2025届高三英语二轮复习:读后续写十句五定课件(共21张PPT)

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高考英语读后续写
十句五定
When I was a kid in Pennsylvania, my family rehabilitated (使康复) wild animals.
I grew up with animals running around the house. We would go travelling to Bermuda and I would watch the whales off the shore. I fell in love with them and wanted to know more about what they got up to underwater. Now I've been studying whales for more than30 years and I am the president of the Center for Whale Research and Conservation.
In 2017, I was on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands, working on a film about whale conservation. The crew wanted to get more footage of me in the water with the humpback whales — I often slip in quietly to record their behaviour for research. Seeing a couple of humpbacks in the distance, I slid off the boat wearing a mask and swam towards them.
As I was approaching, one of the male humpbacks came right up to me, touching me with his head and pushing me through the water. It caught me off-guard — in 33 years of doing this work, this had never happened. I put my arm out and tried to push myself away while he attempted to roll up me under his pectoral fin (胸鳍).
My scientist brain was in overdrive as I tried to work out what he was doing. I felt a mixed sense of excitement and fear. Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his fin. I signaled to the boat, then — swoosh — I was pushed back under.
After minutes of being pushed around by the humpback, I saw what I thought was a second, smaller whale. But then I noticed the tail — whales move theirs up and down, and this one was moving side to side. I realized with horror that it belonged to a huge, 18-foot tiger shark. Tiger sharks are known to attack people, sometimes fatally (致命地).
第一步：审
背景(Settings) When In 2017
Where on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands
角色 (Characters) Who I(the president of the Center for Whale Research),
One humpback whale
第一步：审
情节(Plot) What [1]After seeing humpbacks, I slid off the boat and headed towards them.
[2]One of humpbacks, came to me, touching me and pushing me through the water
[3]The whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his fin.
[4] A huge tiger shark swam towards me.
Why
第一步：审
情感(Feelings) How a mixed sense of excitement and fear ----frightened
第二步：定主题
人与自然和谐相处
Live in harmony with the nature.
你保护大自然，大自然保护你
You embrace the nature which will give you a hug.
第三步：思情节
1. 三个一致原则
原文一致
时态一致
人物一致
2. 牢记“7个不” 法则
3. 十句五定
The shark had arched its body, which meant that it was in attack mode.
S1
S2
S3
S4
S5
根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句
根据第二段的首句逆推
逃跑
得救
3. 十句五定
Just over a year later, I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour. S1
S6
S7
S8
S9
S10
根据第二段的首句顺推
根据推断写结局
点题
回忆
与鲸鱼告别
The shark had arched its body, which meant that it was in attack mode.
S1
S2
S3
S4
S5
根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句
S3-S4 鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。
逃跑
得救
根据第二段的首句逆推
S2 情绪怎么样
Just over a year later, I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.
S6
S7
S8
S9
S10
根据第二段的首句顺推
根据推断写结局
点题
回忆
与鲸鱼告别
S7-S8 与鲸鱼互动
The shark had arched its body, which meant that it was in attack mode.
S1：根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句
逃跑
S1: I desperately swam towards the boat without hesitation, yelling out to the crew.
得救
S5：根据第二段的首句逆推
S5: Fortunately, I finally succeeded in reaching the boat with the whale’s continuous assistance. After that, I breathed a sigh of relief. My gratitude was beyond my description.
第四步：遣词造句（第一段）
The shark had arched its body, which meant that it was in attack mode.
S2
S3
S4
S3-S4 鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。
S2情绪怎么样
S2: A wave of horror overwhelmed me, with my heart pounding wildly.
S3: However, the fierce animal rushed towards me like an arrow
S4: The whale realized that I had difficulty in having a narrow escape, so it pushed me through the water as quickly as possible.
Just over a year later, I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.
S6 根据第二段的首句顺推
S10点题
回忆
第四步：遣词造句(第二段)
S6: At the first sight of the whale, the vivid memory of that astonishing encounter welled up in my mind.
S10: What I experienced proves that you embrace the nature which will give you a hug.
Just over a year later, I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.
S9根据推断写结局
与鲸鱼告别
S7-S8 与鲸鱼互动
S9: Happy moments are always fleeting. The sun set down gradually. We had to say goodbye to each other in the spectacluar sunset glow.
S7: I couldn’t help taking off my clothes, putting on diving suit and heading to the whale.
S8: I touched its head gently and kissed its cheek with great joy. Then, the whale put me on its head and swam merrily.
第五步：成文（字迹工整、清晰、美观）
I desperately swam towards the boat without hesitation, yelling out to the crew. A wave of horror overwhelmed me, with my heart pounding wildly. However, the fierce animal rushed towards me like an arrow. The whale realized that I had difficulty in having a narrow escape, so it pushed me through the water as quickly as possible. Fortunately, I finally succeeded in reaching the boat with the whale’s continuous assistance. After that, I breathed a sigh of relief. My gratitude was beyond my description.
第五步：成文（字迹工整、清晰、美观）
At the first sight of the whale, the vivid memory of that astonishing encounter welled up in my mind. I couldn’t help taking off my clothes, putting on diving suit and heading to the whale. I touched its head gently and kissed its cheek with great joy. Then, the whale put me on its head and swam merrily. Happy moments are always fleeting. The sun set down gradually. We had to say goodbye to each other in the spectacluar sunset glow and I steered the boat to the coast reluctantly. What I experienced proves that you embrace the nature which will give you a hug.
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