Unit 3 Celebrations-写作拓展训练 课件 北师大版 必修一

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Unit 3 Celebrations
单元写作拓展训练
英语必修第一册 北师版
单元写作
描述活动
一、常用表达
Ⅰ.要点点拨
1.人称:描述活动时一般用第一或第三人称。用第一人称表示叙述者亲眼所
见、亲耳所闻；用第三人称叙述的优势在于文章的客观性更强。
2.时态和叙述方式:描述已经发生的事件以一般过去时为主；描述即将发生
的事情则以一般将来时为主。在描述事件时可以采用顺叙、倒叙和插叙三
种叙述方式。
Ⅱ.框架结构
Falling on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
when each family has its members gathered together
which is very suitable for outdoor tree planting
To increase our knowledge about traditional Chinese culture
in which our headmaster made a speech
at the sight of beautiful decorations
was greeted by cheering crowds
sent their best wishes to
set off/let off fireworks
while adults sat together chatting
benefited a lot from this activity
but also made me more interested in traditional Chinese culture
All in all/In a word/In summary/In short
made a contribution to environmental protection
While/Although/Though we were all very tired/Tired as we were;
What an awesome celebration
As far as I'm concerned/In my view/In my opinion
my heart was full of joy
二、微写作
假如你是李华，植树节那天，你班组织一起去距学校约300米远的山
上植树。（活动背景）请你为学校英文报 写一篇关于本次活动的英文报
道。（文体）内容包括：
1.活动的背景；
2.活动的安排；
3.你们的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：幼苗seedling
As it was Tree-planting Day, our class 1._____________________
（decide， plant） on a mountain, 2._______________________________
______（300 meters, away） our school.
We met at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. and then set out happily for
the mountain. 3.__________________________________________________
_________________（reach）, we started to work. Some of us loosened
the soil, dug the holes, and 4.____________________（place, seedling）,
and some watered the trees. Finally we planted 100 trees altogether.
5.__________________________________________________________
_____（tired）, we still felt very happy. What 6._____________________
____（awesome, day, have）!
decided to plant trees
which is about 300 meters away from
As soon as we reached there/On reaching there/After reaching there
placed the seedlings
Though/Although/While we were all very tired/Tired as we were
an awesome day we had
新题型写作
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
[2024山东济南市期末考试]At the beginning of this year, my
daughter Helen spent a month in the hospital fighting for her life. Since
then, she has had to deal with the disease as well as many side effects.
She has met each challenge, disappointment and setback with courage.
With her 16th birthday coming, Helen dreamt of a party and a
campfire at the beach with friends, relatives, and her beloved dog,
Ginger. It took a while, but I finally found a good beach that allowed
dogs and campfires. However, a week before her party, Helen's disease
worsened.
Our friend Ian called the night before the party and turned our
plans upside down. The small beach we'd selected and the surrounding
beaches would host a 30, 000-person event on the party night and would
be closed. It was a disaster because we found no other nearby beach
would work.
Helen had her heart set on having her dog and a campfire at the
beach, but as usual, she didn't complain（抱怨）. In her young life, she
had dealt with much worse things than a destroyed birthday party. She
sat down and began to quietly cry. After a while Helen decided she'd
rather have the party at our home so she could have her dog and a
campfire. We called the invitees with the changed plans.
How to design a party at home with dogs and campfires was a
challenge. It occurred to（被……想到） us that we could make full use
of our yard. Ian's wife Jayme came first with some small signs, which
read, "Welcome to Campbell Beach, where dogs and campfires are
welcome. Where the beach is small and the waves are so far away, you
must close your eyes to see them, but not so the love for Helen and her
little dog. Happy Birthday, Helen!"
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
An hour later, Ian arrived with a truck loaded with the "beach".
Helen and her friends couldn't wait to play on the sand with the
toys.
One possible version
【解题导语】本文以Helen的生日为线索展开。作者的女儿Helen因为疾病
饱受折磨，当她16岁生日即将来临时，她希望能在海滩上带着她的狗举办
篝火晚会，但是事与愿违，最后作者决定在自家院子举办"海滩"篝火晚会。
【写作指导】 由续写第一段首句"一个小时后，Ian开着一辆装满‘海滩’的
卡车到了"可知，续写第一段可描写作者和朋友一起把院子布置成海滩的
样子，并准备篝火晚会。根据续写第二段首句中的"the sand"和"the toys"
可知，Ian载来的"海滩"包括沙子、玩具等。
由续写第二段首句"Helen和她的朋友们迫不及待地在海滩上玩玩具"
可知，续写第二段可描写"海滩"篝火晚会的过程，如Helen是如何和朋友
们玩耍的，以及大家如何给Helen送上生日祝福等。最后可落脚在"由爱建
筑的‘海滩’给Helen带来一个难忘的生日"。
【名师指导】 Basic Information 基本信息
Who： I（the author）, Helen（the author's daughter）,
1._____________________________________________
Where： 2.____________
When： 3.________________________
Ian（the author's friend）, Jayme（Ian's wife）
in the yard
on Helen's 16th birthday
Plots & Feelings 情节&情感
续写第一段 1.What exactly did Ian load on his truck
2.How did people decorate the yard
续写第二段 1.How did Helen and her friends play on the "beach"
2.How did people offer birthday congratulations to Helen
3.Was it an unforgettable birthday for Helen
Story Mountain
Predicting Possible Plots 情节预测
【实用表达】
和beach （海滩）相 关的词汇 sand（沙子），palm tree（棕榈树），beach toy
（沙滩玩具），beach chair（沙滩椅），surfboard
（冲浪板），sunglasses（太阳镜），beach volleyball
（沙滩排球）
和birthday （生日）相 关的词汇 birthday celebration（生日庆祝活动），birthday
present/gift/card（生日礼物/贺卡），birthday cake
（生日蛋糕），birthday girl/boy寿星，blow out candles
（吹蜡烛），take photos（拍照），sing songs（唱歌），express wishes（表达祝福）
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