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2024年外研版八年级英语上册模块话题书面表达专练
1．近年来，使用手机引发的事故越来越多。某英文报纸开辟了“Mobile-related Accidents”专栏，征集案例，警示大众。请你根据下图用英语写一篇记叙文，叙述Liu Mei和Li Dong放学路上发生的事情。
提示词汇： 1. 路边 roadside；2. 耳机 headphones；3. 撞上 bump into/hit；4. 鸣喇叭 honk the horn；5. 喇叭声 honk
注意：
1. 短文应涵盖前三幅图片中的主要信息，并对第四幅图片中可能发生的情况做出合理推断和简要评述。
2. 词数：不少于80 词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
One day, Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way back home.
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2．假如你是学校小记者，目睹了一起交通事故。请你根据下面的提示，以“A traffic accident”为题，写一篇80—90词的英语短文，报道一下这次交通事故的具体情况。
Time Yesterday morning
Place Xinhua Street
Reason A girl: wait to cross the road The car: not stop in time The driver: a bit tired
Result hit the girl; hurt badly; call the police; take…to the hospital; two policemen come; ask some questions
Your feelings ……..
A traffic accident
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3．假如你是校报英文专栏的小记者，昨天（1月5日）放学路上你目睹了一起交通亊故，你很难过。请根据以下提示写一篇事故报道，发表在校报上。
时间 昨天下午4:30
地点 在校门口附近的十字路口
事故的经过 一名男孩边走路边低头玩手机，他没有注意到红绿灯。 在绿灯将要变红灯时，一辆轿车快速冲过马路，撞到了这名男孩。
结果 男孩受伤严重；手机也碎了。过了一会救护车赶到了，把男孩送到了医院。
你认为 ……
要求：
（1）词数：不少于80词，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：十字路口 crossing；救护车 ambulance；低头 lower one’s head
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你叫李梅，昨天下午你在路上目睹了一起交通事故，请根据以下表格中的内容，用英语写一篇 80词左右的短文描述一下这起事故。
时间 昨天下午大约四点
地点 解放路
起因 一个男孩边骑自行车边听音乐，闯了红灯
结果 一辆小轿车把男孩撞倒在地，男孩腿部受伤, 司机把男孩送到附近的医院
教训 遵守交通规则，小心出行
A traffic accident
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．中小学生的暑假安全一直是广大家长关注的问题。假设你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封邮件。
要点：
1.家庭安全。小心用电用火，外出时关好门窗；
2. 游泳安全。不独自去游泳，不去河里、湖里游泳；
3. 补充至少一条。
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about our school’s safety rules for summer holiday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
6．你校英文报正在开展有关交通安全的主题征文活动。假如你是Tom，上个月发生了一起车祸。请你根据下面五幅图中的内容，写篇英语短文给校报投稿，讲述你的这次经历。
要求：
1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：80左右。
参考词汇：crosswalk人行横道， directly径直地， traffic交通
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7．请根据下面信息，描述一下李明的一次经历。
时间 下午3:45 地点 青城路，靠近华盛超市 天气 阴，大风
事件 车祸。轿车与摩托车相撞。摩托车骑手伤势严重，人们把他送到医院。
原因 摩托车不遵守交通规则且车速太快。
事发时李明正在超市购物，看到事故发生，感到很害怕，也为骑手担心。
感想 1. 每个人应该遵守规则，注意安全。 2. 其他。
要求：1. 短文要包含表格中所有信息，可适当拓展。
2. 注意时态，上下文连贯。
3. 不少于80词，不得出现真实的学校和姓名。
参考词汇：traffic交通；obey遵守；motorcycle摩托车
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8．图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词： accident, hurt one’s leg, take…to the hospital, visit
要求：
1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数: 80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整， 语法正确，意思连贯， 合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名， 否则不得分。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是王涛，请根据下面信息提示，写一篇英语短文，描述你上周日受伤看医生的过程。
提示：
起因 跑步时摔倒，膝盖受伤，无法走路；
经过 父母带到医院，照X光（X-ray）；
结果 需一天三次服药，卧床休息两天。
要求：（1）文中需包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数：70个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
I’m Wang Tao. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行安全教育，并征集发生在你们身边的关于安全的案例。请你根据提示写一篇安全案例。
（1）几个小男孩在马路上踢足球；
（2）你的同学李雷骑车从那里经过，被足球击中；
（3）自行车行驶得很快，李雷从车上摔了下来；
（4）所幸李雷伤的并不重；
（5）小男孩们一起向他道歉；
（6）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数：70词左右。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：say sorry to道歉
One day, on my way home from school, I saw an accident.
