浙江省湖州、丽水、衢州三地市2024-2025学年高三上学期11月一模英语试题读后续写 导学案

湖丽衢读后续写分析
第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
When Devon’s sister, Lil, went off to college, Devon’s stomach felt all twisty. Then Mom said that Kapil, a high-school student from India, would be staying in their house and living in Lil’s room, for they were the host family. The piece of news made Devon’s stomach feel worse, as he missed his sister so much. “What if I can’t understand him ” Devon asked. “He speaks English well,” Mom said.
On Kapil’s first day, he exchanged some small talk with Devon before disappearing into his new room. Lil’s room, Devon reminded himself. As days went on, Kapil started spending more time in the rest of the house. He was in the kitchen a lot, whose cooking always filled the air with steam and spice that made Devon’s eyes water. “Smells wonderful!” Mom exclaimed. When Lil called a few days later, Devon told her about Kapil’s cooking. “Lucky! I love Indian food!” Lil said. “But it seems too spicy for me,” replied Devon.
One day, Mom had to work late. “Kapil will stay with you until I get home,” she explained. Devon’s stomach twisted. Lil had always stayed with him when Mom had to work late.
When Devon got home from school, Kapil greeted him at the door. “Would you like a snack ” Kapil asked. Devon shrugged. Lil and he used to cook together after school, which they called “making messes.” Kapil opened the refrigerator. “How about a yogurt ” “I had one at breakfast,” responded Devon in a cold voice. Kapil opened a cupboard and smiled. “Wait here.” He returned with a package. “I’ll cook an Indian snack,” he announced. Kapil pulled out around, thin cracker the size of a small Frisbee, poured oil into a pan and fried the cracker. Then the kitchen was filled with spicy smells. After a while, Kapil handed Devon a plate with the sizzling pancake on it. “Papadum(印度薄饼),” he said. “Made from bean flour.” 微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Devon’s stomach twisted again. Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let’s make messes!”
文本分析：
When Devon’s sister, Lil, went off to college, Devon’s stomach felt all twisty.
这边一共出现了三次Devon’s stomach felt all twisty， 每次都是跟想念她的姐姐有关系。注意和前面呼应。最后Devon如何接受人生中的成长和变化的
Devon shrugged. Lil and he used to cook together after school, which they called “making messes.”
做饭原来是姐姐和Devon's thing, 现在和Kapil 做什么。上文中了解Kapil 是印度人。如何bridge the gap
Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let’s make messes!”
从empty plate 看出来Devon 还是爱吃那个pancake的 微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan
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Devon’s stomach twisted again. Lil and he used to make pancake together, which was kind of their thing. With a little nudge, Kapil moved the plate closer to Devon and urged enthusiastically, “Take a bite.” Reluctant as he was to try the spicy snack, Kapil’s fervent and eager eyes barricaded his words of refusal. As Devon nibbled at the pancake, the spicy and crunchy flavor exploded in his mouth----the deliciousness seemed to bring back the joy of cooking and tasting, just like before, and eradicate the twist in Devon’s stomach. Before he realized it, he was gulping down the irresistible pancake, which was finished in no time. (103) 微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan
Looking at the empty plate, Devon said to Kapil, “Let’s make messes!” The Papadum appeared to reinvigorate the young boy. “I’ll show you how to make a American Pancake” With his sleeves rolled up, Devon mixed the flour with milk, made a batter, and fried it in the pan. Soon, the air was filled with sweet and enticing smell, laughter and joy. The soft texture and luscious flavor definitely won Kapil over. With his thumb up, he couldn’t stop praising Devon’s cooking skills. The next few hours witness their appreciation of each other’s cuisine and the magical development of their friendship. Who would know something as simple as a pancake would dismantle the cultural barrier , heal a young boy’s heart and grow something called friendship in it. (117)微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan
用时间地点的词作主语的无灵主语的小练习
时间、地点名词作主语，谓语动词用“ witness; see; find”来表达发生的事情
1. I grow up in my hometown. =________________________________________________________ my growth.
2. We will hold the lecture on Tang poetry in our school hall
_____________________________ will see the lecture on Tang poetry.
3. The deadline for joining the table tennis team is this Sunday.
__________________________ will witness the deadline for joining the table tennis team
4. My uncle will arrive in London on August 6th
_____________________________ my uncle’s ____________________________ in London.
5. This paper-cutting art exhibition will be held/take place in the Art Building
______________________________________________ this paper-cutting art exhibition.
6. We went an extraordinary hiking last Sunday, which excited the nerves of everyone of us.
__________________________________________________ which excited the nerves of everyone of us.微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan
7. A friendly football match between our school and the German sister school was held on the playground last Friday afternoon.
_____________________________ a friendly football match between our school and the German sister school on the playground.
8. The number of teenager users of social networking websites has taken on an explosive growth in recent decade
________________________________ an explosive growth in the number of teenage users of social networking websites.微信公众号 Classroom Miss Yan