中考复习 书面表达16篇(选自江苏名校三模试题)
一、书面表达
1.(2024·江苏连云港·三模)生活技能对于个人的成长和成功起着重要的作用。掌握常用生活技能,可以把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。21st Century英文报社现征集题为 “Life skills” 的英语演讲稿,假如你是林涛,请根据下面的思维导图,用英语写一篇演讲稿,描述你应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能。
注意:
1. 词数90左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容包含思维导图所含提示,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn And how to improve them ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2024·江苏扬州·三模)学校安全教育旨在把生命为本的意识埋进青少年心灵深处。假定你们学校英语报正在开展题为“How to keep safe”的征文活动,请根据要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
1. 请遵守交通规则;
2. 在家和在学校都要注意安全,……;
3. 注意心理健康(mental health)安全,学会分享心理压力,……。
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,并适当发挥。
2. 文章词数100个左右。
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How to keep safe in daily life
Recently, more and more attention has been paid to teenagers’ personal safety
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3.(2024·江苏泰州·三模)向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。近期,我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据下面的提示信息,向负责本次活动的英语老师Miss Li写一封自荐信。
内容包括:
一、个人信息;
二、个人优势;
三、活动意义;
四、总结。
要求:
1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,适当发挥。
2.请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
3.……
Dear Miss Li,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hun
4.(2024·江苏扬州·三模)为帮助学生更好地了解端午节的历史与习俗,感受、挖掘其蕴含的文化内涵,上周你校开展了跨学科融合教学活动一“端午课堂”系列,包括语文、历史、艺术、劳动(Labour)等学科,请你以“Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival”为题,根据表格内容提示完成一篇英语报道,向学校英文报投稿,介绍你们在融合课堂上的实践内容及学习收获。
参考词汇: reed leaves 棕叶;filling 馅
Background (What you know about the festival) a traditional Chinese Festival
Lessons (What you did in class) History & Chinese tell the story of Qu Yuan… read Qu Yuan’s poems…
Art & Labour draw/sing/make …
Feelings (What you’ve got in class)
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival
Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activitics themed on “the Dragon Boat Festival”. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2024·江苏宿迁·三模)“Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.”对于青少年来说,旅游是一种成长和生活方式。毕业在即,你们班也将开启毕业之旅。假如你是李华,请拟定一份旅行策划并以电子邮件的形式发给Mr. Wang.
1. What do you think about the coming graduation trip
2. What place would you like to recommend Why
3. What safety tips and manners should be paid attention to when travelling
要求:1.包含上文提示信息,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,适当发挥;
2.词数90个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入词总数;
3.文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。
Dear Mr. Wang,
“Read thousands of books and travel thousands of mile.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6.(2024·江苏宿迁·三模)习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出: “人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程。育人是本,人无德不立,育人的根本在于立德,这是人才培养的辩证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务,各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动,请根据下面内容提示以“Moral Education(德育)” 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍如何践行德育教育。
Moral Education
家庭 家务劳动, 尊重父母……;
学校 遵守校规, 和同学老师和睦相处;
社会 保护环境, 志愿活动……
感受……自主发挥, 至少一点
注意事项:
1.词数90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实地名、姓名、校名、人名等信息。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to practice moral education.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2024·江苏南京·三模)Just as the saying goes, “Books are the ladder (阶梯) of human progress”. Reading is important for students.
Your friend Mark is worry about the books because he can’t choose a favorite book for himself in many good books.
So he wants to ask you to give some suggestions to him in order to help him enjoy reading books instead of being stopped reading by choosing a book. Also, he wants you to introduce a book you have already read for him so that he can understand the gist (主旨) more easily.
