Module 9 Friendship Unit 2 Writing 课件（共15张ppt） 外研版八年级下册

(共15张PPT)
Module 9 Unit 2
I believe that the world is what you think it is.
Writing
Retelling
time
Retell the passage with the correct form of
the words in the box.
a gift
problem
smile
the smile changed my life
I believe
a smile
1.
2.
3.
A girl:
Felt the touch:
Made me feel: happy, lively and ______
Started to talk–learnt to ______ people
in their circle of friends.
Smile at the _______and it will smile back.
No one _____ me.
I was _____ and_____ to make friends.
I couldn’t talk to anyone about my problem.
passed–turned back–look at me– ________
bright and ______
The world is what you think it is.
knew
smiled
friendly
lonely
afraid
warm
world lonely
smiled trust friendly afraid
knew
warm
world
trust
1
2
能根据所给要素找出文章中的对应段落。
能根据提示写一篇因某人或某事改变你
人生的文章。
Read the passage again. Find the paragraphs
that describe the following stages.
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What happened and when.
Where she was and how she felt.
Why she felt that way.
What happened one day.
What happened suddenly.
What happened after this.
What happened later.
What she thinks now.
Activity 1
What happened and when. —————
Where she was and how she felt. —————
Why she felt that way. —————
What happened one day. —————
What happened suddenly. —————
What happened after this. —————
What happened later. —————
What she thinks now. —————
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Paragraph 6
Paragraph 7
Paragraph 8
目标:根据要素写一篇因某人或某事改变你人生的文章
Activity 2
When reading a story, focus on:
who
when
where + 陈述语句
what
why
wh-questions
Part 1-- When and where the story happened
What happened
Part 2-- How you felt then
Why you felt like that
What changed your life
Part 3-- What happened after this/later
What you think now
Activity 3
Is there anything that changed your life
Write a passage about someone or something
that changed your life.
For example:
1. A new teacher makes a subject easy.
2. A letter arrives from a forgotten relative.
3. Someone always full of fun and kindness
moves into your building.
Step I: Think of an event that changed your life.
Step II: Make notes about your stories, using the stages in Activity 5 to help you.
Step III: Use your notes to write a passage or a story. Check your spelling and make sure that all your words are in the correct form.
Proverbs（谚语）
1. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难的朋友才是真正的朋友。（患难见真交。）
2. A faithful friend is hard to find. 知音难觅，挚友难求。
3. Make your enemy your friend. 化敌为友。
4. A friend is a second self. 朋友就是另一个自我。
5. A good friend is my nearest relation. 良友如近亲。
6. A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
人生没有朋友，犹如人生没有了太阳。
7. A father is a treasure, a brother is a comfort, but a friend is both.
父亲是财富, 兄弟是安慰,朋友兼而有之。
8. A friend is easier lost than found. 朋友易失，不易得。
拓展
Writing
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Requirements:
★ 草稿
★ 自检错误
★ 文字推敲、润饰
★ 初步定稿
Activity 4
Now write a passage about someone or something that changed your life.
Activity 5
Task 1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并
改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。
Task 2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生
习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学
提出修改意见。
Checking
Mum and Dad walked in with a big box. They put it
down on the floor and said “Happy Birthday”, and then your nose came over the side and I saw you for the first time.
I was ten and we had moved to a new town. It was a nice town, but I didn’t know anyone and the places in the town did not feel familiar.
I stayed indoors a lot. I told people I liked being alone. I did not do any exercise. I became quite lazy. But then you came along — my dear friend and pet, Spot. From the moment you came out of your box and I saw you, my new dog, white with black spots, a cute face and a tail that never stopped moving, my life changed.
I became noisy again and we were always going out for walks and runs in the park. Before you came into my life, I did not make friends because I often sat at home alone. But when people saw me going out every day with my lovely dog, they started smiling and saying hello to me. The whole town seemed to be my friend.
Thank you, Spot — you have brought me many new friends. But don’t worry, you’ll always be my favourite!
Show time
Pick out one or two good compositions for class display.