江西（九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练及答案
短文改错
When I first ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______
many difficulties. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )The main problem was in that I 2. _______
always thought in C ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
into English. My t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______
I followed h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
or so each ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
paper as I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______
One day I wrote a l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ittle story and showed to my 8. _______
teacher. She liked ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______
They all said ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the story was a good one. Their word were 10. ______
a great encouragement to me.
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。
3. anything 改为 ever ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。
4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。
5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。
7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。
9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
10. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。
短文改错（10分）
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Never shall I forget ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.
She praised me for that I had done.
改错
参考答案
giving—given 去掉out her---herself
they---we said----say turns---turn
too---so kind---kindly
do后加it that---what
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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in the sky． I joined ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the army in June, 1983． In 1992, I was sent to
the air force b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ase． In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1,500 pilot ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s through the physical examination． I worked hardly,
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I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．
On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled
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to have given the chan ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ce to be the first Chinese to travel in space．
参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
10． 在have后面加been
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
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【答案】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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短文改错。
Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dad's friends come1.________
along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad2.________
and I had to prepare ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) everything, so it turned out such a miracle3.________
that they did make it! Everything went perfectly fine.4.________
A lot of kids w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ho came that day. I had the most wonderful time5.________
with Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much6.________
like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed7.________
short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time8.________
to continue the conversation. Hopeful we're going on9.________
a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10.________
答案与解析：
1．come→came 整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。
2．√
3．so→but 前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。
4．they→we 根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。
5．去掉who 本句为简单句，去掉who。
6．amazed→amazing 主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。
7．by→in 固定短语have...in common表示“有……相同之处”。
8．去掉had wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词＋动词原形，因此把had去掉。
9．Hopeful→Hopefully 副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。
10．在also后加the next summer指明年夏天，the summer after next指后年夏天。江西（九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习题及答案
短文改错
What should you do when your parents become 1. _______
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parents that they don’t expect—like cooking,
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the floors. If this ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )doesn’t work , bring in friend that you 9. _______
feel comfor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )table, and have him or her help you. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。
3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。
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5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。
6. 删去 for。因为 chan ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ge 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： Can you change me one yuan note 你能兑换一元零钱给我吗 而 change for作“转换车到……”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin 你在什么地方转车到桂林去
7. any 改为 some。an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y 一般用于疑问句、 否定句、 条件从句中， 而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式， 故用 some。
8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。
9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。
fortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与……自在/愉快”。例如：
She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。
（全国新课标卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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if the school could ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________
looks like a desert an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________
a rainy day. We wo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uld be much happier and are able to study 70_________
better if the walls ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________
photos and paintings ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________
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unless we buy art ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
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“While I don’t have ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) much money, I live happily. However , I lose 85._____
honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”
短文改错：
76.第一个at改为on 77.with后加a 78.surrouning改为surrounded
79.word改为words
80.mistaken改为mistake 81.why改为what 82.brought改为took
83.reward改为prize 84.don’t改为didn’t 85.if后加I
短文改错(共10小题)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)
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加he或去掉was江西（九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮联练及答案
【2015·陕西】
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My favorite picture at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
2015年陕西卷【答案】【解析】
试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。
1．【答案】第一段第一句last week ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )前的in去掉【解析】介词误用。以last开头的时间短语前不加介词。第一段第一句：去掉in在last week，next week，this week之前不需要任何介词。句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。 2．【答案】第一段第二句anything→something【解析】不定代词误用。“一些事情”，肯定句中用something。第一段第二句：anything→something 我想为教练做点什么特别的事情，而不是任何事情。句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用something。 3．【答案】第一段第三句better→best【解析】最高级误用。the应用在形容词最高级前。第一段第三句：better→best妈妈做的饼干是世界上最好的。这里用最高级。句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。
4．【答案】第一段第三句decide→dec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ided【解析】时态错误。全文讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。第一段第三句：decide→decided 全文是回忆过去的一件事情，用一般过去时态。句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，decide改成decided。 5．【答案】第一段第四句step→steps【解析】名词单复数错误。some后加可数名词复数。第一段第四句：step→steps some basic steps一些基本的步骤。句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。
6．【答案】第一段第六句wel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l→good【解析】形容词误用。应用形容词作表语，well作形容词表“身体好”。第一段第六句：well→good be动词后接形容词good, well作形容同时，意为“健康的”。句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词，well改成good。 7．【答案】第一段第七句after→when/while【解析】连词误用。本处意为“当 时候”。第一段第七句：after→when/while在打包的时候掉了一些饼干。句意：我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。after改成when/while
8．【答案】第二段第八句第一个a→the【解 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )析】冠词误用。特指“那次晚会”，应用定冠词the。第二段：第一个a→the party是第二次出现，应用定冠词。句意：这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。a改为the。
9．【答案】第二段第八句g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )et前加to【解析】不定式符号漏用。本处不定式表目的。第二段：just后面加上to 此处为不定式作目的状语。句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。
10．【答案】第三段第九句 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enjoy→enjoying【解析】非谓语动词错误。根据介词of，应用动名词enjoying，my coach and me是enjoying的逻辑主语。第三段：enjoy→enjoying带逻辑主语的动名词短语作介词of的宾语。句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。of后面接动名词，my coach and me是逻辑主语，enjoy改为enjoying。
【2015届河北省衡水中学高三小一调考试】
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
It is well-known tha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school. I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so series overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. In my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then did I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
【答案】【知识点】 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】文章讲述的是好习惯会让人受益终生，作者的减肥之路。
【答案解析】
Entered---Enterin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g 考查非谓语动词。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多 。两个句子共用一个主语I ，与enter之间是主谓关系，故用现在分词的形式。
eat—ate 考查动词的时态。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多。Took与eat由and来连接，两个动词的时态保持一致。
serious—seriously 考查副词。句意：我非常胖以致于外表很丑陋。Seriously用来修饰形容词overweight.