Dear Mark,
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Your friend
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8.(2024·江苏宿迁·三模)“立德树人,五育融合”的教育理念深入人心。假如你是李华,在即将毕业的日子里,回首过去的三年时光,从“德,智,体,美,劳”几个方面谈谈自己这三年来的进步,给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。请根据下表提示完成一篇英语短文。
make progress in… 德 爱国爱家,诚实守信,……。
智 努力学习,热爱阅读,……。
体 坚持锻炼,健康饮食,……。
美 善于发现生活中的美好,热爱自然,……。
劳 热爱劳动,掌握生活必备技能,……。
注意事项:
1.从表格中选择三项,其中“劳”必写。表格中的提示只是作为参考,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,适当发挥。
2.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇:劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
9.(2024·江苏无锡·三模)假设你是无锡某所中学的莉莉,你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。根据下图提示,给她回一封电子邮件。
注意事项:
1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,并展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
2. 流程图中的提示为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
5. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
10.(2024·江苏无锡·三模)莫言说,任何一个梦想,都可能因为读书而产生。为了号召青少年多读书、读好书,学校英语报Teens正在开展以“Growing up with reading”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项:
1. 短文需自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在 100 个左右,短文标题已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Growing up with reading
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11.(2024·江苏徐州·三模)每个人一生中都会有很多想做的事,为父母、为朋友、为自己、为班级、为家乡……你校英文报社以“One thing I would like to do for ________”为题开展征文活动,请你用英语写一 篇短文投稿。请补全题目,分享一件你想做的事,并说明你准备怎么做,以及你为什么要做。
提示问题:What would you like to do
How will you do it
Why would you like to do it
写作要求:1.文中须包含上面提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数90左右。
One thing I would like to do for ________
There are many things we want to do in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(2024·江苏无锡·三模)假设你是梁华,你的笔友David所在学校将组织“中国文化周 (Chinese Culture Week)”活动。他写信请你帮忙策划并介绍中国元素 (Chinese elements),以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。你草拟了信件流程图,请根据下图用英语写一篇回信。
注意事项:
1. 信件须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 提供的活动形式和中国元素为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在90个左右,信件的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 信件须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
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13.(2024·江苏宿迁·三模)随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,给人们的生活带来便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介 家用机器人外观时尚,使用范围广泛,受到人们的欢迎。
主要功能 1. 煮饭、打扫房间;2. 照顾、陪伴老人;3. 拨打电话处理紧急事件,拯救生命。
存在问题 1. 技术不够成熟,存在安全隐患;2. 价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议 ……(至少两点)
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:家用机器人 household robots, 紧急事件 emergency
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2024·江苏无锡·三模)2024无锡马拉松备受关注。迷人的春日美景与精彩的奔跑盛会完美相融。以一赛,见一城。锡马的十年,也是无锡快速发展的十年。在衣食住行等方面,无锡都呈现出了崭新的面貌。2025年,锡马将开启它的第二个十年。请你结合无锡的城市优势和马拉松给人们带来的积极影响,写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马,体验奔跑在最美樱花赛道上的幸福愉悦。
注意事项:1. 词数100个左右,演讲稿开头与结尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
2. 图中内容为非限定性内容,可作参考;
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
Dear friends,
The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon!
Thanks for your listening.
15.(2024·江苏淮安·三模)“月末观影”是我们学校推进“双减”政策以来的特色活动之一。同学们非常喜欢,很期待,也有自己的思考。请你根据表格里的要点,写一篇英语短文介绍你们学校的这一特色活动和你个人想法。
月末观影活动 时间:每月末的最后一个周五晚上; 地点:本班教室; 活动:观影后,同学们分组讨论心得。
我的“双减”建议 除了月末观影,学校还可以举行…… 活动(至少2个)及原因……
“双减”后,我的计划 1. …… 2. ……
注意:
1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
More Wonderful Activities
Our school has done a lot to ease (减轻) our burden (负担).
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16.(2024·江苏宿迁·三模)No.1 Middle School举办了“我的学校我做主”的校园建设金点子征集活动,让所有学生为学校未来发展提出自己的见解。假如你是章平,请你给校长写一封信。请你从提供的6个方面里选择2—3点,谈谈你的真实感受,并针对你认为有待提高的地方,提出合理建议和简要说明理由。
Contents Course design School environment
Quality of lunch Burden (负担) of homework
School activities School rules
Suggestions (适当发挥1—2点)
要求: 1.表达内容必须包含表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数100字左右 (作文开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Principal,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Grateful for all, I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
Yours,
Zhang Ping
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参考答案:
1.例文
Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn And how to improve them
First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. And be happy every day. Second, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. Third, solve problems in different ways. We are able to find out the problem, find solutions alone or with others and then solve it. Besides, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school. Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking. We can ask our family for help or search the Internet. Then practice making some dishes.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出学习生活技能的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从几个方面讲述 应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能;
第三步,书写结语。总结提高生活技能的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
②communicate with sb.与某人交流
③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. (it作形式主语)
②When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. (when引导时间状语从句)
③Get up early and never be late for school. (祈使句)
④All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life. (if引导条件状语从句)
2.例文:
How to keep safe in daily life
Recently, more and more attention has been paid to teenagers’ personal safety. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe in daily life.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we shouldn’t cross the road. And we shouldn’t ride the electric bikes. Second, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Third, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Fourth , be careful while doing sports. Fifth, remember not to swim in the river. It’s dangerous. What’s more, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. If we’re in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Last, We should pay attention to mental health safety ,too.
