Unit 2 Sports and Fitness 写作拓展训练 课件 北师大版 必修一

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Unit 2 Sports and Fitness
写作拓展训练
英语必修第一册 北师版
单元写作
如何写叙事类记叙文
一、写作指导
1.叙事类记叙文主要是对某一事情的发生、发展和结果进行叙述，重在叙
述事情发生、发展的过程。文章通常包括三部分：（1）开头——交代必
要的背景，如时间、地点和人物等；（2）中间——交代故事情节
（事情的主体），如事情的发生、发展和前因后果；（3）结尾——讲述
事情的结果、人物感想和愿望等。
2.写作时要注意：人称常以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态通常使用与过
去有关的时态，以一般过去时为主，表达感想和愿望时可用与现在和将来
有关的时态。
二、常用表达
It was an unforgettable experience
how to keep fit/healthy
we spent a meaningful day with the elderly
I benefited a lot
二、常用表达
As scheduled/planned
On/Upon arriving at our destination
chatted with the old
was doing the cleaning when I caught sight of
I took a photo of them
二、常用表达
will make a huge difference
to build up our strength and muscles
but it can also teach us
to cherish/treasure today's happy life
三、微写作
[2023全国乙卷]学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技
能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
It is important for us to master some basic living skills
1.________________________________（prepare, future life）. That is
why I learned 2._____________（how, cook） during the May Day
holiday.
Since my mother is skilled at cooking, I 3.______________________
___（decide, learn）. Early in the morning we bought some goods,
including some vegetables, meat and a fish in the local market.
4.________________________（once, home）, I began to wash and
prepare them carefully. 5._________________________________
to prepare us for our future life
how to cook
decided to learn from her
Once we got back home
Under the guidance of my mother
（guidance, mother）, I turned on the gas cooker. I first stir-fried two
vegetables. Then I cooked meat with potatoes. 6._____________________
____（difficult, task） was to cook fish with tomatoes. However, I
finally made it.
The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a
thumbs-up. I 7.___________________（proud） I shared housework with
my parents, which also showed I had grown up.
The most difficult task
felt/was proud that
新题型写作
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
[2024河北张家口市期末考试]On a bright Saturday, my peaceful
lunchtime was suddenly stopped when my dad surprised me with an
unplanned idea. I couldn't hide my dissatisfaction as what was supposed
to be a relaxing Saturday turned into a day focusing on football — a
sport I wasn't very excited about.
Many of my friends loved sports, while I preferred to find comfort
in the pages of a good book rather than run around on a football
court. My lack of interest resulted in average performance on our team,
and I often felt like I was a problem for my coach and teammates.
Things changed last month when our coach announced a coming
match against the champions scheduled for a month later. The realization
that this important game would have a big audience only made me
more stressed. The fear of possibly letting the team down weighed on
me. Having a strong desire to have a positive influence, I decided to
practice hard every day. The reason why I did so was that I wanted to
help the team and defeat the self-doubt affecting my performance.
As the match day came, my teammates seemed unsure about
including me in the lineup （球员阵容）. I wouldn't have minded sitting
out the match, but the situation was different. With one player short,
they unwillingly included me, and our team stepped onto the field to
enjoy cheers from the crowd.
The game started, and within ten minutes, I received a warning.
Before long, the referee（裁判） showed me a second yellow card,
forcing me to leave the field. When I got back into the game, the score
was tied, and the next goal would decide the winner. Suddenly, the ball
came toward me, and I felt very nervous. My teammates seemed tired,
and the other team really wanted to win.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
With great courage, I kicked the ball.
After this win, football became different to me.
One possible version
【解题导语】作者一开始对足球并不感兴趣，结果有一天被告知将在一个
月后与冠军队进行一场重要的比赛。作者为了不让全队失望，决定每天努
力练习。比赛刚开始不久，作者就被裁判罚下场。等作者再次回到球场时，
一个决定胜负的球向作者飞来……
【写作指导】
1.分析续写开头，推测故事走向
（1）由续写第一段首句"我鼓起很大的勇气把球踢了出去"并结合续写第
二段首句中的"这场胜利之后"可知，作者所在的球队获胜了，故续写第一
段可描写获胜后队友和教练的反应，同时也可对对手的反应进行描写。
（2）由续写第二段首句"这场胜利之后，足球对我来说变得不同了"可知，
续写第二段可描写这场比赛对作者的影响以及作者通过此次经历得出的感
悟，从而对故事进行升华。
2.续写线索：比赛获胜→一起庆祝→为作者感到骄傲→作者喜欢上了足球
→作者的感悟
【名师指导】
Basic Information 基本信息
Who: I （the author）, my dad, coach and teammates
When: on a bright Saturday→last month→on the match day
Where: on the field
Plots & Feelings 情节&情感
play football
wasn't interested in/excited about
match
let my team down
the winner
Story Mountain
Predicting Possible Plots 情节预测
续写第一段 1.Did the author score a goal
2.How did the other team react to the author's goal
3.How did the author's teammates and coach react
续写第二段 1.Did the author like playing football after the match
2.What did the author learn about sports from this
experience
【实用表达】
1.weigh on... 加重……的思想负担;使焦虑不安;使担忧
I'm sure there's something weighing on his mind.我肯定他有心事。
2.expect...from sb.期望某人……
He's still getting over his illness, so don't expect too much from him.
他仍处于康复期，所以不要对他期望过高。
3.fill the air 弥漫在空气中
Laughter filled the air. 欢笑声弥漫在空气中。
4.wear a satisfied/confident/welcoming/frozen smile挂着满意的/自信的/热
情的/冰冷的微笑
His face wore a welcoming smile.他脸上挂着热情的微笑。
5.a sense of achievement/pride/relief成就感/自豪感/轻松感
We reached the medical centre with a sense of relief. 到了医疗中心，
我们如释重负。
续表
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