中考英语作文精讲课件(共32张PPT)

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中考英语作文
专项精讲
Cont.
中考英语作文评分标准
英语写作的基本要素
常见作文类型与考试策略
写作提升方法
考试应对技巧与心态调整
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中考英语作文评分标准
第五档（13-15分）
①能写明全部要点
②文章中语法无误
③行文连贯且通顺（作文结构划分合理，正确使用过渡语言）
④表达清楚且丰富（能正确地使用时态，词汇、句型等丰富）
第四档（10-12分）
12分：写明全部要点；分段明确；时态、词汇、句型的丰富性较第五档稍差一些
①能写明全部或大部分内容要点
②文章中有少量语法错误
③行文基本连贯
④表达基本清楚
第三档（7-9分）
①能写明部分内容要点
②文章中有较多语法错误
③尚能达意
第二档（4-6分）
①只能写出少部分内容要点
②文章中有很多语法错误
③只有个别句子可读
第一档（1-3分）
①只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词或1-2个要点
②正确抄些全部参考词汇给1分；写出相关要点的词组酌情给2-3分
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英语写作的基本要素
一、审题要清　　看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。　　
　　
二、要点明确　　要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。　
　　
三、列出提纲　　为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。　
——不同类型作文，掌握不同表述思路的模板。
首先，点明要叙述的人或事
其次，对要叙述的人或事进行详细的介绍。
最后，发表感受
四、写顺全文　　写短文时要做到五个方面：　　
1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。　　
2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。　　
3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法，
例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写.
例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。　　
4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：
外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等
颜色：red，yellow，blue，white，green，brown，black等
心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest-ed等
情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。　　
　　
四、写顺全文　　写短文时要做到五个方面：　　
5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…;转折关系：but,yet,how-ever…;时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系：so，there-fore，asaresult…;目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…;列举：for example ,such as…;总结性：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…　
五、没有病句　　
(1)看文体格式是否正确规范。　　
(2)看有无语法或用词上的错误。　　
(3)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。　　
(4)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。　　
六、先打草稿
　　
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常见作文类型与考试策略
记叙文-写人
一、体裁解读
写人记叙文是对某一个特定的人进行描述的文章，一般也称之为“人物简介”。考生可以讲述该人物的特点、年龄、兴趣爱好、健康状况、工作态度等，还可适当加入一些对人物的评价，将记叙之人生动形象地表现出来。
二、写作模板
- is my (介绍对象). He/She was born in and is from (人物出生背景). He/She is meters in height,looking (外貌特征).
He/She is good at (特长) and is always ready to help others.What he/she impressed me is (重点描述).
Never will I forget the day when (实例说明).Without his/her help, (总结事件)
That is him/her, a and (总结人物特点). I like him/her very much.
介绍人物的背景及外貌
介绍人物特征并记述一个典型事件
总结人物特点并发表议论
三、经典句式
1、He/She was born on.…(time)in.….(place).
他/她出生在……(时间)……(地点)
2、His/Her family was so poor/rich that...
他/她的家庭是如此的贫穷/富裕以至于……
3、His/Her father was so strict with him/her...
他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉…
4、He deserves/is worth our respect.他值得我们尊重。
5、I will respect and love...forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴...
记叙文-写事
一、体裁解读
写事记叙文即记录发生在自己身上，或者听见、看见的事情。写记叙文时要注意5W+H(who,why,when,where,what,how)原则，其中人物和时间是最重要的，一定要讲清楚。还要注意时态，因为事情发生了才能记录，一般均是使用过去时。
二、写作模板
- ( 表明难忘之事 )will be unforgettableto me inall my life.
It was a ( 事件 背景 ) day. I was about to when (事件时间) . (事情具体过
程).Finally, (事情结果)
What had happened really left a deep impression on me.From this experience,I learned that (从中得到的经验或启示)
开门见山表明难忘之事
记述整个事件的经过和结果
从事件中得到了启示
三、经典句式
1、This summer holiday,I went to ...with ..,which was an unforgettable experience for me.