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2024年外研版八年级英语上册模块话题书面表达专练
1．近年来，使用手机引发的事故越来越多。某英文报纸开辟了“Mobile-related Accidents”专栏，征集案例，警示大众。请你根据下图用英语写一篇记叙文，叙述Liu Mei和Li Dong放学路上发生的事情。
提示词汇： 1. 路边 roadside；2. 耳机 headphones；3. 撞上 bump into/hit；4. 鸣喇叭 honk the horn；5. 喇叭声 honk
注意：
1. 短文应涵盖前三幅图片中的主要信息，并对第四幅图片中可能发生的情况做出合理推断和简要评述。
2. 词数：不少于80 词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
One day, Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way back home.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是学校小记者，目睹了一起交通事故。请你根据下面的提示，以“A traffic accident”为题，写一篇80—90词的英语短文，报道一下这次交通事故的具体情况。
Time Yesterday morning
Place Xinhua Street
Reason A girl: wait to cross the road The car: not stop in time The driver: a bit tired
Result hit the girl; hurt badly; call the police; take…to the hospital; two policemen come; ask some questions
Your feelings ……..
A traffic accident
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是校报英文专栏的小记者，昨天（1月5日）放学路上你目睹了一起交通亊故，你很难过。请根据以下提示写一篇事故报道，发表在校报上。
时间 昨天下午4:30
地点 在校门口附近的十字路口
事故的经过 一名男孩边走路边低头玩手机，他没有注意到红绿灯。 在绿灯将要变红灯时，一辆轿车快速冲过马路，撞到了这名男孩。
结果 男孩受伤严重；手机也碎了。过了一会救护车赶到了，把男孩送到了医院。
你认为 ……
要求：
（1）词数：不少于80词，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：十字路口 crossing；救护车 ambulance；低头 lower one’s head
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你叫李梅，昨天下午你在路上目睹了一起交通事故，请根据以下表格中的内容，用英语写一篇 80词左右的短文描述一下这起事故。
时间 昨天下午大约四点
地点 解放路
起因 一个男孩边骑自行车边听音乐，闯了红灯
结果 一辆小轿车把男孩撞倒在地，男孩腿部受伤, 司机把男孩送到附近的医院
教训 遵守交通规则，小心出行
A traffic accident
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．中小学生的暑假安全一直是广大家长关注的问题。假设你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封邮件。
要点：
1.家庭安全。小心用电用火，外出时关好门窗；
2. 游泳安全。不独自去游泳，不去河里、湖里游泳；
3. 补充至少一条。
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about our school’s safety rules for summer holiday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
6．你校英文报正在开展有关交通安全的主题征文活动。假如你是Tom，上个月发生了一起车祸。请你根据下面五幅图中的内容，写篇英语短文给校报投稿，讲述你的这次经历。
要求：
1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：80左右。
参考词汇：crosswalk人行横道， directly径直地， traffic交通
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．请根据下面信息，描述一下李明的一次经历。
时间 下午3:45 地点 青城路，靠近华盛超市 天气 阴，大风
事件 车祸。轿车与摩托车相撞。摩托车骑手伤势严重，人们把他送到医院。
原因 摩托车不遵守交通规则且车速太快。
事发时李明正在超市购物，看到事故发生，感到很害怕，也为骑手担心。
感想 1. 每个人应该遵守规则，注意安全。 2. 其他。
要求：1. 短文要包含表格中所有信息，可适当拓展。
2. 注意时态，上下文连贯。
3. 不少于80词，不得出现真实的学校和姓名。
参考词汇：traffic交通；obey遵守；motorcycle摩托车
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词： accident, hurt one’s leg, take…to the hospital, visit
要求：
1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数: 80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整， 语法正确，意思连贯， 合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名， 否则不得分。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是王涛，请根据下面信息提示，写一篇英语短文，描述你上周日受伤看医生的过程。
提示：
起因 跑步时摔倒，膝盖受伤，无法走路；
经过 父母带到医院，照X光（X-ray）；
结果 需一天三次服药，卧床休息两天。
要求：（1）文中需包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数：70个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
I’m Wang Tao. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行安全教育，并征集发生在你们身边的关于安全的案例。请你根据提示写一篇安全案例。
（1）几个小男孩在马路上踢足球；
（2）你的同学李雷骑车从那里经过，被足球击中；
（3）自行车行驶得很快，李雷从车上摔了下来；
（4）所幸李雷伤的并不重；
（5）小男孩们一起向他道歉；
（6）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数：70词左右。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：say sorry to道歉
One day, on my way home from school, I saw an accident.
