps to encourage children to make progress, but don't go from
one extreme to the other.(要点 2) High-quality praise should focus on
children's efforts, rather than on results.(要点 3) The principle for
dealing with praise is to consider the link between praise and
effort.(要点 4)
【参考范文二】
Parents praise their children to promote their confidence，but too
much praise may result in opposite effects.(要点 1) However， kids
may feel discouraged when not given enough praise.(要点 2)Actually，
what really matters is the quality rather than the quantity
of praise ， which should be sincere and concentrate on process
instead of result.(要点 3) Praise offers encouragement and recognition，
while it should be based on the fact and correspond with the effort.(要
点 4)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because
their websites can all start to look and sound the same.Nothing will
give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college
campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms,
classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students.It
seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit
college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are
applying to happen to be more than a car ride away.But keep in mind
that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life,
and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right
one.
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area.In
fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus,
and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of
a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the
very least you should find some time between applying and getting
your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend.It can
save you a lot of heartache if you rule out the things that you don't like
about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you
actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out
the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.It's a chance to chat online
with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and
it won't cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at
.While visiting an online college fair can't take
the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that
along with all your other research will help you make an informed
decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.
【文章梳理】请先在文中依次标记出各段要点。
参考范文：
It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to their desired colleges
personally before applying.(要点 1) Undoubtedly, students should visit
their local colleges, which may be included in applications.(要点 2) At
least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in
advance.(要点 3) For students who are short of money and time,
registering online is a good alternative to help them better understand
schools.(要点 4)
谢谢
21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com)
中小学教育资源网站
兼职招聘：
https://www.21cnjy.com/recruitment/home/admin
专题八 概要写作
2025年高考一轮总复习
第三部分 题型备战
一、题型要求
概要写作题型要求根据所提供的材料写一篇 60 词左右的内容
概要。其中所提供的短文词数在 350 词以内，所选材料的题材和
体裁没有限制。
二、命题分析
一般来说，体裁以说明文、议论文为主，辅以记叙文等文体；
题材则以考生熟悉的话题为主，段落相对较清晰。这一题型主要
考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时
考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体
结构的把握能力。具体来讲涉及三项核心能力：
一是提取文本的关键信息(即要点)。
二是用自己的语言对关键信息重新措辞。
三是清晰、有逻辑、连贯地呈现要点。
三、评分标准
(一)评分原则
1.本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。
2.评分时， 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档
次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于 40 和多于 80 的，从总分中减去 2 分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现。
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性。
(3)上下文的连贯性。
(4)对各要点表达的独立性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应
视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
档次 描述
第五档(21－25) ——理解准确，涵盖全部要点
——能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成
的概要结构紧凑
——完全使用自己的语言
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第四档(16－20) ——理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
——所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但
完全不影响意义表达
——比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所
完成的概要结构紧凑
——有个别整句抄自原文
(续表)
档次 描述
第三档(11－15) ——理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
——所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影
响意义表达
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使上下文内
容连贯
——出现两句以上整句抄自原文的现象
(续表)
档次 描述
第二档(6－10) ——理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
——有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意
义的表达
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少
连贯性
——出现两句以上整句抄自原文的现象
(续表)
档次 描述
第一档(1－5) ——没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
——有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响
了意义的表达
——缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯
——多个句子抄自原文
0 分 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容
无关
(续表)
例
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman, author of The
A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We've gone
to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to
be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're
building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the
opposite.Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's
insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of
not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still, don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough
praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like
they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see
no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise Experts say that the quality
of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and
focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your
child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“We should
especially recognise our children's efforts to push themselves and
work hard to achieve a goal，” says Donahue, author of Parenting
Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really
Matters.“One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end
product that matters.”
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if
he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort
regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and
not the outcome can also mean recognising your child when he has
worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report.But
whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be
proportionate (相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into
it.
【文章大意】
父母对孩子的表扬过多或过少都会带来不好的影响，恰当的
表扬应着重表扬孩子做事过程中的努力而非结果，并建立在实际
情况的基础上。
【段落大意】
第一段：主要介绍了父母从过去批评孩子到现在过度表扬孩
子，而过度的表扬也会对孩子造成伤害。
第二段：主要论述了在批评与表扬孩子方面不要走极端，不
表扬孩子也不好。
第三段：主要论述了什么是高质量的表扬，对孩子的表扬要
真诚，并且注重孩子努力的过程而不是只关注结果。
第四段：归纳总结，点名表扬应遵循的原则，也就是鼓励与
表扬应该与其付出努力的程度成正比。
【参考范文一】
It is no easy job to educate children.Parents are wrong from strict
discipline in the past to excessive praise today.(要点 1) Considerable
praise helps to encourage children to make progress, but don't go from
one extreme to the other.(要点 2) High-quality praise should focus on
children's efforts, rather than on results.(要点 3) The principle for
dealing with praise is to consider the link between praise and
effort.(要点 4)
【参考范文二】
Parents praise their children to promote their confidence，but too
much praise may result in opposite effects.(要点 1) However， kids
may feel discouraged when not given enough praise.(要点 2)Actually，
what really matters is the quality rather than the quantity
of praise ， which should be sincere and concentrate on process
instead of result.(要点 3) Praise offers encouragement and recognition，
while it should be based on the fact and correspond with the effort.(要
点 4)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because
their websites can all start to look and sound the same.Nothing will
give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college
campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms,
classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students.It
seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit
college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are
applying to happen to be more than a car ride away.But keep in mind
that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life,
and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right
one.
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area.In
fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus,
and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of
a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the
very least you should find some time between applying and getting
your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend.It can
save you a lot of heartache if you rule out the things that you don't like
about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you
actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out
the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.It's a chance to chat online
with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and
it won't cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at
.While visiting an online college fair can't take
the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that
along with all your other research will help you make an informed
decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.
【文章梳理】请先在文中依次标记出各段要点。
参考范文：
It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to their desired colleges
personally before applying.(要点 1) Undoubtedly, students should visit
their local colleges, which may be included in applications.(要点 2) At
least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in
advance.(要点 3) For students who are short of money and time,
registering online is a good alternative to help them better understand
schools.(要点 4)
谢谢
21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com)
中小学教育资源网站
兼职招聘：
https://www.21cnjy.com/recruitment/home/admin