这个暑假，我和……去了……,那是我难忘的经历。
2、I was about to...suddenly...我正要……,突然，
3、The view was so beautiful that...景色如此美丽，以至于……
4、From this experience,I learn that Ishould...从这次经历中，我学习到了我应该……
5、I am looking forward to coming here again next holiday.
我期待着下个假期还能来这儿。
6、Once there was a...从前，有一个……
7、In thepast...years,...has impressed me deeply
在过去的……年里，……给我留下了深刻的印象。
8、...give us the impression that...………给我们……的印象。
9、..spend his childhood in ...……在……度过了他的童年。
议论文-观点对比型
一、体裁解读
议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。语言必须简练、准确，可适当使用名言警句。而观点对比型议论文就是指对同一问题，人们有不同的看法。
二、作文模板
The topic of (主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.
Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of (支持A的理由一).What is more, (理由二).Moreover, (理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly, (支持B的理由一)- Secondly (Besides)， (理由二) . Thirdly (Finally), (理由三).
From my point of view,I think (我的观点).
引出议论的主题
说明两方的观点及理由
总结自己的观点及理由
三、经典句式
1、We had a discussion about/on whether ...
我们做了一个关于/是否……的讨论。
2、The opinions on ...vary from person to person.
大家对……都有自己的观点。
3、Some people think/believe that ..一些人认为/相信……
4、Others argue that ..for ...其他人争辩……,因为……
5、As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that ...
就我而言，我坚定地支持…
6、In my opinion,it would be betterto ..for..
在我看来，做……更好，因为……
议论文-说明利弊型
一、体裁解读
议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。语言必须简练、准确，可适当使用名言警句。说明利弊型议论文就是针对题目所给的观点进行利弊两方面的分析。
二、作文模板
Nowadays many people prefer_________because it has asignificant role in our daily life.
Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.Firstly,____-____(优点一).Secondly,_____(优点二).
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspectsare alsoapparent.One of the important disadvantages is that_ _________(缺点一).To make matters worse,(缺点二).
我的看法)Therefore,I would like to (理由).because
介绍一种社会现象，并引出论点
阐述优点并论证
阐述缺点并论证
总结自己的观点及理由
三、经典句式
1、It is obvious/apparent that...plays a vital part/role in...很显然，……在……中有着/扮演着很重要的作用/角色。
2、has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects,……既有优点也有缺点。
3、Their opinions of...vary from person to person.关于……的观点不一。
4、From my point ofview,every coin has two sides.在我看来，任何事物都有两面性。
5、In spite of...,the advantages greatly outweighthe disadvantages.尽管……,好处远远超过不好之处。
议论文-解决问题型
一、体裁解读
议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。语言必须简练、准确，可适当使用名言警句。而解决问题型议论文是针对题目所给的现状或者问题提出相应的建议。
二、作文模板
In recent days,we have to face aproblem of________,which is becoming more and more_______.First,______(现状一).Second._______________(现状二)
Confronted with_______,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with thesituation.
- For one thing,_____________(解决方法一).For another,_____法二).Finally,_______(解决方法三).
Personally,I believe that__________(我的解决方法)
阐述一种现象并具体说明现状
提出解决方案
说明我的解决方法
三、经典句式
1、Nowadays,there is growing concern about the problem/phenomenon that...如今，越来越多的人开始关注……问题/现象。
2、Confrontedwith..,we should take a seriesof effective measures to copewith thesituation.面对……,我们应该采取一系列的措施来应对目前的形势。
3、Only in this way can we...只有这样，我们才能……
4、We should choose a suitable wayto ..so that we...我们应该选择一个合适的方式来……,这样我们…
5、Compared to/In comparison with..,..are more...与……相比，…更……
6、I can't entirely agree with the idea that...I believe...我不能完全同意……的观点。我认为…
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写作提升方法
中考英语作文5个结构和10个高分技巧
一、结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结
二、要点：全，围绕中心
三、逻辑：逻辑词
递进：first, second, third, finally; first of all, in addition/what’s more/ more over(都是另外的意思), in a word/all in all(表示总结); last but not least(最后但同样重要的是)
转折：but, yet, however等
因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, so/such...that...
