2025年高考英语题型解析 08-题型七 概要写作 课件

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题型七 概要写作
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Writing 1
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
（2023上海大同中学考试）Few people would contest the value of the arts in a
civilized society. The great arts enrich people's lives by providing various amusements.
However, it is also true that many of the arts, such as classical music, the ballet, and
the visual arts, have always attracted a minority of audience. The arts need capital
investment. The question is whether the arts should be publicly funded, or it is the
consumers who should pay.
It is my view that the government should subsidize（资助） the arts, for a
number of reasons. First of all, without subsidies, many artists would undoubtedly be
unable to survive financially. Government grants（补助金） enable them to work with
artistic freedom, while if they worked independently or relied on private subsidies they
might be subject to market pressure. Secondly, the arts contribute to a nation's cultural
heritage and can enhance a sense of social identity. They also play an important role
in education, community regeneration and even crime prevention.
Of course, there are those who argue that public money would be better spent in
meeting the needs of the poorer members of society, rather than catering for the
interests of the elite. However, I believe that a healthy society is one in which the
arts and creativity are valued alongside these basic needs. Indeed, a civilized society
ought to make the arts accessible to everyone, regardless of their background or
income.
In conclusion, the arts should be funded by a broad range of activities, for
example, by supporting community or school theatre projects, or bringing sculptures
and art installations to public places.
__________
【写作指导】
第一步：现骨架
本篇议论文概要骨架： 论点——论据——结论
第二步：留要点
第一段 根据问答处留要点：
The question is whether the arts should be publicly funded, or it is the consumers
who should pay.
本文开篇提出问题——艺术应该由政府资助还是应该由消费者买单
第二段 根据总结及时序类留要点：
It is my view that the government should subsidize the arts.
First of all,…Government grants enable them to work with artistic freedom.
Secondly, the arts contribute to a nation's cultural heritage and can enhance a
sense of social identity.
They also play an important role in education, community regeneration and even
crime prevention.
第二段主要讲的是作者认为政府应该为艺术提供资金，因为艺术在社会许多方面起
着重要的作用，而且政府资助可以让艺术家们有创作自由。
第三段 根据转折类留要点：
However, I believe that a healthy society is one in which the arts and creativity
are valued alongside these basic needs.Indeed, a civilized society ought to make the
arts accessible to everyone, regardless of their background or income.
第三段讲述的是健康文明的社会应该如同重视基本需求一样重视艺术，让所有人都
能接触到艺术。
第四段 根据总结类留要点：
In conclusion, the arts should be funded by a broad range of activities.
第四段讲述的是可以举办一系列活动支持艺术。
第三步：替换原文
要点1：Should the arts be funded by the government or consumers
（将whether…or句式改为问句）
要点2：The arts should be supported by the government（主动语态转换为被动语
态） for the arts play an important role in society in many aspects（代替education,
community regeneration and even crime prevention） and the funding makes artists
have freedom of creation.
要点3：A healthy and civilized society should value the arts as well as the basic
needs, making the arts accessible to everyone. （被动语态转换为主动语态）
要点4：The government can hold a wide（替代broad） range of activities to
support the arts.（被动语态转换为主动语态）
第四步：补充衔接词
要点2的后半部分和要点3讲的都是艺术应该由政府资助的原因，是并列关系，可以
用besides连接。
【参考范文】
Should the arts be funded by the government or consumers （要点1） The arts
should be supported by the government for the arts play an important role in society
in many aspects and the funding makes artists have freedom of creation.（要点2）
Besides, a healthy and civilized society should value the arts as well as the basic
needs, making the arts accessible to everyone.（要点3） The government can hold a
wide range of activities to support the arts.（要点4）
Writing 2
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
（2023上海松江一中月考）We shouldn't judge a person by their appearance but
we do, which is so-called "the first impression".Experts say that when we meet
someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three
seconds. But what do we look at One of the most important things is clothes, but
the brand of the clothes that people wear isn't important. The important thing is to
wear right clothes for the right occasion.
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear
a uniform. Why A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are
part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.
Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear
uniforms, they can't judge each other by their clothes. It also helps avoid arguments
about who or what is fashionable.
However， it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We
all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we
visit a doctor， we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctor's white coat.
When we go into a bank, we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers
wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol. In fact,
a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the
customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like Maybe not， but they
can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us
dressed in the right clothes， they think we are serious about what we are doing.
Furthermore, if we are clean, tidy and polite, people will have confidence in us.
_______
【写作指导】
第一步：现骨架
本篇议论文概要骨架：论点——论据1——论据2——论据3
第二步：留要点
第一段 根据转折类留要点：
But what do we look at One of the most important things is clothes, but the
brand of the clothes that people wear isn't important. The important thing is to wear
right clothes for the right occasion.
第一段通过根据衣着评判一个人这件事引出观点：在适当场合穿适当的衣服很重要。
第二段 根据问答处留要点：
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear
a uniform. Why …
第二段提出论据1：许多学校要求学生穿校服，因为校服能使学生感觉他们是学校
的一部分，使学生认真对待他们的学习，使学生不靠穿着评价彼此，也有助于避免关于
谁或什么衣服时髦的争论。
第三段 根据转折类留要点：
However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We
all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear.
