2025届高考英语二轮复习 专题一： 高级表达素材课件(共74张PPT)

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专题一　高级表达素材
目 录
Contents
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高级表达1　灵活运用词汇
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高级表达2　丰富优化句式
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高级表达3　心理描写万能句式
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高级表达4　动作描写万能句式
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高级表达5　修辞运用万能句式
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高级表达6　升华结尾万能句式
高级表达1　灵活运用词汇
类型1　名词/形容词活用作动词
单词 活用成动词 示例
bare adj.光秃秃的→vt.
使露出 Anne bared her teeth in a grin.安妮露齿一笑。
The dog bared its teeth and growled.那条狗龇牙咧嘴地
低吼。
blind adj.失明的→vt.使
眼花，使目眩 She was blinded by the light when she went outside.她
出去的时候被光线照得眼花。
cap n.帽子→vt.用······覆
盖顶部(或端部) The mountains in the background were capped with
snow.背景中的山峦被白雪覆盖。
单词 活用成动词 示例
closet n.壁橱→vt.把······关
在房间里 Upon getting home， she closeted herself away in her
room.一回到家，她就把自己关在房间里不见任何
人。
cup n.杯子→vt.使(双手)
成圆状托起 She cupped her little son’s face in her hands and kissed
him.她双手捧着小儿子的脸亲吻他。
edge n.边缘→v.(使)徐徐
移动，慢慢移动 He edged nervously past the dog.他紧张不安地从狗旁
边慢慢走过去。
elbow n.肘→vt.用肘推；
用肘挤 She elbowed her way through the crowd.她用手肘从人
群中挤了过去。
单词 活用成动词 示例
empty adj.空的→vt.倒
空，腾空 They emptied their pockets， but found nothing.他们掏
空了自己的口袋，但里面什么也没有。
eye n.眼睛→vt.注视，
审视 The boy couldn’t help eyeing the cakes hungrily.男孩儿
饥不可耐地盯着蛋糕。
flood n.洪水→v.照进，
(光线)充满；(情感
等)充满，涌上心头 Morning sunshine flooded in through the window as she
opened her eyes.当她睁开眼睛，清晨的阳光从窗口洒
进来。
A wave of happiness flooded me.我心中涌起一股幸福
的暖流。
单词 活用成动词 示例
inch n.英寸→v.(使朝某
方向)谨慎移动 She inched her way delicately over the rough ground.她
小心翼翼地在高低不平的地面上慢慢行走。
narrow adj.狭窄的→v.缩小 He pressed his lips together and his eyes narrowed.他抿
紧嘴唇，眼睛眯起来。
pocket n.口袋→vt.把······放
进衣袋 She paid for the drink and pocketed the change without
counting it.她付了饮料的钱，把找回的零钱数都没数
就装进了口袋。
单词 活用成动词 示例
rest n.休息→v.(使)倚
靠，托 She was thinking how to work out the math problem，
with her chin rested in her hands.她双手托着下巴，在
想怎么解这道数学题。
His elbow was resting on the arm of the sofa.他的胳膊
肘靠在沙发的扶手上。
shoulder n.肩膀→vt. 扛，
背；承担 He shouldered his bag and set off home.他扛起包朝家
走去。
She shouldered the double burden of childcare and full-
time work.她承担着抚养孩子和做全职工作的双重负
担。
单词 活用成动词 示例
snake n.蛇→v.曲折前行 The road snaked through forested mountains.道路在林
间蜿蜒延伸。
storm n.暴风雨→vi.气呼
呼地疾走，闯 Ryan stormed into the office， demanding to know
where the manager was.瑞安气冲冲地闯进办公室，质
问经理在哪里。
类型2　具体动词代替笼统动词
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
look/see/watch看 spot看见，发
现，注意到 I spotted a cute puppy in the bushes while walking
down the path.走在小路上时，我发现灌木丛中有一
只可爱的小狗。
glance瞥一眼 She glanced shyly at him and then lowered her eyes.她害羞地瞥了他一眼，然后垂下了眼睛。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
look/see/watch看 scan浏览；细
看，端详 He scanned through the newspaper over breakfast.他边吃早饭，边浏览报纸。
She scanned his face anxiously.她急切地端详着他的脸。
observe观察 He observes keenly， but says little.他观察敏锐，但言语寥寥。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
look/see/watch看 stare/gaze盯着
看，凝视 Emma stared/gazed at him in disbelief， shaking her
head.埃玛一边狐疑地盯着他看，一边摇着头。
glare怒目而视 The old woman didn’t shout， just glaring at him
silently.老妇人没有喊叫，只是默默地怒视着他。
peek窥视，偷
看 She peeked from behind the bedroom door， found
nobody in the sitting room， and then slipped out of the house.她从卧室门后偷看，发现没人在客厅，就溜出了房子。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
cry哭 weep流泪，哭
泣 She wept bitter tears of disappointment.她失望得痛哭流
涕。
sob啜泣，抽噎 She began to sob again， burying her face in the pillow.