It ---what 考查主语从句。句意：更糟糕的是同学们经常嘲笑我。What made matters worse引导主语从句。
去掉a 考查固定短语。Make fun of 取笑某人。
now—then 考查时间状语。句意：从那时起，我下决心不吃零食。根据句意，从那时起。
avoiding---avoid 考查动词短语。Make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做某事；
off—up 考查固定短语。句意：与此同时，我开始慢跑减肥。Take off 关掉；take up 从事。
In—To 考查固定短语。To one’s surprise 使某人感到吃惊的是。
until---before 考查连词。句意：不久之后 ，我转型成功。It was not long before ….不久之后。
短文改错
I am worker at t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the tel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, peop ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )le do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of wate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) take good care our water resources 82.____________
and environm ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ent .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rotect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案-----】改错:
I am ∧worker at t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the te ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ter resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hould take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
短文改错
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost 76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry 77.
Experts have ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. Wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en one is feeling stressed, it set free, 79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get 80.
rid of the s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tress and you will often feel better before a 81.
good cry. Of co ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )urse sex has nothing to do to crying. 82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more 83.
of this hormone ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) than men. But next time you feel like 84.
bursting into tea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rs, go ahead. It won't good to your health. 85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．江西（九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮联练题及答案
短文改错
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) As everyone knows, it’s famous 1. _______
mountain with ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______
was fine. It was a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bout noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______
the mountain. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______
climbed the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______
and told stories ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______
since the sc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______
Evening came down. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______
the top of t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y head touched the pillow. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。
2. 此行无错。
3. noon 后加 when ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。
4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。
5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。
6. picture 改为 pictures。
7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。
8. 删去 down。
9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。
10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。
短文改错
The other day aft ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er work，I was walking down the street I saw a boy riding a unicycle，one of those with only one wheel. in all pink from head to toe，he was singing a song which was—— sounded like a kid’s song.I thought he must be crazy.Just then，a lady dropped 20 dollar bill on the ground，but didn’t realize it and started to walk away.The guy in pink picked the money and gave it back to her.After that，he rode on soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. a strange and good guy!
