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译林版五年级上册Unit 6写作提优专训
介绍人物
方法指导
介绍人物,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步开头,引出人物; 第二步正文,介绍人物的性格外貌、国籍、兴趣爱好三个要素; 第三步结尾,对人物进行评价。
素材积累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 姓名: Mike, Lily, Tim 年龄: eleven, twelve, thirteen, twenty · This is my friend. His name is Mike. · She is eleven years old.
正文 性格外貌: strong, kind, active, eye, ear, nose, tall 国籍: China, Canada, America 兴趣爱好: play football, sing songs, draw pictures, cook, dance · She has big eyes and a small nose. · She is kind. · He is thin and tall. · She is from Canada. · She likes playing football. · He is good at dancing.
结尾 评价: like, love, enjoy, role model · He is my role model. ·I like my e-friend.
以读促写( 阅读范文,补全思维导图,体悟写法)
Hi, everyone. This is my e-friend Anna. She is 12 years old. She's very beautiful . She has big eyes and long hair. She is from Canada. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes singing, dancing and swimming. At weekends, she usually studies Chinese with her mother. She sometimes chats with me on the Internet.
小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)
请你根据思维导图,写一篇短文介绍你的网友 Tom。不少于5句话。
My e-friend is Tom.
[提分练1]
同学们,本单元我们学习了如何描述网友或者朋友的情况。你一定有好朋友或者网友吧,请介绍一下他(她),包括他(她)的姓名、年龄、兴趣爱好等方面。
[提分练2]
(徐州市贾汪区2023—2024学年五年级(上册)期末)请根据提示,用英文介绍你的一位朋友。
要求:1. 条理清晰,用词恰当,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 书写工整、规范,正确使用标点符号;
3. 不少于5句话。
My good friend
[提分练3]
请根据表格信息,以“My friend”为题,介绍一下你的朋友王兵。
Name Age Hometown Subjects After school
Wang Bing 11 Nanjing Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Music, Art play football
要求:围绕以上几点展开描述;语句通顺,语法正确;不少于5句话。
My friend
[提分练4]
根据信息卡并作适当发挥,写一篇短文介绍一下你的朋友 Lucy。
Name: Lucy Age: 11 Father: teacher, teaches Maths Mother: worker, makes toys Subjects: English & Music Hobbies: drawing & dancing
要求:语句通顺,语法正确,语义连贯,不少于40个单词。
参考答案
单元写作提优专训
三、1.12/ twelve 2. eyes 3. studies 4. singing 5. dancing
四、范文:
My e-friend is Tom. He is twelve years old. He is very kind. He is from the US. His father is a doctor. His mother is a Maths teacher. He likes swimming and playing basketball. At weekends, he often reads storybooks and sometimes goes to the farm. I like my e-friend.
[提分练1]
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. He's Peter. He is a tall boy and he lives in the UK. He is twelve years old. He can speak English and a little Chinese. He studies Chinese after school. He likes PE. But he isn't good at Maths. Sometimes I help him with his homework. He likes watching films. I like playing chess with him on the Internet. I think he is very clever because he beats me many times. He wants to come to China in the future.
[提分练2]
My good friend
Nancy is my good friend. She is 12 years old. She is from Russia. She lives in Nanjing now. She is a student. She likes Art and Music. She is good at singing. She also likes dancing. She always has a dancing lesson at weekends. She sometimes goes to the cinema with her friends. They like watching films about animals.
[提分练3]
My friend
My friend is Wang Bing. He is eleven years old. He lives in Nanjing. He studies Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Music and Art at school. He likes Art. He is good at drawing. After school, he usually plays football with me in the playground. We help each other. We are good friends.(答案仅供参考)
[提分练4]
This is my friend Lucy. She's eleven years old. Her father is a teacher. He teaches Maths. He has a lot of students. Her mother is a worker. She makes toys.
Lucy likes English and Music. She's good at English. She likes drawing and dancing. She often draws in the park on Saturday. She sometimes has a dancing lesson on Sunday.
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