2025届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 五句定框架，以“乐于助人”为例 课件（18张）
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On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
人物：Jack & a homeless old man
时间 : on a cold snowy evening
地点：on his way to the corner shop
事件：
Jack was on his way to buy his superhero figurines but bumped into a homeless old man.
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②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
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人物：Joey&an elderly shopkeeper
地点：inside the shop
事件：
Jack had a conversation with an elderly shopkeeper about what is a superhero.
伏笔:Jack became a superhero.
Being a superhero didn’t need superpower. With a kind heart, Jack still became a superhero
Theme
Being a hero is found in the simplest acts of kindness
On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
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para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
Conflict
At first Jack thought that only with superpower could a man be a hero. But after get the core of a hero, Jack knew that being a hero is found in the simplest acts of kindness.
“五句”定框架
“五句”指的是三个衔接句：
①第一段首句衔接句
②第一段结尾句
③第二段首句衔接句
④一个正向结局句
⑤一个文尾升华句 (不一定有)
←由材料(尤其原文结尾)和第一段首句得出
←逆向思维，由第二段首句反推，且需要与第二段首句衔接
一框
←由第一段框架和第二段首句得出
←第二段首句与圆满结局
二框
On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
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⑤
⑥
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para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
所听、所看、所想、所讲、所做、所感
With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He knelt down beside the old man, offering him a warm smile. “I’m sorry for bumping into you earlier,” Jack said with a sincere tone. “Can I get you something to eat and to keep warm ” The old man’s eyes widened with surprise as he looked up and realized what happened. Moved to tears by Jack’s kindness, he accepted Jack’s offer with a grateful nod. It was at the moment that Jack realized being a hero wasn’t just about saving the world—it was about making someone’s world a little brighter.
para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
所听、所看、所想、所讲、所做、所感
With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He knelt down beside the old man, offering him a warm smile. “I’m sorry for bumping into you earlier,” Jack said with a sincere tone. “Can I get you something to eat and to keep warm ” The old man’s eyes widened with surprise as he looked up and realized what happened. Moved to tears by Jack’s kindness, he accepted Jack’s offer with a grateful nod. It was at the moment that Jack realized being a hero wasn’t just about saving the world—it was about making someone’s world a little brighter.
Applying:
“五句”定框架
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
人物：April & a little girl
时间：on a rainy day
地点：at her clinic
事件：
She recalled an experience that a little girl came to her for help to save the girl’s very sick guinea pig. Apirl knew she couldn’t save the pig.
人物：April & a little girl & girl’s grandmother
事件：
Thinking of the girl’s poor situation, April knew she couldn’t just tell the truth that the pig would die. April decided to buy an exactly the same guinea pig to give to girl.
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Comflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
Para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
衔接1：
衔接2：
Para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
衔接3：
结尾4：
升华5：
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Conflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
Para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
衔接1：
衔接2：
Para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
衔接3：
结尾4：
升华5：
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Conflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
The sick guinea pig had a unique characteristic.
Grandmother came to April’s clinic with the little girl. They found the healthy pig.
The little girl was happy to see her beloved friend became alive.
April felt satisfied for her act.
April realized the act of kindness made a difference on others.
1. 读懂首句
(1)续写第1段首句译文：______________________
(2)续写第2段首句译文：______________________
__________________________________________
“五句”定框架
然而，找到它并不容易。
她的祖母一看到宠物就明
白了一切，但女孩没有注意到这个变化。
名师指津
2. 构思框架
(1)两段首句定一框：由两段首句可知，本段主要写： __________________________________________
(2)二框二首正能量：由第二段首句和正向结局可知，本段主要写：_________________________________
__________________________________________
April四处寻找与小女孩生病的豚鼠相同的替代品，历经失望最终在偏远商店找到。
祖母明白April替换豚鼠的用意，但小女孩
未察觉。小女孩对April充满感激，祖母也表达谢意。
名师指津
3. 写好三衔一句一升华
Para. 1首句衔接句(衔1) _______________________
____________________________________________
结尾句(衔2) _________________________________
____________________________________________
Para.2首句衔接句(衔3) _______________________
____________________________________________
The sick pet was black with a
On hearing the news, the girl hurried to
white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon.
the pet store with her grandmother.
