人教版八年级上册写作学案——课文中可使用的好的表达整理

步骤回顾
审题定结构
确定主题句，过渡句，衔接词等可套用内容
表达题目给出的信息
选择有话可说且会说的1-2个点展开，增加细节
选择几个好的表达改写句子
成文，检查语病
思考什么时候可以用
Unit1
My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! 使用比喻来描写感受
In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past. 使用同位语作细节补充；描写历史相关景物旅行经历可用。
What a difference a day makes! 描写有差别的旅行经历可用
And because of the bad weather, we couldn’t see anything below. 利用because of衔接的意识
My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop. It was so beautiful that we forgot about the last five hours. The food was so delicious that I was always full during the trip.使用so…that句型
Everyone jumped up and down in excitement. 使动作描写更细致
On the first day, we visited some old buildings, like(such as) Dr Sun Yat-sen's Mausoleum and the Presidential Palace. 利用介词作细节补充
It's a very famous lake in Nanjing, with beautiful parks and clean water. 利用介词作细节补充
The weather was sunny and hot there, just right for enjoying different activities outside.
I went swimming, went boating and played beach volleyball. They were not only interesting but also relaxing. 使用not only…but also 来表达并列结构
Unit2
调查结果模板 （时间）we asked ___ about ___. Our questions were about _____. Here are the results. // We found that ______; We all know that ______; The answers to out questions about　＿＿＿　were also interesting.
It’s good to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows, but we think the best way to relax is through exercise. 表达做某事的方式方法时可用
Exercise such as playing sports is fun. 利用介词作细节补充
Old habits die hard. So start exercising before it’s too late! 呼吁改掉坏习惯时使用
I usually play basketball twice a week and have a lot of vegetables every day. Drinking milk also helps a lot. What's more, I never stay up late because I make good use of time at school. 句式的变换；衔接词的使用；内容积累
Unit3
My mother told me a good friend is like a mirror. 谚语，可用于表相似的主题句
I’m quieter and more serious than most kids. That’s why I like reading books and I study harder in class. 使用that’s why进行衔接
I think friends are like books——you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. ( Yuan Li is one of those great ones. I’m so lucky to have a friend like him.) 谚语，可用于开头或结尾，注意语境
Larry often helps to bring out the best in me. 用于描述朋友，应有细节补充
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
We can talk about and share everything. I know she cares about me because she’s always there to listen. 5、6可一起使用作为描述朋友的段落，加一个example比较合适
For example, she’s funnier than anyone I know. 用For example来举例；用比较级表最高级的句型代替简单的形容词
In some ways they are the same. But in some ways they are different. 过渡句
As good friends, we have a lot in common. However, we still have some differences. 过渡句
We also share the same idol过渡句
When having problems with schoolwork, she prefers to ask others for help while I like to solve the problem by myself. 用于比较不同
In my opinion, a life without a friend is a life without a sun. 谚语，可用于开头或结尾
As a saying goes，“A friend is a second self.” We play with each other, share our feelings and ideas with each other and learn from each other in order to know each other better. 谚语，可用于开头或结尾
Unit4
Talent shows are getting more and more popular.
熟悉p25 描写电影院的最高级表达
Unit5
One of the main reasons is that Mickey was like a common man, but he always tried to face any danger. 描写喜爱的电影/人物的素材
Mickey was unlucky and had many problems such as losing his house or girlfriend, Minnie. However, he was always ready to try his best. 利用such as 补充细节；描写喜爱的电影/人物的素材
I like TV programs about travelling best. It takes me to visit a lot of beautiful and interesting places all over the world. Also, I can learn a lot about the weather, the history and the customs of these places from it. 描写喜爱的电视节目的素材
Unit 6
Many resolutions have to do with self-improvement. 用have to do with表about
Sometimes the resolutions may be too difficult to keep. 用too…to结构使表达简洁凝练
For this reason, some people say the best resolution is to have no resolutions. 用For this reason衔接
I’m going to break my bad habits.
I hope I can make all my resolutions come true. 结尾
Unit 7
They help with the housework and do jobs like working in dirty or dangerous places. Some can help to build cars, and they do simple jobs over and over again. 介绍机器人工作
We never know what will happen in the future!
Unit 9
Bring Ms. Steen to the party without telling her so that she can be surprised. 用so that衔接结果
I look forward to hearing from you.信件结尾
I would like to invite you to the opening of our new library.邀请
Unit 10
Problems and worries are normal in life. 安慰/说理
I think talking to someone helps a lot. Unless we talk to someone, we’ll certainly feel worse. 说理
I once lost my watch, and worried for days. At first, I was afraid to tell my parents about it. In the end, I talked to my parents and they were really understanding. After that, I will always remember to share my problems. 改写例子
It’s best not to run away from our problems. We should always try our best to solve them. 说理
Parents have more experience and are always there to help. 说理
Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you’re halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it. 说理