(共25张PPT)
Reading for Writing:
write about what makes a
great scientist
Unit 1 Science and Scientists
1. To get to know the good qualities great scientists share.
2. To learn from the great scientists and develop the noble spirits .
3.To write a short essay about a great scientist.
Learning Objectives
Lead-in
What personalities and qualities make them great scientists
Lead-in
What personalities and qualities make Qian a great scientist
Personality Supportive examples
patriotic
knowledgeable
determined
outstanding
and creative
(改变) his major to aviation
became a (先驱)in American jet and rocket technology
(开展研究)into rocket propulsion
(创建) the Jet Propulsion Laboratory
returned to China
(负责)not only developing China’s rocket science but also its space and missile programme
did not let that (使泄气) him from (承担) the challenge
(研制)the Dongfeng missiles
successfully launched its first (人造卫星).
be (追溯到) Qian's research
his (对...的浓厚兴趣)other things
his (深厚的鉴赏力)for art
has a wide
range of interest
paragr-aph events qualities
1
2
3
Stephen Hawking was one of
(最负盛名、最具天赋的)scientists in physics.
clever, gifted
Hawking’s own theory was proven (正确的).
clever, brave
Besides being (才华横溢的), he was
(勇敢的), though sometimes
(随意的) in what he said or did.
Furthermore, he was quite (意志坚定的).
Above all, Hawking was willing to
(敢于承认错误).
brave, careless, determined, honest
2)What personalities and qualities make Stephen Hawking a great scientist
Pre-writing
1. According to the two articles, what will be included in your essay if you are writing about a great person
Brief introduction
Life story
Achievements
Personalities/
qualities
Evaluation
Sentence patterns
首段常用句型(Brief information)
1. I am going to introduce to you.
我向你介绍我最喜欢的一位科学家。
2. He is in…
他是在……领域最著名和有影响力的科学家之一
3. 他是第一个……的科学家。(使用不定式作后置定语)
He is the first scientist to do…
eg. 袁隆平是第一个研制出杂交水稻的科学家。
Yuan Longping is the
hybrid rice.
高级句式结构
过去分词做后置定语
1. sb, known as +头衔, is one of the greatest +身份(复数)+ in the world. 林巧稚,被誉为万婴之母,是中国最伟大的医生之一。
Lin Qiaozhi, ______________“the mother of ten thousand babies”, is
in China.
非限制性定语
2. Sb, who is my favorite scientist, is considered to be +头衔。
钱学森是我最喜欢的科学家,他被誉为导弹之父。
Qian Xuesen, ,
“the father of missile.”
句型结构1: 主语,done定语/(who)非限从句,+谓语结构
(personal experience & qualities)
1. Born in a…family in…, he… 在…年出生于…家庭,他…
2. In the course of…, he met a lot of difficulties. However, he was
determined and never gave up.
在……期间, 他遇到很多困难, 但是他意志坚定, 从不放弃。
3. Not only is/was/does/did he…, but also he… 他不仅……,而且……
4. He achieved fame/became famous when he… 当…的时候,他成名了。
5. He has a strong passion for… 他对……充满热情。
句型结构2: done状语,+主句,+doing状语
钟南山,1936年10月出生于南京;他意志坚定,对医疗事业充满热情。
_______________________Nanjing, Zhong Nanshan is strong- minded/ determined,__________________________________ medical care.
句型结构3:With结构+主句+which非限定从
仿写:2003年春,凭借坚强的意志和专业能力,钟南山在抗击“非典”(SARS) 中做出了巨大贡献,这使人们找到治愈这种疾病的方法。
In the Spring of 2003, , Mr Zhong against SARS,
find the cure for the disease.
With strong will and great determination, Yuan achieved great success in increasing rice harvest, which solved the problem of the lack of food for many countries.
Famous as he is=Though he is famous (把从句中的表语提前,引起部分倒装,as 在此结构中指 “尽管/虽然”)
句型结构4: as倒装(adj./ n. + as+主语 +be)+主句
_____________________, he was determined to take part in the battle against the new coronavirus again at the beginning of 2020.