Her face lit up with joy and
relief, and she hugged April tightly.
名师指津
正向结局句(结局) ____________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
文尾升华句(不一定有) _________________________
___________________________________________
With her hands held tightly by
And she was determined to keep
grandma, April witnessed the power of a tiny gesture of kindness to bring comfort and hope to those in need, which stayed with her long after the day ended.
kindness alive in her clinic and guard everyone’s “Dorothy”.
However, finding it wasn’t so easy. The sick pet was black with a white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon. Her attempt to find nearby in vain, a flush of disappointment swept over April. However, at the thought of the girl’s misty eyes, April couldn’t give up. Fortunately, she found an identical pig in a remote store. Hardly had she returned to the clinic when she called the girl, “Honey, good news! Dorothy has pulled through and you can take her home!” On hearing the news, the girl hurried to the pet store with her grandmother. (92 words)
Sample
Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch. Her face lit up with joy and relief, and she hugged April tightly. Meanwhile, grandma directed a meaningful look at April, a great sense of gratitude flowing in her aged eyes, saying tearfully, “My dear doctor, you’ve really saved Dorothy and also protected her owner’s sunshine.” With her hands held tightly by grandma, April witnessed the power of a tiny gesture of kindness to bring comfort and hope to those in need, which stayed with her long after the day ended. And she was determined to keep kindness alive in her clinic and guard everyone’s “Dorothy”. (96 words)
On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
人物：Jack & a homeless old man
时间 : on a cold snowy evening
地点：on his way to the corner shop
事件：
Jack was on his way to buy his superhero figurines but bumped into a homeless old man.
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧
人物：Joey&an elderly shopkeeper
地点：inside the shop
事件：
Jack had a conversation with an elderly shopkeeper about what is a superhero.
伏笔:Jack became a superhero.
Being a superhero didn’t need superpower. With a kind heart, Jack still became a superhero
Theme
Being a hero is found in the simplest acts of kindness
On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧
para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
Conflict
At first Jack thought that only with superpower could a man be a hero. But after get the core of a hero, Jack knew that being a hero is found in the simplest acts of kindness.
“五句”定框架
“五句”指的是三个衔接句：
①第一段首句衔接句
②第一段结尾句
③第二段首句衔接句
④一个正向结局句
⑤一个文尾升华句 (不一定有)
←由材料(尤其原文结尾)和第一段首句得出
←逆向思维，由第二段首句反推，且需要与第二段首句衔接
一框
←由第一段框架和第二段首句得出
←第二段首句与圆满结局
二框
On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines(小雕像). Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor’s dog and weeded his neighbors’ gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.//
Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
“You’re a fan, right ”a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they’re amazing!” Jack said. “They’re strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised, Jack asked, “But how I don’t have any super power.”
Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack’s arms. “Why would you need them ”he replied kindly. “See that woman over there She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn’t about super power; it’s about what’s in your heart.”
Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don’t need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.”//
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧
para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper’s words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power ” he bit his lower lip and murmured to himself, with his hand tightly clutching his money. Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. A wave of guilt washed over him, and he could feel his face burning. Instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff without a second thought. Full of expectation, Jack ran hurriedly back to look for the homeless old man.
所听、所看、所想、所讲、所做、所感
With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He knelt down beside the old man, offering him a warm smile. “I’m sorry for bumping into you earlier,” Jack said with a sincere tone. “Can I get you something to eat and to keep warm ” The old man’s eyes widened with surprise as he looked up and realized what happened. Moved to tears by Jack’s kindness, he accepted Jack’s offer with a grateful nod. It was at the moment that Jack realized being a hero wasn’t just about saving the world—it was about making someone’s world a little brighter.
para1:para1:Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought.
1衔接：
2衔接：
para2:With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still .
3衔接:
4结尾：
5主旨:
Jack思考如何成为一个现实的超级英雄
Jack去寻找那个无家可归的老人
Jack关心老人/老人在墙角里瑟瑟发抖
Jack很开心自己也可以帮助到有需要的人
Jack意识到哪怕没有超能力，平凡人也可以是英雄。
所听、所看、所想、所讲、所做、所感
With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He knelt down beside the old man, offering him a warm smile. “I’m sorry for bumping into you earlier,” Jack said with a sincere tone. “Can I get you something to eat and to keep warm ” The old man’s eyes widened with surprise as he looked up and realized what happened. Moved to tears by Jack’s kindness, he accepted Jack’s offer with a grateful nod. It was at the moment that Jack realized being a hero wasn’t just about saving the world—it was about making someone’s world a little brighter.
