四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（6份打包）

四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（4）及答案
知识点二：句法型错误
句法型错误包括：主谓一致；各种从句的引导词；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
1.主谓一致：对主谓一致的考查主要根据语法、意义、就近、就远等一致原则，判断人称和数是否与主语保持一致。常考点如下：
(1)由or，nor，either...or，neither...nor，not only...but also等连接并列主语时，谓语动词的单复数遵循就近原则；
(2)当主语是A with/together with/as well as/including/...B时，谓语动词的单复数由A决定，遵循就远原则；
(3)动名词、不定式或名词从句作主语时，谓语动词常用单数；
(4)“half/most/part/the rest/分数/百分数＋of＋名词”作主语时，谓语动词要和of之后的名词的单复数保持一致；
(5)a quantity of/quantities of后既可接复数名词，也可接不可数名词，其谓语动词一般取决于quantity的单复数。
(1)(2014·四川)Today，I am going to talk with (about) what you should do when a fire alarm go off.
解析　该句的主语为a fire alarm，为单数名词，其谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。 答案　go→goes
2.连接词：连接词主要包括名词性从句中的连接词，定语从句中的关系词，状语从句中的连接词，以及主从复合句和并列句中的连接词等。特别是对which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等的考查。
(2)People would like to take part in this contest should go to the office of the Students' Union and sign up.
解析　定语从句缺少引导词。此句中的引导词who或that在从句中作主语，不能省略。
答案　People后加who或that
3.句子成分赘余：句子成分赘余一般有如下几种类型：(1)受母语思维影响，出现汉语式结构，造成冗言；(2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠；(3)介词多余；(4)助动词、系动词多余；(5)多冠词；(6)定语从句中成分重复；(7)程度副词和频率副词，如much，more，often等的多余；(8)小品词to多余等。
(3)(2014·四川)If you notice that when someone is missing and (or) hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
解析　该句的意思是“若发现有人失踪或受伤了，就要立刻告诉老师”。句中的if引导条件状语从句，when多余。 答案　去掉when
4.缺词错误：缺词现象常见的有：(1)缺系动词；(2)缺介词；(3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；(4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；(5)缺连接词；(6)缺否定词；(7)缺不定式符号to等。
(4)(2014·陕西)He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.
解析　want作“想要做某事”讲时后接带to的不定式。 答案　wanted后加to
知识点三：语篇型错误
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
(1)(2014·浙江)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise (noisy) and filled with people.
解析　考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。 答案　去掉had
(2)(2014·浙江)Then everyone in the carriage began searching (∧ for) the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.
解析　此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。
答案　his→its
(3)(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)As (∧ a) result，the plants are growing somewhere.
解析根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。 答案　somewhere→everywhere
易错点：
1. 平行结构中的错误
(1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.
解析　根据句意，此处为转折关系。 答案　and→but
(2)(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening (∧ to) music.
解析　此处有并列连词or，其后的动词与lie是平行结构，故该动词的形式应与lie保持一致。 答案　sat→sit
(3)(2014·大纲全国)The understanding between two friends mean (means) both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.
解析　此处的trust和前面的have并列，应用动词原形。 答案　trusting→trust
2. 从句与并列句的错误
(1) I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.
解析　all前加and，表示并列关系。 答案　all前加and
(2) This would save the life of many animals，some of them have almost died out.
答案　them→which
注意：句子与句子之间的逗号只起间隔作用，不能连接句子，所以要注意从句与并列句的辨别。 遇到此类题目，观察逗号后面有无连词，没有的话，添加适当的连词，或者把其中一句变为从句。
3. 动词时态与语态的错误
(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening to music.
解析　此处sit和前面的lie是并列关系。根据上下文及此处lie所用的动词时态形式可知，应把过去式的sat改为一般现在时sit。 答案　sat→sit
If the book you will want is out，you may ask for it to be called back for you.
