陕西合阳县2016高考英语【二轮】短文改错练习（4）及答案
短文改错
The Problem with Television
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years 1. _______
ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2. _______
a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3. _______
demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are 4. _______
too many people among my family. Some wanted 5. _______
to see the programme while others preferred 6. _______
another. I am happy with any programme but 7. _______
the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8. _______
was no way of settling the matter except by 9. _______
selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. 删去 much。“I can’t watch much television”意为“我不能看许多电视”， 上下文逻辑不通。much 属于多余。
2. 删去 was。由上文句意可知“我现在不看电视， 而过去每晚都看电视”， 因此应用 used to do。
3. watch 改为 watching。作句子主语需用动名词。
4. Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately。此处应用副词作状语。
5. among 改为 in。“in my family”为习惯搭配， 意为“在我家中”。
6. the 改为 one。由下文的another可知， 上文用one。
7. am 改为 was。综观全文时态可知。
8. a lot 后加 of。
9. 此行无错。
10. someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody。someone 意为“某个人”； everyone/ everybody 意为“每个人”。根据上下文逻辑可知。
(2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
答案：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
【参考答案】
76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
短文改错
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _____
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. 78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. ______
instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that 81. _______
will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. ______
I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. ______
with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. 84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 85. ______
【参考答案】
take---taking. 77.class—classes. 78.or—and.
79. did—do. 80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired. 82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正确。 85. freshly---fresh.
短文改错
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】
76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错
One day I happened to find a chatting room in
my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I tried
to chat with some of them．T0 my surprised，I found
the oral English of some junior students were better
than me．I asked them for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and
expressions．With time went by．I found that I could
even communicate some college students freely．
【参考答案】
76.√ 77.there-where 78.surprised-surprise
79.were-was 80.me-mine 81.But-So
82.praltise-prsltising 83.from 84.with-Aswent-going 85.with
短文改错
Now I have taken more than ten years at school. As 63. ________
a child，I regarded my school a beautiful garden. I 64. ________
went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag.
Time flew very fast. Now I’m studying at a senior 65. ________
middle school. Every day morning I go to school early. 66. ________
In the evening， I do a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. ________
working hard， expect a good harvest. During breaks 68. ________
between class， I often go out to enjoy myself. I’m 69. ________
sure I’ll never forget wonderful time I spent at school. 70. ________
【参考答案】
63.taken→been 64.school后加as
65.flew→flies 66.去掉day
67.√ 68. expect→expecting 69. class→classes
70. wonderful后加the
76.
77.
78.
79.
80.
81.
82.
83.
84.
85.陕西合阳县2016高考英语【二轮】短文改错练习（1）及答案
2015年高考改错真题汇编
【2015·新课标全国I】
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
2015年课标全国卷I【参考答案】
【答案】【解析】
试题分析：高中即将毕业了，有一些体会和同学们分享。1.感谢老师，家长和朋友们；2.致歉于我曾经误会伤害的人；3.祝福同学们心想事成。
1．【答案】第二句：think→thought句意：我认为在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。解析：考查动词时态。
2．【答案】第三句中的∧countryside→the【解析】冠词缺失。in the countryside为常用短语，意为“在乡村，在农村，在乡下”，因此名词countryside之前应该添加冠词the。
3．【答案】第四句中的or→and【解析】连词错误。根据语境“空气干净，并且山是绿的”可知，并列连词or使用错误，应改为and。
4．【答案】第五句中的on→with【解析】介词错误。with the development of为介词短语，意为“随着……的发展”，故文中的介词on使用错误，应改为with。
5．【答案】第六句中的been删除【解析】语态错误。该句的主语Lots of studies是动作的发出者，因此句子应使用主动语态，需要删除been。句意：许多研究表明。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。解析：考查语态。此处表示“研究表明”，所以用主动语态。
6．【答案】第六句中的seriously→serious【解析】词性错误。名词problem之前应使用形容词作定语，故副词seriously错误，应改为形容词serious。句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。
7．【答案】第七句中的airs→air【解析】名词单复数错误。air在此处为不可数名词，故airs应改为单数形式。airs→air句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。解析：考查名词的单复数。air“空气”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。第七句：airs→air考查名词的数。air为物质名词。是不可数名词。
8．【答案】第八句中的Much→Many【解析】形容词错误。修饰可数名词复数animals应用many，因此句中的Much应改为Many。Much→Many句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。
9．【答案】第九句中的found→find【解析】动词错误。根据常识可知，情态动词must之后应该接动词原形，故found改为find。
1O．【答案】第九句中的your→our/the【解析】代词错误。根据主语we和上下文语境可知，形容词性物主代词your。使用错误，应改为our，也可改为定冠词(environment在此处表示特指)。
[评析]在高考短文改错题型中，对代词的考查是热点之一。如果考生脑海中没有“代词”这根弦的话，是不容易发现错误的。因此，要熟练掌握代词的用法，解题的关键是明确代词的指代对象。
短文改错。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_____
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3____
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, 4____
I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5___
encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve ___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china ___
again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9____
and send you the photos we take together 10____
【参考答案】KEY 5
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. for
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in no
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could terrible
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, years
I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your is
encouraging words.I will always remember what you right
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve /to
had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china a
again sometimes in the future.I will write again sometime
and send you the photos we take together took
(2013·长春市第四次调测)
I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
【参考答案】：
I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for from Wenchuan. As we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
(2013·甘肃省二诊)
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.
