2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项:读后续写写作宝典导学案(无答案）
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读后续写写作宝典
解题步骤
读原文
边读边画基本内容（5W1H)
理清故事线（找主要矛盾）
提炼主题（标题，核心词）
读段首句（特别注意时间、地点的变化）合理推演情节，并用动词短语列出续写的情节大纲（每段3-4个即可！中间适当穿插情感描写）
如：山洞躲雨（前情：一家人野外露营，姐妹二人离开营地玩耍，突遇风暴大雨，进山洞躲雨，拿着父亲送的背包...)
Para1 : 打开包--里面有？--(情绪变化)--利用工具生火取暖--(情绪转变)--决定等待
Para2 : 决定回去--过程(工具/路径/互动)--到达营地--反应--总结
二、续写基本原则
1.矛盾→解决原则。用最直接的方式解决矛盾，切忌绕来绕去，自找麻烦
2.情绪消极→积极原则。A happy ending
3.反应原则（人物A做出动作，人物B要做出反应）
三、加分小妙招
巧用原文，增加续写内容与原文的贴合度
E.g. “How was the movie today Have you remembered to silence your phone？”mom chuckled
首尾呼应，加强文章整体性
E.g. This time so carefully did Ava listen that she nodded, putting it into her pocket quietly.
3.适当使用情感描写、细节描写（准确的动作、表情神态、语言、程度副词等），提高文章语言美
E.g. Tears welled up in her eyes and her face registered a mixture of disbelief and guilt. She dashed/stormed out, screaming harshly“no!”
4.精准点题，突出主旨，实现“画龙点睛”
E.g.A seed to be responsible began to grow up and blossom开放 in Ava's heart.This unique experience still deeply engraved in铭刻于心 her mind, which reminded her of the significance of taking responsibility for not only the phone but also other things in life.
动作描写句式
“分解慢动作”
sb.did A ,did B and did C
E.g. .Emily took a deep breathe,gathered up her courage, and began to sing her heart out.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
doing /done /having done A , sb did B (and did C)
g.Hearing that ,Ollie and I exchanged an understanding look and burst out screaming for joy.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb did A and did B , (with) C doing/done 或 (with) A doing/done,sb did B ,doing C
e.g. He lowered his head , a flush creeping across his face instantly.
e.g.I twisted my head slightly , and looked over at Ollie with eyes widened .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb. did A and did B ,doing C
E.g. We managed a smile and glanced around elegantly, but feeling like sitting on the pins and needles inside.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb. did A ,doing B and doing C
e.g. She was overwhelmed by joy,singing and dancing in the rain.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
※升级版本：
1.非谓语动词doing + 谓语 (主句）
e.g. Using the flashlight , they carefully navigated行走 the slippery path hand by hand
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
2.非谓语动词done + 谓语 (主句）
e.g.Enveloped in the warm blanket,they decided to wait here temporarily until the storm was over/pass.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
3.情感+肢体动作+心理/语言”
a.A ripple/flood /wave/surge of +情感 +surging through my body/sweeping over me/welling up into me, 主句*（动作描写+心理）
E.g. A ripple of depression welling up in me，I dragged my heavy and tired legs inching forward,totally at a loss about where to go .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
b.Overwhelmed by /Seized by/Struck with /Bubbling with /Immersed in/ Bathed in /Drowned in a strong sense of +情感,主句（动作描写+心理）
E.g. Overwhelmed with a strong sense of fear,her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied，feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
c.Falling into a whirlpool of +消极情感 ，主句（动作描写 +心理)
E.g.Falling into a whirlpool of sorrow,she couldn’t utter a word/had trouble speaking.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
4.形容词作状语（表原因、结果或伴随）,主句
E.g. Exhausted but determined , the two girls packed up the backpack and made their way back .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
5.强调句（It was+被强调成分+that+句子）
It was just at that very moment that she finally thought of something and dashed towards the bathroom.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
倒装句 （no sooner had sb. done sth than sb.did sth , hardly had sb done sth when sb. did sth.,never，only then, so that , not until, not only...but also ）
e.g.Hardly had they arrived when they searched Ava’s seat for the cellphone with the cinema staff’s help.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g. Never would I forgot what he did for me.
E.g. Only then did I realize that ...(直到那时我才意识到... )
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g.So disappointed was Ava that her palms were sweating, totally at a loss what to do. .(so+adj/adv+部分倒装+that+句子)
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g.It was not until then that I realized love can give us courage to overcome all difficulties. (It was+not until..+that+主句)
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
其他常用句式
情绪转变
Greatly encouraged/Inspired by 某人/某人的话，sb.did sth.
(e.g. Inspired by her heartfelt remarks, Devin raised his head , and eyes lit up with a strong sense of strength sweeping over/surging through his body)
Driven by an inner voice, I summoned up鼓起 my courage and made my way toward the old man with my Cho following closely.“
Collecting myself/Regaining /Gathering up all his courage/energy,sb.did sth.