In short, safety must come first.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:这是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时态”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。适当添加内容,并突出写作要点内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。由“越来越多的人关注青少年的安全”引出“How to keep safe in daily life”这一主题。
第二步,具体描述写作内容。从 “交通,食品,交友,游泳,心理健康安全等”几个方面来描写怎样保持安全。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
② go up and down stairs 上下楼梯
③ what’s more 而且
④ in danger 处于危险之中
⑤ mental health safety 心理健康安全
[高分句型]
① If we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.(if 引导的条件状语从句)
② Remember not to swim in the river.(remember to do sth记得做某事)
3.例文
Dear Miss Li,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I’m in Class 9, Grade 9. I am outgoing and helpful. I read a lot of books about Chinese history and learned about it. I know many historical stories and am good at telling them in English. My spoken English is very good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
Through this activity, I can increase my interest in learning English and improving my ability of spoken English. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture. I’m so proud of it. Only in this way can I make it.
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作内容涵盖提示要点,注意全文需连贯通畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍个人信息;
第二步,介绍自己的优势和参加活动的意义;
第三步,表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.与某人交流
②it’s one’s duty to do sth.做某事是某人的责任
③in this way以这种方式
[高分句型]
①As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
②I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.(that引导的宾语从句)
4.例文
Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival
Last week, our school held a series of cross-subject activities themed on “the Dragon Boat Festival”.
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival. Many places in China hold dragon boat races to celebrate the festival. On that day, every family will eat rice dumplings.
We had many lessons about the festival, from History to Labour. Our history teacher told us the story of Qu Yuan who drowned himself in the Miluo River on that day. We also read aloud some famous lines from his poems in the Chinese lesson.
Then came my favorite part—Art and Labor. We expressed our own understanding about this festival by singing, drawing or making posters. We had fun making our own rice dumplings with reed leaves and different fillings. We couldn’t stop laughing when we saw rice dumplings in different shapes.
These lessons are not only interesting but also meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍端午节的相关情况;
第二步,具体阐述课堂内容;
第三步,总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①from...to...从……到……
②have fun玩得开心
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Our history teacher told us the story of Qu Yuan who drowned himself in the Miluo River on that day.(who引导的定语从句)
②We couldn’t stop laughing when we saw rice dumplings in different shapes.(when引导的时间状语从句)
5.例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
“Read thousands of books and travel thousands of mile.” I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip. It must be very relaxing and fun.
I hope to go to Santaishan National Forest Park. It’s our favorite place and we can have fun there. It’s so big that we can have a picnic and do some activities there. We can take the mobile phones to take some photos. As for the activities, let’s play some guessing games, sing songs, dance and so on.
However, safety should always be our top priority when traveling. We must adhere to the rules and regulations of the place we visit. Additionally, we should take care of our things. Lastly, we should be respectful to others, help each other. When we leave the park, we should take away the rubbish around us.
I’m sure we will have a great time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己的感受对即将举行的毕业旅行;
第二步,介绍自己建议去的地方及原因,可以在那里做什么;
第三步,介绍一些安全提示和礼仪;
第四步,书写结语。相信毕业旅行会过得非常开心。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun玩得开心
②have a picnic去野餐
③take photos照相
④take away带走
⑤have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip. (宾语从句)
②We must adhere to the rules and regulations of the place we visit. (定语从句)
③When we leave the park, we should take away the rubbish around us. (时间状语从句)
6.例文
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to practice moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. As for the relationship with our parents, we are supposed to respect them and communicate with them as often as possible.
At school, it’s necessary for us to obey the school rules. Besides, we should get along with our classmates and teachers.
We can plant more trees to protect the environment. It’s our duty to do some voluntary work. What’s more, we should behave politely in public.
Last but not least, we should not only love our country but also try our best to spread our Chinese culture in different ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:本文时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,感受要补全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出“如何践行德育教育”的话题;
第二步,根据提示内容分别从家里、学校、社会、感受等方面提出自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① as for至于
② communicate with them as often as possible 尽可能经常地交流
③Besides除此之外
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, we should not only love our country but also try our best to spread our Chinese culture in different ways. (not only...but also)
7.例文
Dear Mark,
I understand your dilemma in choosing a favorite book among so many good options. Here are some suggestions that might help you enjoy reading books without feeling stuck in the selection process.
Firstly, instead of focusing on finding a single favorite book, why not try exploring different genres and authors This way, you can experience a diverse range of stories and writing styles, which can ultimately make reading more enjoyable and enriching. Secondly, consider setting reading goals or challenges for yourself, it can also help you discover new titles. At last, seeking recommendations from friends, family, or online communities can lead you to exciting new books.
As for a book suggestion, consider reading The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho. It’s a captivating story about pursuing dreams and finding fulfillment.
I hope these ideas help you find joy in reading.
Your friend
2024.6.1
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章必须按照所提示的信息进行写作,注意语言需表达清楚、语义通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示自己理解马克在众多好书中无法选择一本自己喜欢的书的问题,并引出主题;
第二步,给出帮助他享受阅读书籍的几点建议并推荐一本自己读过的书。
第三步,表达希望自己的想法能帮助他找到读书的乐趣。
[亮点词汇]
①dilemma困境
②stuck in困在……
③instead of而不是
④genre类型
⑤a diverse range of多种多样的
⑥ultimately最终
⑦captivating迷人的
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions that might help you enjoy reading books without feeling stuck in the selection process. (that引导定语从句)
②This way, you can experience a diverse range of stories and writing styles, which can ultimately make reading more enjoyable and enriching. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
8.例文
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways.
First of all, I think we must love our country and our family. To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time. I have been thankful to my parents and friends. Second, I know the importance of knowledge, so I work hard and enjoy reading. In my free time, I read many books because reading can open up a new world to me. Third, labor education is necessary for us to receive, and I have taken an active part in all kinds of labor, such as doing housework and cleaning up the classroom. In this way, I have learnt many necessary life skills.
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示和要求,从“德,智,体,美,劳”几个方面中谈谈自己这三年来的进步,给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,表明自己在过去三年里进步很大;
第二步,具体从“德,智,体,美,劳”说明自己的进步;
第三步,总结,自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①To be honest老实说
②In one’s free time在某人业余时光
③take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time.(不定式作主语)
9.例文
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the after-class reading in our school.
In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of after-class reading. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students are too busy with after-school classes to do after-school reading. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all.
In the past few years, I have read many world classics. I have learned a lot from the books. In my opinion, books can open up a new world to us. So I suggest that everyone should have the habit of after-school reading.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和现在完成时;
③提示:邮件开头及写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状,接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因;
第三步,介绍自己的经历和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact事实上
②prefer…to…更喜欢……
③too…to…太……以至于不能……
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all.(so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
10.One possible version:
Growing up with reading
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can help us relax and open up our minds.
Treasure Island is my favourite. It tells a story of a young boy. He sails on the sea to look for hidden treasure. His story gives me much confidence. I’m not as shy as before. I want to travel and have more exciting experiences in the future.
I suggest that everyone should read Chinese ancient books, especially classical novels so that we can introduce our Chinese traditional culture to the world. The more we read, the brighter our future will become.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息提示内容;不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明阅读的重要性及好处;
第二步,介绍最喜欢的书及带给你的启发;
第三步,关于阅读的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②as ... as before像之前一样……
③traditional culture传统文化
[高分句型]
①I suggest that everyone should read Chinese ancient books, especially classical novels so that we can introduce our Chinese traditional culture to the world. (that引导的宾语从句;so that引导的目的状语从句)
②The more we read, the brighter our future will become. (“The+比较级...,the+比较级...”句型)
11.One possible version:
One thing I would like to do for my parents
There are many things we want to do in our lives. As for me, one thing I’d like to do is to cook a meal for my parents.
To start with, I will search the Internet to decide what to cook and take some notes about the cooking steps. Then I will go to the market to buy what I need. After that, I will prepare and cook following the steps carefully.
The reason I want to do this is to show my thanks and love to my parents. They are busy with their work every day and they’ve spent so much time taking good care of me. I think it’s time for me to do something for my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时,一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯,可适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,说明自己想为父母做一顿饭;
第二步,介绍自己将为父母做一顿饭的具体步骤;
第三步,阐述自己想为父母做饭的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① to start with 首先
② take some notes 做笔记
③ follow the steps 按步骤
④ be busy with 忙于
⑤ take good care of 照顾好
[高分句型]
① Then I will go to the market to buy what I need.(what引导宾语从句)
② I think it’s time for me to do something for my parents.(It’s time for sb. to do sth.句型)
12.例文
Dear David,
I’m very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It’s a good chance for you to learn more about China.
First, a paper-cutting show is a good choice. As a traditional art, paper-cutting includes different themes like plants, animals, stories and so on. Then, holding a cooking competition can also attract people’s interest, which is helpful in learning traditional customs in different places. What’s more, talks about Chinese history, poems or even buildings are surely welcome.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Liang Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;内容是你应该先根据笔友David的要求,草拟一个信件流程图,然后根据流程图用英语写一封回信,介绍中国元素 (Chinese elements),以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述书信内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;首先要介绍“中国文化周 (Chinese Culture Week)”活动在David所在学校举行的意义;其次详细介绍流程图中所涉及的中国元素 (Chinese elements);最后是愿望。
13.例文
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. They have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. Secondly, they can help to take care of the elder people, and spend time chatting or playing chess with them. Moreover, they can even make calls for help in case of emergency and save lives.
On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford one.
Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be reasonable as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍家用机器人的简介和主要功能;
第三步,介绍家用机器人存在的问题;
第四步,介绍你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to do被用来做某事
②in case of emergency在紧急情况下
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. (which引导的定语从句)
②On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. (过去分词作定语)
14.例文
Dear friends,
The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes.
Wuxi is a beautiful city which is located in Jiangsu Province, China. The city is famous for its natural scenery. One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake. Besides, the climate in Wuxi is fit for a happy living. The weather here is always warm and there is much rain. Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people. Many famous persons were born here, such as Xu Xiake, Xu Beihong, etc.
By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health.
I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon!
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据思维导图中的内容进行介绍,号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马,可适当添加细节,但要突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出演讲主题,介绍无锡城市的一些优势;
第二步,介绍马拉松给人们带来的积极影响;
第三步,书写结语。希望更多的人来参加2025年3月的锡马。
[亮点词汇]
① be located in位于
② be fit for适合
③ moreover除此之外
④ produce outstanding people培养优秀人才
⑤ by the way顺便一提
⑥ have a huge impact on...对……有积极影响
[高分句型]
① One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake.(“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型)
② Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people.(that引导定语从句)
③ By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health.(动名词短语作主语及that引导定语从句)
15.例文
More Wonderful Activities
Our school has done a lot to ease our burden. “Watching movies at the end of the month” is one of the activities of our school since carrying out the “double reduction” policy. We often watch movies on the last Friday of every month in our class. After finishing the movie, students will discuss their feelings in groups.
In my opinion, our school can also organize reading activities, from which students can learn a lot. Besides, the school can invite some famous people to give us speeches about Chinese culture, making us have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I want to keep healthy, so I plan to take part in different kinds of sports in my free time. And I also want to take up an interest, such as swimming.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍学校的“月末观影”活动,以及自己的建议和计划,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学校的月末观影活动;
第二步,介绍自己的“双减”建议;
第三步,介绍“双减”后自己的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 执行
②in my opinions 以我来看
③take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, our school can also organize reading activities, from which students can learn a lot. (which引导的定语从句)
②Besides, the school can invite some famous people to give us speeches about Chinese culture, making us have a better understanding of Chinese culture. (现在分词作状语)
16.例文:
Dear Principal,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. Our campus is very beautiful, and I am very happy to study here every day. I think the course design is reasonable, and the teachers are responsible. However, I think there are some areas that need improvement.
First of all, the quality of lunch is not very good. The food is often cold and tasteless. I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier. Secondly, the burden of homework is too heavy. Students often have to spend several hours on homework every night. I suggest that the school reduce the amount of homework or give students more time to complete it.
Grateful for all, I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
Yours,
Zhang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。谈谈对学校真实感受及引出话题,要针对待提高的地方提建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍你的建议和理由;
[亮点词汇]
①reasonable有道理的
②responsible负责的
③spend time on sth.花费时间在某物上
[高分句型]
①However, I think there are some areas that need improvement. (定语从句)
②I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier. (宾语从句)
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