她把脸埋在枕头里，又开始抽噎起来。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
say/talk说 whisper耳语，
低语 Emily leaned over and whispered something in Amy’s
ear.埃米莉探过身去附耳跟埃米说了些什么。
stammer结结巴
巴地说 ＂Morning， Mr Brook. I...I’ve come to say sorry
for...＂ Bill stammered.＂早上好，布鲁克先生。
我······我来道歉，是为······＂比尔结结巴巴地说。
shout大声说 The twins merrily shouted ＂Happy birthday，
Mom！＂ as she came in.当她进来时，这对双胞胎高
兴地喊道：＂生日快乐，妈妈！＂
yell叫喊 The coach stood on the sidelines yelling encouragement
at the players.教练站在场外，为运动员呐喊鼓劲。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
smile/laugh笑 smile微笑 He said nothing， merely smiled and watched them.他什
么也没说，只是微笑地看着他们。
laugh发笑，大
笑 Seeing his head stuck in the pumpkin， his dad just
couldn’t stop himself laughing.看到他的头卡在南瓜
里，他的爸爸忍不住大笑起来。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
smile/laugh笑 grin露齿而笑 He grins， delighted at the memory.想起往事，他开心
地咧嘴笑起来。
giggle咯咯地笑 Children giggled at the joke.孩子们给这笑话逗得咯咯
笑。
chuckle低声轻
笑 She chuckled to herself for having worn two socks that
didn’t match.她对自己穿了两只不配对的袜子而暗自发
笑。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
eat吃；
drink喝 bite咬 She grabbed the bread on the table， bit into it， and
then rushed out hurriedly.她抓起桌上的面包，咬了一
口，然后匆匆地跑了出去。
chew咀嚼，嚼
(碎) He leaned out of the window chewing gum.他嚼着口香
糖探身窗外。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
eat吃；
drink喝 swallow吞下，
咽下 She swallowed hard and forced back her tears.她使劲咽
了一下口水，强忍住了泪水。
wolf大口地快
吃，狼吞虎咽 The hungry boy took the steamed bun and wolfed it
down.饥饿的男孩儿接过馒头，狼吞虎咽地吃了下
去。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
eat吃；
drink喝 taste品尝 She was disappointed and discouraged， for the cookies
she made tasted awful.她既失望又气馁，因为她做的饼
干吃起来很糟糕。
consume吃，
喝，饮 He consumed a loaf of bread and a large bottle of milk
before leaving.他在离开前吃了一条面包，喝了一大瓶
牛奶。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
hit打，击 knock敲，击；
把······打成(某
种状态) The wild animal was knocked flat by the blow.那野兽被
一拳打倒在地。
beat敲打，锤砸 Wind roared， thunder rolled and rain beat against the
windows.狂风大作，雷声隆隆，雨点打在窗户上。
strike打，击 He struck the table with his fist angrily.他生气地用拳头
打桌子。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
walk走；
run跑 wander漫步，
闲逛 We wandered back towards the house after the picnic.野
餐后，我们溜达着回到房子里。
bounce活泼兴
奋地走，蹦蹦
跳跳地去 He bounced across the room to greet them.他兴奋地冲
过房间去迎接他们。
stamp跺着脚
走，噔噔地走 Anger welling up in him， he turned and stamped out of
the room.他勃然大怒，转身噔噔地走出了房间。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
walk走；
run跑 storm气呼呼地
疾走，闯，冲 Judy burst into tears and stormed off.朱迪突然大哭起
来，气冲冲地走了。
stagger摇摇晃
晃地走，蹒跚 He staggered to the bed and collapsed in exhaustion.他摇
摇晃晃地走到床边，筋疲力尽地倒了下去。
tiptoe踮着脚
走，蹑手蹑脚
地走 She tiptoed to the room， afraid of waking up the
sleeping baby.她踮着脚走向房间，害怕吵醒睡着的婴
儿。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
walk走；
run跑 slip悄悄疾行，
溜 I didn’t notice the cat slipping out of the door when I
came in.我进来的时候，没有注意到猫溜出了房间。
jog 慢跑 We were jogging while the dogs were bounding ahead.我
们在慢跑，而狗在前面蹦蹦跳跳地跑。
bound 跳跃着跑
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
walk走；
run跑 rush迅速移动，
冲 The little girl rushed to greet her mother， sweeping her
arms wide.小女孩儿张开双臂舞动着，冲过去迎接母
亲。
dash猛冲 With the shot of the starting gun， I dashed out and ran
as fast as I could.随着发令枪的一声枪响，我冲出去，
以最快的速度奔跑。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
