Unit 1 Goldilocks and the three bears 写作提优（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
译林版五年级上册Unit 1写作提优专训
There be句型介绍某个场所
方法指导
There be句型介绍某个场所，可按“三步三要素法”写作，第一步开头，引出介绍的场所；第二步正文，介绍某地物品的摆放位置、功能及特点三要素；第三步结尾，表达自己对某地的评价。
素材积累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 地点: house, bedroom, classroom... Look at my house. This is my bedroom.
正文 摆放位置: in the room, beside the house, on the bed... 功能: have a rest, play, cook dinner... 特点: small, nice, big... There is a bed in the room. There are some toys on the bed. I/ We can have a rest in it. It's/ They're small but nice.
结尾 结尾 beautiful, great, nice... I like / love the nice house. What a beautiful house!
以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法)
This is my house. There are three bedrooms, a bathroom, a study, a kitchen and a living room. My parents' bedroom is big. There is a desk and a chair in it. In the living room, there is a table and a sofa. There are some flowers on the table. The sofa is very soft. I like sitting on it and watching TV. I love my house.
小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 根据图片和提示词，以 “My bedroom”为题，用“ There is.../ There are...”句型介绍一下你的卧室, 可适当发挥想象, 不少于五句话。
提示词: in / on/ under/ beside / behind / between / in front of
My bedroom
[提分练1]
假如你是吉米(Jimmy)，请你根据图片提示，以“My study'”为题写一篇短文向同学们介绍一下
你的书房。不少于6句话。
My study
[提分练2]
用 “there be”句型介绍你梦想的学校，要求语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确。不少于6句话。
My dream school
[提分练3]
请你以“My new house”为题，介绍一下你的家。要求：使用there be句型，语句通顺，标点正确，不少
于5句话。
My new house
[提分练4]
同学们，你们对自己的教室应该非常熟悉吧！ 请以“ My classroom”为题，写一写你所在班级的教室，描述一下教室里都有些什么以及它们的特征、位置等。
要求:1.使用 there be 句型;2.不少于5句话。
提示词: big, clean, door, window, blackboard, teacher's desk, chair, book, ruler, basketball, football, on, beside...
My classroom
[提分练5]
根据图片和句型提示，按图中物品序号的顺序，用 There be 句型， 描述这间卧室。
句型提示：There is a / an … in / on / between/ behind / under / beside / in front of …
There are some …s in / on / between/ behind / under / beside / in front of …
参考答案
单元写作提优专训
1. house 2. three 3. desk 4. chair 5. living room 6. on
7. soft 8. on 9. watching. 10. love
范文：
My bedroom
Look at my bedroom. It is big and clean. There is a small bed in my bedroom. I can have a rest on it. There is a toy bear on my bed. Near the desk, there is a cat on the chair. There is a computer on the desk. There is a picture on the wall. What a beautiful room!
[提分练1]
示例：
My study
Hello,I'm Jimmy.This is my study.There is a desk in my study.It's beside the window.On the desk,there is a computer and a lamp(灯).Between them,there are two books.There is a chair in front of the desk and there are two footballs under the desk.Beside the desk,there's a schoolbag.What's that on the wall Ha!Ha!It's a picture.I like my study very much.
[提分练2]
My dream school
This is my dream school.
There is a cinema in the school.
There is a snack bar in the school.
There are some swings in the playground.
There are some cats and dogs.
They’re in the playground too.
What about your dream school
[提分练3]
示例：
My new house
I live in a new house now. It is not big but very nice. There are two bedrooms, a bathroom, a study, a kitchen and a living room. My bedroom is big and clean. There is a bed, a desk, a chair and a bookcase in it.
There is a nice garden near the house. There are many flowers in the garden. There is a big tree beside the house. There is a swing under the tree. I like reading books on the swing.
I love the house and the garden very much.
[提分练4]
My classroom
This is my classroom. It's big and clean. There are two doors and four windows. There is a blackboard and a teacher's desk. On the teacher's desk, there are some books and a ruler. There is a nice picture beside the blackboard. There are sixteen desks and sixteen chairs for students in our classroom. There is a basketball and three footballs behind the door. I like my classroom.
[提分练5]
This is a bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There are some T-shirts on the bed. There is a schoolbag beside the desk. There is a chair under the bed. There are two footballs under the bed too. There are some books on the desk. There is a window in front of the desk.
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