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In our everyday life, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, then we are still good fellows.
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错专题
Learning objectives
1. review types and forms of errors in proofreading.
2. understand key points of each error through exercises and summary.
3. design 10 errors in a passage based on what you've learned today.
4. raise the awareness of correcting the errors in time through famous
sayings.
Any rules
Any requirements
How to correct
Solve them!
3 forms of correcting
添词 1
1. Get me be a quiet handsome boy.
让我做一个安静的美男子吧!
2. Comparing with Li Ziqi, I am bad at cooking.
和李子柒相比,我的做饭技能简直弱爆了。
3. Having been done so many exercises, I became crazy.
做完这么多练习,我也醉了。
改词 8
删词 1
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to
Compared
Step 1 Review types and forms of errors
Step 1 Review types and forms of errors
Find out the wrong phrases or sentences
Step one Review types and forms of errors
summarize the types of errors
useful informations
n. 名词
in a fact
art. 冠词
I do it by me.
pron. 代词
on need
prep. 介词
feel happily
adj./adv.
my eighteen birthday
num. 数词
neither...or...
linking words
连接词
I was scared and begin to cry.
v. 动词
改错口诀:A Limerick
动词形,名词数
还要注意形和副
代词格,细领悟
固定搭配要记住
从句非谓须关注
介冠连数常光顾
请先念一遍咒语吧
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
verbs
动词
1. I had grown not only physically but also mentally in the past few years.
2. Fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking
1. 弄清动词作谓语/非谓语
2. 作谓语时,考虑时态和语态;
作非谓语时,考虑doing/done/to do
3. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called.
have
used
waiting
动词形
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
nouns
名词
1. They had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.
2. We can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.
1. 可数名词(+s)与不可数名词 (-s)
2. 常考的不可数名词:progress, furniture, equipment, knowledge, news, information, advice,fun, weather
chickens
knowledge
名词数
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
adj./adv.
形副
1. Global warming has already become a seriously problem.
2. Immediate, I raised my hand.
1. 弄清形容词(修饰名词)和副词(修饰动词、形容词、句子)用法
2. 正确使用比较级(than)和最高级(the)
3. -ing一般表示“令人…的”通常修饰物,-ed一般表示“感到…的”通常修饰人
3. Shanghai is one of the busy cities in China.
4. I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much better.
serious
Immediately
busiest
amazed
还要注意形和副
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
pron.
代词
1. We must find ways to protect your environment.
2. They were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals.
1. 人称代词:偷换性别;5种形式(主格、宾格、名物代、形物代、反身)
2. 不定代词:both, all, other, another, any, some, neither, either, none, nothing, someone, anyone, everyone, something...
our
other
代词格,细领悟
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
linking words
连接词
1. He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other people.
2. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.
1. 连接动词、名词:and, or
2. 连接句子:并列句、复合句(名从、定从、状从)
3. They are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house.
4. My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.
talking
and
which
where
从句非谓需关注
Step 2 Correct the following sentences and summarize
介冠连数
1. I planned to return for every two years.
介冠连数常光顾
2. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
a
3. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher.
fifth
last, every, next +n. 表时间时,前不用介词
2. a/an的区别,元音音素开头的单词前用an (hour, ugly,)
3.基数词和序数词的互换
改错口诀:A Limerick
动词形,名词数
还要注意形和副
代词格,细领悟
固定搭配要记住
从句非谓须关注
介冠连数常光顾
Step 3 Practice
3 steps to do proofreading
改明显错误
3种形式?
对照考点
Step 3 Practice
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn‘t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
years
名词数
worst
形容词:比较级
myself
代词格细领悟
so
固搭要记住
told
动词形
free
还要注意形和副
wearing
动词:非谓
for
介词
^
I
冠词
代词格细领悟
Step 4 Design 10 errors
阅读下面语篇,并找出适合设计成短文改错的考点。
I became interested in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon when I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hard back to the playground. To everyone's surprise, the ball went into the net. All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, saying that I had a talent for football. From then on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a good player now .
(1)错误类型:错8个词、多1个词、少1个词的比例是8:1:1。
(2) 每句话中最多设2处错。即有的句子无错,
有的句子有1处错,有的有2处错。
(3) 需要变形的词通常是名词、动词、形容词、副词、 代词。
(4)少了一个词,要求添加的词通常是冠词、介词、连词等。
(5)多了一个词,要求删除的词通常是冠词、介词、连词等。
(6)标点符号和大小写不设错。
设题特征
Step 4 Show your work!
Step 4 Compare yours with the exam designer's
I became interested in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon when I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hard back to the playground. To everyone's surprise, the ball went into the net. All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, saying that I had a talent for football. From then on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a good player now .
To err is human. —Alexander Pope
人非圣贤,孰能无过。
It's better for you to realize your mistake and try to correct it.
知错能改,善莫大焉。
Homework
1.Create a mind map to summarize the test points.
2. Finish the error correction exercise.
Have a nice day!
Thank you !