think想 wonder琢磨 He wondered what he should say to her to make her feel
better.他想知道该对她说些什么才能让她感觉好点
儿。
reflect认真思
考，沉思 I need time to reflect before making a decision.做决定
前，我需要时间认真思考。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
think想 guess猜想，认
为 I guess he must be really angry at me.我想他一定很生我
的气。
imagine胡乱猜
想，误以为 He’s always imagining that we’re talking about him
behind his back.他总是胡乱猜测我们在背后说他的闲
话。
flash突然想
到，猛然想起 A terrible thought flashed through my mind.一个可怕的
想法闪过我的脑海。
笼统动词 具体动词 动作描写示例
shake抖 tremble(因紧
张、激动、惊
慌等)颤抖，哆
嗦 She has done her best to keep calm but finds herself
trembling with tension.她尽力保持镇定，可还是由于
紧张而抖个不停。
shiver(因寒冷
或恐惧而)哆
嗦，颤抖 I shivered and pulled my scarf more tightly round my
neck.我打了个寒战，用围巾把脖子围得更紧了。
高级表达2　丰富优化句式
句式1　画龙点睛的＂非谓语动词＂
1. He listened with close attention， biting his lips and staring at the floor.他聚精会神地
听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。
2. He sat with his head in his hands， not believing what I told him.他双手抱头坐着，不
相信我告诉他的话。
3. I opened the letter carefully， hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the
wallet.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。
4. Gasping with pain， he forced himself to his feet and with slow， shaky
steps， began to walk.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步
子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。
5. The man stood there silently， torn by sorrow and compassion.男人安静地站在那里，
被悲伤和同情折磨着。
6. Encouraged by his teacher， he decided to gather his courage and participate in the
writing contest.在老师的鼓励下，他决定鼓起勇气参加写作比赛。
7. Filled with fright， I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我心中充满恐惧，
拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前走。
8. Having told the truth， he felt a lot easier and returned home with a lighter heart.说出
真相后，他感觉轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
句式2　光彩夺目的＂with复合结构＂和＂独立主格结构＂
9. With my eyes full of tears， I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.我满眼泪水
地冲出公寓，沿着街道跑。
10. He embraced me with his arms wide open and his eyes shining like a diamond.他张开
双臂拥抱我，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。
11. All of us were hard at it at the kitchen table， with my dad filming the annual event.我
们都围着厨房的桌子忙碌，而爸爸在拍摄这个一年一度的活动。
12. With her plan ruined by the accident， she let out a cry with anger.由于她的计划被事
故破坏了，她愤怒地叫了一声。
13. My mother stopped and raised her head with surprise in her eyes.我的母亲停下，满
眼诧异地抬起头。
14. He hung up the phone and ran to hospital， worry written on his face.他挂断电话，
跑去医院，脸上写满担忧。
15. The night falling， they put up a tent and wolfed down a simple dinner.夜幕降临，他
们搭起帐篷，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿简单的晚餐。
16. He walked aimlessly along the street， head down and shoulders bowed.他低着头，
垂着肩，漫无目的地在街上走着。
17. Hundreds of eyes fixed upon him， he felt so nervous that his teeth started to chatter.
上百双眼睛盯着他，他感到十分紧张，牙齿咯咯打颤。
18. He lay on the grass， his hands crossed under his head.他躺在草地上，双手交叉放
在头下。
句式3　丰富多彩的＂复合句＂
19. With a branch in my hand， I intended to frighten the dogs away， which in turn
annoyed them.我手里拿着一根树枝，打算把狗吓跑，这反过来又惹恼了它们。
20. His body trembled， his mouth half opened， and he let out a scream of pain that felt
like a knife cutting through his chest.他的身体颤抖着，他的嘴半张着，发出一声痛苦
的尖叫，感觉就像一把刀穿过他的胸膛。
21. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine.