Applying:
“五句”定框架
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
人物：April & a little girl
时间：on a rainy day
地点：at her clinic
事件：
She recalled an experience that a little girl came to her for help to save the girl’s very sick guinea pig. Apirl knew she couldn’t save the pig.
人物：April & a little girl & girl’s grandmother
事件：
Thinking of the girl’s poor situation, April knew she couldn’t just tell the truth that the pig would die. April decided to buy an exactly the same guinea pig to give to girl.
(2024届河南南阳期中质量评估) ①April has been a vet (兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig (豚鼠).
②She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many children’s tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found the strength to say that she couldn’t save the pet.//
③However, this time she looked at the girl and couldn’t say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didn’t make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn’t just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “I’ll give you my grandmother’s phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn’t know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.//
para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Comflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
Para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
衔接1：
衔接2：
Para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
衔接3：
结尾4：
升华5：
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Conflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
Para1:However, finding it wasn’t so easy.
衔接1：
衔接2：
Para2:Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch.
衔接3：
结尾4：
升华5：
Theme
Act of kindness make a difference on others.
Conflict
It was difficult to find a pig very similar appearance. But with effort, April made it. Finally, she save not the pet but the hope in the little girl.
The sick guinea pig had a unique characteristic.
Grandmother came to April’s clinic with the little girl. They found the healthy pig.
The little girl was happy to see her beloved friend became alive.
April felt satisfied for her act.
April realized the act of kindness made a difference on others.
1. 读懂首句
(1)续写第1段首句译文：______________________
(2)续写第2段首句译文：______________________
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“五句”定框架
然而，找到它并不容易。
她的祖母一看到宠物就明
白了一切，但女孩没有注意到这个变化。
名师指津
2. 构思框架
(1)两段首句定一框：由两段首句可知，本段主要写： __________________________________________
(2)二框二首正能量：由第二段首句和正向结局可知，本段主要写：_________________________________
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April四处寻找与小女孩生病的豚鼠相同的替代品，历经失望最终在偏远商店找到。
祖母明白April替换豚鼠的用意，但小女孩
未察觉。小女孩对April充满感激，祖母也表达谢意。
名师指津
3. 写好三衔一句一升华
Para. 1首句衔接句(衔1) _______________________
____________________________________________
结尾句(衔2) _________________________________
____________________________________________
Para.2首句衔接句(衔3) _______________________
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The sick pet was black with a
On hearing the news, the girl hurried to
white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon.
the pet store with her grandmother.
Her face lit up with joy and
relief, and she hugged April tightly.
名师指津
正向结局句(结局) ____________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
文尾升华句(不一定有) _________________________
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With her hands held tightly by
And she was determined to keep
grandma, April witnessed the power of a tiny gesture of kindness to bring comfort and hope to those in need, which stayed with her long after the day ended.
kindness alive in her clinic and guard everyone’s “Dorothy”.
However, finding it wasn’t so easy. The sick pet was black with a white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon. Her attempt to find nearby in vain, a flush of disappointment swept over April. However, at the thought of the girl’s misty eyes, April couldn’t give up. Fortunately, she found an identical pig in a remote store. Hardly had she returned to the clinic when she called the girl, “Honey, good news! Dorothy has pulled through and you can take her home!” On hearing the news, the girl hurried to the pet store with her grandmother. (92 words)
Sample
Her grandmother understood everything the moment she saw the pet, but the girl didn’t notice the switch. Her face lit up with joy and relief, and she hugged April tightly. Meanwhile, grandma directed a meaningful look at April, a great sense of gratitude flowing in her aged eyes, saying tearfully, “My dear doctor, you’ve really saved Dorothy and also protected her owner’s sunshine.” With her hands held tightly by grandma, April witnessed the power of a tiny gesture of kindness to bring comfort and hope to those in need, which stayed with her long after the day ended. And she was determined to keep kindness alive in her clinic and guard everyone’s “Dorothy”. (96 words)