Unit 5 What do they do 写作提优（含答案）

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译林版五年级上册Unit 5写作提优专训
介绍人物的职业
方法指导
介绍人物的职业，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出人物；第二步正文，介绍职业的名称、职业的功能和工作的地点三要素；第三步结尾，表达对职业的评价。
素材积累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 称呼: my father, your mother My father is a teacher. What about your mother
正文 职业名称: a cook, a doctor, a driver, a farmer, a nurse, a policeman, a teacher, a worker 职业的功能: help sick people, make sweets 工作的地点: at home, in the factory My father is a doctor. He helps sick people. She makes sweets. She works at home. She makes sweets in the factory.
结尾 评价: like, love I like this work.
以读促写(阅读范文，补全表格，体悟写法)
Good morning, everyone. My name is John. I'm a pupil. I'm very glad to see all of you. I like playing basketball. My father is a doctor. He works in a big hospital near my home. He helps sick people. He is busy all day. My mother is a teacher. She teaches Maths. She has a lot of students. My grandfather is a cook. He works in a five-star hotel. He cooks nice food for people. My grandmother is a factory worker. She makes cars. She can drive well. Welcome to my home.
People Jobs Places Activities
my father 1. ________ hospital 5. ________
my mother 2. ________ 3. ________ teach Maths
I student 4. ________ 6. ________
小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧)
根据下面表格的提示，写一篇短文介绍你的叔叔，至少五句话。
Name Age(年龄) Occupation(职业) Animals Hobbies
John 45 farmer cows, ducks and chickens play football, read books
This is my uncle.
[提分练1]
假如你是李明，请运用本单元所学的知识，结合之前学习的有关人物爱好等方面的表达，并联系实际情况，以 “My family”为题，介绍一下你的家人吧！
[提分练2]
根据表格提示，写一篇短文介绍你的表哥约翰，要求语法正确，句意连贯，不少于5 句话。
Name Age(年龄) Job
John 25 farmer
Things on the farm
apple trees and orange trees; cows, ducks and chickens
Hobbies
playing football; reading books
This is my cousin.
[提分练3]
假如你是苏海，请根据信息卡的提示内容，以“ My family”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.不少于50个单词。
Name: Su Hai Family members’ jobs: father(doctor) mother(worker) Su Yang and I (students) Family members’ hobbies: father(cooking) mother(writing) Su Yang and I(reading and swimming)
My family
[提分练4]
请根据表格提示，写一篇短文介绍一下约翰叔叔。
要求：语法准确，语句连贯，不少于5句话。
Name Age Job Things on the farm Hobbies
John twenty-five farmer apple trees,orange trees, cows,ducks,chickens playing football, reading books
This is my uncle.
参考答案
单元写作提优专训
1. doctor 2. teacher
3. school 4. school
5. help sick people
6. play basketball
范文：
This is my uncle. His name is John. He's 45. He is a farmer. He works on the farm. He has a lot of cows, ducks and chickens. He likes playing football with his friends on Saturdays. He also likes reading books every day.
[提分练1]
My family
Hello. My name is Li Ming. I am a student. I like playing table tennis. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. My father is tall and strong. He is a policeman. He helps people. He is good at swimming. My mother is a teacher. She teaches Maths. She has a lot of students. My sister is a student too. She studies hard. She likes playing the piano. I love my family. What about you
[提分练2]
This is my cousin. His name is John. He's 25. He is a farmer. He works on a farm. There are many apple trees and orange trees on the farm. There are a lot of cows, ducks and chickens too. He likes playing football with his friends on Saturday. He also likes reading books every day.
[提分练3]
My family
Hello, I'm Su Hai. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They're my father, my mother, my sister and me. Su Yang and I are twins. We’ re students. We both like reading and swimming. My father is a doctor. He often helps sick people. He likes cooking. He cooks dinner for us. My mother isa worker. She makes sweets. She likes writing. Sometimes she writes stories for children. We all like her stories. I love my family.
[提分练4]
This is my uncle. His name is John. He's twenty-five years old. He is a farmer. He works on a farm. He has many apple trees and orange trees on the farm. He has a lot of cows, ducks and chickens too. He likes playing football with his friends at weekends. He also likes reading books every day.
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