建议信
【例题:你的朋友Lily在英语学习中遇到了困难,向你求助。请你书写一封建议信,字数在80字以内。】
一、写作结构
开头:表达同情+提出建议
主体:建议+具体阐释
结尾:希望建议有用
二、可使用的表达
(一)开头
①I can fully understand your situation regarding [具体问题,如 English learning difficulties] as I have also been through a similar phase.
②I know exactly how you feel about [相关问题] because I was once in your shoes.
(二)主体(给出建议的表达)
1. 情态动词
You should...:这是最常见的表达建议的句型,“should” 意为 “应该”,语气比较直接但相对温和。
You could...:“could” 是 “can” 的过去式,但在这里表示 “可以,能够”,语气比 “should” 更委婉一些。
You might...:“might” 有 “也许,可以” 的意思,语气比 “could” 还要委婉,带有不太肯定的建议意味。
祈使句
Try to...:意思是 “试着……”,用于鼓励对方尝试某种方法。
Don't forget to...:“不要忘记……”,强调某个重要的建议。
Make sure to...:“确保……”,带有提醒、叮嘱的意味。
it's 句型
It's beneficial to...:“beneficial” 意思是 “有益的”,这个句型表示 “做…… 是有益的”。
It's advisable to...:“advisable” 是 “明智的,可取的” 的意思。
It's a good idea to...:表示 “…… 是个好主意”。
虚拟语气
If I were you, I would... 这是一个虚拟语气的句型,意思是 “如果我是你,我会……”
其他表达
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...
我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s better to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(三)结尾
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
递进衔接词
Moreover,furthermore,in addition, what's more, besides
表示第一、第二、第三
First(ly), Second(ly), Third(ly)
First of all, In the second place, Last but not least
To begin with, Next, Finally
In the first instance, Subsequently, In the end
三、常见错误
标点书写不够清晰【,和。】
regarding不会使用
句子内无动词/多个动词
difficulties、troubles、problems等单复数不分
首段内容过多
主体内容段落分点作答,未能合成同一段
思路逻辑不够清晰
段首不空格
介词后乱跟动词
四、优秀案例展示
I am sorry to hear that! Because I can fully understand your situation regarding meeting difficulties in study. I have the same problems.
First and foremost, if I were you, I would read some typical books to broaden my knowledge and improve my reading skills. Besides, make sure to solve your problems in your study. Maybe you will be helped by your teacher or classmates. Last but not least, it could be nice to take the following actions. Because I think nothing is impossible if you make efforts. So try to do it! I believe that you will make progress.
I will be more than proud to see your improvements in this regard. I hope you will take my advice into consideration.
I can fully understand your situation regarding English learning because I was once in your shoes, here are some advice that might help.
Firstly, don’t be afraid to make mistakes. Learning a new language is difficult. “Failure is the mother of success.” As long as you have determination, you can succeed. Secondly, make sure to spend more time to practice your pronunciation, such as speaking English with your friends every day. Lastly, try to enjoy learning English as much as possible. You can watch English movies or listen to English songs. It’s beneficial to your English study. It will not only improve your understanding but also can develop your hobbies.
I hope you will take my advice into consideration seriously. Good luck to you.