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第一节：短文改错(共10小题)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident hap ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )pened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)
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【西南师大附中】
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
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next year, so now I am ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) spending as more time as I can 77. ________________
with other people w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ho likes to play. They are teaching 78. ________________
me the most ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )important rules and technique of the game, 79. ________________
and I was getting b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )etter all the time. We have a 80. ________________
neighborhood t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eam where plays against other teams in the area. 81. ________________
One of my ne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ighbors is helping rest of us 82. ________________
improved our ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) skills. Tonight we are playing against 83. ________________
one of the best teams ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in the city, I think we can 84. ________________
beat them if we won ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )'t make any mistakes. 85. ________________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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参考答案、、
66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook
69.but改为and 70.√ 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking
73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months江西（九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮选练及答案
短文改错
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young
people. According ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to studies, any children spend more time 1. _______
watching tele ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vision than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______
much viewing ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), children may not be develop the habit of 3. _______
read and the abilit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______
much about the rad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )io program young people listen to, 5. _______
although radi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )os can be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______
about the effects o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f television commercials. On one year the 7. _______
average chi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ld will see 25,000 television commercials, all 8. _______
plann
ed and written by ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) grown-ups to make children to want 9. _______
things that t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hey don’t real need. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. any 改为 many/ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )some。根据句意， 此处应表示“一些， 许多”， 而 any 表示“一些”时， 常常用于否定句、 疑问句和条件句中。
2. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词， 故加 of。
3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。
4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。
5. program 改为 programs。program 为可数名词， 且根据句意， 此处应为复数概念。
6. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词， noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。
7. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在一年中”。
8. 此行无错。
9. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“让某人做某事”。
10. real 改为really。此处应用副词修饰谓语动词 don’t need。
（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eek after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and provi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ding us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodb ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
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was really a nice ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
【附】短文改错的主要特点
1．内容大都是学生身边或社会生活中常见的话题。以记叙文为主，有时也有说明文或应用文。
2．内容相对独立、完整。命题的总原则是整篇理解、分行解题。
3．语言简单易懂，没有生僻的词汇或繁难的句法结构；短文的词数为120左右。
4．考查要点覆盖面广, 分布合理。涉及词法、句法、行文逻辑等三个方面。
二．短文改错的常见类型
纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错, 不难看出,其 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右; 正确占1 行; 多词和缺词一般占3 行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中, 动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。
***短文改错的解题基本思路
1．通读全文，掌握大意
首先，要认真阅读短文，把握全篇主旨，弄清上下文的逻辑关系，了解文章所创设的语言环境，为正确判断创造条件。
2．整句理解，逐行找错。
在读懂文章之后，要逐句逐行地找错。分析每个句子中句法、语法、行文逻辑等方面是否有错，要做到逐行分析，不可遗漏，句与句之间要注意连词的用法。
3．由易到难，各个击破
改错要从最简单、最熟悉的项目入手，先从语法的角度入手，再从逻辑方面考虑，最后推敲难题。
4．检查核对，规范改正
最后浏览改后的全文，看全篇是否语义通顺，注意正确行。 要特别注意规范改正错误, 严格按照示范规定符号和要求去改。切忌文字说明或用箭头表示。
二．短文改错的设题方式
一．错词：
错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。
1．虚词错误
①介词错误。介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。
1.After five year ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s away in my hometown，I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷I)
析：“从……离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。应将in改为from。
② 连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )关系混淆，是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。
1.I meant to g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ive it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II)
析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。
③冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在：应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词；不定冠词a与an的误用等。
1.Three men ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. （2009.四川卷）
析：初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为an。
2．实词错误
① 名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化；名词的所有格等。
1. I stayed there fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. （09全国卷II）
析：one and a half 后接可数名词的复数形式，不能用单数。要将hour改为hours。
② 动词错误主要有：不规则动词的过去 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )式、过去分词形式错误；时态的不一致性；语态的错用；非谓语动词用法的选择，特别是非谓语动词作状语、表语、定语或宾语补足语时是用过去分词还是现在分词；在 to 后是用不定式还是动名词；以及在并列结构中后面动词的形式；谓语动词时态形式的错用；情态动词和 will(would), shall (should) 等助动词后面的动词形式的误用等。
1.There exist ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )now a park that has a small river running through. （09全国卷I）
析：句子中的there exist相当于th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere be形式，exist的形式跟后面的名词a park保持一致，因此exist要用单三形式exists。
③ 形容词与副词错误主要表现在：这两类词的混用；形容词或副词的原级、比较级、最高级的混用等。
1.The Sichuan Restaur ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school are gone. （09全国卷I）
析：分析句子，句子中没有比较对象，不能用比较级，要将older改为原形old。
④ 引导词错误：在复合句中引导从句的连接词的错误运用，特别是在定语从句中关系词的错误运用，宾语从句中连接词的误用等。
1.One day I saw ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father for the money. （09辽宁卷）
析：非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that，应将that改为which。
⑤代词错误。代词考查主要集中在句子中代词的一致性、人称代词、反身代词、指示代词的混用等。
1.When I was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in high school, most of my friends had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. （2009.辽宁卷）
析：根据句义后面句子中的it与前面句子中的bicycles是一类物，表示泛指。因此要将it改为one。
⑥思维定势干扰错误。由于受汉语思维定势影响，造成一些英语词语的搭配错误。
1.I’m glad to say t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat anything has worked out fine in the dorm. （09海南、宁夏卷）
析： anything意思是“任何事或任 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )何物”，而everything表示“所有的东西或物”，很显然句子强调在宿舍的所有事情，应将anything改为everything。
⑦行文逻辑错误。
高考短文改错中，涉及短文主旨大意及逻辑关系的错误这类试题的隐蔽性较强，单独看并没有错，但若放在整篇中则与全篇的意思不符。
I stayed here ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl was all right.
析：直接分析该句，没有任何错误，但结合上下文可看出句子是在转述过去发生的事情，不能用here，因此应将here改为there。