想到我们可能在这样的黑暗中迷了路，我背上一阵阵发冷。
22. An idea flashed into Jack’s mind that he could wake the family by throwing some
stones into the house.杰克脑子里闪过一个念头，他可以扔一些石头到房子里，把这
家人吵醒。
23. What followed was an awkwardly long silence， which was eventually broken by
David’s stomach growling.随后是一段长时间尴尬的沉默，最终被戴维肚子的咕咕叫
声打破了。
24. She could hardly conceal her excitement the moment she knew she was admitted.当她
得知自己被录取的时候，她几乎无法掩饰自己的兴奋之情。
句式4　彰显文采的＂特殊句式＂
25. Standing on stage， so nervous was I that my mind went blank.站在舞台上，我紧张
得头脑一片空白。
26. Not until then did she pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.直到那
时，她才说出了困扰她一整天的事。
27. Only after we had prepared all the necessary ingredients did we begin to make the
cake.我们直到把一切必需的原料都准备好后才开始做蛋糕。
28. Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.黑暗中传来一个他从来
没有听过的声音。
29. Cold and tired though we were， the kids’ smiling faces cheered us up.虽然我们又冷
又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。
30. Hanging on the west wall are a group of pictures by Qi Baishi.挂在西墙上的是一组
齐白石的画。
31. No sooner had he realized his mistake than he apologized to her.他一意识到自己的错
误就向她道歉。
32. From then on， not only did I have a good command of writing， but I also knew the
truth： with belief and determination， everything is possible.从那时起，我不仅很好地
掌握了写作，而且还知道了：有了信念和决心，一切皆有可能。
33. It was at that moment that I felt something changed in our relationship.就在那一刻，
我觉得我们的关系发生了变化。
34. Thanks to my mom， we made it at last. It was she who/that always taught us to hold a
positive attitude towards difficulties.多亏了妈妈，我们最终成功了。是她总教导我们
对困难要持积极的态度。
35. Helping a new friend made Joey feel good inside， for， although the baseball cap did
matter much to him， he knew there were more important things in life.帮助一个新朋友
让乔伊内心感觉很好，因为尽管棒球帽对他来说很重要，但他知道生活中还有更重
要的事情。
36. What unacceptable excuses he made to avoid his responsibility！他为了逃避责任编
的理由太不能让人接受了！
37. How wonderful a time we ever had together！ 我们曾一起度过了多么美好
的时光啊！
38. How moved and proud she was when learning her twins made the breakfast for her！
当她得知她的双胞胎为她做早餐时，她是多么的感动和自豪！
句式5　委婉动人的＂虚拟语气＂
39. If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom， I wouldn’t have been trapped in this awful place，
confronted with the danger of death.我如果没有和汤姆吵架，就不会被困在这个可怕
的地方，面临死亡的危险。(表达后悔)
40. I lost my job and it seemed as if the end of the world had come.我丢了工作，似乎世
界末日已经来临。(表达沮丧)
41. Without Eric’s encouragement， I would have been immersed in sorrow for the rest of
the day.要是没有埃里克的鼓励，我可能后半天都沉浸在悲伤的情绪里。(表达感激)
42. Steven lowered his head with embarrassment， wishing he hadn’t said that.史蒂文尴
尬地低下头，希望自己刚才没说那些话。(表达后悔)
43. ＂If only I had listened to my mother’s advice！＂ the little girl whispered
to herself.＂要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好！＂小女孩低声对自己说。
(表达后悔)
高级表达3　心理描写万能句式
　(a wave/sense/feeling/surge/flush/ripple of＋) 情感名词＋seized/
overwhelmed/took hold of/swept over/flooded over＋sb. 表示＂某人感到······＂
或＂一阵/一种······向某人袭来＂
1. A wave of panic seized her， but she forced herself to leave the room calmly. 她感到一
阵恐慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。
2. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the good news.听到这个
好消息，我很开心。
3. As he realized he had made a big mistake in the teamwork， a feeling of guilt swept
over him.当他意识到自己在团队合作中犯了一个大错时，内疚感席卷了他。
4. Fear sweeping over her， she stood rooted to the spot.恐惧笼罩着她，她站在原地，
一动不动。
　情感名词＋welled up inside/in/within sb. 表示＂某人心中充满了······＂
或＂······涌上心头＂
5. Every time I think of my grandpa， sadness will well up inside me.每当我想起爷爷，
悲伤就会涌上心头。
6. At the thought of how happy her mother was when receiving the gift， joy
and pride welled up within her.一想到母亲在收到礼物时多么高兴，她内心就
充满了喜悦和自豪。
7. Anger welling up within him， he flushed bright red.他怒不可遏，脸涨得通红。
　a look/an expression of＋情感名词＋flashed across/spread across/crossed one’s face 表示＂······神色从某人脸上掠过＂
8. Levin sat there and an expression of sadness crossed his face. 莱文坐在那里，脸上掠
过一丝悲伤。
9. A look of annoyance crossed her face when she knew that her father forgot her birthday
gift which he had promised.当知道父亲忘记了答应她的生日礼物时，她脸上掠过一丝
恼怒的神色。
　the sight/thought of sth. made sb.＋情感形容词/filled sb. with＋情感名
词 表示＂看到/想到某事物让某人······＂
10. The sight of her son graduating filled her with pride.(＝At the sight of her son
graduating， she was filled with pride.)看到儿子毕业，她充满了自豪。
11. The very sight of the bear made him nervous.(＝At the sight of the bear， he was
nervous.)一见到那头熊，他就紧张。
12. The thought of the moments shared with Grandpa filled me with great joy.(＝At the
thought of the moments shared with Grandpa， I was filled with great joy.)一想到和爷爷
度过的时光，我就感到十分快乐。
13. The sight of its owner made the little dog excited. (＝At the sight of its owner， the
little dog got excited.)看到自己的主人，小狗兴奋不已。
　one’s heart pounded/thumped/raced/fluttered with＋情感名词
(excitement/nervousness/fear/fright/...) 表示＂某人······得心怦怦直跳＂
14. My heart was thumping with fear as I walked through the dark hallway.当我穿过黑暗
的走廊时，我害怕得心怦怦直跳。
15. His heart had been pounding with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage.在登
上舞台之前，他紧张得心怦怦直跳。
16. Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.她心怀期待，心怦
怦直跳，等待着结果。
　情感名词A ＋ gave way to/was swept away by/was replaced by/was
overshadowed by/...＋情感名词B 表示＂······变为······/······为······所取代＂
17. Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by fear when she learned
that she was left alone at the station.当她得知自己被独自留在车站时，她先前
的泰然自若已变为害怕。
18. His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. 他最初的兴奋
被深深的失望取代。
19. The joy she once felt was overshadowed by a wave of sadness.她曾经感受到的喜悦
被一股悲伤的浪潮掩盖。
　情感名词(fear/terror/panic/surprise/shock/embarrassment/...) rooted sb.