第三段提出论据2：对于从事某种职业的人应该穿什么样的服装，我们都有固定的观念。
第四段 根据转折类和时序类留要点：
Maybe not,. .but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.
Furthermore,. .if we are clean, tidy and polite, people will have confidence in us.
第四段提出论据3：服装能够展现出"我们"对目前正在做的事情的态度，如果"我们
"穿着干净、整洁，且有礼貌，人们就会对"我们"有信心。
第三步：替换原文
要点1：People tend to judge a person by what they wear, so（因果关系） it is
important to wear proper clothes for the right occasion.
要点2：Many schools ask their students to wear school uniforms for various
reasons（概括所述各项原因）.
要点3：Some professionals are also expected to wear proper clothes.
要点4：Proper clothes show our attitude toward our professions and strengthen
people's confidence in us.
第四步：补充衔接词
要点1是作者的观点。要点2、要点3和要点4是证明作者观点的论据。可在前边加
for example/besides/in conclusion等。
【参考范文】
People tend to judge a person by what they wear, so it is important to wear
proper clothes for the right occasion.（要点1）For example, many schools ask their
students to wear school uniforms for various reasons.（要点2）Besides, some
professionals are also expected to wear proper clothes.（要点3）In conclusion, proper
clothes show our attitude toward our professions and strengthen people's confidence in
us.（要点4）
Writing 3
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
（2023湖南长沙长郡中学月考）With global warming and melting ice, it isn't easy
to be a polar bear anymore. Some studies have predicted that polar bears could die
out by the end of the 21st century. The good news is that not all researchers think
the bears are absolutely disappearing. Scientists at the American Museum of Natural
History（AMNH） have published a new paper indicating that things might not be as
bad for polar bears as some scientists expect.
To understand the reason for the researchers' cautious optimism, we must first
understand the factors that are threatening the polar bears' existence.
Polar bears consume a diet of mainly young seals. In order to hunt these seals, polar
bears need to rest at the top of sea ice — the same ice that is increasingly melting
for most of the year thanks to climate change. In another 50 years, experts expect that
the Arctic will be too warm for sea ice to form for half of the year, leaving polar
bears without a reliable food source and in serious danger of starvation. As it turns
out, alternative food sources for the polar bears aren't completely out of the question.
Biologists have tailed the animals, and they've seen polar bears eating animals found
on land like caribou（驯鹿） and snow geese — as well as the snow geese's eggs.
Can polar bears actually survive on these alternative food sources for long periods
of time To figure this out, researchers calculated the nutrients that a diet of caribou
and snow geese would provide. They found that even adult male polar bears would be
able to obtain more calories than they would burn in hunting these meals. Moreover, it
would provide the necessary food for bears to avoid starvation during the summer
months.
Unfortunately, not all polar bears have tended to seek food on land. That said, the
researchers expect that necessity would push more polar bears to hunt on land to
avoid starvation. They also expect that the bears could learn from their fellow bears
how to hunt on land until the practice becomes second nature.
__________
【写作指导】
第一步：现骨架
本篇说明文概要骨架：说明研究预测——解释研究内容——补充研究内容——总结
研究预测
第二步：留要点
第一段 根据关键词和转折类留要点：
Some studies have predicted that polar bears could die out by the end of the 21st
century.
The good news is that not all researchers think the bears are absolutely
disappearing.
第一段提出一些研究预测，到21世纪末北极熊可能要灭绝，但是科学家发表的一篇
新论文表明情况并不像一些科学家预料的那样糟糕。
第二段 根据总结类留要点：
As it turns out, alternative food sources for the polar bears aren't completely out
of the question.
第二段讲述的是专家预测北极会过于温暖，海冰无法形成，使得北极熊缺乏可靠的
食物来源，面临饥饿的危险。但是生物学家已看到北极熊正在吃陆地上的动物。
第三段 根据问答处和时序及举例类留要点：
Can polar bears actually survive on these alternative food sources for long periods
of time To figure this out,researchers calculated the nutrients that a diet of caribou
and snow geese would provide.
Moreover, it would provide the necessary food for bears to avoid starvation during
the summer months.
第三段讲述的是北极熊吃这样的替代性食物能够生存下去。
第四段 根据总结类留要点：
That said, the researchers expect that necessity would push more polar bears to
hunt on land to avoid starvation. They also expect that the bears could learn from
their fellow bears how to hunt on land until the practice becomes second nature.
第四段讲述的是研究员预料会有更多的北极熊学习猎食陆地上的动物。
第三步：替换原文
要点1：Due to global warming and melting ice, some scientists think that polar
bears could disappear by the end of the 21st century. However（与前一句形成转折）,
other scientists disagree.
要点2：Polar bears have been found eating alternative food because of global
warming.（用被动语态替换主动语态）
要点3：Polar bears can survive with alternative food sources.
要点4：The researchers expect more polar bears could learn how to hunt on land
to avoid starvation.
