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Unit 5 A delicate world
Developing ideas Writing
Drafting a lecture
Read the passage and find out why Fanjing Mountain was selected to UNESCO World Heritage List.
Draft a lecture about Fanjing Mountain.
Learning objectives
Fanjing Mountain
Read the passage and answer the questions.
1. Where is Fanjing Mountain Why is it significant
Fanjing Mountain is located in Guizhou Province. It is significant because it represents one of the country’s great achievements in environmental protection.
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2. Why was Fanjing Mountain selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List
The main reason for its inclusion is its biological diversity, with approximately 50 endangered plant and animal species within its protected area.
Complete the outline to organise your lecture draft based on the information in Activity 5. Do online research if necessary.
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Opening:
1) greeting
2) introduction to the topic: ______________________
Reason for selection: ______________________________________________
Other information: ______________________________________________
Conclusion: ______________________________________________
Q&A
Why Fanjing Mountain has been added to the UNESO World Heritage List.
Opening:
1) greeting
2) introduction to the topic:
Reason for selection:
Because of its biological diversity.
Other information:
1)
2)
Fanjing Mountain is one of the first national nature reserves in China.
Fanjing Mountain has breathtaking scenery which makes it a summer resort.
Q & A
Conclusion:
Fanjing Mountain represents one of China's greatest achievements in protecting environment.
Work in pairs. Make improvements to each other's lecture drafts and share them with the class.
Now think about how well you understood the features of a lecture, and what you should pay attention to when drafting a lecture.
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演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。它可以用来交流思想、感情,表达主张、见解,也可以用来介绍自己的学习、工作情况和经验。演讲稿具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用,它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众,使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
演讲稿
开头:好的开头能够紧紧地抓住听众的注意力,为整场演讲的成功打下基础。常用的开头有点明主题、交代背景、提出问题等。
称呼:最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况,选用 Fellow students, Distinguished guests, Mr. Chairman, Honorable judges等。
演讲稿的结构分称呼、开头、正文和结尾四个部分。
正文:
它是整篇演讲的主体,必须有重点、有层次。
由于演讲材料是通过口头表达的,为了便于听众理解,各段落应上下连贯,段与段之间有适当的过渡和呼应。
结尾:
它是演讲内容的收束,起着深化主题的作用。
结尾的方法有归纳法、引文法、反问法等。归纳法是概括一篇演讲的中心思想,总结强调主要观点;引文法则是引用名言警句,升华主题,留下思考;反问法是以问句引发听众思考和对演讲者观点的认同。此外,演讲稿的结尾也可以用感谢、展望、鼓舞等语句作结,使演讲能自然收束,给人留下深刻印象。
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求写一篇讲座文稿,介绍一处位于中国的世界自然遗产。完整的讲座文稿应当包含开场问候、开头点题、内容阐述、结尾总结以及问答环节(本文可以省略)这几个部分。撰写讲座文稿时应当注意紧扣主题、结构清晰、语言准确。
二、谋篇布局
根据提示信息,我们可将本写作任务分为三部分:
第一部分:引入主题,简要介绍地理位置;
第二部分:具体介绍入选理由;
第三部分:说明申遗成功的意义。
与生态环境相关的语块
global warming 全球变暖
white pollution 白色污染
household garbage 生活垃圾
greenhouse effect 温室效应
greenhouse gas emissions 温室气体排放
endangered wildlife 濒危野生动物
sustainable development 可持续发展
ecological destruction 生态破坏
energy conservation and emissions reduction 节能减排
unique natural ecology 独特的自然生态
ecological and environmental protection 生态环境保护
raise environmental awareness among the general public
提高全民环保意识
The ecological environment is crucial to human civilization and China’s development.
人类文明和中国的发展都与生态环境息息相关。
China’s goal is to build a resource-conserving and environmentally friendly society.
中国的目标是建设一个资源节约型和环境友好型的社会。
A better understanding of the environment is necessary.
更好地了解环境情况是有必要的。
The Wonders of Fanjing Mountain
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm very happy to be here to give a short lecture.
Have you ever heard of Fanjing Mountain Or have you ever visited it If you haven't, you soon will! Fanjing Mountain lies in Tongren, Guizhou Province with an elevation of about 2,570 metres. It is the highest peak of the Wuling Mountain range in south-west China. Fanjing Mountain was added to the UNESCO World Heritage List in 2018.
The Fanjingshan Nature Reserve was established in 1978 and represents one of the country's greatest achievements in environmental protection. The rich biodiversity of the Wuling Mountain range is the principal reason for Fanjing Mountain's inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage prising the largest subtropical primeval beech forest, the region is home to 2,000 species of plants, such as the endangered Chinese dove tree. Endangered animal species that can be found on Fanjing Mountain and its surrounding mountain range include the Chinese giant salamander, forest musk deer and grey snub-nosed monkey.
Fanjing mountain is of course also renowned for the breathtaking views from its summit—or, more accurately “summits”, as there are three of these! And when night falls leaving this magnificent scenery in darkness, the Mushroom Stone, one of the many strange rock formations, is illuminated so that visitors can still marvel at the wonders of Fanjing Mountain.
All explains why Fanjing Mountain earned its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for your listening! Now, does anyone have any questions
你校学生会将面向外国留学生举办一场有关世界自然遗产的小型专题讲座。作为主讲人之一,请你根据所给提示用英语写一篇讲座文稿,介绍于2013年被列入《世界遗产名录》(World Heritage List)的新疆天山(Xinjiang Tianshan)。
Homework
地理位置 新疆维吾尔自治区(Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region)
入选理由 1. 地貌(landform)类型丰富,自然景观优越;
2. 体现了新疆天山的生态演化过程;
3. 众多珍稀濒危物种的栖息地。
申遗成功的意义 1. 有利于新疆的快速发展;
2. 有利于保护这一人类共有的珍贵资源。
Good morning, everyone. It's my honour to deliver a lecture on Xinjiang Tianshan. It is located in Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region of China.
Either its varied landforms or superior landscape would be enough to justify its popularity among tourists. What's more, the ecosystem there presents an outstanding example of the ecological evolution process. Xinjiang Tianshan is moreover an important habitat for some rare and endangered species.
The adding of Xinjiang Tianshan to the World Heritage List in 2013 has accelerated the development of Xinjiang and offered better protection for this charming and valuable resource that belongs to all humankind.