答案　去掉will
短文改错做题技巧
要想在高考英语中做好短文改错，按照“四步走”，实施“四查法”可有效减少不必要的失误。具体做法如下：
一、“四步走”
1.通读全文，了解大意
注意语篇结构和行文逻辑，不能在未了解大意的情况下就按部就班地一行一行地改。
2.先易后难，缩小范围
通读短文的过程中，可以把其中明显的错误找出来，这样就缩小了范围，为下一步的分析判断提供更充分的依据，也能把注意力集中在较难判断的句子上。
3.把握句意，逐句判断
逐句扫描，各个击破。为了使每行长度相差不大，往往一个句子分成两行或三行，而一个句子是否有错只有看完整个句子，甚至还要瞻前顾后才能判断出错误之处。所以在通读全文时，要以句子为最小单位，千万别以行为单位。请记住下面的口诀：
动词形，名词数，注意形和副； 非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住； 句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。
4.反复通读，复查验证
在大部分错误都改正之后，如果还有拿不准的，应当再次通读短文，利用语感做最后判断；也可以根据此类题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来定夺。错词一般有7～8个，多词和缺词约有2～3处。
二、“四查法”
1.左顾右盼查名词
要注意搜寻名词之前及其本身出现的错误。看该名词前是否缺限定词，该用何种限定词。尤其要查冠词的使用情况。碰到代词要弄清它代替什么。当名词前有形容词时更要加倍注意。如：Catherine，to whom you can turn for help, has good knowledge of Greek.(knowledge为不可数名词，在has之后加上不定冠词a)
2.“语”“时”俱进查动词
认真分析动词所用的时态、语态。尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息，“语”“时”俱进地反复推敲。如：Martin gained so much confidence that he goes back to school...(goes改为went)
3.启承转合查连词
为使短文结构严谨，短文中往往会出现好多连词。这些连词的使用，在结构和意义上都要通顺流畅，恰如其分。如：It started to rise higher again.So it was still too close to the water. (So改为But)
4.文通理顺查逻辑
文通即行文合乎英语词法、句法；理顺指行文逻辑符合人们的认知规律，即符合常理。如：The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up.(第二个up改为down)
（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
短文改错。
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health　这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps　这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them　这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming　应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in　every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given　这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to　此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√
(2013·宝鸡市三模)
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed. The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help. Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice. At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand. Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground. A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away. Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
【参考答案】：
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed. The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help. Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice. At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand. Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground. A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（3）及答案
高考英语专题之短文改错
从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查要点的主要方面有：
知识点一：词法性错误
1.冠词：冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
(1)After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.
解析　因hour以元音音素开头。 答案　a→an
(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.
解析　因此处并非特指，而是泛指。 答案　the→a
(3)Good health is person's most valuable possession.
解析　这里的a表泛指。 答案　person's前加a
(4)Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.
解析　此处的winter holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。 答案　a→the
(5)Suddenly，I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.
解析　catch sight of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见” 答案　去掉a
2.名词：名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
(6)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream.
解析　因“水”为物质名词，不可数。 答案　waters→water
(7)There are branch library in many villages.
解析　因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。 答案　library→libraries
(8)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon.
解析　some time意为“某时”。 答案　times→time
(9)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.
解析　因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots of。 答案　question→questions
3.代词： 短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
(10)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.
解析　因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。 答案　去掉it
(11)When we walked to the car，Bill smiled and shook head.
解析　汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake one's head。 答案　head前加his
(12)We climb everywhere，not only in America. They have been to Europe many times.
解析　前后人称不一致。 答案　They→We
(13)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
解析　因前面的the Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。 答案　his→their
4.形容词与副词：形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。包括近义形容词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以－ly结尾的副词和不是以－ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词－ing形式和动词－ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a bit，a little，much，far，many，a lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。
(14)Last Sunday，police cars hurried to the taller building in New York.
解析　因从含义上看此处应是最高级。 答案　taller→tallest
(15)As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.
解析　因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。 答案　去掉more
5.介词与介词短语：短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，reply，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory over，advantage over，respect for，prize for等。
(16)Bill insisted in staying near the car.
解析　insist on为固定搭配。 答案　in→on
(17)When they came down，the police were angry to them.
解析　要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be angry with sb。 答案　to→with
(18)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.
解析　因其前的get是及物动词。 答案　去掉for
6.动词：除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。
(19)Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.
解析　因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。 答案　seeing→seen
(20)Books may be keep for four weeks.
解析　因此处要用被动语态。 答案　keep→kept
(21)...and let you know when the book you want has returned.
解析　因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。 答案　returned前加been
(22)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.
