Unit 3 Holiday fun写作提优(含答案）
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译林版六年级上册Unit 3写作提优专训
介绍假期活动
方法指导
介绍假期活动，可按“三步五要素法”写作：第一步开头，引出去的地点； 第二步正文，介绍什么假期、参观了什么、怎么去的、和谁一起去的、做了什么五要素； 第三步结尾，总结假期感受。
素材积累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 the capital of China / a beautiful city... Beijing is the capital of China.
正文 什么假期: last summer holiday/ National Day holiday... 参观了什么: the Summer Palace / the Great Wall... 怎么去的: by plane/ took the plane... 和谁一起: with my friends / with my family... 做了什么: visited the museum/ took many photos... I went to the Summer Palace last summer holiday. I went to the Summer Palace during the holiday. I took the plane there. I went to Beijing with my family. I visited the museum and took many photos there.
结尾 happy, had a good time... I had a happy holiday!
以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法)
My Holiday
Beijing is the capital of China. It's a beautiful city. I went to Beijing with my family during the National Day holiday last year. We took the plane there. I saw many interesting things in Beijing. I visited the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. The Summer Palace is a beautiful park. I visited my aunt and uncle there. They cooked nice food for me. I ate the Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. I had a lot of fun in Beijing.
小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 上周二，Amy和她的家人去了一个特别的小镇，度过了一个美好的国庆假期。假如你是 Amy，请根据提示，发挥想象，写一篇短文，不少于6句话。
提示: When: last Tuesday, National Day Who: Amy and her family Where: a special town
What: ate much seafood, picked some fruit, caught some fish How: by bus
Last Tuesday, it was the National Day. I went to
[提分练1]
以“ My holiday”为题，先补全思维导图，再根据思维导图写一写你的假期生活。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，表达有条理，书写规范，不少于8句话。
[提分练2]
请根据思维导图,以“ My visit to Beijing”为题写一篇短文，不少于5句话。
My visit to Beijing
[提分练3]
请你根据所给图文提示,以“ Mike’s National Day holiday”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求：短文须包含所有的中文提示要点及图片表达出来的信息，意思连贯，语句通顺，可适当发挥。不少于60词。
提示：1. 两年前迈克去了三亚；2. 去年他参观了北京；3. 今年他又去了上海
Mike’s National Day holiday
[提分练4]
请你根据以下提示,以“Mike’s National Day holiday”为题,写一篇英语小短文。
要求：短文须包含所有中文提示要点，意思连贯，语句通顺，可适当发挥。不少于40词。
提示：1.两年前迈克去了三亚(Sanya)；2.去年他参观了北京；3.今年他又去了上海......
Mike’s National Day holiday
[提分练5]
去年的国庆节假期你是怎样度过的 请以“Last National Day holiday”为题，写一篇英文短文和大家分享一下吧！注意使用一般过去时，不少于5句话。
参考词汇:Shanghai, Bund, Shanghai Museum, photos, pan-fried pork buns(生煎包)
Last National Day holiday
参考答案
单元写作提优专训
1. the National Day holiday
2. my family and I
3. Beijing
4. visited the Great Wall and the Summer Palace; visited my aunt and uncle; ate the Beijing Roast Duck
5. took the plane
范文：
Last Tuesday, it was the National Day. I went to a special town with my family. It was a clean town near the sea. We went there by bus. We saw many interesting things. I ate much seafood there and drank some drinks. There was a lot of fruit. We picked some fruit and caught some fish. We had a good time.
[提分练1]
My holiday
I had a three-day holiday for the Dragon Boat Festival last month. My parents didn't have to go to work. So on the first day of the holiday, my mother taught me to make rice dumplings at home. On the second day of the holiday, it was the Dragon Boat Festival. The weather was sunny and warm. My parents and I went out to watch the dragon boat race. It was very exciting. We cheered and laughed by the lake. In the evening, we had a big dinner. We ate rice dumplings too. On the last day, we had a picnic in the park.
I enjoyed my holiday so much! (仅供参考)
[提分练2]
My visit to Beijing
Last summer holiday I had a visit to Beijing. I visited my uncle there. He took me to eat much nice food. The Great Wall is very famous in the world. It has a long history. I visited it with my uncle. I also visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I saw a lot of interesting things in these places.I had great fun in Beijing. I want to have a visit to Beijing next year again. (仅供参考)
[提分练3]
示例：
Mike's National Day holiday
Two years ago, Mike went to Sanya for his National Day holiday. He played games and made sandcastles on the beach with his sister and brother. He visited Beijing last National Day holiday. He made a trip to the Great Wall and took many photos. He went to Shanghai and Suzhou for his 7- day holiday this year. First, he got to Shanghai and visited the Shanghai Museum. There are many old interesting things in the museum. Then he took the high- speed rail to Suzhou.
Suzhou is famous for its beautiful gardens. Mike saw many classical gardens and took a lot of photos with his family there. How happy he was!
[提分练4]
示例：
Mike's National Day holiday
Two years ago,Mike went to Sanya for his holiday.He went swimming in the sea every day.Last National Day holiday,he went to Beijing.He visited the Great Wall and ate Beijing Roast Duck.It was very delicious.This year,he went to Shanghai during the National Day holiday.He visited the Bund.He saw a lot of interesting things and took many photos there.How happy he was!
[提分练5]
示例：
Last National Day holiday
Last National Day holiday, I went to Shanghai by plane with my parents. It was sunny and cool there. We visited the Bund and the Shanghai Museum. We also went to Disneyland. There were a lot of people. We took many photos there. I ate much delicious food in Shanghai. I like pan-fried pork buns very much. I had a good time during the holiday.