【参考答案】：
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children want things that they don't need.
短文改错----应用文
【2015届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期第一次月考】
短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
Do you read reviews after you see a movie I use to do that, but I usually regretted. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point out everything that is wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about one. They also tell many things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards if necessary. What is very importance to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. And I don’t ask other people how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more.
改错：
【答案】【知识点】短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。
【答案解析】
1.after—before 因为是在看电影之前看评论，故after改为before。
2.use—used 过去常常，used to do sth。
3.on—in in advance固定搭配，“提前”。
4.go—going end up doing sth结束做某事。
5.mentions—mention 主语为the writers，mention与point为并列的谓语动词，故不能用单三形式。
6.one—it it代指前文的film。
7.way前加the the way后跟定语从句，表示特指。
8.importance—important important形容词作表语。
9.that-which 引导词前有介词in，故应用which引导定语从句。
10.of 去掉 like为及物动词，不能加任何介词。陕西合阳县2016高考英语【二轮】短文改错练习（2）及答案
短文改错。
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 1. _______
Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to 2. _______
know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. 3. _______
My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4. _______
capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We 5. _______
study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, 6. _______
English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot 7. _______
in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. 8. _______
Do you play any ball games What your favorite 9. _______
sport I look forward to hear from you soon. 10. ______
Yours,
Li Hua
答案及解析
1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。
2. to 后加 be 或 become。
3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。
4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。
5. 此行无错。
6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。
7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。
8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in…为固定短语， “对……感兴趣”。
9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。
10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。
短文改错。
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____
see that there is anything on their website 7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___
forward to seeing you again.
【参考答案】KEY 6
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
(2013·昭通市统检)
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.
I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late If you are available that time, please inform me.
Thank a lot!
【参考答案】：
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you next weekend, just because my elder sister come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted I should pick up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to what has changed in our city.
I want to express my again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks ？ If you are available that time, please inform me.
a lot!
(2013·绍兴市二模)
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
【参考答案】：
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the of English, so I got up early every morning, English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. I'm getting more and more interested learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
【参考答案】：
Yesterday, Li Mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back she showed him the receipt. Thinking was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . Many eyes were staring at her, made Li Mei very . Luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
短文改错----记叙文
【2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.
I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest paring with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.
【答案】【知识点】 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
members---member 考查名词单复数。句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。因为前面有a,故用单数形式。
happens---happened 考查动词的时态。我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
waiting后面加for 考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；
knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。Knock down sb 撞倒某人；
it—which 考查定语从句连接词。Which指代 a passing car
a –the 考查冠词。句意：一个男人立刻冲向那个女生给她急救；the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指；
but---and 考查连词；句意：幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院。两个句子是并列关系；
comparing---compared 考查非谓语动词。句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我对我的所作所为感到很骄傲；
aware of 去掉of 考查固定短语。Be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。
that –what 考查表语从句。句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。
例如：
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am
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短文改错
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 1. _______
party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 2. _______
had an examination on Monday morning. It is 3. _______
a very important exam but I can’t afford to 4. _______
fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 5. _______
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I 6. _______
won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you 7. _______
can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish 8. _______
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 9. _______
birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 10. ______
Yours,
Li Ming
答案及解析
1. on 改为 for。动词 thank 与名词 thanks 通常与介词 for 搭配。
2. much 后加 to。 I’d like to do something 为固定结构。
3. had 改为 have。综观全文时态可知。
4. but 改为 so。根据上下文逻辑， 此处应为因果关系。
5. 删去 all。all 与 the whole 重复， 只能保留一处， 由于在此题型中， 只有多一个单词的可能， 故此处只能删去 all。
6. prepare 改为 preparing。与上文的 reading 形成平行结构， 以满足“spend some time on sth./in doing sth.这一句型的需要。
7. 删去 in。含有 this， that， last， next 等的时间状语前不加任何介词。
8. 此行无错。
9. wonderful 前加 a。
10. return 改为 returns。return 此处为名词， many happy returns of the day 意为“祝你健康长寿”。
(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
答案：
It's reported that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others.