A ray/glimpse of hope was rekindled in my mind./ A small but hopeful spark was rekindled重燃 within their hearts.
All the disappointment and sorrow that had accumulated throughout the day surprisingly melted away ,which was immediately replaced by a wave of happiness and sweetness. (先前累积的所有的...都意外地消失了,取而代之的是...）
2.突然想到/意识到
It suddenly occurred to/dawned on/ hit/struck sb. that+想到的内容
A brilliant idea flashed /sprang into sb’s mind that+想到的内容
Having realized that...,sb did sth
Aware of...,sb.did sth
Suddenly, it all clicked and they...恍然大悟
3.时间过渡
没过多久：
1.It didn’t take long before.../It wasn’t long before...
e.g. It didn’t take long/wasn’t long before our classroom was full of various and delicate gifts.
过了一会:
After a while /A moment later，
As time went by(流逝）/on（推移）,...
As the minutes ticked by, 时间一分一秒地过去
After what seemed a long time /centuries,
彼此之间沉默了一会：
Silence hovered between us for a while.
描述过程：
The following night/hours/days witnessed ...
e.g.The following hours witnessed how they dug holes, carefully placed each plant, and gently patted down the soil around them.（过程）Eventually, with their joint efforts ,the garden was turned into a sea of flowers...（结果）
结尾升华
自我成长/启示类
It suddenly occurred to Ben that honesty is the best policy to make up for your mistake.
It suddenly dawned on him that you have to make a right decision and never let the one who chooses you down no matter how hard the struggle is.
Only then did I realize that it was not just a part-time job, it was a valuable lesson that would remind me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
A seed to be responsible began to grow up and blossom开放 in Ava's heart.This unique experience still deeply engraved in铭刻于心 her mind, which reminded her of the significance of taking responsibility for not only the phone but also other things in life.
It was not until then that she realized the responsibility and care behind the phone.
2.温情
a. Small as they were, every bite of the seeds created a lasting memory that would be engraved/never fade away in their mind permanently .
b. Time may blur their memory but the precious moments they spent together would be engraved in their mind permanently.
3.画面定格
Bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of our skin.It was a cherished moment that would be engraved/never fade away in our mind permanently.
Words of appreciation and merriment flooding out of the boy, he cupped 捧 the little creatures and hugged his parents in the arms with affection.
解题步骤
读原文
边读边画基本内容（5W1H)
理清故事线（找主要矛盾）
提炼主题（标题，核心词）
读段首句（特别注意时间、地点的变化）合理推演情节，并用动词短语列出续写的情节大纲（每段3-4个即可！中间适当穿插情感描写）
如：山洞躲雨（前情：一家人野外露营，姐妹二人离开营地玩耍，突遇风暴大雨，进山洞躲雨，拿着父亲送的背包...)
Para1 : 打开包--里面有？--(情绪变化)--利用工具生火取暖--(情绪转变)--决定等待
Para2 : 决定回去--过程(工具/路径/互动)--到达营地--反应--总结
二、续写基本原则
1.矛盾→解决原则。用最直接的方式解决矛盾，切忌绕来绕去，自找麻烦
2.情绪消极→积极原则。A happy ending
3.反应原则（人物A做出动作，人物B要做出反应）
三、加分小妙招
巧用原文，增加续写内容与原文的贴合度
E.g. “How was the movie today Have you remembered to silence your phone？”mom chuckled
首尾呼应，加强文章整体性
E.g. This time so carefully did Ava listen that she nodded, putting it into her pocket quietly.
3.适当使用情感描写、细节描写（准确的动作、表情神态、语言、程度副词等），提高文章语言美
E.g. Tears welled up in her eyes and her face registered a mixture of disbelief and guilt. She dashed/stormed out, screaming harshly“no!”
4.精准点题，突出主旨，实现“画龙点睛”
E.g.A seed to be responsible began to grow up and blossom开放 in Ava's heart.This unique experience still deeply engraved in铭刻于心 her mind, which reminded her of the significance of taking responsibility for not only the phone but also other things in life.
动作描写句式
“分解慢动作”
sb.did A ,did B and did C
E.g. .Emily took a deep breathe,gathered up her courage, and began to sing her heart out.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
doing /done /having done A , sb did B (and did C)
g.Hearing that ,Ollie and I exchanged an understanding look and burst out screaming for joy.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb did A and did B , (with) C doing/done 或 (with) A doing/done,sb did B ,doing C
e.g. He lowered his head , a flush creeping across his face instantly.
e.g.I twisted my head slightly , and looked over at Ollie with eyes widened .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb. did A and did B ,doing C
E.g. We managed a smile and glanced around elegantly, but feeling like sitting on the pins and needles inside.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
sb. did A ,doing B and doing C
e.g. She was overwhelmed by joy,singing and dancing in the rain.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
※升级版本：
1.非谓语动词doing + 谓语 (主句）
e.g. Using the flashlight , they carefully navigated行走 the slippery path hand by hand
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
2.非谓语动词done + 谓语 (主句）
e.g.Enveloped in the warm blanket,they decided to wait here temporarily until the storm was over/pass.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________.