总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary
四、语法：硬性要求，如人称、时态、语态、从句、单复数等问题
五、亮点：高级词汇和加分句型
1. 表达不同观点看法的句型
① Different people have different ideas/opinions on this problem. 关于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点
② Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人认为做某事是....的
③ Some of them are against the idea that it is.... 他们中有些人反对....的想法
④ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that......(观点一或二). It is not only because......, but also because.... All in all, the more..., the more...
2. 解决问题的句型
① In recent days, we have to face a problem--______, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我们不得不面临一个问题：_______, 这个问题变得越来越严重；
② Faced with..., we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the situation. For one thing, ........(解决方法一). For another, ......(解决方法二). Finally, .......(解决方法三).
③ I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better. 我相信如果每个人都能对....做出贡献，这个...将会变得越来越好。
3. 说明原因句型
① The reason for this are as follows. 这一点的几种原因如下
② For one reason is that ....... For another reason is that ..... 一个原因是...., 另一个原因是....
③ On the one hand, .......; On the other hand,....... 一方面.....，另一方面.....
4. 说明利弊型句型
① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .......(作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in...(题目议题).
② Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常来说，人们相信有如下几点优势。
③ Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一；In addition, 缺点二.
④ To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In that case, we will make a better use of ..... 总之，我们应该尽力充分利用其优势，同时减少缺点。如果那样的话，我们将能更好的利用....
5. 正反观点式句型
① Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should..... Our opinions are divided on this topic. (导入，观点有分歧)
② Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出2-3个理由) However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点). Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more...In addition...(列出2-3个反对理由)
③ Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms, so I support it. (个人观点)
6. 个人观点论述句型
① As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for this are as follows. (亮明自己的观点）
② First of all..... Secondly.....Besides..... (列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由)
③ In conclusion, I believe that...... (总结，构成总分总结构)
7. 提出建议类句型
① I’m so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in ...... in you last last letter(背景介绍). As far as I am concerned, it would be wise to take the following suggestions. (导入下文)
② I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with.
③ To begin with, I’d like to suggest that you should ..... Because it can ....... In addition, if I were you, I would ....... This is a good way of ...... What’s more, you are supposed to....... Only then you will.....(列举建议内容以及理由)
④ I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. (表达愿望)
8. 表达活动邀请类句型
① I know that you are interested in.... And I am writing to invite you to take part in..... (背景介绍，提出邀请)
② There is an activity about.......(活动名称), which will be held .......(活动地点). It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on July 1st(时间) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, .....will be put on. (活动内容).
③ Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time. (再次提出邀请)
④ I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)
9. 表达求助类句型
① ......(背景介绍). I find it is quite hard to ..... (提出问题). Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/ give me a hand. (表达目的)
② I’m faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with....... What’s more..... What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to ......
③ Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.
10. 表达感谢类句型
① Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多亏……）
Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
② Without your help, it’s impossible for me to…. (没有你的帮助，……对我来视说是不可能的)
Without your help, it’s impossible for me to get such good grades.
③ Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的帮助使得我做某事成为可能。)
Your help makes it possible for me to change myself.
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考试应对技巧与心态调整
1、写作步骤：审题、列要点、加要点、连要点(过渡词及过渡句)、美化升级。
2、推荐根据要点进行分段写作，方便批卷老师快速阅读找要点。
3、写作首要保证要点齐全，内容充实，观点明确，无错误，用简单的句式表达
也可得到满意分数；如果写作基础不错的同学，可以运用高级词汇，丰富句式
及深刻立意让自己的作文冲刺满分！
4、预留25分钟，先打要点草稿，规划整体大纲，再誊写。
Thank you for your time!