仿写:尽管很危险,他在2020年初决定再一次投身到新型冠状病毒的抗疫前线( the battle against ···)。
Famous as he is, he leads a simple life and cares little for money and fame.
句型结构5:Having done+主句+who非限定从
to us, he is really
doctor, who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
仿写:他给我们树立了好的榜样,他真的是一位爱国且有责任心的医生,值得我们崇拜和尊重。
Having set a great example to us, Yuan is really an excellent scientist who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
中段常用句型(personal experience & qualities):
Useful adjectives for qualities
patriotic (爱国的); devoted (奉献的);
selfless (无私的); diligent (勤奋的);
hard-working(勤奋的); responsible (有责任感的),
tireless (孜孜不倦的); persevering (坚持不懈的)
knowledgeable (学识渊博的); determined (坚决的)
gifted (有才华的); modest (谦虚的)
It is that inspire the young to devote themselves to the medical care.
句式结构6:It is+强调部分+that +其他
It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
仿写:正是他的无私付出和伟大贡献激励年轻人投入到医学事业中。
末段常用句型(influence)
1. He inspires me to be a person like him. 他激励我成为像他一样的人。
2. 对我影响最深的是他对科学和祖国的热爱。(what主语从句)
is his affection for science and our country.
3. 知道他的故事后,我决定全身心投入于科学。(Having done状语)
, I to devote myself to science.
It’s your show time!
Learning for Writing
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Writing---material
题目:你要为英语校报写一篇报道,介绍科学家Marie Curie(Madame Curie)及其伟大精神,以激发学生们努力
奋进,勇攀科学高峰。信息如下:
出生日期:1867年11月7日
出 生 地:波兰一个知识分子(intellectual)家庭
经历:当时波兰不允许女子上大学,她去法国深造并获得物理学位。
主要成就:1898年发现镭(radium),获得诺贝尔奖。伟大品质:意志坚强,有决心。
评价:对科学界做出巨大贡献,被认为是最伟大的女性科学家。
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Writing---Outline
Para. 1
Brief introduction
(who)
Para. 2
Personal experience
+Achievement+
Scientific spirit
Para. 3
Evaluations
__________as Madame Curie, she is one of the most ______and ________physicists and has a great impact on ________________
1)_________ in Sep. 7, 1867 in a(n)___________, Marie Curie attended____________________
to study _________, because_______________.
2) As a woman, Marie Curie was faced with great difficulties. Nevertheless, she did not let that __________her from ____________.
3) In 1898, she achieved great success in _______________and won the Nobel Prize.
Regarded as the most outstanding female scientist due to ____________________
Writing
Make a draft by using what you’ve learned in this class.(10min)
Show your draft and evaluate it with the following items.
自评量表 项目 评价标准 自我打分 得分 总得分15
书写卷面(2分) 书写工整,卷面整洁
内容 完整度 (6分) 包含人物简介
包含人物主要成就
包含对人物的评价
语言多样性 与准确度 (5分) 使用了with复合结构
使用了非谓语
使用了what引导的主语从句
使用了定语从句
使用了强调句
使用了倒装句
篇章结构(2分) 三段式
有效使用了衔接过渡手段
自评表
Post-writing
Show time!
Known as Madame Curie, Marie Curie is one of the most famous and brilliant physicists and chemists in the world and has a great impact on the develpment of physics and chemisry in the world.
Born in Sep. 7, 1867 in an intellectual family in Poland, Marie Curie attended a university in France to study physics and chemistry, because women were not allowed to go to university at that time. As a woman, Marie Curie was faced with great difficulties. Nevertheless, she did not let that discourage her from taking on challenges. She continued to devote herself to doing scientific research and finally in 1989, she achieved great success in discovering radium and won the Nobel Prize.
Madame Curie is regarded as the most outstanding woman scientist due to her substantial contributions in scientific field. Her spirits leave a deep impression on me and inspire me to work hard to pursue my dream.
Polish your own writing after class.
Homework
Thank you