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2025译林版高中英语必修第三册
Part 4 Writing
介绍伟大的科学家
写作题目
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack想要了解中国的科学家。你决定向他介绍2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的屠呦呦,因为她发现了青蒿素,为人类治疗疟疾作出了巨大贡献。请根据以下要求写一封回信。内容包括:
1.屠呦呦的简介;
2.屠呦呦对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.疟疾
2. n.实验
3. v.实施,组织
4. 成功,奏效,达到目的
答案 1.malaria 2.experiment 3.conduct 4.pay off
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明写信目的——介绍中国科学家屠呦呦
(1) (我写信是要介绍) my favorite scientist Tu Youyou to you.
第二段:介绍屠呦呦及其影响
(2)Tu Youyou, a great scientist, (把她的大部分时间用于做实验) to find the cure for malaria.
(3)In 2015, she (被授予) the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering qinghaosu. Qinghaosu is (……的关键) the treatment for malaria.
(4)Her contribution to the world is great (如此……以至于) she has become the idol of many people.
(5)Because I (受……的鼓舞) her story, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.
第三段:表达希望
(6)I hope her story can also (对……产生积极的影响) you.
答案 (1)I'm writing to introduce
(2)devoted most of her time to conducting experiments (3)was awarded;the key to (4)so;that (5)was inspired by (6)have a positive effect on
2.句式升级
(7)将句(3)改写成含定语从句的主从复合句
(8)将句(4)改写成倒装句
(9)将句(5)改写成过去分词作状语的简单句
答案 (7)In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering qinghaosu, which is the key to the treatment for malaria. (8)So great is her contribution to the world that she has become the idol of many people. (9)Inspired by her story, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese scientists. I'm writing to introduce my favorite scientist Tu Youyou to you.
Tu Youyou, a great scientist, devoted most of her time to conducting experiments to find the cure for malaria. Finally her efforts paid off. In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering qinghaosu, which is the key to the treatment for malaria. So great is her contribution to the world that she has become the idol of many people. Inspired by her story, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.
I hope her story can also have a positive effect on you. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
介绍人物常用表达
一、单词
1.honourable可敬的,值得钦佩的
2.respectable得体的;值得尊敬的
3.creative有创造力的
4.confident自信的
5.strong-minded有主见的
6.diligent勤勉的;刻苦的
二、短语
1.make great contributions to...为……作出巨大贡献
2.devote oneself to...致力于……
3.work day and night一天到晚地工作
4.get over varieties of difficulties克服各种各样的困难
5.play a leading role in...在……方面起主导作用
6.achieve one's dream实现某人的梦想
7.make rapid progress in...在……方面取得迅速进展
8.face the challenge面对挑战
9.be awarded...for...因为……被授予……
10.under sb.'s leadership在某人的领导下
三、句子
1.He fell in love with science and devoted himself to it.他迷上了科学并且致力于它。
2.So strong-minded was he that he could keep up until he succeeded.他意志很坚强,他会继续做下去直到成功。
3.These results are a further proof of his outstanding ability.这些成果进一步证明了他的杰出才干。
4.He is an example to me and his spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward.他是我的榜样,他的精神将激励我继续前进。
实战演练
(2023辽宁县级重点高中联合体期末)
假设你们班在英语课上观看了介绍著名科学家的视频。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍其中一位科学家,并向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.该科学家的事迹和贡献;
2.你的感悟。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
A Famous Scientist
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 4 Scientists who changed the world
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A Famous Scientist
I watched many videos of famous scientists in English class, and Qian Xuesen impressed me the most. When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the decision to major in aviation. He went to America in 1935 to pursue his graduate studies and returned to China in 1955. Under Qian's leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets.
Qian devoted himself to the country and helped make China stronger. He is an example to me and his spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward.
1.重点词汇
①impress v.给……留下深刻的好印象 ②defend v.保卫 ③major in主修 ④devote oneself to...致力于……
2.亮点句型
①When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the decision to major in aviation.(When引导时间状语从句;so连接并列分句)钱年轻的时候就意识到中国需要拥有自己强大的空军来保卫国家,所以他决定主修航空专业。
②Under Qian's leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles,followed by the first generation of Long March rockets.(过去分词短语作定语)在钱的领导下,中国开发了东风导弹,随后的是第一代长征火箭。
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