2025届高三英语二轮复习 应用文专题 发言稿 评讲讲义

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名称 2025届高三英语二轮复习 应用文专题 发言稿 评讲讲义
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2025届高三作文训练(一)评讲讲义
试题研读
发言稿是指在公开场合发表讲话的文稿。发言人可以针对某个具体问题来交流思想和感情、表达见解和主张、宣传倡议某种精神或活动,如介绍自己的学习、工作、经验等等。发言的目的是为了引起听众的共鸣,并使其在思想上认同或信服发言人的观点。因此,发言稿通常论点鲜明,逻辑性强,具有针对性、条理性和激励性的特点,容易使读者信服并在思想上产生共鸣。发言稿主要由标题语、称谓语、问候语、说明语、主体正文、结束语及致谢语构成。
题目要求考生根据提供的图片内容写一篇演讲稿,内容涵盖共享单车、高铁、新能源汽车三个方面,展现中国交通的发展。这一题目体现了高考作文贴近时代、关注社会热点的特点,同时也考查了考生的观察分析能力、语言组织能力和创新思维。
Step 1 审题
体裁 发言稿
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时+现在完成时
写作目的 向听众介绍中国交通发展的现状,展示其影响。
要点 包括共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车的发展情况,以及它们如何促进了中国的现代化和可持续发展。
意识 读者意识和主题意识
读者意识
指的是作者在写作过程中对目标受众的了解和考虑。这包括了解读者的兴趣、知识水平、价值观和需求。
考虑到听众可能对中国的交通发展有一定的了解,但可能需要更深入的信息,因此需要在演讲中适当地解释术语、提供背景信息,并使用具体的例子来帮助听众更好地理解和吸收信息。
主题意识
指作者对演讲或写作主题的清晰认识和深入理解。这包括对主题的重要性、复杂性和多维度的理解。
1.在“Development of Transport in China”这个主题中,主题意识意味着要全面地介绍中国交通发展的各个方面,包括共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车,并探讨它们如何影响经济、环境和社会。
2.主题意识还涉及到在演讲中保持焦点,确保所有讨论的点都紧密围绕主题展开,避免偏离主题。
Step 2谋篇布局
Main parts of a speech
Para 1:发言稿开场白+发言主题
Para 2: 详细介绍共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车的发展情况及其影响
Para3: 抒发爱国情怀
Step 3 句型升级
Para1 Beginning :发言稿开场白+发言主题
今天,我很高兴/荣幸/激动/激动/高兴与大家分享中国交通运输的显著进步/进步/变化/进步。
Today, I am delighted/honored/excited/thrilled/glad to share with you the remarkable advancements/advancements/changes/progress of transportation in China.
2.我很荣幸能在这里发表演讲。中国的交通已经发生了显著的变化,现在的交通开始变得多样化和更加便利。
It's a great honor to make my speech here. China has been witnessing a remarkable transformation in transportation, which has started to be various and more convenient nowadays.
3. 今天,我很自豪地向大家展示中国在交通运输方面取得的进步。从共享单车到高速列车再到新能源汽车,每一项创新都证明了我们国家对进步和可持续发展的承诺。
Today, I take pride in showcasing the strides China has made in transportation.From shared bicycles to high-speed trains and new energy vehicles, each innovation is a testament to our nation's commitment to progress and sustainability.
今天,我很高兴与大家分享中国过去几十年在交通运输领域取得的巨大进步。在即将到来的时刻,我们将深入探讨共享单车、高铁网络和新能源汽车的变革影响
Today, I am thrilled to share with you the remarkable progress China has made in the field of transportation over the past few decades. In the forthcoming moments, we will dig into the transformative impact of shared bicycles, the high-speed rail network, and new energy vehicles
Para 2 Body:详细介绍共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车的发展情况及其影响
过渡句
随着科技和经济的发展,大量创新的交通工具涌入我们的日常生活。
With the development of technology and economy, a mass of creative and innovative transportation are flocking into our daily lives.
众所周知,随着人们生活水平的提高,我们周围出现了各种各样的交通工具。
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, a wide variety of transportation means have come into view around us.
1.共享单车
1) 让我们从共享单车开始,它是一种从草根阶层兴起的现象,已经发展成为城市流动性和环境意识的象征。 (祈使句+同位语+定语从句)
Let us begin with the shared bicycles, a grassroots phenomenon that has blossomed into a symbol of urban mobility and environmental consciousness.
2) 它们不仅缓解了交通拥堵,还培养了一种对地球共同负责的文化。(并列句+倒装句)
Not only have they alleviated/ eased/reduced/relieved traffic congestion but also fostered a culture of shared responsibility for our planet.