解析　由句意可知。 答案　go→come
(23)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.
解析　因此处缺谓语动词。 答案　eager前加were
7.非谓语动词：短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
(24)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.
解析　因为want后要接不定式。 答案　wanted后加to
(25)...rather than go into the forest and getting lost.
解析　因为get与其前的go并列。 答案　getting→get
(26)Modern people know more about health，have better food，and to live in clearer surroundings.
解析　因为live与其前的know，have并列。 答案　去掉live前的to
(27)...you pay the cost of send a postcard，the librarian will write to you.
解析　因为介词后接动名词作宾语。 答案　send→sending
(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
答案：
Yesterday, Li Mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back she showed him the receipt. Thinking was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . Many eyes were staring at her, made Li Mei very . Luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
答案：
I'm a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious I'm really looking forward to your approval.
【2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【参考答案】
1.把for去掉 ask for意为“请求”。这里是“问询”之意，故去掉for
2.the改为her in one's twenties在某人二十几岁的时候
3.similarly改为similar similar to是后置定语修饰interests。要用形容词形式。
4.he改为she 这里指代的是a girl，所以要用she。
5.interesting改为interested be interested in对……感兴趣。这里同第3题，interested作后置定语。
6.Beside改为Besides beside adv.旁边地。besides adv.除此之外。这两个为易混词，应特别注意。
7.such后加a such a pen pal这样一个笔友。such a如此一个。
8.whichever改为whatever whatever 无论什么，强调不明什么对象。whichever 无论哪个，强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。
9.believed改为believe 根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时。
10.learning改为learn learn是will的宾语所以用原形。四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（1）及答案
【广西省南宁市2014高考英语模拟试题】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。不按上述要求改的不给分。
I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _____
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. _____
first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. 78. _____
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. _____
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. _____
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. _____
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. _____
easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change 83. _____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. _____
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. _____
【参考答案】短文改错
76. 【解析】from后加a “来自一个低收入家庭”为泛指，需加a。
77. 【解析】have→had 和上下文对应，用一般过去时。
78. 【解析】one my first job “我的第一份工作”，one多余。
89. 【解析】felt→feeling feeling和and前的going相对应。
80. 【解析】harder→hard 此处的hard无比较意义。
81. 【解析】very→too 构成too. . . to. . . 结构，“太……而不能”。
82. 【解析】that→it it在宾语从句中作形式主语，真正主语是to earn money。
83. 【解析】knowledges→knowledge knowledge是不可数名词。
84. √
85. 【解析】as→than 构成more. . . than(比……多)比较结构。
(2013·许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave paring with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
答案：
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make . There is no doubt teachers play an important role in growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. with other jobs, teaching is and the pay is lower. to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me feel young forever. I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Bob,
I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．
to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners 77．
learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous 78．
language school-Elite Language School.
It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy 79．
your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till 80．
March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but it’s intended 81．
for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It cost 82．
only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them. 83．
If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing 84．
www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will 85．
be to come.
Hope to see you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【河北省石家庄市2014高考英语质量检测】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：l．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist．I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position．
First of all, allow me to introduce myself．I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination． I want to find out a part-time job in the summer． I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms or speaking and listening In fact, I once won the rust prize in die English speech competition hold in our school Besides, I'm quite easy-going hut therefore very popular among my classmates．
【参考答案】短文改错（10×1=10）：
I have learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for∧ receptionist.
a
I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position.
interested for
First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from high school
have
and taken the University Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in the
summer. I’m 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms of speaking
years especially
and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our
held
school. Besides, I’m quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.
and
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
me
【重庆南开中学】
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
If you park your car in a wrong place, traffic 76.
policeman will soon find it. You will be very unlucky 77.
if he lets me go without a ticket. But this does not 78.
always happen. Traffic police is sometimes very 79.
polite. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this 80.
note in my car, "Sir, we welcome you to our city. 81.
This is a 'No Parking' area. You will enjoy you your 82.
stay here whether you pay attention to our street signs. 83.
This note is simple a reminder." If you receive a 84.
request like this, you can fail to obey it! 85.
