题型六 书面表达
中考英语试题的书面表达考查的内容以日常生活为背景,以材料作文为主,话题涉及学生生活的各个方面。题型基本上属于半开放式,即有提示但并不是全提示,而是点到为止。
书面表达的解题技巧
A
(2024·河北)
假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴张军的课堂表
现记录(Class Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
Class Record Name:Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Did you listen to the teacher carefully √
Did you answer questions actively √
Did you ask any questions √
Did you work well in your group √
Did you take notes √
注意:(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Well done,Zhang Jun!You listened to the teacher carefully in class and
B
(2023·河北)
王梅的英国朋友Tony要来中国学习汉语,下面是Tony给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复。
You know, in English, given names(名字) come first and family names(姓) come last. How about Chinese names And can you help me choose a Chinese name and tell me its meaning
注意:(1)回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥;
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名,所起名字只限于备选名字;
(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
备选名字:王健(Wang Jian);李聪(Li Cong);张友好(Zhang Youhao)
Hi Tony,
I’m very happy to know that you’ll come to China to learn Chinese.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
A
(2024·江西)
我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间,增强时间管理意识,学校英语社团以“Making Better Use of Time”为题向学生征文,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1.When do you have free time
2.What do you often do in your free time (Give 3 examples)
3.Do you think your free time is better used Why or why not
要求:
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student,I have got more free time in recent years.
B
(2024·滨州)
生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西,如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华,你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动,请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.你珍惜什么;
2.描述你的一次经历;
3.谈谈这次经历给你的收获。
要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.
C
(2024·成都)
你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
D
(2024·天津)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
(1)上周四,王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。
(2)王红与老人交流后,主动帮他过马路。
(3)路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。
(4)王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:盲人 blind man 徘徊 wander
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
It has been two weeks since you wrote to me.I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday,
What do you think of the story Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
E
(2024·广东)
假设你叫李明,你校交换生Ethan在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难,他通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一封邮件,表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴,并提供帮助。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【详解答案】
河北中考·真题体验
A
One possible version:
Well done,Zhang Jun!You listened to the teacher carefully in class and answered questions actively.So you got high marks in most of your subjects.You worked well in your group and you showed your ability to us.However,you didn’t ask any questions and you didn’t take notes.So we couldn’t know if you needed help.
In my opinion,you should ask questions if you have any so that you can solve problems in time.What’s more,you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don’t understand.I hope my advice is of help.
B
One possible version:
Hi Tony,
I’m very happy to know that you’ll come to China to learn Chinese. There is no doubt that it is very important and useful to learn Chinese well.
We always put our family names first. They are from our families, and it’s surely our Chinese tradition. Then given names come last. Secondly, I prefer Li Cong as your Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like you! As far as I am concerned, the names are the culture of a country. A good name stands for good luck.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
2024中考·真题演练
A
One possible version:
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student,I have got more free time in recent years.I am always free on weekends.
When I am free,I have many activities.I usually play the piano and football.I like playing football very much.I often go to the park with my friends to play football on weekends.I have piano lessons twice a week.I also have plenty of time to exercise in the evening.Sometimes,my parents and I look at the stars outside.
I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment.
B
One possible version:
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.Let me tell a story about me.
Last summer,I wanted a new bike.But my family couldn’t afford it.I was very sad and upset.After three weeks,I saw an old bike standing in front of my house.“I don’t like the bike.It is too old.” My mother didn’t say anything after hearing my words.At that night,my father told me that my mother cooked some dishes in a restaurant to buy this bike.Although it was not the one that I wanted,it was my mother’s love.I regretted what I did and apologized to my mother.
From this experience,I realize that I should value what I have and the persons who love me.
C
One possible version:
Be a Good Team Member
There is an old saying in China,“Unity is strength.” It tells people the importance of teamwork.By discussing with members in the team,we can come up with better ideas.But how to be a good team member Here are some tips for you.
First,communicate more with each other.There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates.We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely.Second,work together on projects.When everybody adds fuel,the flames rise high.Finally,trust your teammates.
All in all,teamwork plays an important role in our daily lives.Let’s work together to build a brighter future.
D
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
It has been two weeks since you wrote to me.I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday,Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home.She offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man.When they crossed the road,the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him.I think Wang Hong is really a warm-hearted and kind girl.I should learn from her and try my best to help others.
What do you think of the story Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
E
One possible version:
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy.I believe I’m the buddy you want,as I have read many ancient Chinese poems and I have a deep understanding of them.I love ancient Chinese poems,and I am able to explain them in English.Also,I was born with a radio voice,so I can help you read the poems aloud correctly and beautifully.
If you agree to pair up with me,we could meet every Friday afternoon in the school garden.Perhaps we can finish reading ten poems a month.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming