中考复习——书面表达15篇（南京专用）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2024·江苏南京·一模）Challenges are part of life. They push us to grow, to learn and to be better. During the three years of junior high school life, you’ll surely have such experiences to share. Please write a passage about your understanding of the challenge and a story behind it.
注意：
1. 词数 80左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents often encouraged me, which gave me great hope. I became more confident. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be 过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Practice makes perfect.(谚语)
②I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．（2024·江苏南京·一模）英文校刊Sunshine for Teens面向九年级学生征文。请你根据下面征文要求，以“The teacher I will never forget”为题，写一篇征文。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右 (征文开头不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
The teacher I will never forget
During the past three years in our school, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文
版1
During the past three years in our school, I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me.
Firstly, you let me know what is the confidence. As you know, this can help me with my interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. It’s great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not a boring thing as before and I’m interested in studying !版2
During the past three years in our school, I would like to thank you for all the help you gave me. The follow is what I want to say to you—Miss Zhang.
You were always so patient when asking you questions. You listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. You showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. You made the exercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice.
My English has improved so much. How could I thank you enough! I will keep working on my English.版3
During the past three years in our school, I’d like to use this chance to express my thanks to my English teacher, Ms Wang.
In the past, I was not good at English, especially in the field of spoken English. Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. Ms. Wang found my disadvantage and she encouraged me that: I believe you can do this and there are no difficulties you can’t overcome! At that time, I thought why couldn’t I trust myself as Ms. Wang did So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. After the hard working of both Ms. Wang and myself, I can speak English in front of people now.
To sum up, I’d like to express my gratitude to Ms. Wang once again. Without her help, I could not make such a big progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明你永远不会忘记的老师是谁；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍为什么让你难以忘记及你从他身上学到的东西；
第三步，书写结语。表达感激。
[亮点词汇]
①especially特别
②oral English口语
③overcome克服
④express my gratitude表达我的感激
[高分句型]
①Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. (原因状语从句)
②So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. (定语从句)
3．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。
Now, more and more students are busy studying all day long. This week we want you to have your say about the ten-minute break.Why is it necessary to have the break What do you and your classmates do during the break What is your good advice on planning the break
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We have a ten-minute break between classes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We have a ten-minute break between classes. In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercise. Sometimes my classmates have a free chat with me happily or just take a walk outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen carefully to teachers. You shouldn’t run too far from your classroom. Besides, don’t take some energetic exercise. I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“课间我们有十分钟的休息时间。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——课间休息重要的原因、你和同学所做的事、你的建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都将有一个美好的课间10分钟”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②take a walk散步
③feel energetic 感到精力充沛
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. (状语从句）
②I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break. (宾语从句)
4．（2024·江苏南京·一模） 请仔细观察下面图片并发挥想象，用英语写出一篇涵盖每张图片内容且结局完整的故事。故事的开头已经给出。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, she saw a homeless orange cat. The cat was very weak. It kept miaowing in a small box. Millie wanted to help the cat, so she decided to take the cat to school. She put the cat in her school bag. Soon the cat fell asleep.
When the first lesson began, Millie opened her bag to take out her book. To her surprise, the cat jumped out of the schoolbag and started running around the classroom. It even jumped onto Mrs. Lin’s desk. Mrs. Lin caught the cat quickly and took the cat to the teachers’ office. She gave the cat some water and food. A few moments later, the cat fell asleep.
Since then, Millie’s class have started a club to help homeless cats. They take turns to take care of little cats. Now they hope more students can join them.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是图片作文；
②时态：以一般过去时为主；
③提示：注意要能根据图片内容编一个合理的故事。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍第一幅图，发现一只猫；
第二步，介绍如何处理这只猫；
第三步，教室里发生的事；
第四步，从此开设了俱乐部帮助无家可归的猫。
［亮点词汇］
① fell asleep入睡
② Since then自那时起
［高分句型］
① Millie wanted to help the cat, so she decided to take the cat to school. (结果状语从句)
② Now they hope more students can join them. (宾语从句)
5．（2024·江苏南京·二模）“阳光中学”学生会正开展一次以“More life skills, more colourful future”为主题的征文活动，对全校学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。假设你是该校学生，请根据统计图中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. What’s the result of the survey
2. Which is the most important skill for you Why (At least 2 points)
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数不少于80，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
More life skills, more colorful future
To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
More life skills, more colorful future
To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, communication topped the list. 78% of the students think that the skill of communication is the most important. In addition, skills such as managing feelings and planning time ranked second and third, at 50 and 30 percent, respectively. The remaining 5% included some other skills that were not mentioned specifically.
For me, communication is the most crucial skill. It’s important in two ways. First, effective communication is the foundation of any successful relationship, whether with family or friends. Additionally, it makes it easier for me to work with others and solve problems.
We must continue practicing our communication skills and see how it can help us have a better life and learn more new things.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，介绍调查结果；
第二步，讲述自己认为最重要的技能并说明原因；
第三步，鼓励大家坚持锻炼技能。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②the foundation of sth. ……的基础
③continue doing sth. 继续做某事
[高分句型]
①78% of the students think that the skill of communication is the most important. (that引导的宾语从句)
②The remaining 5% included some other skills that were not mentioned specifically. (that引导的定语从句)
6．（2024·江苏南京·二模）英语俱乐部在学校网站发布通知，面向全体学生征集关于英语学习的体会。请你根据通知要求，用英语写一篇文章，表达你的想法。
Your voiceIn your opinion, is English easy or difficult to learn Your article should include:Your opinion and reasons;Examples from your English learning experience;Your future plan for English learning.We are looking forward to your articles. The best articles will win a prize!Send your article to cnglishclub@. Deadline: May 31, 2024
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In my opinion, it is easy to learn English. Because I remember as many words and useful sentences patterns as possible. I’d like to share my experience of learning. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines. Learning English not only increases my knowledge about foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with English-speaking people and make more new friends.
In the future, I will insist on learning English very hard. I will read magazines and famous articles of English. At the same time, I would practice the spoken English and I catch the chance to chat with foreigners. I would tell them how great our country is.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，发表英语简单的看法；
第二步，具体阐述原因以及学习英语的经验和未来学习英语的计划；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①as many as possible尽可能多的
②spend time doing花费时间做某事
③insist on doing坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①Because I remember as many words and useful sentences patterns as possible.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I would tell them how great our country is.（how引导的宾语从句）
7．（2024·江苏南京·二模）望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的心愿。现在有一种类型的父母被称为直升机父母(helicopter parents) 。请根据学校的征稿要求, 用英语写一篇短文。
Helicopter parents are those who are always watching their children closely and offering help at any time. Please look at the picture and write a passage that includes: ●whether your parents are helicopter parents and the reason● the influence helicopter parents have on teenagers●your advice to helicopter parents.
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80 左右(已给 出的文 章开头 ，不计入总词数) 。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
To tell the truth, my parents _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me. It makes me unhappy that they often look through my personal things. Besides, if I chat with my friends online, they won’t allow me to use the computer, because they are afraid that I will be cheated.
Helicopter parents have a bad influence on their children. Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence. Even worse, children don’t have many choices of their own and can’t be more independent when they grow up.
I am convinced that parents should allow children to have their own choices. Parents should help children to develop their independence and confidence, and give their more personal space.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③要点：写作时应围绕提示问题进行写作，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的父母是否是“直升机”父母并说明原因；
第二步，描述“直升机”父母对青少年的影响；
第三步，对“直升机”父母的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①even though尽管
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③encounter failure遇到失败
[高分句型]
①To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
②Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence.（定语从句）
8．（2024·江苏南京·二模）你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容，选择至少2个方面来写，畅想未来生活，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different from today.
First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.
Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker. These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇图示作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明2045年的生活有何不同；
第二步，具体阐述2045年的生活，从“房子、购物、交通”等方面介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①satisfy one’s need 满足某人的需求
②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.（what引导的宾语从句）
9．（2023·江苏南京·二模）学校英语俱乐部将要开展英语辩论活动。假如你是俱乐部成员，请根据活动要求，用英语写一篇辩论稿。
A debate is coming!Topic: When learning English, speaking is more important than writing. Are you for or against it Write to tell us:Your opinionReasons for your opinionYour English-learning experiencesSend your article to englishclub@. Deadline: May 26th, 2023
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
As a Grade 9 student, I think when learning English, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 例文
As a Grade 9 student, I think when learning English, speaking is more important than writing.
For one thing, speaking is the first reaction of people. Speaking not only is the most direct way of communication but also the basis of writing. For example, though the illiteracies don’t know the word and cannot write, they live normally because they can speak. For another thing, the society will become international in the future. By the time, everyone is speaking English instead of writing. For instance, when you communicate with a foreigner in English fluently, the foreigner may feel comfortable. But if your spoken English is not so good and you can only write but speak, you will miss lots of chances.
In order to improve the ability of speaking, I often listen English songs and watch English movies to imitate their pronunciation. Practice makes perfect. I also practice speaking with my teachers and classmates.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇辩论稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，表达自己对于说和写哪个更重要的观点并阐述自己的理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的立场，支持说比写更重要；
第二步，具体阐述自己的理由；
第三步，分享自己的学习经验。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also不仅……而且
② For one thing一方面
③ For example例如
④ For another thing另一方面
⑤ For instance例如
⑥ By the time直到那时候
⑦ in order to为了
⑧ Practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
① For example, though the illiteracies don’t know the word and cannot write, they live normally because they can speak.（让步状语从句，原因状语从句）
②But if your spoken English is not so good and you can only write but speak, you will miss lots of chances.（条件状语从句）
③For instance, when you communicate with a foreigner in English fluently, the foreigner may feel comfortable.（时间状语从句）
10．（2023·江苏南京·二模）2023年是毛泽东等老一辈革命家为雷锋同志题词60周年，你校英文网站开展了“传承雷锋精神，争做时代新人”的主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语征文，分享自己的看法。
·What is your understanding of Lei Feng spirit ·What was your unforgettable experience about learning from Lei Feng and why ·What do you think of Lei Feng spirit in today’s world
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I’d like to talk about my ideas on Lei Feng spirit. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’d like to talk about my ideas on Lei Feng spirit. Lei Feng was a soldier who devoted himself to helping others all his life. From my point of view, Lei Feng spirit means that we are ready to give a helping hand to others at any time.
Last month, I went to an old people’s home with my classmates. We spent hours there chatting with the elderly and making dumplings together. I even taught Grandma Li how to do some online shopping, which made her quite happy. The smiling faces of the old that day made the experience so unforgettable.
Although Lei Fai passed away years ago, his spirit never dies. It’s still necessary and important for us to carry forward Lei Feng spirit today. The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine. Let’s learn from Lei Feng and make the world more fragrant.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意针对要点进行适当的发挥，使得文章更丰富、更有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈自己对雷锋精神的理解；
第二步，介绍自己学雷锋的经历；
第三步，总结全文，号召大家一起向雷锋学习。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to 献身于……
②be ready to do sth. 准备好做某事
③give a helping hand 伸出援助之手
④carry forward 发扬
[高分句型]
① Lei Feng was a soldier who devoted himself to helping others all his life.（who引导的定语从句）
② Although Lei Fai passed away years ago, his spirit never dies.（although引导的让步状语从句）
11．（2023·江苏南京·二模）
Have you ever listened to the song You Raise Me Up Who has raised you up during your school life How does he/she raise you up and what have you learnt from him or her You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please write an English draft for it.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
It’s my honor to stand here to give my speech. Think back to my school life, there are a lot of people that help me. One of them is my deskmate Li Hua.
He is one of the best students in my class. He is fond of English and good at it. He often pratices speaking English and reading aloud, so he has a good pronunciation. But I did badly in English and I dare not speak English in class before. He often encourages me and helps me with my English. He told me “Don’t be afraid, try again.” With his help, I have made great progress.
He is helpful and modest. I learnt a lot from him. Thank you, my best deskmate.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称和第三人称，介绍自己初中生活帮助自己最多的人，从他身上学到了什么，回答完整题目中所提的问题，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出想感谢的人；
第二步，具体介绍他帮助自己做了什么事情；
第三步，再次感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① think back to回想
② one of……之一
③ be fond of喜欢
④ be good at擅长
⑤ practice doing sth.练习做某事
⑥ with one’s help在某人的帮助下
⑦ make progress取得进步
⑧ do badly in做得不好
[高分句型]
①Think back to my school life, there are a lot of people help me.（there be句型）
②He often pratices speaking English and reading aloud, so he has a good pronunciation.（并列句）
③He is one of the best students in my class.（one of+形容词最高级+可数名词复数）
12．（2023·江苏南京·一模）黑发不知勤学早，白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容，为校英语广播站写一篇短文。
Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping(躺平):● what Tangping means for teenagers● whether you choose Tangping and why● your advice to teenagers who choose TangpingWe hope to hear from you.
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion,
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, Tangping means not studying hard for teenagers. I don’t choose Tangping because it can only give us pleasure for a short time. My friend Tom once chose Tangping during the summer holiday. At first, he had fun playing online games. But later, he failed the exams. He was not happy any more!
I have some advice for those who choose Tangping. First, you should have a purpose for your life, such as going to college or being a doctor in the future. Second, stay away from mobile phones. If you feel bored, play sports instead of playing computer games or watching short videos on the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先讲述躺平对青少年意味着什么；
第二步，讲述自己是否会选择躺平及原因；
第三步，谈谈自己对选择躺平的青少年的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun doing sth做某事很有趣
②such as例如
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①I don’t choose Tangping because it can only give us pleasure for a short time.（原因状语从句）
②I have some advice for those who choose Tangping.（定语从句）
13．（2023·江苏南京·一模）
In our growth, we may make promises to our friends, to our parents, to our teachers, and even to ourselves. Please write a passage to talk about an unforgettable promise.
Kitty, “I promise to keep secrets for you, Lucy.”Tom, “I promise to do the things myself, dad and mum.”Ben, “I promise to study harder in the coming term, Miss Wang.”
注意：1. 题目自拟，词数80左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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【答案】例文
In our growth, we may make promises to our friends, to our parents, to our teachers, and even to ourselves. I used to be very fat, and when I was in physical education class, I was very tired after running for a while. I promised my physical education teacher that I would strengthen physical exercise and make myself healthier. Since then, I have been running for half an hour on my own every day before going to school. I also enjoy playing basketball very much. If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park with friends to play basketball. I am very healthy now, and my sports are very good. I just did it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容，介绍你做出的一次难忘的承诺，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过介绍我们成长过程中可能做的承诺来引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己难忘的一次承诺；
第三步，介绍做出承诺后的结果。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
③on one’s own独自
[高分句型]
①when I was in physical education class, I was very tired after running for a while.（when引导时间状语从句）
②If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park with friends to play basketball. （if引导的条件状语从句）
14．（2023·江苏南京·一模）你在学校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到征文启事。请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
An Amazing Festival
I’m glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An Amazing Festival
I’m glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival. I want to name the festival Greatest Chefs and celebrate it on May 8. I like it because it can enrich our school life and prepare us for a better future.
To make the festival interesting and colorful, a food DIY competition can be held. Firstly, we will encourage students to make one or two dishes. After that, parents and teachers will be invited to taste what we have cooked for them. Finally, our teachers will vote for the Best DIY Cook in our school. As for the winners, they can get a big prize—one day without homework! Isn’t that amazing
I’m sure everyone can have a lot of fun on that amazing day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要求，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先谈谈你把这个节日命名为什么，以及在什么时间庆祝；
第二步，具体阐述组织哪些活动来庆祝这个节日；
第三步，谈谈这个节日为何令人惊喜。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②be invited to do sth被邀请去做某事
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
①I like it because it can enrich our school life and prepare us for a better future.（原因状语从句）
②I’m sure everyone can have a lot of fun on that amazing day!（宾语从句）
15．（2023·江苏南京·一模）假如你要参加年级的英语演讲活动，请仔细阅读以下海报，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
Your Ideas NeededOur school is going to hold an English Speech Competition. Your speech should include the following points:● What is the thing that you keep doing ● Why do you keep doing it How do you keep doing it ● How does it make a difference to your life
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数 80 左右（已给出文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”. We can get knowledge in many ways. Reading is one of the best ways.
Reading makes me open up my eyes to the outside world. It makes me learn a lot of things that I have never known before. So I buy lots of different books. Sometimes I also borrow books from others or the library. I also make a reading plan so that I can have enough time to read.
Reading makes my life meaningful and colourful. When I feel sad, reading makes me happy. I will keep it all my life.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，介绍自己一直坚持做的事情。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍自己一直坚持做的事情，包括什么事，为什么做这件事，怎么样这件事，以及它对自己生活的影响等内容。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，引入主题，表明自己一直坚持做的事情。
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己为什么喜欢这件事，以及怎样做这件事。
第三步，谈这件事对自己生活的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②open up my eyes打开我的眼界
③make a plan做一个计划
[高分句型]
①It makes me learn a lot of things that I have never known before.（that引导的定语从句）
②I also make a reading plan so that I can have enough time to read.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
16．（2023·江苏南京·一模）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到学校俱乐部TEENS CLUB在招募会员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
TEENS CLUB NEEDS YOU!TEENS CLUB needs you to organize activities to make our school lives more colourful. You are needed! Please let us know:● What qualities do you have to join our club ● What activity/activities will you organize ● Why do you organize the activity/activities Contact us by sending an email at: TEENSCLUB@
注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
I’m very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Li Hua. I am outgoing and I like talking with people. Moreover, I have held some activities successfully in our class. We can hold some activities such as English Speech Contest, Poetry Competition, Art Festival and other activities. Through these activities, we can not only learn something useful, open our eyes but also enrich our mind. In addition, we can relax ourselves and promote friendship among classmates.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，围绕三个问题，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌致谢。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的品质、组织的活动以及组织这些活动的原因。
第三步，书写结语。表达“尽快收到回复”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to do sth 很高兴做某事
② in addition 此外
③ look forward to 期待，盼望
[高分句型]
① Through these activities, we can not only learn something useful, open our eyes but also enrich our mind. （not only...but also并列句）
试卷第1页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页中考复习——书面表达15篇（南京专用）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2024·江苏南京·一模）Challenges are part of life. They push us to grow, to learn and to be better. During the three years of junior high school life, you’ll surely have such experiences to share. Please write a passage about your understanding of the challenge and a story behind it.
注意：
1. 词数 80左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范。
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2．（2024·江苏南京·一模）英文校刊Sunshine for Teens面向九年级学生征文。请你根据下面征文要求，以“The teacher I will never forget”为题，写一篇征文。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右 (征文开头不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
The teacher I will never forget
During the past three years in our school, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。
Now, more and more students are busy studying all day long. This week we want you to have your say about the ten-minute break.Why is it necessary to have the break What do you and your classmates do during the break What is your good advice on planning the break
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We have a ten-minute break between classes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2024·江苏南京·一模） 请仔细观察下面图片并发挥想象，用英语写出一篇涵盖每张图片内容且结局完整的故事。故事的开头已经给出。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2024·江苏南京·二模）“阳光中学”学生会正开展一次以“More life skills, more colourful future”为主题的征文活动，对全校学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。假设你是该校学生，请根据统计图中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. What’s the result of the survey
2. Which is the most important skill for you Why (At least 2 points)
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数不少于80，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
More life skills, more colorful future
To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2024·江苏南京·二模）英语俱乐部在学校网站发布通知，面向全体学生征集关于英语学习的体会。请你根据通知要求，用英语写一篇文章，表达你的想法。
Your voiceIn your opinion, is English easy or difficult to learn Your article should include:Your opinion and reasons;Examples from your English learning experience;Your future plan for English learning.We are looking forward to your articles. The best articles will win a prize!Send your article to cnglishclub@. Deadline: May 31, 2024
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·江苏南京·二模）望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的心愿。现在有一种类型的父母被称为直升机父母(helicopter parents) 。请根据学校的征稿要求, 用英语写一篇短文。
Helicopter parents are those who are always watching their children closely and offering help at any time. Please look at the picture and write a passage that includes: ●whether your parents are helicopter parents and the reason● the influence helicopter parents have on teenagers●your advice to helicopter parents.
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80 左右(已给 出的文 章开头 ，不计入总词数) 。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
To tell the truth, my parents _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2024·江苏南京·二模）你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容，选择至少2个方面来写，畅想未来生活，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2023·江苏南京·二模）学校英语俱乐部将要开展英语辩论活动。假如你是俱乐部成员，请根据活动要求，用英语写一篇辩论稿。
A debate is coming!Topic: When learning English, speaking is more important than writing. Are you for or against it Write to tell us:Your opinionReasons for your opinionYour English-learning experiencesSend your article to englishclub@. Deadline: May 26th, 2023
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
As a Grade 9 student, I think when learning English, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2023·江苏南京·二模）2023年是毛泽东等老一辈革命家为雷锋同志题词60周年，你校英文网站开展了“传承雷锋精神，争做时代新人”的主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语征文，分享自己的看法。
·What is your understanding of Lei Feng spirit ·What was your unforgettable experience about learning from Lei Feng and why ·What do you think of Lei Feng spirit in today’s world
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I’d like to talk about my ideas on Lei Feng spirit. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2023·江苏南京·二模）
Have you ever listened to the song You Raise Me Up Who has raised you up during your school life How does he/she raise you up and what have you learnt from him or her You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please write an English draft for it.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
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12．（2023·江苏南京·一模）黑发不知勤学早，白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容，为校英语广播站写一篇短文。
Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping(躺平):● what Tangping means for teenagers● whether you choose Tangping and why● your advice to teenagers who choose TangpingWe hope to hear from you.
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion,
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13．（2023·江苏南京·一模）
In our growth, we may make promises to our friends, to our parents, to our teachers, and even to ourselves. Please write a passage to talk about an unforgettable promise.
Kitty, “I promise to keep secrets for you, Lucy.”Tom, “I promise to do the things myself, dad and mum.”Ben, “I promise to study harder in the coming term, Miss Wang.”
注意：1. 题目自拟，词数80左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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14．（2023·江苏南京·一模）你在学校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到征文启事。请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
An Amazing Festival
I’m glad to share my ideas about the amazing festival.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2023·江苏南京·一模）假如你要参加年级的英语演讲活动，请仔细阅读以下海报，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
Your Ideas NeededOur school is going to hold an English Speech Competition. Your speech should include the following points:● What is the thing that you keep doing ● Why do you keep doing it How do you keep doing it ● How does it make a difference to your life
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数 80 左右（已给出文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
16．（2023·江苏南京·一模）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到学校俱乐部TEENS CLUB在招募会员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
TEENS CLUB NEEDS YOU!TEENS CLUB needs you to organize activities to make our school lives more colourful. You are needed! Please let us know:● What qualities do you have to join our club ● What activity/activities will you organize ● Why do you organize the activity/activities Contact us by sending an email at: TEENSCLUB@
注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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