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1．例文
One day, Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way back home. Liu Mei was chatting on WeChat with her friend while Li Dong was listening to music on his mobile phone happily.
Suddenly Liu Mei bumped into a tree by the roadside and she gave a painful cry. What’s worse, Li Dong didn’t notice what had happened with his headphones on. He went on listening to music. Soon he moved onto the middle of the road. A car was coming from behind. The driver honked the horn loudly, but it was too late!
In the end, Li Dong was sent to hospital. Luckily the doctor saved his life, and he was out of danger. What a lesson!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述事故的起因；
第二步，描述事故发生的经过；
第三步，描述事故的结果及教训。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way back home在回家路上
②go on doing sth.继续做某事
③out of danger脱离危险
[高分句型]
①Liu Mei was chatting on We Chat with her friend while Li Dong was listening to music on his mobile phone happily. (while引导时间状语从句)
②The driver honked the horn loudly, but it was too late! (but引导并列句)
③What a lesson! (what引导的感叹句）
2．例文
A traffic accident
Yesterday morning, I saw a terrible traffic accident on Xinhua Street. A girl was waiting to cross the road while the lights were changing to red. The car behind her didn’t stop in time because the driver was a bit tired. It hit the girl and hurt her badly. Someone called the police and took the girl to the hospital. A few minutes later, two policemen came and asked the driver some questions about the accident.
I hope things like this will never happen again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应以“A traffic accident”为题，写一篇80—90词的英语短文，报道一下这次交通事故的具体情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明交通事故具体的日期、地点和人物；
第二步，具体阐述事故发生的原因和结果；
第三步，总结，表明自己对事故的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cross the road穿过马路
②in time及时
[高分句型]
I hope things like this will never happen again.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
3．例文：
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th. I saw a traffic accident on my way home.
The accident happened at 4:30 p.m. at the crossing near the school gate. A boy was using his mobile phone while he was walking. He lowered his head and put her heart into the phone. He didn’t pay attention to the traffic light. While the lights was changing to red, a car ran across the street quickly and hit the boy. The boy was badly hurt and his mobile phone was broken. What a terrible scene! After a while, an ambulance came and the driver sent the boy to the hospital quickly.
So we should obey the traffic rules and be careful on the road. I don’t think we should use the phone while walking. Do you agree with me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章内容除所给材料外需表达自己的看法，请勿遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明报道的主要内容；
第二步，详细阐述事故发生的时间、地点以及过程；
第三步，发表自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
②pay attention to注意
③agree with同意
[高分句型]
①A boy was using his mobile phone while he was walking.（时间状语从句）
②I don’t think we should use the phone while walking.（宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
A traffic accident
A traffic accident happened at about 4:00 pm yesterday on Jiefang Road. A boy was listening to music while he was riding a bike. When the traffic lights went red, he didn’t stop. A car hit him onto the ground. The boy’s legs were badly hurt. The driver sent the boy to the nearby hospital at once.
As students, we should follow the traffic rules. We must stop to wait while the traffic lights are red. It’s very dangerous to listen to music while you’re riding. So be careful when you are on the road.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这次事故的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍事故的起因和结果；
第三步，最后总结教训。
[亮点词汇]
① listen to music听音乐
② at once立刻
③ stop to do sth停下来做某事
[高分句型]
① A boy was listening to music while he was riding a bike.（while引导的时间状语从句）
② So be careful when you are on the road.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Dear David，
Glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about our school’s safety rules for summer holiday.