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译林版六年级上册Unit 3写作提优专训
介绍假期活动
方法指导
介绍假期活动，可按“三步五要素法”写作：第一步开头，引出去的地点； 第二步正文，介绍什么假期、参观了什么、怎么去的、和谁一起去的、做了什么五要素； 第三步结尾，总结假期感受。
素材积累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 the capital of China / a beautiful city... Beijing is the capital of China.
正文 什么假期: last summer holiday/ National Day holiday... 参观了什么: the Summer Palace / the Great Wall... 怎么去的: by plane/ took the plane... 和谁一起: with my friends / with my family... 做了什么: visited the museum/ took many photos... I went to the Summer Palace last summer holiday. I went to the Summer Palace during the holiday. I took the plane there. I went to Beijing with my family. I visited the museum and took many photos there.
结尾 happy, had a good time... I had a happy holiday!
以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法)
My Holiday
Beijing is the capital of China. It's a beautiful city. I went to Beijing with my family during the National Day holiday last year. We took the plane there. I saw many interesting things in Beijing. I visited the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. The Summer Palace is a beautiful park. I visited my aunt and uncle there. They cooked nice food for me. I ate the Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. I had a lot of fun in Beijing.
小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 上周二，Amy和她的家人去了一个特别的小镇，度过了一个美好的国庆假期。假如你是 Amy，请根据提示，发挥想象，写一篇短文，不少于6句话。
提示: When: last Tuesday, National Day Who: Amy and her family Where: a special town
What: ate much seafood, picked some fruit, caught some fish How: by bus
Last Tuesday, it was the National Day. I went to
[提分练1]
以“ My holiday”为题，先补全思维导图，再根据思维导图写一写你的假期生活。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，表达有条理，书写规范，不少于8句话。
[提分练2]
请根据思维导图,以“ My visit to Beijing”为题写一篇短文，不少于5句话。
My visit to Beijing
[提分练3]
请你根据所给图文提示,以“ Mike’s National Day holiday”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求：短文须包含所有的中文提示要点及图片表达出来的信息，意思连贯，语句通顺，可适当发挥。不少于60词。
提示：1. 两年前迈克去了三亚；2. 去年他参观了北京；3. 今年他又去了上海
Mike’s National Day holiday
[提分练4]
请你根据以下提示,以“Mike’s National Day holiday”为题,写一篇英语小短文。
要求：短文须包含所有中文提示要点，意思连贯，语句通顺，可适当发挥。不少于40词。
提示：1.两年前迈克去了三亚(Sanya)；2.去年他参观了北京；3.今年他又去了上海......
Mike’s National Day holiday
[提分练5]
去年的国庆节假期你是怎样度过的 请以“Last National Day holiday”为题，写一篇英文短文和大家分享一下吧！注意使用一般过去时，不少于5句话。
参考词汇:Shanghai, Bund, Shanghai Museum, photos, pan-fried pork buns(生煎包)
Last National Day holiday
参考答案
单元写作提优专训
1. the National Day holiday
2. my family and I
3. Beijing
4. visited the Great Wall and the Summer Palace; visited my aunt and uncle; ate the Beijing Roast Duck
5. took the plane
范文：
Last Tuesday, it was the National Day. I went to a special town with my family. It was a clean town near the sea. We went there by bus. We saw many interesting things. I ate much seafood there and drank some drinks. There was a lot of fruit. We picked some fruit and caught some fish. We had a good time.
[提分练1]
My holiday
I had a three-day holiday for the Dragon Boat Festival last month. My parents didn't have to go to work. So on the first day of the holiday, my mother taught me to make rice dumplings at home. On the second day of the holiday, it was the Dragon Boat Festival. The weather was sunny and warm. My parents and I went out to watch the dragon boat race. It was very exciting. We cheered and laughed by the lake. In the evening, we had a big dinner. We ate rice dumplings too. On the last day, we had a picnic in the park.
I enjoyed my holiday so much! (仅供参考)
[提分练2]
My visit to Beijing
Last summer holiday I had a visit to Beijing. I visited my uncle there. He took me to eat much nice food. The Great Wall is very famous in the world. It has a long history. I visited it with my uncle. I also visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I saw a lot of interesting things in these places.I had great fun in Beijing. I want to have a visit to Beijing next year again. (仅供参考)
[提分练3]
示例：
Mike's National Day holiday
Two years ago, Mike went to Sanya for his National Day holiday. He played games and made sandcastles on the beach with his sister and brother. He visited Beijing last National Day holiday. He made a trip to the Great Wall and took many photos. He went to Shanghai and Suzhou for his 7- day holiday this year. First, he got to Shanghai and visited the Shanghai Museum. There are many old interesting things in the museum. Then he took the high- speed rail to Suzhou.
Suzhou is famous for its beautiful gardens. Mike saw many classical gardens and took a lot of photos with his family there. How happy he was!
[提分练4]
示例：
Mike's National Day holiday
Two years ago,Mike went to Sanya for his holiday.He went swimming in the sea every day.Last National Day holiday,he went to Beijing.He visited the Great Wall and ate Beijing Roast Duck.It was very delicious.This year,he went to Shanghai during the National Day holiday.He visited the Bund.He saw a lot of interesting things and took many photos there.How happy he was!
[提分练5]
示例：
Last National Day holiday
Last National Day holiday, I went to Shanghai by plane with my parents. It was sunny and cool there. We visited the Bund and the Shanghai Museum. We also went to Disneyland. There were a lot of people. We took many photos there. I ate much delicious food in Shanghai. I like pan-fried pork buns very much. I had a good time during the holiday.
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