In word, obeying the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
短文改错
In England, afternoon tea, taken between four or five, 76_________
is the most informal meal of the day. If you are a friend 77_________
of the family, you may drop for tea without 78_________
been invited. Very often it is not served at a table. 79_________
The member and visitors take tea in the sitting room. 80__________
Each person had a cup and saucer, a spoon and a 81 __________
small plate for bread-and-butter and cake. On the way, 82___________
do not help you to cake first; bread-and butter first, 83__________
then cake if there is any. Other piece of advice is: do not put 84__________
more than one piece of bread or cake at same time. 85___________
【参考答案】
76, or----and 77.right 78.drop ----drop in 79.been---being
80.member----members 81.had----has 82.On ----By
83.you---yourself 84.Other---Another 85.at ---at the
2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试
短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day． One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone． Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car． He shouted, but the man drive off． As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief． What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven． So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard． "To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling． But I am a Christian and I forgive him!" When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes．
【答案】【知识点】 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】本文讲述一个善良的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事
【答案解析】
when –that 考查强调句。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。
but—and 考查连词。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。
Ran—Running 考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。
drive—drove 考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持一致。
real---really 考查副词 句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告诉父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。
the thief后面加to 考查动词用法。Want sb to do 想让某人做某事。
the message—a 考查冠词。句意：因此第二天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；因为第一次提到故用a.
feeling---feelings 考查名词。句意：你伤害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。
him—you 考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。
left for 去掉for 考查动词。句意：当他第二天早上离开家时。Leave A for B 离开A地去B地。
短文改错
I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
短文改错
My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s 76. _____________
last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _____________
some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _________
Xiao Hong’s legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _____________
couldn’t move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. ____________
Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. ____________
us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82___________
their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. ____________
medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their 84. ________
names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _______
【参考答案】76.on︿ a 77. then →when 78 were去掉
79 serious → seriously 80.正确 81. hand→ hands 82.run→ran
83.all→both 84.about 去掉 85.they︿are陕西合阳县2016高考英语【二轮】短文改错练习（3）及答案
短文改错
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of 1. _______
our school football team. We practise for three times 2. _______
every week and often watch football match on TV 3. _______
together. Play football not only makes us grow 4. _______
tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and 5. _______
team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 6. _______
for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7. _______
teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each 8. _______
player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9. _______
the team. And they must not break the rules too 10. ______
often if we want to win the game.
答案及解析
1. was 改为 am。综观全篇时态可知。
2.删去 for。time 表示次数时， 之前一般无介词， 直接用作状语。如： We have meals three times a day。
3. match 改为 matches。
4. Play 改为 Playing。此处应用动名词作主语， 表示经常性、 习惯性动作， 而动词不定式作主语则表示一两次的动作。
5. give 改为 gives。此处和上文 makes 一起作谓语， 属平行结构。
6. 此行无错。
7. instead 后加 of。instead 为副词， instead of 为介词短语。此处接宾语 ourselves， 需用介词短语。
8. important 改为 importance。
9. captain 前后 the。像 chairman， captain， monitor， mayor 这类词表示职务时， 前面用零冠词。但如这类职务用于指某人时， 前面用定冠词。
10. they 改为 we。
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
If you park your car in a wrong place, traffic 76.
policeman will soon find it. You will be very unlucky 77.
if he lets me go without a ticket. But this does not 78.
always happen. Traffic police is sometimes very 79.
polite. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this 80.
note in my car, "Sir, we welcome you to our city. 81.
This is a 'No Parking' area. You will enjoy you your 82.
stay here whether you pay attention to our street signs. 83.
This note is simple a reminder." If you receive a 84.
request like this, you can fail to obey it! 85.
改错76．traffic前加a 77．unlucky--lucky
78．me—you 79．is--are 80．find--found 81．in—on
82．去掉you 83．whether--if 84．simple—simply
85．can--can't/can后加not或never
短文改错。
After I finished the school this year, I began to 1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. 4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job hunting talk today and he would 8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
【参考答案】
Women，present and ancient， at the home and 1．______
abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few 2．______
people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly． 3．______
It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short 4．______
of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with 5．______
nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in 6．______
too many,that means hair has already used too much 7．______
nourishment which body gives it to the head．As time passes， 8．______
brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______
(头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened． 10．______
【参考答案】Key 10
1．去掉the 2．that─ which 3．her─ their 4．was─ is
5．falls─fall 6．minutes—minute
7．many─much 8．去掉it 9 lead后加to 10．√
2015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。
【答案解析】
76. rain前加the 考查形容词。In the rain在雨中；
77.coldly → cold 考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。Cold形容词做伴随状语。
78.去掉and 考查句子结构。And应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.
79. too → so 考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。So …that 如此以至于。
80. Taking → Take 考查祈使句。句意：给我的马一些鱼。
81. didn’t → doesn’t 考查动词的时态。句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。
82. surprising → surprised考查形容词。句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。修饰人用surprised。
83. whom → them 考查代词。句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人们。
84. besides → beside 考查介词。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。
85. warm前加to或warm → warming考查动词的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 开始做某事。