First, our teachers ask us to be careful with electricity wherever we are. Second, it is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. Also, we should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. What’s more, we are not allowed to swim alone, and we mustn’t swim in rivers or lakes. Most importantly, everyone is supposed to follow traffic rules and pay attention when crossing the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday!
Yours，
Wang Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点题，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述暑假安全规定，例如家庭安全、游泳安全、交通安全；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be careful with小心
②make sure确保
③are allowed to do允许做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, it is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents.（it固定句式）
②I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.（宾语从句）
6．例文
I’m Tom. Last month, I experienced a car accident that taught me a vital lesson about traffic safety.
I was walking home from school when I decided to cross the street without using the crosswalk. As I stepped out directly into the road, a car suddenly appeared. I wasn’t paying attention and got hit. Fortunately, the driver reacted quickly and the car stopped in time, but I still ended up with a broken leg. I was taken to the hospital where I had to recover for a few weeks.
This experience taught me to always use the crosswalk and pay attention to traffic, and I hope others learn from my mistake.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇介绍写作背景；
第二步，具体阐述车祸的过程及结果；
第三步，谈谈感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②pay attention to注意
③end up with最终以……结束
④learn from从……中学习
[高分句型]
①I experienced a car accident that taught me a vital lesson about traffic safety. (that引导的宾语从句)
②I was walking home from school when I decided to cross the street without using the crosswalk. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I was taken to the hospital where I had to recover for a few weeks. (where引导的定语从句)
7．例文：
One day, the weather was windy and cloudy. Li Ming was on the way to go shopping when he met a traffic accident at 3:45 p.m. It happened near Huasheng supermarket on the Road of Qingcheng. A car crashed with a motorcycle because the motorcycle rider didn’t obey the traffic rules and went too fast. Unluckily, the motorcycle rider badly injured and was sent to hospital by passers-by.
After witnessing the accident, Li Ming realized that everyone should follow traffic rules and pay attention to safety. Besides, without life, there is nothing. We should value our life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍当天的天气和李明的活动；
第二步，阐述交通事故的时间和具体情况；
第三步，最后表达对这次交通事故的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way to在去某地方的路上
②follow traffic rules遵守交通规则
[高分句型]
①After witnessing the accident, Li Ming realized that everyone should follow traffic rules and pay attention to safety.（that引导的宾语从句）
8．例文
I like playing basketball with my classmates. But last Saturday, I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. My classmates took me to the hospital quickly. The doctor put some medicine on the cut, and then put a bandage around the hurt part of the leg.
During my stay in the hospital, some of my classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork. That’s very kind of them. I will try my best to help others in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：图片中写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢和同学打篮球；
第二步，具体阐述上周六发生的事故；
第三步，最后表达对同学的感谢以及今后自己也会怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down跌倒
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
③try one’s best to do尽某人最大的努力做
[高分句型]
I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. （when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
I’m Wang Tao. Last Sunday morning, I fell down when I was running. I hurt my knee and I couldn’t walk. My parents took me to the hospital at once. I got an X-ray. The doctor told me that there was nothing serious with my knee, but I need to take some medicine three times a day. He also advised me to lie down and rest at home for two days. I hope I will get well soon!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容描述你上周日受伤看医生的过程，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍；
第二步，描述你上周日受伤看医生的过程；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down摔倒
②at once立刻
③lie down躺下
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday morning, I fell down when I was running. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②The doctor told me that there was nothing serious with my knee, but I need to take some medicine three times a day. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文：
One day, on my way home from school, I saw an accident. A few little boys were playing football on the road. My classmate Li Lei rode his bike along the road and was hit by the football. The bicycle was traveling very fast, and Li Lei fell off the bike. Fortunately, Li Lei was not seriously injured. The little boys apologized to him together, and he also forgave them. I don’t think we should play on the road. At the same time, we also need to pay attention to traffic safety.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍自己在放学回家的路上目睹了一场交通事故；
第二步，具体介绍交通事故发生的经过；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①on my way home在回家的路上
②fell off跌落
③apologize to向……道歉
④At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①A few little boys were playing football on the road.(过去进行时)
②I don’t think we should play on the road.(宾语从句)
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