Module 9 Great inventions Unit 2 Writing课件(共24张PPT)外研版九年级英语上册

(共24张PPT)
Module 9 Great Inventions
Unit 2 Will books be replaced by the Internet？
（Writing）
Great inventions
... ...
printing
gunpowder
campass
papermaking
Let’s review
Will books be replaced by the Internet
Life with paper and printing
The world before printed books
The world after the invention of printing
Technology and books
The future of books
Your opinion
Will Why
Let’s review
books Advantages
Disadvantages
Internet Advantages
Disadvantages
Let’s practise
books Advantages
Disadvantages
Internet Advantages
Disadvantages
Let’s practise
be good for our eyesight
cheap to buy
be friendly to old people ...
bigger and heavier
take up too much space
... ...
smaller and lighter
A much larger amount of information can be stored in more varied forms...
be harmful to eyes
get lost in computer games ...
Let’s learn 1
Writing tips 1:A good structure can make your writing clearly and logically. 合理的结构使文章条理清晰且有逻辑
A good structure
Beginning
Body
Ending
In my opinion, books can/can't be replaced by the Internet.
Reason 1
Reason 2
Reason 3
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Read the sentences from the passage and notice how we give reasons and results.
1. Books were only produced one at a time by hand. As a result, there were not many books.
2. Because there were not many books, few people learnt to read.
3. These machines are smaller and lighter than books, so they are easy to carry.
Writing tips 2:Linking words will make your writing fluent and reasonable 衔接词使行文流畅且有理有据
Let’s learn 2
Now work in pairs. Ask and answer the questions. Write full sentences with as a result,because or so.
1. Why is it hard to imagine a world without printing
2. What was the result of few books being produced
3.What happened after the printing technology developed
4. What will happen to the books in the future Why
1. Why is it hard to imagine a world without printing
2. What was the result of few books being produced
3.What happened after the printing technology developed
4. What will happen to the books in the future Why
It’s hard to imagine a world without printing because we have so many printed things now.
Few books were produced and, as a result, few people could read.
After printing technology developed, books were cheaper, so more people learnt how to read.
Books might not be needed in the future because the Internet is growing fast.
Writing tips 3: Passive voice can make your writing more convincing.被动语态使文章更有说服力
Let’s learn 3
Read the sentences from the passage and notice the tenses we use.
1. Books were only produced one at a time by hand.
2. Printing was invented in China.
3.A much larger amount of information can be stored in more varied forms on the Internet than in books.
Writing tips 3: Passive voice can make your writing more convincing.(被动语态使文章更有说服力)
Let’s Practise
Change the sentences into passive voice（被动语态）
1. We can pass the books.
2. A book can only store a small amount of information.
Books can be passed.
Only a small amount of information can be stored in a book.
Let’s Write
In my opinion, books can/can't be replaced by the Internet ... ...
Let’s evaluate（评价）
Does it have any grammar mistakes Yes No
Does it have a good structure Yes No
Do you use linking words Yes No
Do you use passive voice Yes No
Do you like your passage Yes No
How many stars can you get
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book. Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
a student’s writing practice
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
A good structure: Beginning, Body and Ending
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book. Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
Linking words：because, first of all, what's more, finally, as a result, so
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book. Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result,books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
passive voice：books can't be replaced by the Internet,
books can be passed forever
Does it have any grammar mistakes Yes No
Does it have a good structre Yes No
Does he/she use linking words Yes No
Does he/she use passive voice Yes No
Do you like his/her passage Yes No
a five-star passage
a six-star passage
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book
Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
Writing tips 4: More supporting details are good for explanation 更多细节来支撑说明理由
so that we can understand
these things more quickly and review them more often.
Will books be replaced by the Internet
Writing tips 5: Try to use both simple sentences and complex sentences（简单句和复合句交替使用）
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book so that we can understand these things more quickly and review them more often. Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
there's no doubt that
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, there's no doubt that reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book so that we can understand these things more quickly and review them more often. Finally, as middle school students, we have the duty
to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed forever.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
Writing tips 6: Make full use of the vocabulary高级词汇的使用
responsibility
from generation to generation.
Will books be replaced by the Internet
In my opinion, books can't be replaced by the Internet because there are more advantages of the traditional books.
First of all, there's no doubt that reading books is good for our eyesight. What's more, when reading books, we can make notes in the book so that we can understand these things more quickly and review them more often. Finally, as middle school students, we have the responsibility to protect these traditional things and hope that books can be passed from generation to generation.
As a result, books are still popular with people all over the world.So I hold the view that books can't be replaced by the Internet.
after modification(修改)
In summary
Writing tips 1:A good structure can make your writing clearly and logically. 合理的结构使文章条理清晰且有逻辑
Writing tips 2:Linking words will make your writing fluent and reasonable 衔接词使行文流畅且有理有据
Writing tips 3: Passive voice can make your writing more convincing被动语态使文章更有说服力
Writing tips 4: More supporting details are good for explanation 更多细节来支撑说明理由
Writing tips 5: Try to use both simple sentences and complex sentences
简单句和复合句交替使用
Writing tips 6: Make full use of the vocabulary高级词汇的使用
Homework
Polish your writing according to the writing tips.