第四步：补充衔接词
要点1中的"However, other scientists disagree"与要点2、要点3是因果关系，所以可
将要点2和要点3转换为原因状语从句。要点4在逻辑上与要点2和要点3呈递进关系，所
以要点4前面可加furthermore/moreover/besides等。
【参考范文】
Due to global warming and melting ice, some scientists think that polar bears
could disappear by the end of the 21st century. However, other scientists disagree
（要点1）, as polar bears have been found eating alternative food because of global
warming（要点2） and can survive with alternative food sources（要点3）. Besides,
the researchers expect more polar bears could learn how to hunt on land to avoid
starvation. （要点4）
高考真题
Writing 1
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
（2019浙江6月）Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The
A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids,says, "We've gone to the opposite
extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids
a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children's confidence, when, in fact,
it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way
that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being
able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just
as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that
you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their
accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise Experts say that the quality of praise is
more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the
outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal
reward."We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and
work hard to achieve a goal," says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting
Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters."One thing to remember is that it's
the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there
every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his
team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing
your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book
report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be
proportionate（相称的） to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
_______________
【写作指导】
第一步：现骨架
本篇议论文概要骨架：论点1+论据——论点2+论据——论点3+论据——总结
第二步：留要点
第一段 根据转折处留要点：
By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children's
confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite.
第一段主要介绍的是父母从过去批评孩子到现在过度表扬孩子的转变，但过度的表
扬也会对孩子造成伤害。
第二段 根据关键词留要点：
Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.
第二段主要论述的是在批评与表扬孩子方面不要走极端，表扬过少会损伤孩子的自
信心。
第三段 根据问答处和总结处留要点：
So what is the right amount of praise Experts say that the quality of praise is
more important than the quantity.
One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters.
第三段主要论述的是什么是高质量的表扬，对孩子的表扬要真诚，并且注重孩子努
力的过程而不是只关注结果。
第四段 根据转折处留要点：
But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be
proportionate to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
第四段归纳总结，点明表扬应遵循的原则，也就是鼓励与表扬应该与其付出努力的
程度成正比。
第三步：替换原文
要点1：Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerable praise to their children,
hoping to boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect
（代替backfire）．
要点2：Not enough praise from parents also does harm to（代替damaging）
children's self-confidence.
要点3：Experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for
the result.
要点4：The amount of praise parents give should depend on（代替proportionate）
how hard their kids work.
第四步：补充衔接词
要点1和要点2构成转折关系，可用however/but连接;要点1和要点2是原因，要点3是
结果，可在要点3前面加上therefore;要点4是总结，可在要点4前面加上anyway。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerable praise to their children, hoping to
boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect.（要点1）However, not
enough praise from parents also does harm to children's self-confidence.（要点2）
Therefore, experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the
result.（要点3） Anyway, the amount of praise parents give should depend on how
hard their kids work.（要点4）
Writing 2
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
（2018浙江11月）It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply
because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you
the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus（校园） like
visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of
course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to
visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to
happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a
decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to
make sure you are making the right one.
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of
college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live
across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go
check it out!
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you
should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the
schools you'd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now
the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know
unless you actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online
college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It's a chance to chat online with admissions officers,
students, and college counselors（顾问）, and it won't cost you a penny! You can
register for its online college fair at .While visiting an online
college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool
that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about
which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.
______________
【写作指导】
第一步：现骨架
本篇说明文概要骨架：原文第一段提出了主题，即在申请大学之前去参观一下是非
常必要的；第二、三、四段讲述了了解大学的具体方式。
第二步：留要点
第一段 根据关键词留要点：
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites
can all start to look and sound the same.
It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college
campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be
more than a car ride away.
第一段首先表明了文章的中心，为了确保好的大学生活，在申请之前你应该花时间
去参观一下学校。
第二段 根据转折处留要点：
…but if you live nearby, go check it out!
第二段交代了了解大学的方式之一，如果你住得近，申请之前可以去查看学校。
第三段 根据关键词留要点：
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you
should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the
schools you'd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now
the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know
unless you actually visit.
第三段说明了可以在递交申请之后，去学校参观。
第四段 根据关键词留要点：
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online
college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.
第四段交代了另一种了解大学的方式，线上参观学校。
第三步：替换原文
要点1：To ensure a brilliant college life, you'd better spare time to visit campuses
to examine all aspects of your dream colleges, even if it may be costly.
要点2：If you live nearby, be sure to check it out before you apply.
要点3：After submitting applications, a visit can help avoid much trouble.
要点4：Visiting the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive, if not possible to see
in person for lack of time and money, will be beneficial.
第四步:补充衔接词
要点3和要点2是递进关系，可用even连接;要点4与要点2、要点3形成对比，说明线
上参观学校也有好处，故可在要点4前面加上however。
【参考范文】
To ensure a brilliant college life, you'd better spare time to visit campuses to
examine all aspects of your dream colleges, even if it may be costly.（要点1） If you
live nearby, be sure to check it out before you apply.（要点2） Even after submitting
applications, a visit can help avoid much trouble.（要点3） However, visiting the
online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive, if not possible to see in person for lack of
time and money, will be beneficial.（要点4）
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