陕西延安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错演练题及答案
短文改错
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For 1._______
example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._______
in a secret place ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) where I couldn’ t find it. Then he 3. _______
ate it all ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) by himself. He never helped other. 4. _______
He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _______
tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _______
if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______
instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______
loudly music ti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ll four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______
he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______
with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his
classmates with their lessons.
答案及解析
1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。
2. them 改为 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) it。依据上下文， 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。
3. where 改为 whi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。
4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。
5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。
6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。
7. 此行无错。
8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。
9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。
10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。
(2013·乌鲁木齐三诊)
Rock climbing is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
答案：
Rock climbing is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
【2016高考训练题】短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Li Hua
：短文改错
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【由河北省邯郸市2014一模试题改编】
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is everyth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing going recently That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities I prefer to big and modern cities. I guess I'd better book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself Is it easy to find Chinese food What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the US Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!
Best regards!
Li Hua
【参考答案】
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Best regards!
【2016高考训练题】短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )verything going recently That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities I prefer to big and modern cities. I guess I'd better book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself Is it easy to find Chinese food What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the US Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!
Best regards!
Li Hua
短文改错
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a
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me when/if
travel between cit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ies in the US Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!
hear陕西延安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习及答案
短文改错
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers 1._______
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My parents lo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve me dearly of course and will do all they can 3._______
make sure that ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I get a good education. They did not want 4._______
me to do any work ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at family; they want me to 5._______
devote all my time to my studies so that
I’ll get good ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )marks in all my subject. 6. _______
We may be one fam ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ily and live under a same roof, but we do 7._______
not seem to get mu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch time to talk about together. It looks 8._______
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really und ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erstand their own daughter What things are in 10._______
other homes, I wonder.
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. 删去 other 前的 any。in other words 为固定搭配， 意为“换句话说”。
3. can 后加 to。此处不定式为目的状语。
4. did 改为do。纵观全文， 应用一般现在时态。
5. family 改为 home。 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )family 多指由家庭成员、 婚姻维系的“家”， 而 home 则多指“住所”。另外， at home 为固定搭配。
6. subject 改为 subjects。subject 属可数名词， all 后应用其复数。
7. a 改为the 。same 作定语时前面一般用定冠词。
8. 删去 talk 后的 about。
9. and 改为or。a visitor 和 a guest 属不同类的两种人， 故不可用 and 连接， 需用or表示选其一。
10. What 改为 How。此处是 I wonder 引导的宾语从句， 意为“我想知道在别人家里的情况是怎样的”。
(2013·甘肃省二诊)
Many teachers worri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.
答案：
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children want things that they don't need.
【由四川省2014高考英语仿真模拟试题改编】
短文改错。
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An American and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipments into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.
【参考答案】短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
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this when the balloon landed in front of them.
【2016高考训练题】短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Thank you.
短文改错
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【由四川省宜宾市李庄中学2014高考英语仿真模拟试题改编】
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1. 5分，满分15分，将答案写到答题卡相应的位置上）
下文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错
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on陕西延安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错训练及答案
短文改错
The day before th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e speech contest (比赛) English teacher 1. _______
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so nervous as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I shook like a leaf. There were so many 5. _______
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teacher in the crowd ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). She was smiling but nodding at 7. _______
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I did a good job and won the first prize.
Now my picture ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and the prize is hanging in the library. 9. _______
Whenever I see th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )em I will often think of my English teacher. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. teacher 前加 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )my。根据下行 She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success， 可判断 English teacher 应是特指。
2. schoolmate 改为 schoolmates。因本句中有 all 一词， 所以 schoolmate 一词应为复数形式。
3. that 改为 whether。根据上下文， 可判断本句意为“我是否成功没有关系”， 所以这里用 whether。
4. 此行无错。
5. as 改为 that。根据句子结构， so 应与 that 构成复合句， that 引导结果状语从句， 在此不能用 as 引导。
6. 删去a。catch sight of 为固定搭配， sight 前不加任何冠词。
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10. 删去often。句首已用 whenever “无论何时”， 在句中就没必要用 often 了。
(2013·宝鸡市三模)
Jack has regarded a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
答案：
Jack has regarde ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
2013年浙江高考真题：
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Yours,
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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加the陕西延安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错选练及答案
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删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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