【参考答案】
76．traffic前加a 77．unlucky--lucky
78．me—you 79．is--are 80．find--found 81．in—on
82．去掉you 83．whether--if 84．simple—simply
85．can--can't/can后加not或never
(2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
【参考答案】：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（2）及答案
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
2011年浙江高考真题：
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
【2011年参考答案】：
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.
cousin’s richer
There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed,
in put后加 it
even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would
去掉to face
always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I
Later
pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever
slowly knew never
mentioned it again.
短文改错。
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
短文改错。
Dear doctor,
My name is Wang Lin. I’m a middle school student.I have
a problem and I’m writing to ask you for some advices. 1._________
I’m just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________
Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._________
They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._________
I’m now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________
feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._________
much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._________
tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._________
I have put off 5 kilos. I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________
but I don’t know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_________
dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
With best wishes,
Wang Lin
【参考答案】Key 9
1 advices –advice 2 and—but 3of 4 called –call
5 worry—worried 6 good –well 7 either –too 8 right
9 off –on 10 what –how
2015年浙江高考真题：
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
2015年参考答案：
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed
sides of
sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the
sitting easily
football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom
is
is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the
it
distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was
not去掉
always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view
加a
made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget
feel Though/Although
it.
(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
【参考答案】：
It's reported that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others.
In word, obeying the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
【2015届宁夏银川一中高三上学期第一次月考】
第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with．
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience．In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】短文改错应用文
【答案解析】
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged∧ you to stay with．
for
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you
Located is
to have a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits
their
difficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing
easy fluent
personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all, they
hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience．In addition,
an which
the hostess cooking will
hostess’
guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Hua
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧weekend with you. Luckily I was
The am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”, I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m in Friday
on
evening.四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（2）及答案
知识点二：句法型错误
句法型错误包括：主谓一致；各种从句的引导词；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
1.主谓一致：对主谓一致的考查主要根据语法、意义、就近、就远等一致原则，判断人称和数是否与主语保持一致。常考点如下：
(1)由or，nor，either...or，neither...nor，not only...but also等连接并列主语时，谓语动词的单复数遵循就近原则；
(2)当主语是A with/together with/as well as/including/...B时，谓语动词的单复数由A决定，遵循就远原则；
(3)动名词、不定式或名词从句作主语时，谓语动词常用单数；
(4)“half/most/part/the rest/分数/百分数＋of＋名词”作主语时，谓语动词要和of之后的名词的单复数保持一致；
(5)a quantity of/quantities of后既可接复数名词，也可接不可数名词，其谓语动词一般取决于quantity的单复数。
(1)(2014·四川)Today，I am going to talk with (about) what you should do when a fire alarm go off.
解析　该句的主语为a fire alarm，为单数名词，其谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。 答案　go→goes
2.连接词：连接词主要包括名词性从句中的连接词，定语从句中的关系词，状语从句中的连接词，以及主从复合句和并列句中的连接词等。特别是对which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等的考查。
(2)People would like to take part in this contest should go to the office of the Students' Union and sign up.
解析　定语从句缺少引导词。此句中的引导词who或that在从句中作主语，不能省略。
答案　People后加who或that
3.句子成分赘余：句子成分赘余一般有如下几种类型：(1)受母语思维影响，出现汉语式结构，造成冗言；(2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠；(3)介词多余；(4)助动词、系动词多余；(5)多冠词；(6)定语从句中成分重复；(7)程度副词和频率副词，如much，more，often等的多余；(8)小品词to多余等。
(3)(2014·四川)If you notice that when someone is missing and (or) hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
解析　该句的意思是“若发现有人失踪或受伤了，就要立刻告诉老师”。句中的if引导条件状语从句，when多余。 答案　去掉when
4.缺词错误：缺词现象常见的有：(1)缺系动词；(2)缺介词；(3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；(4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；(5)缺连接词；(6)缺否定词；(7)缺不定式符号to等。
(4)(2014·陕西)He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.
解析　want作“想要做某事”讲时后接带to的不定式。 答案　wanted后加to
知识点三：语篇型错误
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
(1)(2014·浙江)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise (noisy) and filled with people.
解析　考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。 答案　去掉had
(2)(2014·浙江)Then everyone in the carriage began searching (∧ for) the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.
解析　此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。
答案　his→its
(3)(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)As (∧ a) result，the plants are growing somewhere.