to the spot 表示＂某人······得呆住＂
20. Embarrassment rooted her to the spot.她尴尬得呆住了。
　情感名词(joy/happiness/delight/excitement/...)＋was shining in one’s
eyes 表示＂某人眼里闪着······的光芒＂
21. Excitement was shining in her eyes.(＝Her eyes were shining/sparkling/ twinkling with excitement.＝There was a sparkle of excitement in her eyes.)
她的眼里闪烁着激动的光芒。
　sb. felt a great sense of ＋情感名词＋welling up in sb.’s heart/surging
through sb. 表示＂某人感到一股强烈的······在内心升腾/奔涌＂
22. Mother felt a great sense of happiness welling up in her heart， tears rolling down her
face.母亲感到一股巨大的幸福感涌上心头，她泪流满面。
23. Seeing the barking dog charging towards her， Mary felt a great sense of
horror surging through her.看到那只狗吠叫着朝她冲来，玛丽感到一股强烈的
恐惧奔涌而来。
　(much) to one’s ＋情感名词，主句 表示＂令某人(非常)······的是，······＂
24. To his surprise and joy， his father told him to keep the money and buy something he
wanted.令他惊讶和高兴的是，父亲告诉他把钱留着，买一些他想要的东西。
25. Much to my annoyance， they decided not to come after all.他们最终决定不来，这
使我很生气。
26. I never thought she’d agree， but to my amazement she did.我从未想过她会同意，
但是令我吃惊的是她同意了。
　What＋moved/excited/shocked/...＋sb. (most)＋was that从句 表示
＂(最)令某人······的是······ ＂
27. What worried her was that her teammate might not agree with her plan.让她担心的是
她的队友可能不同意她的计划。
28. What upset him most was that his parents forgot his birthday because of the birth of his
little sister.最令他难过的是，因为妹妹的出生，他父母忘记了他的生日。
　情感形容词(短语)，主句
29. Excited and moved，he followed the sound and went out for help.他又激动又感动，
顺着声音出去求助。
30. Speechless with happiness， she held her son tightly in her arms， with tears welling
up in her eyes.她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地抱着她的儿子，热泪盈眶。
31. Lonely and sad， I was in desperate need of close friends， with whom I hoped to
share my happiness and sorrow.我既孤独又悲伤，迫切需要亲密的朋友，我希望与他
们分享我的快乐和悲伤。
32. Disappointed and frustrated， the poor man made his way back to his home.带着失望
和沮丧，这个可怜的人回家了。
33. Jack paced up and down in his room， restless with anxiety.杰克在他的房间里来回
踱步，焦躁不安。
高级表达4　动作描写万能句式
　三连动作链：主语＋did A， did B and did C
1. She woke up， slipped out of her bed and tiptoed to the door.她醒了，溜下床，踮着
脚走到门口。
2. John pressed his finger against his lips， pointed to the cat， and shook his head gently.
约翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指了指猫咪，轻轻摇了摇头。
3. He lost his balance， staggered back against the rail and fell over.他失去了平衡，往
后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。
4. Ben also ran in my direction， gathered me into his arms and kept patting my back.本
也朝我这个方向跑过来，把我拥入怀中，不停地轻拍我的后背。
5. She wiped away tears， turned back and smiled at me sweetly. 她擦去眼泪，转过身，
朝我嫣然一笑。
　主语＋did A and did B，非谓语动词；主语＋did， 非谓语动词A＋and＋非谓语动词B；非谓语动词A，主语＋did，非谓语动词B
6. They ran in bare feet， laughing and teasing.他们光着脚跑着，笑着闹着。
7. He laid his fishing pole down and dragged his feet， moving toward me at a snail’s
pace.他放下钓鱼竿，像蜗牛一样磨磨蹭蹭地向我走来。
8. Using its head， it touched our hands， seemingly saying that we were to be thanked.
它用头碰了碰我们的手，好像在说，它要感谢我们。
9. Dad sat beside me and patted me on the shoulder， not saying a word of blame.爸爸坐
在我旁边，拍了拍我的肩膀，一句责备的话都没说。
10. Encouraged by Mr Wales， David had made great progress and even decided to take
part in the speech contest.在威尔士先生的鼓励下，戴维取得了很大的进步，甚至决定
参加演讲比赛。
　主语＋did，with＋名词＋非谓语动词或形/副/介词短语
11. When Karina saw it， she hugged it tightly with tears filling her eyes.当卡琳娜看到
它时，她紧紧地拥抱着它，双眼满是泪水。
12. We all pretty much slept with one eye open. 我们几乎都不敢睡太熟。
13. He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest， glaring at
me. 他靠在厨房的操作台上，双臂交叉抱在胸前，怒视着我。
14. With the biggest pumpkin on my shoulder， I headed home merrily， singing along
the way.我肩上扛着最大的南瓜，愉快地朝家走去，一路上唱着歌。
15. He received the letter with his hands trembling and his heart thumping. 他接过信，双
手颤抖，心怦怦直跳。
　主语＋did，独立主格[逻辑主语(heart，eyes等表身体部位的名词)＋非
谓语动词或形/副/介词短语]
16. Reaching out， I touched its head，my heart racing. 我心跳加速，伸手去
摸它的头。
17. He tossed and turned， his head hot to touch. 他辗转反侧，头摸着烫手。
18. He raced to the bus stop， his heart pounding violently.他飞快地跑到公交车站，心
怦怦狂跳。
19. My arms aching and knees trembling， I crawled out of the cave and shouted for help.
手臂疼痛、膝盖发抖，我爬出了洞，大喊救命。
20. Eyes glued to it， he fell in love with the shiny red car the instant he saw it.他一看到
那辆闪亮的红色汽车就爱上了它，目不转睛地盯着它。
21. So many eyes looking at her，Mary felt very shy.这么多双眼睛望着她，玛丽感到
很害羞。
高级表达5　修辞运用万能句式
　明喻：主语＋did/系动词＋like/as if...
1. Seized by curiosity，Tom went out of the room on tiptoe like a cat. 汤姆好奇心顿起，
像猫一样踮着脚走出房间。(心理＋动作描写)
2. The scenery along the route is just like a breathtaking landscape painting.沿路的景色就
像一幅令人惊叹的风景画。(环境描写)
3. The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard， cutting my face like
a sharp knife.天空一片漆黑。一阵大风猛烈地刮着，像一把锋利的刀割着我的
脸。(环境描写)
4. Scared to death， John stood under the tree like a statue. 约翰吓得要死，站在树下，
像雕像一样一动不动。(神态描写)
5. Children are running on the grass as if they were happy birds.孩子们在草地上奔跑，
宛如快乐的小鸟。(心理＋动作描写)
6. I couldn’t move my legs. It was as if they had been stuck to the floor.我的腿动不了，
就好像被固定在地板上了。(动作描写)
　明喻：A＋系动词/did＋as＋形容词/副词＋as＋B
7. My mother was as busy as a bee， making preparations for the festival. 我妈妈忙得不
可开交，为节日做准备。(动作描写)
8. Her face turned as pale as snow.她的脸变得苍白如雪。(神态描写)
9. The teacher’s comfort was as gentle as a spring breeze.老师的安慰如春风般温柔。(人
物描写)
10. Having walked in the snow for two hours， I felt my hands were as cold as ice.在雪地
里走了两个小时，我感觉我的手冷得像冰。(感受描写)
11. The bus full of passengers went as slowly as a snail.这辆载满乘客的公交车慢得像蜗
牛。(场景描写)
12. Her voice came down the line as clear as a bell. 她的声音如铃声般清晰地从听筒里
传出来。(人物描写)
13. He has been as nervous as a cat on hot bricks all evening.他整个晚上都紧张得像热
锅上的蚂蚁。(心理描写)
14. The boy was as proud as a peacock when he showed me his new sneakers. 那个男孩
给我看他的新运动鞋时，骄傲得像一只孔雀。(性格描写)
　暗喻：A＋be动词＋B ；通过其他一些能暗含A与B之间联系的动词
15. My sister’s hair was a flowing golden river streaming down over her shoulders. 我姐
姐的头发像一条流动的金色河流顺着她的肩膀散下来。(外貌描写)
16. The boy seized the food on the table and wolfed it down.男孩一把抓过桌上的食物，
狼吞虎咽地吃了下去。(动作描写)
17. The news was a dagger in her heart， making her too painful to breathe.这个消息犹如
一把匕首刺在她心头，使她痛苦得无法呼吸。(心理描写)
18. His anger was a wildfire waiting to light.他的愤怒就像等待点燃的野火。
(心理描写)
19. A heavy silence blanketed the room. 房间里一片寂静。(环境描写)
　拟人：主语(表＂动物/自然现象/含蓄抽象＂的名词)＋用于人的谓语动
词
20. Sorrow was written in each and every wrinkle of his face.他脸上的每一条皱纹都写
着悲伤。(心理描写)
21. He glanced at the dew-covered grass， and it winked back at him.他扫了一眼挂满露
珠的青草，青草就向他眨了眨眼。(环境描写)
22. The color rushed to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意识到有人
在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。(神态描写)
23. The tree branch scratched and clawed at my window， trying to break into the house.
树枝抓挠我的窗户，试图闯进屋内。(环境描写)
24. She felt on top of the world， and every freckle on her cheeks was dancing with joy.她
感到非常高兴，脸颊上的每一个雀斑都在高兴地跳舞。(心理描写)
25. Depressed， I ran out of the room. A gentle breeze greeted me， caressed my cheeks
and smoothed my heart.我沮丧地跑出了房间。一阵轻柔的微风向我袭来，抚过我的
脸颊，抚慰了我的心。(心理描写)
26. She didn’t realize that an opportunity was knocking at her door.她没有意识到一个机
会正在敲她的门。(事件描写)
　夸张：(动词＋)数词/量词/形容词＋名词；动词(＋名词)＋副词
27. Despite the cold， he was sweating from carrying a mountain of cardboard into the
backyard.尽管天气很冷，他还是因为搬了一大堆硬纸板到后院而汗流浃背。(数量的
夸张)
28. Hearing the bad news， she cried her eyes out， her heart breaking into about a
million pieces.听到这个不幸的消息，她痛哭流涕，心都碎了。(情绪和数量的夸张)
29. Carrying a backpack which weighed a ton， he was extremely exhausted and looked
half dead. 他背了个很沉的背包，非常疲惫，累坏了。(数量和感受的夸张)
30. When she heard the bad news， she cried a river of tears.当她听到这个噩耗时，她
泪流满面。(情绪的夸张)
31. Mary is a musical genius. Her performances always bring the house down.玛丽是个音
乐天才。她的表演总能赢得满堂喝彩。(动作的夸张)
32. The limitless grassland， the wandering sheep and the setting sun kept me fascinated.
一望无际的草原、徜徉的羊群和落日都让我着迷。(环境的夸张)
33. He was so nervous and worried that sweat began to pour down his face.他如此紧张和
担忧，以至于汗开始沿着面颊淌下来。(情绪的夸张)
　排比：词语/句子＋词语/句子，and 词语/句子
34. John convinced most of the audience because he argued logically， calmly and
reasonably.约翰说服了大多数听众，因为他辩论得合乎逻辑，冷静而合理。(突出了
辩论的说服力)
35. To maintain good health， he determined to eat a well-balanced diet， sleep for 8
hours every night and exercise for 20 minutes every day.为了保持健康，他决定均衡饮
食，每晚睡8小时，每天锻炼20分钟。(展示一系列行动)
36. He was so ashamed of what he thought， what he said and what he did that day.他为
自己那天所想的、所说的和所做的感到非常羞愧。(突出人物羞愧的情绪)
37. My forgetful mom often forgets to bring the key， take the wallet， and even lock the
door.我健忘的妈妈总是忘记带钥匙，忘记带钱包，甚至忘记锁门。(突出人物健忘的
性格)
38. As a typical student favored by teachers， he is never late for school， always active
in class， and always friendly towards his classmates.作为一名典型的受老师喜爱的学
生，他上学从不迟到，课堂上总是很活跃，而且对同学一直都很友好。(突出人物的
优秀品质)
39. Terrible thoughts flashed through Jane’s mind： whether there were dangerous
animals， whether she could survive this scary night， and whether Tom could find her.
一些可怕的念头闪过简的脑海：是否有危险的动物，她是否能熬过这个可怕的夜
晚，汤姆是否能找到她。(突出人物害怕的心情)
高级表达6　升华结尾万能句式
　情感升华：衔接语，主人公＋gradually/eventually/suddenly/...＋
realized/learned/felt/...＋n./that从句 表示＂······，主人公渐渐/终于/突然/······意识到/
明白/感到······＂
1. After this event，he came to realize that while he had given the dog a home， it had
given him something bigger — a second life.这件事发生后，他开始意识到，虽然他给
了那只狗一个家，但它给了他更重要的东西——第二次生命。
2. At that moment， I truly understood the meaning of the saying that kindness brings
about kindness.在那一刻，我真正理解了善有善报这句谚语的含义。
3. By showing kindness to others， the young boy gradually learned that he could make a
positive impact on the world surrounding him.通过对他人友善，年轻男孩逐渐明白他
可以对周围的世界产生积极的影响。
　情感升华：衔接语，it struck/hit/occurred to/dawned on＋主人公＋that
从句 表示＂······，主人公突然想到/逐渐明白······＂
4. Following that， it gradually dawned on me that the love of my mother is priceless，
which nothing can match.在那之后，我逐渐明白了母亲的爱是无价的，没有什么能与
之相比。
5. At the sight of my parents’ working hard on the farm， it occurred to me that it was
their selfless devotion that gave me a happy life. 看到父母在农场辛勤工作，我突然醒
悟，正是他们的无私奉献给了我幸福的生活。
　结尾点题：looking back on/thinking of/at the thought of/at the sight
of...，主人公＋always/still... 表示＂回首/想到/一想到/一看到······，主人公总是/仍
然······＂
6. Looking back on our adventurous journey， we realized that it was all worth it in the
end.回首我们的冒险之旅，我们觉得最终这一切都值得。
7. At the thought of that heart-warming scene， Jenna couldn’t help getting deeply moved
by the selfless love and care of her neighbors. 一想起那暖心的场景，詹娜就会情不自
禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。
8. And now，when looking back upon that experience， she still feels that it was that
experience that transformed her into a nature-loving being.现在，当回顾那段经历时，
她仍然觉得正是那段经历把她变成了一个热爱自然的人。
　结尾点题：衔接语，无灵主语＋sounded/echoed/rang/lingered＋in one’s
ear/head/mind/... 表示＂······，······在耳边/脑中/······回响＂
9. Since then， my father’s plain and encouraging words have always echoed in my
mind， guiding the way of my life.从那时起，父亲那些平淡而令人鼓舞的话就一直在
我的脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。
10. Though many years had worn on， his warning was still ringing in my ear.虽然许多
年过去了，但他的警告仍然在我耳边回响。
　结尾点题：(衔接语，)无灵主语＋reminded/enlightened＋主人公＋
that... 表示＂(······，) ······提醒主人公/使主人公明白······＂
11. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the
project. 整个经历提醒我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这个项目的关键。
12. The special experience enlightened me that company is the most important for the
elderly.这次特别的经历使我明白，陪伴对老年人来说是最重要的。
13. Such a warm scene reminded me that the language barrier can never be a problem
between kind and friendly people.如此温馨的场景提醒我，语言障碍永远不会是善良
友好的人们之间的难题。
　主题升华：Just then，a(n) old/famous saying/sb.’s words flashed
through/echoed in one’s mind，“名言/谚语.” 表示＂就在那时，一句老话/名言/某
人的话‘······’闪过某人的脑海/在某人脑海中回响。＂
14. Just then， a famous saying flashed through his mind，＂Keep your face always
towards the sunshine， and shadows will fall behind you.＂就在那时，他想到一句名
言：＂始终面向阳光，阴影自然落在你身后。＂
15. At that time， the old saying ＂If at first you don’t succeed， try， try again＂
echoed in my mind.在那个时候，那句老话＂如果你开始时没有成功，尝试，再尝
试＂在我的脑海里回荡。
　主题升华：Just as the saying goes，名言/谚语. 表示“正如俗话所说：
‘······’＂
16. Through the experience， we learned that helping others in need makes our day as
well. Just as the saying goes，＂Roses given， fragrance in hand.＂通过这次经历，我们
认识到帮助有需要的人也会让我们很快乐。正如俗话所说：＂赠人玫瑰，手留余
香。＂
17. Just as the saying goes， ＂Quitters never win and winners never quit.＂正如俗话所
说：＂退缩者永无胜利，胜利者永不退缩。＂
　人生感悟：Not until then did＋主人公＋ realize/learn/come to
understand＋感悟到的道理. 表示＂直到那时，主人公才意识到/明白······＂
18. Not until then did I realize what true friendship was： A friend in need is a friend
indeed.直到那时，我才意识到什么是真正的友谊：患难见真情。
19. Not until then did I come to understand what my teacher meant by saying ＂You’re
unique in the world.＂ 直到那时，我才明白我的老师说的＂你是世界上独一无二的＂
是什么意思。
　人生感悟：It is/was＋主旨名词＋that ...(，which sb. felt deep in one’s
heart/mind.)
20. It is love and care that make the world go around， which he felt deep in his heart.正
是爱和关心让世界转动，他在心里深深感受到了这一点。
21. It was the cross-country adventure that was the start to a lasting friendship between
him and me.正是那次越野冒险开始了我和他之间持久的友谊。
22. It was the unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced
with， we shouldn’t lose heart.正是这次特殊的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困
难，我们都不应该失去信心。
寓情于景：Despite/In spite of the＋adj.＋wind/rain/storm/air/...， sb./sth. did sth.
23. Despite the bone-chilling wind，I felt a wave of warmth and pride as I had got the
love and respect of my classmates. 尽管寒风刺骨，我还是感到一阵温暖和自豪，因为
我得到了同学们的爱和尊重。
24. In spite of the chill winter wind， their home where the two lovely dogs played
happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只
可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。
画面定格：With＋the＋adj.＋sunlight/wind/air/snow...， sb./sth. did...
25. With the warm sunlight flooding in， they hugged together， feeling
forgiven， loved and trusted. 温暖的阳光照进来，他们拥抱在一起，感到被原
谅、被爱和被信任。
26. After a whole day of volunteering service in the nursing home， we headed for our
home，with the setting sun shining upon our happy faces appreciatively.在养老院志愿服
务一整天后，我们动身回家，落日赞赏地把余晖照耀在我们愉快的脸上。