Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my sister.写作教学课件【人教（2024秋）八上英语】

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Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
writing
Lead-in
Wang Lingling
Liu Lili
Lead-in
Wang Lingling Liu Lili
tall tall
long straight hair short straight hair
likes reading likes sports
popular popular
outgoing outgoing
serious funny
hard-working smart
Wang Lingling's best friend is Liu Lili.
They are both tall and they both have straight hair, but Lingling's hair is longer.
Lingling likes reading,but Lili likes sports.
Lingling and Lili are both popular and
outgoing.
However,Lingling is more serious and hard-working than Lili,and Lili is funnier and smarter than Lingling.
审
根据表格写出我与Mike在生活、学习、爱好等方面的相同与不同之处，首句已给出。（70-80个单词）
相同点 不同点
Mike 1.喜欢运动 2.爱读书 3.学习努力，成绩好。 1.步行上学，喜欢听音乐
2.更加外向，喜欢户外运动，每周两次长跑3.喜好体育，英语较差
I 1.乘公共汽车上学，喜欢看电视
2.爱玩儿电脑游戏，爱游泳，每周锻炼三次3.更聪明，数学更好
1.根据提示，以“My Best Friend and I”为题，写一篇短文，比较二人的特征；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数不少于70。
人称：第一人称+第三人称(单三)
时态：一般现在时
标题：My Best Friend and I
要点: 相同点,不同点。
列
Begining:
Introduction:
who+相同点
喜欢运动
爱读书
学习努力，成绩好
love doing sports.
enjoying reading books
study hard and get better grades
列
Body part:
differences
Mike
I
1.步行上学，喜欢听音乐
2.更加外向，喜欢户外运动，每周两次长跑
3.喜好体育，英语较差
1.乘公共汽车上学，喜欢看电视
2.爱玩儿电脑游戏，爱游泳，
每周锻炼三次
3.更聪明，数学更好
likes to walk to school and enjoys music
more outgoing than me, likes outdoor sports, runs twice a week
is good at sports but worse at Engish
go to school by bus, like watching TV
like playing computer games and swimming, take exercise three times a week
smarter than him and do well in math
Ending:
summary
Beginning
My best friend is Mike./I have a good friend Mike.
We both love sports and reading in our free time
(when we are free).
We studied so hard that we are both good at our lessons.
好词好句
Beginning
We always get good grades and our teachers like us very much.
Both of us study hard, so we both get good grades.
I work as hard as Mike, so we both get good grades.
好词好句
Body part
At the same time, we have something quite different from each other.
Although we are good friends, we have something different from each other.
好词好句
Body part
However, we are quite different from each other in some ways.
Although we are similar in some ways, we are different from each other in other ways.
好词好句
Mike likes to walk to school and enjoys music. But I usually go to school by bus and I like watching TV.
What’s more/Besides(另外), he is more outgoing than me. He likes outdoor sports so much that he runs twice a week.
Body part
好词好句
I like playing computer games and swimming. And I take exercise three times a week.
He is good at sports but worse at English.
I am a little smarter than him and do well in math.
Maybe I can help him with it.
Body part
好词好句
Although we have something different, we are always good friends.
Though we have many differences, we can talk about and share everything.
Ending
好词好句
It's lucky for me to have a good friend like him.
I hope he will have a good future and our friendship will last forever.
Ending
好词好句
范文
I have a good friend, Mike. We both like sports and reading in our free time. We study so hard that we are both good at our lessons. We always get good grades and our teachers like us very much.
At the same time, we have something different from each other. Mike likes to walk to school and enjoys music. But I usually go to school by bus and I like watching TV. He is more outgoing than me. He likes outdoor sports so much that he runs twice a week. I like playing computer games and swimming. I take exercise three times a week. He is good at sports but worse at English. I am smarter than him and I do well in math.
Although we have something different, we are always good friends.
总结
Begining: who+相同点
Body part:difference
Ending:summary
We both like sports and reading in our free time.
What's more/Besides, he is more outgoing than me. He likes outdoor sports so much that he runs twice a week.
Although we have something different, we are always good friends.
注意事项：
v.三单，比较级，句式
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