解析根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。 答案　somewhere→everywhere
易错点：
1. 平行结构中的错误
(1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.
解析　根据句意，此处为转折关系。 答案　and→but
(2)(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening (∧ to) music.
解析　此处有并列连词or，其后的动词与lie是平行结构，故该动词的形式应与lie保持一致。 答案　sat→sit
(3)(2014·大纲全国)The understanding between two friends mean (means) both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.
解析　此处的trust和前面的have并列，应用动词原形。 答案　trusting→trust
2. 从句与并列句的错误
(1) I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.
解析　all前加and，表示并列关系。 答案　all前加and
(2) This would save the life of many animals，some of them have almost died out.
答案　them→which
注意：句子与句子之间的逗号只起间隔作用，不能连接句子，所以要注意从句与并列句的辨别。 遇到此类题目，观察逗号后面有无连词，没有的话，添加适当的连词，或者把其中一句变为从句。
3. 动词时态与语态的错误
(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening to music.
解析　此处sit和前面的lie是并列关系。根据上下文及此处lie所用的动词时态形式可知，应把过去式的sat改为一般现在时sit。 答案　sat→sit
If the book you will want is out，you may ask for it to be called back for you.
答案　去掉will
短文改错做题技巧
要想在高考英语中做好短文改错，按照“四步走”，实施“四查法”可有效减少不必要的失误。具体做法如下：
一、“四步走”
1.通读全文，了解大意
注意语篇结构和行文逻辑，不能在未了解大意的情况下就按部就班地一行一行地改。
2.先易后难，缩小范围
通读短文的过程中，可以把其中明显的错误找出来，这样就缩小了范围，为下一步的分析判断提供更充分的依据，也能把注意力集中在较难判断的句子上。
3.把握句意，逐句判断
逐句扫描，各个击破。为了使每行长度相差不大，往往一个句子分成两行或三行，而一个句子是否有错只有看完整个句子，甚至还要瞻前顾后才能判断出错误之处。所以在通读全文时，要以句子为最小单位，千万别以行为单位。请记住下面的口诀：
动词形，名词数，注意形和副； 非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住； 句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。
4.反复通读，复查验证
在大部分错误都改正之后，如果还有拿不准的，应当再次通读短文，利用语感做最后判断；也可以根据此类题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来定夺。错词一般有7～8个，多词和缺词约有2～3处。
二、“四查法”
1.左顾右盼查名词
要注意搜寻名词之前及其本身出现的错误。看该名词前是否缺限定词，该用何种限定词。尤其要查冠词的使用情况。碰到代词要弄清它代替什么。当名词前有形容词时更要加倍注意。如：Catherine，to whom you can turn for help, has good knowledge of Greek.(knowledge为不可数名词，在has之后加上不定冠词a)
2.“语”“时”俱进查动词
认真分析动词所用的时态、语态。尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息，“语”“时”俱进地反复推敲。如：Martin gained so much confidence that he goes back to school...(goes改为went)
3.启承转合查连词
为使短文结构严谨，短文中往往会出现好多连词。这些连词的使用，在结构和意义上都要通顺流畅，恰如其分。如：It started to rise higher again.So it was still too close to the water. (So改为But)
4.文通理顺查逻辑
文通即行文合乎英语词法、句法；理顺指行文逻辑符合人们的认知规律，即符合常理。如：The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up.(第二个up改为down)
短文改错(2013·昭通市统检)
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.
I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late If you are available that time, please inform me.
Thank a lot!
答案：
I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you next weekend, just because my elder sister come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted I should pick up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to what has changed in our city.
I want to express my again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks ？ If you are available that time, please inform me.
a lot!
(2013·绍兴市二模)
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
答案：
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the of English, so I got up early every morning, English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. I'm getting more and more interested learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
短文改错
A person’s age no longer tells you something about 76. _______
his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer 77. ________
a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. ________
work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. ________
that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________
a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81. ________
It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________
president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________
man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _______
all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________
【参考答案】
76. something → anything 77. healthy → health 78. which → when
（或 year∧ in） 79. start → starts 80. when∧ to 81. was
82．√ 83.or ∧ a 84. What →As 85. public’s → public
【重庆南开中学】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．
to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners 77．
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It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy 79．
your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till 80．
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be to come.
