Unit 2 Sports and Fitness Writing Workshop 课件-高中英语北师大版（2019）必修第一册

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Sports and Fitness
Unit 2
Writing Workshop
A True Story
Read for Writing
The Final Sprint
cyclo-cross race
公路越野赛
Predict
According to the title and the picture, predict what kind of event this is.
What does “The Final Sprint” mean
It is probably about a true sports event happening to a cyclist in a race. Something terrible must have happened to him during the race.
a short period of fast running to the finishing
line
“5321”模式下的读后续写思维
“5321”
Method
5 Reads-Read for ______________________ , plot ,
emotional change, conflict, theme
3Principals
action-response
conflict-solution
negative-positive
2Given sentences
1Good ending
情节推进意识
结局反推情节意识
衔接意识
主题意识
main charaters
1. Who were the main characters
2 . Where and when did it happen
Two cyclists: Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro. Para. 2
The Santa Barbara XV Grand-Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain, 300 meters from the finishing line.
one of a set of international races大奖赛
第十五届圣巴巴拉自行车越野大奖赛
Where and when
It was the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain.
3 How did the story develop
Esteban was in third place with only 300 meters to the finishing line –→ Esteban got a puncture , threw his bike over his shoulder and raced towards the finishing line →Navarro could simply catch up with him and came third–→ Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead ahead of him.
（轮胎上刺破的）小孔
put the pictures in the right order.
puncture
1
2
3
4. What was the result
Esteban won the bronze medal and tried to give his medal to Navarro. But Navarro refused, saying “offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.”
What did Navarro’s response “Offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.” mean
In the eyes of Navarro, Esteban’s action of offering the prize outweighed(胜过） what he had done for him.
Esteban deserved（值得） the bronze
medal and he didn’t regret for
what he had done for Esteban
(let Esteban run ahead of him).
Read for conflict
Conflict : Esteban got a puncture near the finishing line and Navarro could overtake him easily.
↓
Solution : Esteban threw his bike over shoulders and reached the finishing line on foot and Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.
Read for plots and emotional changes
Story Mountain
Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro were racing towards the finishing line.
Esteban got a puncture , threw his bike over his shoulders and continued racing.
Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.
Navarro let Esteban finish in third place, while he came fourth.
Navarro caught up with Esteban easily.
Development
Ending
Climax 1
Solution1
Esteban won the bronze medal and tried to give his medal to Navarro.
Navarro refused.
Solution 2
Climax 2
Setting
Confused and worried
Thankful
Proud and delighted
Grateful
Excited
5. What was the audience’s reaction when watching “the final sprint”
On the one hand, they were amazed at Navarro’s show of sportsmanship and cheered and clapped for the (two) cyclists.
On the other hand, the audience was moved by Esteban’s spirit of persistence . (坚持不懈).
Read for theme
It is a story of _________.
sportsmanship;
perseverance;
determination;
respect;
fair competition...
Read for theme
Positive
Story Mountain
Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro were racing towards the finishing line.
Esteban got a puncture , threw his bike over his shoulders and continued racing.
Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.
Navarro let Esteban finish in third place, while he came fourth.
Navarro caught up with Esteban easily.
Development
Ending
Climax 1
Solution1
Para.1:After a short break, Navarro was about to leave when he saw Esteban moving slowly with his bike on his shoulders.
Esteban won the bronze medal and tried to give his medal to Navarro.
Navarro refused.
Solution 2
Climax 2
Para.2:After the supper, Navarro and Esteban were sitting on the sofa, turning on the TV.
Setting
Para2 After supper, Navarro and Esteban were sitting on the sofa, turning on the TV.
研读续文段落首句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Para1 After a short break, Navarro was about to leave when he saw Esteban moving slowly with his bike on his shoulders.
.
在纳瓦罗的帮助下，埃斯特班顺利修好了自行车。。。
电视上播放当天比赛感人的场景。。。
确定续文情节的发展方向
埃斯特班邀请纳瓦罗到他家做客。
两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量
连接词，Just a few seconds later, Then, Later, However...
　增分靓句
1.找出文章中的高级句式表达——分词作状语
Fans lined the road to the finishing line，cheering on the competitors.
Considering it was so tiring with a bike on shoulders,
Navarro suggested they should repair the tire first.
Navarro 认为扛着自行车走太累了，他提议先修好轮胎.
Navarro considered it was so tiring with a bike on shoulders.
He suggested they should repair the tire first.
现在分词改写
2.找出文章中的动作描写。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(1)Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.
(2)The audience was amazed at his show of sportsmanship and cheered and clapped for the cyclists.
他们向组委会寻求帮助，借来了工具，齐心协力地修好了轮胎。（并列谓语动词形成动作链，注意用过去式）
They sought help from the Committee , borrowed some tools and worked together to fix the tire.
令他们惊讶的是，电视上正播放他们比赛的视频。
They were suprised at the video on TV about their race.
情绪表达句式改写
1. To their surprise/ amazement/ astonishment, they found the video of their race was being shown on TV.
2. What surprised them was that the video of their race was being shown on TV.
While-writing ：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量
Summary
Pre-writing : “5321” mind map
Post-writing ：Polish （优化）
（现在分词，不定式目的状语，并列谓语动词形成动作链，情绪表达句式等）
To finish the whole composition.
Homework