(共19张PPT)
学习目标
1.师生、生生交流,完成调查表;
2.小组讨论,分析范文,总结归纳出描述理想学校的 文章结构;
3.通过仿写练习,能够独立创作一篇描述自己理想学 校的文章。
Schoo
Some things you like,some you hate.
Wake up at six,but you're still always late.
Not talking about when you can pick your classes, I'm sick of hearing,“Where are my glasses !”
Homework takes up the rest of your time,
I want to be a kid,I don't care whose face's on the dime.
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Conclusion
1.What time do the students in the school
getup
The students in the school get up at six.
2.Do they have much homework
Yes.It takes up the rest of their time.
3.Do you like the school Why not
No,because there is too much homework
and we have to get up too early.
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Conclusion
Daniel's school school John's school
Daniel's
ideal School
Number of students in each class 48 30 35
20
Time spent on homework 3 hours 2 hours 1 hour
1 hour
Do the students wear uniforms yes / no
yes,not
wear ties
Number of Computer Studies each week 3 4 5
5
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Which school do you like
A:Which school do you like best Why
B :We like .., because ...
Nancy's
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Read Daniel's ideal school and complete the rest of the table.
ideal school
Subjects
Maths,
_
computer lessons
School uniforms
yes,
not wear ties
After-school
activities
clubs,
Facilities
(设施)
a dining hall,
a library,
a swimming pool
Lunch time
an hour,have.
chat,listen to
School time
9 a.m.
3 p.m.
Daniel's
The principal wants to learn more about
what we like and dislike about our school.
Read the questionnaire on Page 28 and
write your own answers.
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Conclusion
★School trips
★School subjects,sports &after-school activities
★Lunchtime
★ School time
★School evaluation(评价) ★School uniform
Qs 1,2,3,4
Q 5
Q 6
Q 7
Q 8
Q9
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What is your ideal school like
You can begin like this:
In my ideal school,I would like .../We
want...
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Helpfu/ Tips
1.Use“I”or“we”.
2.Use the simple
present tense.
3.Tell your reasons.
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One aspect
One aspect of my ideal school
Conclusion
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John's ideal club
In my ideal school,(we)have a Use“I”or“we'.
lot of clubs.My ideal clubis
a“buddy club”.In the
Buddy Club,older students
talk to new students about school life.Ienjoy this a lot because my buddy can help me learn all about my new school.He or shecan help me with my homework and listen to my problems too.
Use the simple present tense.
Tell the reasons.
It's your turn to write only one aspect of your ideal school.
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Conclusion
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My ideal school
Aspect 6
Aspect 1
School time
Aspect 5
After-school
activities
Aspect 4
School trips
My ideal school
Aspect 3
School uniforms
Aspect 2
Lunch time
Conclusion
The principal wants to know what your
ideal school is like.It's your turn to write a letter to describe your ideal school.
Presentation Writing Conclusion
Write to the Principal
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Iam very pleased to stuIn such a beautiful school.However,I
have my ideal school in my mind all the time.Today I will write to you to describe my ideal school.
My ideal scho We only have 40
minutes of ho Aspect1 School time
In mv ideal scno01.all ine stuaenis can lake turns to be a
Aspect2 Take turns to be a principle
Aspect3 After-school activities 'hat
mcanis we can uu whau we ne tu uu aiuen scuuicveiy uay.
I hope you will like my ideal school.
Yours sincerely,
Writing Conclusion
Frank
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Say something about the letter
1.How many aspects does the letter have
2.What is each aspect about
3.What do you think of his/her ideas 4.How is his/her handwriting
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The writing evaluation table(评价表)
评 分 标 准 评分分值
2 1
0
相关性 1 Are all the paragraphs about your ideal schools
得体性 2 Do you use“I”or“we”in your letter
3 Do you use the simple present tense
4 Do you try to tell your reasons
准确性 5 Are there any errors in the tense of the verbs,the usage of the vocabulary and mistakes in spelling,capital letters or punctuations
创造性 6 Do you try to use good phrases and different sentence structures to write about your ideal school
7 Do you try to make your aspects interesting
连贯性 8 Do you try to use proper linking words to make your letter more fluent(流畅的)
美观性 9 Is your handwriting beautiful and tidy
/
Final marks
What do you think of your own first draft
good ideas 十 a good structure
a discussion put several aspects
or together
a questionnaire
Presentation Writing
My ideal school
Conclusion
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1.Self-edit your own writing according to
the writing evaluation table.
2.After self-editing,revise your drafts.