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2025人教版高中英语必修第三册
UNIT 2 MORALS AND VIRTUES
Part 4 Writing
关于寓言评论的写作
写作题目
请阅读下面这则寓言,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
On a sunny day a shepherd(牧羊人) walked his two hungry sheep along a winding country path. He managed to have them tied to each other just in case they should go separately. It was quite a long time before they arrived at a place where there was merely a small amount of fresh grass on each side of the path. Both of the sheep were so hungry that they hurried to the grass but in the separate directions. Unfortunately the rope fastening(系牢) them was not long enough. No matter how hard they struggled, neither was able to reach the grass in front of them.
The shepherd was about to help them when he was surprised to find that one of them should voluntarily abandon the struggle, and went along with the other. Consequently, together the two sheep enjoyed the fresh grass on one side happily, and then the grass on the other side.
(1)用大约30个单词概述上面这则寓言的主要内容;
(2)用100—120个单词就此则寓言谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
①从这则寓言中,你获得了哪些启示;
②结合该寓言给你的启示,谈谈你在生活中是如何做的。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. n.寓言;寓言故事
2. adv.因此;所以
3. n.高尚的道德;美德;优秀品质
4. v.帮助;援助
答案 1.fable 2.therefore 3.virtue 4.assist
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:对寓言的简单叙述
(1)The fable shares a story about two sheep with readers. Both of them chose cooperation (而不是竞争) in order to eat the grass on both sides of the path.
第二段:寓言的寓意
(2) (事实上), the fable mirrors that different attitudes may (导致) different results.
(3)Therefore, cooperation can create a win-win situation. In this situation, both sides can (得益于) the virtue of joint efforts.
第三段:生活中如何践行合作
(4)In my daily life, I often (与……合作) my classmates when playing basketball and (参加) races or community service activities.
(5)Meanwhile, I also (尽我最大的努力去帮助) them in return.
(6)Teamwork is (如此重要以至于) it helps us win numerous victories.
答案 (1)rather than competition (2)As a matter of fact;lead to/result in/contribute to (3)benefit by/from (4)cooperate with;
taking part in (5)do/try my best to assist (6)so important that
2.句式升级
(7)将句(1)改写为含有定语从句的句子
The fable shares a story about two sheep with readers, chose cooperation rather than competition in order to eat the grass on both sides of the path.
(8)将句(3)改写为含有定语从句的句子
Therefore, cooperation can create a win-win situation, / both sides can benefit by/from the virtue of joint efforts.
答案 (7)both of whom (8)where;in which
连句成篇
The fable shares a story about two sheep with readers, both of whom chose cooperation rather than competition in order to eat the grass on both sides of the path.
As a matter of fact, the fable mirrors that different attitudes may lead to/result in/contribute to different results. As an old saying goes, unity means strength. A chopstick breaks easily, while a bunch of them do not. Therefore, cooperation can create a win-win situation, where/in which both sides can benefit by/from the virtue of joint efforts.
In my daily life, I often cooperate with my classmates when playing basketball and taking part in races or community service activities. I learn a lot from my classmates and friends by following their advice. Meanwhile, I also do/try my best to assist them in return. Teamwork is so important that it helps us win numerous victories.
写作积累
1.短语
①in need需要(帮助)
②care for照顾
③share joys and sorrows同甘共苦
④be in harmony with...与……和谐相处/协调
⑤get along/on with与……和睦相处;进展
⑥make up with...与……和解
⑦lend a hand 帮助;搭把手
⑧the real meaning of life生命的真正意义
⑨serve the people为人民服务
⑩take on responsibility承担责任
2.句子
①The fable tells/shows us that...这则寓言告诉我们……
②The fable goes that...寓言说的是……
③The moral of the fable is that...寓言的寓意是……
④This story indicates that...这个故事表明……
⑤What we learn from the fable is that...我们从这则寓言中学到的是……
⑥There is an ancient Chinese fable called...中国古代有则寓言,叫作……
⑦The fable tells us a truth that real knowledge comes from practice.这则寓言告诉我们一个真理:实践出真知。
⑧The fable tells us that one good turn deserves another.这则寓言告诉我们,善有善报。
⑨Actions speak louder than words.行动比言语更为响亮。
⑩No pain, no gain.不劳则无获。
My journey is long and winding;I will keep on exploring my way far and wide.路漫漫其修远兮,吾将上下而求索。
The longest journey begins with the first step.千里之行,始于足下。
Every little helps.积少成多。
Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
Lost years are worse than lost dollars.一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴。
A friend is best found in adversity.=A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
实战演练
最近你校就《狼来了》这则寓言故事及其寓意展开讨论,大家踊跃发表自己的看法。请你根据下面所给的要点,给《21世纪学生英文报》写一篇英文稿件。要点如下:
1.该故事的寓意;
2.怎样做一个诚实的学生(举例说明);
3.你的看法(诚实的重要性)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Almost all of us heard the story Here Comes the Wolf when we were little kids.
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 2 MORALS AND VIRTUES
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Almost all of us heard the story Here Comes the Wolf when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible.
To students, honesty is especially important. By giving honest answers to questions in the exam, not only can we learn about our own strengths and weaknesses in our study, but also our teachers can evaluate our study. Besides, we should finish our homework independently and return books when they are due.
As far as I'm concerned, honesty is a good virtue. People who are honest can always win others' respect. A liar is always looked down upon and is hard to earn people's trust. Only in an honest way are we able to make more friends and gain their help to achieve our goals.
1.重点词汇
①strengths and weaknesses长处和短处;优缺点
②independently adv.独立地;自主地
③due adj.到期的
④as far as I'm concerned就我而言
⑤look down upon瞧不起
2.亮点句型
①By giving honest answers to questions in the exam, not only can we learn about our own strengths and weaknesses in our study, but also our teachers can evaluate our study. (“not only...but also...”连接两个分句;not only位于句首,其所在的分句要用倒装结构)通过在考试中诚实地回答问题,不仅我们可以了解自己在学习中的长处和短处,而且我们的老师们也可以对我们的学习进行评估。
②Only in an honest way are we able to make more friends and gain their help to achieve our goals. (“only+介词短语”位于句首的倒装结构)只有以诚实的方式,我们才能交到更多的朋友,并获得他们的帮助以达到我们的目标。
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