Module 3 We have not found life on any other planets yet. Writing 课件(共15张PPT) 外研版八年级下册

(共15张PPT)
Module 3 Unit 2
We have not found life on any other planets yet.
Writing
Retell the passage with the help of clues below.
Review
1
2
能根据提示正确描述图片, 介绍外星人的活动。
能运用现在完成时编写简短的科幻故事。
目标:能正确描述图片，用现在完成时编写简短的科幻故事
Activity 1
Free Talk
Do you believe in the existence of aliens
And if so, what do the aliens often do
Activity 2
5
Look at the picture from a science story for children and answer the questions.
What have the scientists just received
(a massage from one of our spaceships)
They have just received a message from one of our spaceships.
1. Where has the spaceship landed (Mars)
2. What has the spaceship discovered (people on Mars)
3. Why have the people on Mars not sent us a message
(do not know how to)
4. Why have the people on Mars not visited us on the earth
(do not know how to)
It has landed on Mars.
It has discovered people on Mars.
Because they do not know how to send us a message.
They haven't visited us because they do not know how to visit us on the earth.
Activity 3
6
Write a passage to describe the picture. Use your answers below to help you.
It has landed on Mars.
It has discovered people on Mars.
Because they do not know how to send us a message.
They haven't visited us because they do not know how to visit us on the earth.
What do aliens often do
go swimming
play football
lie in the chair
listen to the music
...
read books
What do the aliens often do
How to write a passage to describe the picture
Writing Steps: → → → →
beautify
think
list
add
connect
审→列→加→连→美
Think（审题）
Group Discussion
List（用简单句列出文章的要点）
话题:_______________________________________
人称:________________ 时态:_________________
列出要点：
以第三人称为主
以现在完成时为主
描述外星人活动的图片
where — the spaceship landed; aliens
why — the people on Mars not sent us a
message; the people on Mars not
visited us on the earth
what — the spaceship discover; activities
Add (将要点合理加在不同部分使文章完整)
Group Discussion
正文
where — the spaceship landed; aliens
why — the people on Mars not sent us a
message; the people on Mars not
visited us on the earth
what — the spaceship discover; activities
开头
We have just received a message from our spaceship to Mars.
结尾
In a word, .../We hope... (可省)
审→列→加→连→美
Group Discussion
连词:
过渡词：
表示列举的词：
总结性的短语、句子：
when, if, because, so, but,…
therefore (因此), besides, also, what’s more...
First, ...Second,...
in my opinion, in a word, in short,
in general, I think…
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
time to write
Requirements:
★ 草稿
★ 自检错误
★ 文字推敲、润饰
★ 初步定稿
Activity 4
6
Write a passage to describe the picture.
Activity 5
Task 1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并
改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。
Task 2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生
习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学
提出修改意见。
We have just received a message from our spaceship to Mars. Our spaceship has discovered aliens there. They have never sent us a message because they don’t know how to communicate with us. They have not visited the earth because they don’t know how to fly to our planet, and they prefer life on Mars. They seem very happy on their planet. They have used parts from the other spaceships from the earth to make TVs, radios, etc. We hope they don’t do the same with this one.
Show time
Pick out one or two good compositions for class display.