Hope to see you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Hua四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮讲解及练习（1）及答案
高考英语专题之短文改错
从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查要点的主要方面有：
知识点一：词法性错误
1.冠词：冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
(1)After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.
解析　因hour以元音音素开头。 答案　a→an
(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.
解析　因此处并非特指，而是泛指。 答案　the→a
(3)Good health is person's most valuable possession.
解析　这里的a表泛指。 答案　person's前加a
(4)Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.
解析　此处的winter holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。 答案　a→the
(5)Suddenly，I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.
解析　catch sight of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见” 答案　去掉a
2.名词：名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
(6)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream.
解析　因“水”为物质名词，不可数。 答案　waters→water
(7)There are branch library in many villages.
解析　因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。 答案　library→libraries
(8)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon.
解析　some time意为“某时”。 答案　times→time
(9)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.
解析　因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots of。 答案　question→questions
3.代词： 短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
(10)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.
解析　因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。 答案　去掉it
(11)When we walked to the car，Bill smiled and shook head.
解析　汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake one's head。 答案　head前加his
(12)We climb everywhere，not only in America. They have been to Europe many times.
解析　前后人称不一致。 答案　They→We
(13)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
解析　因前面的the Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。 答案　his→their
4.形容词与副词：形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。包括近义形容词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以－ly结尾的副词和不是以－ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词－ing形式和动词－ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a bit，a little，much，far，many，a lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。
(14)Last Sunday，police cars hurried to the taller building in New York.
解析　因从含义上看此处应是最高级。 答案　taller→tallest
(15)As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.
解析　因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。 答案　去掉more
5.介词与介词短语：短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，reply，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory over，advantage over，respect for，prize for等。
(16)Bill insisted in staying near the car.
解析　insist on为固定搭配。 答案　in→on
(17)When they came down，the police were angry to them.
解析　要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be angry with sb。 答案　to→with
(18)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.
解析　因其前的get是及物动词。 答案　去掉for
6.动词：除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。
(19)Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.
解析　因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。 答案　seeing→seen
(20)Books may be keep for four weeks.
解析　因此处要用被动语态。 答案　keep→kept
(21)...and let you know when the book you want has returned.
解析　因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。 答案　returned前加been
(22)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.
解析　由句意可知。 答案　go→come
(23)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.
解析　因此处缺谓语动词。 答案　eager前加were
7.非谓语动词：短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
(24)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.
解析　因为want后要接不定式。 答案　wanted后加to
(25)...rather than go into the forest and getting lost.
解析　因为get与其前的go并列。 答案　getting→get
(26)Modern people know more about health，have better food，and to live in clearer surroundings.
解析　因为live与其前的know，have并列。 答案　去掉live前的to
(27)...you pay the cost of send a postcard，the librarian will write to you.
解析　因为介词后接动名词作宾语。 答案　send→sending
短文改错。
Women，present and ancient， at the home and 1．______
abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few 2．______
people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly． 3．______
It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short 4．______
of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with 5．______
nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in 6．______
too many,that means hair has already used too much 7．______
nourishment which body gives it to the head．As time passes， 8．______
brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______
(头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened． 10．______
【参考答案】Key 10
1．去掉the 2．that─which 3．her─their 4．was─is
5．falls─fall 6．minutes—minute
7．many─much 8．去掉it 9 lead后加to 10．√
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying,
“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people make poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time oversleeping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
realized wasting time equal to wasting part of their life. 80．
They always regret having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84．
of poverty and even death. 85．
【重庆南开中学】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying,
“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people make poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time oversleeping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
realized wasting time equal to wasting part of their life. 80．
They always regret having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84．
of poverty and even death. 85．
【2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试】
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.
【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
76.invite→inviting。 现在分词作状语，故invite改为inviting。
77. families→family her修饰family，应用单数形式。78.
79. careless→carelessly 修饰written应用careless的副词形式。
80.help前the去掉。ask sb for help向某人求助，help为不可数名词，故去掉the。
81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。
82.read前加to。be able to do sth能做某事。
83.chemist’s前加a。chemist在文中第一次出现，故应用不定冠词a。
84. but→and。 此处的前后分句是并列关系，不是转折关系，故用and。
85. will→would。 主句为过去时，从句也应用过去时，故will改为would。