共享单车以其便捷和低碳而闻名,是交通革命的象征。此外,它们在世界范围内使用,并得到了广泛的普及。(非谓语动词)
Known for their convenience and low carbon, shared bicycles are the symbol of revolution in transport. Furthermore, they are used worldwide and have gained wide popularity.
2.高铁
4)高铁系统是中国工程实力的证明,以前所未有的速度和效率连接着国家的广阔地域。(非谓语-ing)
The high-speed rail system stands as a testament to China's engineering prowess, connecting the vast expanse of the country with unprecedented speed and efficiency.
5)此外,高铁是中国速度和中国智慧的结合,无疑加强了不同地区人民之间的联系和
交流。(非谓语-ing)
Additionally, high-speed trains are a combination of Chinese speed and Chinese wisdom, definitely enhancing the connection and communication between people from different regions.
3.新能源汽车
6) 此外,正是新能源汽车极大地促进了交通运输的发展。它们不仅减少了污染物的排放,而且可以替代传统能源,促进可持续发展。(强调句+倒装句)
Besides, it is the new energy cars that dramatically foster the development of transport. Not only do they reduce pollutant emission, but also they can replace traditional energy and promote sustainable development.
此外,新能源汽车在我们的日常生活中变得越来越重要,通过它不仅可以节省能源,还可以减少燃料燃烧造成的污染。(定语从句+倒装句)
Additionally, the new energy vehicles have become more and more important in our daily life, through which not only does it save energy but also it can reduce pollution caused by fuel burning.
Para 3 Ending:抒发爱国情怀
8) 目睹这些成就,我感到无比自豪。 (it作形式主语+无灵主语)
As we witness these achievements, it fills me with immense pride.
9) 它们象征着我们国家的力量和韧性,推动我们走向民族复兴--这是我们都自豪能参与的旅程。(非谓语作结果状语从句+定从)
They symbolize our nation's strength and resilience, driving us towards national rejuvenation-a journey we are all proud to be part of.
Step 3 下水文
Today, I am thrilled to share with you the remarkable progress China has made in the field of transportation over the past few decades. In the forthcoming moments, we will dig into the transformative impact of shared bicycles, the high-speed rail network, and new energy vehicles .
Let us begin with the shared bicycles, a grassroots phenomenon that has blossomed into a symbol of urban mobility and environmental consciousness.Not only have they alleviated/ eased/reduced/relieved traffic congestion but also fostered a culture of shared responsibility for our planet. Moving forward, the high- speed rail system stands as a testament to China's engineering prowess, connecting the vast expanse of the country with unprecedented speed and efficiency. Besides, it is the new energy cars that dramatically foster the development of transport. Not only do they reduce pollutant emission, but also they can replace traditional energy and promote sustainable development.
As we witness these achievements, it fills me with immense pride. They symbolize our nation's strength and resilience, driving us towards national rejuvenation--a journey we are all proud to be part of. Thank you for your listening.
下水文2
Ladies and gentlemen,
It's a great honor to make my speech here. China has been witnessing a remarkable transformation in transportation, which has started to be various and more convenient nowadays.
With the development of technology and economy, a mass of creative and innovative transportation are flocking into our daily lives. For instance, shared bikes are of great significance to provide citizens another choice, which costs less money and gets greater help. What's more, high speed train is also doing a favor to improve the efficiency, saving time for people in hurry and facilitating the communication between two distant places. In addition, there's another environment-friendly approach. It is new energy cars that has changed in style and promoted in performance to cater to modernized world.
All in all, the rapid development of transportation is not only a reflection of the prosperity of our country but it also a consequence of joint efforts we have made.
That's all. Thank you.
下水文3
Good morning, dear fellow students,
It's my great honor to stand here and share my topic with you. Today I'd like to talk about the Development of Transport in China.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, a wide variety of transportation means have come into view around us. Firstly, let's talk about shared bikes. Convenient and easy for short trips, they're almost everywhere, which help reduce traffic congestion and pollution. Secondly, there is the high-speed train, also known as the bullet train. They're fast, efficient and more environmentally friendly compared with planes and cars, making traveling between cities quicker, thus saving time and reducing carbon footprint. Lastly, we have new energy vehicles, like electric cars. They never use gas so that they don't produce any harmful emissions, therefore cleaner for the environment. Besides, they are really affordable and quiet to drive.
In conclusion, shared bikes, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles are making our journeys faster, easier and more enjoyable, which enables us to live a greener and healthier life. Never should we forget these incredible achievements.That's all, thank you!