(共20张PPT)
Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science.
(3a-4)---Writing
Daily English:
Practice makes perfect .
---熟能生巧
2025 is coming, so what is your new year's resolution
I am going to ...
I am going to learn...
I want to...
I hope to...
I plan to...
I expect to...
make a soccer team
eat healthier food
read more
get lots of exercise
get good grades
Next year,
Complete the paragraphs about resolutions with the words in the box.
3a
Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to make four resolutions.
The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I am going to learn to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together.
How to share your resolutions
What are resolutions
Why are resolutions so important
What is my resolution
Why am I going to do that
How am I going to do that
What are resolutions
Why are resolutions so important
What is my resolution
Why am I going to do that
How am I going to do that
structure
Write your resolutions under the following headings.
1. Ideas for improving my physical health
2. Ideas for improving my relationships with my family and friends
3. Ideas for doing better at school
get more exercise,
go to bed early, eat healthier food, eat less fast food...
spend more time with my family, help my friends more, share my feelings with my friends, care about my parents...
do homework on time, read more books, study English really hard, listen carefully in class...
3b
Use your notes to write three more paragraphs about your resolutions. In each paragraph, write what you are going to do and why.
3c
The second resolution is about improving my physical health. _______________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The last resolution is about how to do better at school._____________________________________
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主要的短语。
1.身体健康__________________________
2.继续做某事______________________________
3.尽某人最大的努力 __________________________
4.做运动 _____________________________
5.取得好成绩_____________________________
写作准备
physical health
keep on doing sth.
try one's best
play sports
get good grades
6.吃更健康的食物 _______________________
7.关心 _______________________
8.学着做______________________
9.改善……和……的关系_______________________________
eat healthier food
care about
take up
improve one's relationships with…
衔接词:运用and,or,so,first ,second,then等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型多样化。
outline
提纲
Beginning:
开头
Hi,Jane! I want to share my three other resolutions with you./ I still have three other resolutions to share with you.
Body
正文
My second resolution is about improving...
...eat more vegetables and fruit.../ ...get more exercise...
My third resolution is about...
...take up the same hobby.../ care about my parents.../spend more time with...
My last resolution is about...
...do the homework on time.../ read more/ ask the teacher or classmate for help if ...
I am sure my resolutions can come true ./ Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I can keep my resolutions through ...
I hope.../I want to .../ I am going to.../ I plan to...
Ending:
结尾
3c
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The second resolution is about improveing my physical health. I am going to get more exercise like running and swimming. In addition, I am going to eat healthily. I am going to eat more vegetables and fruit. Exercise and healthy food can help me become stronger and stronger.
3c
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The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. I am going to spend more time with them. We can go camping together. I am also going to help my friends. I can help them learn English better. It’s important for me to be with my family and help my friends.
3c
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The fourth resolution is about how to do better at school. I am going to listen carefully in class. At the same time, I am going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork. I am sure that I am going to get better grades if I keep my resolutions.
The new year is coming, so I'm going to make four resolutions.
The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. I am going to learn to play the piano. In my opinion, music can make us feel relaxed. I am going to take piano lessons. What’s more, learning to play the piano is a great way to make me be a better person.
The second resolution is about improving my physical health. I am going to get more exercise , like running and swimming. In addition, I am going to eat healthily. I am going to eat more vegetables and fruit. Exercise and healthy food can help me become stronger and stronger.
The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. I am going to spend more time with them. We can go camping together. I am also going to help my friends. I can help them learn English better. It’s important for me to be with my family and help my friends.
The fourth resolution is about how to do better at school. I am going to listen carefully in class. At the same time, I am going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork. I am sure that I am going to get better grades if I keep my resolutions.
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My Resolutions
I believe I can keep these resolutions.
英 语
写作:
同学们,在本单元学习中,很多人都表达了他们的新年愿望和决心。新的一年就要来临了,你准备好了吗?请你以“New Year's Resolutions”为题写一篇文章,内容包括:
1.你的新年决心是什么?
2.你打算如何去实现它们?
3.你对来年的愿景。
写作要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,注意分段,80词左右。
写作方法:
1.体裁:
2.时态:
3.人称:
4.时态:
5.词汇激活:
6.已知+自补:
While-writing
Write down your articles.
ASSESSMENT(评价标准) Structure (结构)4分 Is the article has a clear stucture (结构清晰完整)
Good beginning and good ending.
Content (内容)6分 Are all the details stated (要点齐全)
If not, add the missing details.
Language (语言)8分 Any mistakes (spelling or grammar) (语句逻辑
If yes, correct them. 正确)
Any good vocabulary or sentences
If yes, underline them.(好词下划线)
Handwriting (书写) 2分 Is it clean and tidy (书写整洁,美观)
Post-writing
Only if everyone realizes his or her dream, will we be able to realize our country's dream——China Dream.
习近平:
撸起袖子,加油干!
Thank you for listening!