3.情感+肢体动作+心理/语言”
a.A ripple/flood /wave/surge of +情感 +surging through my body/sweeping over me/welling up into me, 主句*（动作描写+心理）
E.g. A ripple of depression welling up in me，I dragged my heavy and tired legs inching forward,totally at a loss about where to go .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
b.Overwhelmed by /Seized by/Struck with /Bubbling with /Immersed in/ Bathed in /Drowned in a strong sense of +情感,主句（动作描写+心理）
E.g. Overwhelmed with a strong sense of fear,her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied，feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
c.Falling into a whirlpool of +消极情感 ，主句（动作描写 +心理)
E.g.Falling into a whirlpool of sorrow,she couldn’t utter a word/had trouble speaking.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
4.形容词作状语（表原因、结果或伴随）,主句
E.g. Exhausted but determined , the two girls packed up the backpack and made their way back .
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
5.强调句（It was+被强调成分+that+句子）
It was just at that very moment that she finally thought of something and dashed towards the bathroom.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
倒装句 （no sooner had sb. done sth than sb.did sth , hardly had sb done sth when sb. did sth.,never，only then, so that , not until, not only...but also ）
e.g.Hardly had they arrived when they searched Ava’s seat for the cellphone with the cinema staff’s help.
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g. Never would I forgot what he did for me.
E.g. Only then did I realize that ...(直到那时我才意识到... )
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g.So disappointed was Ava that her palms were sweating, totally at a loss what to do. .(so+adj/adv+部分倒装+that+句子)
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
E.g.It was not until then that I realized love can give us courage to overcome all difficulties. (It was+not until..+that+主句)
仿写：_________________________________________________________________________________
其他常用句式
情绪转变
Greatly encouraged/Inspired by 某人/某人的话，sb.did sth.
(e.g. Inspired by her heartfelt remarks, Devin raised his head , and eyes lit up with a strong sense of strength sweeping over/surging through his body)
Driven by an inner voice, I summoned up鼓起 my courage and made my way toward the old man with my Cho following closely.“
Collecting myself/Regaining /Gathering up all his courage/energy,sb.did sth.
A ray/glimpse of hope was rekindled in my mind./ A small but hopeful spark was rekindled重燃 within their hearts.
All the disappointment and sorrow that had accumulated throughout the day surprisingly melted away ,which was immediately replaced by a wave of happiness and sweetness. (先前累积的所有的...都意外地消失了,取而代之的是...）
2.突然想到/意识到
It suddenly occurred to/dawned on/ hit/struck sb. that+想到的内容
A brilliant idea flashed /sprang into sb’s mind that+想到的内容
Having realized that...,sb did sth
Aware of...,sb.did sth
Suddenly, it all clicked and they...恍然大悟
3.时间过渡
没过多久：
1.It didn’t take long before.../It wasn’t long before...
e.g. It didn’t take long/wasn’t long before our classroom was full of various and delicate gifts.
过了一会:
After a while /A moment later，
As time went by(流逝）/on（推移）,...
As the minutes ticked by, 时间一分一秒地过去
After what seemed a long time /centuries,
彼此之间沉默了一会：
Silence hovered between us for a while.
描述过程：
The following night/hours/days witnessed ...
e.g.The following hours witnessed how they dug holes, carefully placed each plant, and gently patted down the soil around them.（过程）Eventually, with their joint efforts ,the garden was turned into a sea of flowers...（结果）
结尾升华
自我成长/启示类
It suddenly occurred to Ben that honesty is the best policy to make up for your mistake.
It suddenly dawned on him that you have to make a right decision and never let the one who chooses you down no matter how hard the struggle is.
Only then did I realize that it was not just a part-time job, it was a valuable lesson that would remind me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
A seed to be responsible began to grow up and blossom开放 in Ava's heart.This unique experience still deeply engraved in铭刻于心 her mind, which reminded her of the significance of taking responsibility for not only the phone but also other things in life.
It was not until then that she realized the responsibility and care behind the phone.
2.温情
a. Small as they were, every bite of the seeds created a lasting memory that would be engraved/never fade away in their mind permanently .
b. Time may blur their memory but the precious moments they spent together would be engraved in their mind permanently.
3.画面定格
Bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of our skin.It was a cherished moment that would be engraved/never fade away in our mind permanently.
Words of appreciation and merriment flooding out of the boy, he cupped 捧 the little creatures and hugged his parents in the arms with affection.