【期末复习】Unit 1—Unit 5单元话题写作指南讲义（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】

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【期末复习（上）】Unit 1—Unit 5话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
假日活动是本单元涉及的话题内容，也是大家非常熟悉的一个写作话题。写这种记叙文时要根据事情发生的顺序展开。此类话题作文写作的
【常用表达】
(1).I went to...
(2).We took quite a few photos.
(3).It was wonderful.
(4).We all had a good time.
【典例】
假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩,你们玩得很快乐。请以“My happy weekend”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
时间:星期天早上8点 集合地点:学校门口
路程:骑自行车到达目的地约 30分钟 活动:拍照,玩游戏，野餐
感受:大家都度过了一个快乐的周末 ... ...
要求:1.词数:80左右(短文开头已给出,不计人总词数);
2.短文必须包含所给提示,但不得逐条翻译。
参考词汇:get together, ride, photo, games, picnic
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.
【模板】这是一篇表格提示类作文,时态为一般过去时，根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.①
At 8:00 on Sunday morning②, we got together③ at the school gate. When all of us arrived, we started. We liked riding, so we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes' ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took quite a few photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot.
All in all We all had a good time④.
【点评】
①文章开门见山,提出了上周末做的事情。
②以时间为主线叙述了上个周末发生的事情。
③get together, by bike,take ...photos 等词组的运用让行文更加流畅。
④文章结尾表达了对本次活动的感受。
【期末复习】Unit 2话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元的话题是“日常及课余活动”,与之相关的话题作文常常与“生活习惯”或“健康生活”有关。围绕锻炼、饮食等方面谈论活动频率。写这类话题作文时最好开篇就点题,提出自己的观点,然后再阐述自己的理由。
【常用表达】
(1)... is good for ..
(2).It is healthy for the mind and the body..
(3).It's good to do sth.
(4).It's+adj.+for sb.+to do ..
【典例】
请根据下面提示写一篇论述“早起(early rising)”重要性的文章。
1.早起有益健康。
2.早起的具体好处:(1)可以做早操来锻炼身体;(2)对学习有好处。
3.大家都应该养成早起的习惯。
要求:1.短文中应包含上面提示内容,但是不能逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数:80 词左右。
【模板】这是一篇提纲式作文,话题与本单元相符,根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
Early rising is important
Early rising is good for us in many ways.①
First②, it is healthy for the mind and the body. We can do morning exercises to keep us healthy③. It's also good to take a walk along the street.
Second②, early rising helps us with studies. When we get up very early in the morning , everything around is quiet. In the morning we can learn more quickly and memorize what we have learned easily.
Third②, early rising gives us enough time, so that③ we can have a relaxing breakfast.
So I think it's important for us to form the habit of getting up early.④
【点评】
①开门见山地提出了本文的论点——早起有益。
②first，second，third 分层次论证使得文章清晰、条理。
③be good for, keep sb.healthy，so that 的运用让行文更加流畅。
④文章结尾作者表达了自已的看法给出了结论，既照应了开头也重申了自己的观点。
【期末复习】Unit 3话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
谈论人的个性特征是本单元涉及的话题内容,也是大家非常熟悉的一个写作话题。写这种说
明文时要先确定说明的顺序,一般会按照从外貌到性格,再到爱好等方面的顺序对人物的个性特征进行描述。
【常用表达】
(1).I think ...
(2).She/He is ...than...
(3).A good friend likes to do the same things as me.
(4).It's (not) necessary to be the same.
【典例】
请你比较一下你和你的好朋友Alice之间的异同,可以从外貌、性格、爱好及学习等方面进行对
比。词数不少于80。
【模板】这是一篇开放式作文,话题与本单元相符,根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
I have a good friend. Her name is Alice.①We are in the same class. In some ways, we are the same, but in some ways, we are different.②
I am as tall as③ Alice. But she is heavier than me. We both have black hair. But my hair is longer than③ hers. Alice is more outgoing than③ me. She likes sports. But I like music. She exercises every day and she is stronger than③ me. I am smarter than her. And I am better at English than③ her.
All in all,I don't think differences are important in a friendship.④
【点评】
①开门见山介绍朋友的姓名。
②巧妙过渡，介绍与朋友的相同和不同之处。
③as...as 和比较级的应用使文章更加自然、流畅。
④文章最后一句阐述了作者的朋友观。
【期末复习】Unit 4话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元以“你居住的城镇”为话题,写作时要求我们运用形容词或副词的原级、比较级和最高级
对比不同的事物,并表达自己喜欢的事物。
【常用表达】
(1).It has the best ..
(2).It's the most expensive.
(3).It's worse than Blue Moon.
【典例】
假如你是Tom,经常到学校附近的三家餐馆吃饭,请根据表格中的内容,对这三家餐馆进行对比,作一下简单介绍。80词左右。
Restaurants Prices Quality(质量) Service
Jason's cheapest worst not friendly
Miller's cheaper better friendly
Ham's expensive best friendliest
【模板】这是一篇表格提示类作文,文章须从价格、质量和服务三个方面对三家餐馆进行对比,可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
There are three restaurants near our school.
Of the three restaurants, I like Ham's best.①Because it has the best food. And it has the friendliest service of the three. However, people don't often eat there because the food there is the most expensive.②
I also like Miller's. The food there is cheaper than that in Ham's. And it has better food than Jason's.③ It also has friendly service. It is the most popular restaurant near our school.
As for Jason's, I don't like it. Though it's the cheapest, it has the worst food.④ And it doesn't have friendly service at all.
All in all,of the three restaurants,Ham's is my favorite.
【点评】
①开门见山,直接引出话题,并介绍自己最喜欢的一家餐馆。
②运用however巧妙地转折,使行文更流畅。
③形容词比较级的运用为文章增加了亮点。
④though引导的让步状语从句的使用使文章句式灵活,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
【期末复习】Unit 5话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元的话题是“娱乐”,写作要求学生能够表达自己喜欢的电视节目,并发表自己的见解。在写此类话题的作文时要掌握表达自己喜好或观点的短语和句型,明确对某一事物的看法,并说明原因。
【常用表达】
(1).What do you think of ...
(2).I don't mind.
(3).I like to watch
(4).I can't stand
【典例】
你对朋友最喜欢的电视节目作了一次调查,以下是调查结果。请你就此调查结果写一篇80词
左右的短文,并阐述你自己的观点。(开头已给出,不计人总词数)
Name Favorite TV shows Reasons
Judy soap operas 有趣,浪漫(romantic)
Alex sports shows 喜欢运动
Susan English shows 想学好英语;想提高听力
I ... ... ... ...
【模板】这是一篇表格提示类作文,话题与本单元相符,根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
I asked some of my friends about their favorite TV shows. Here are their answers.①
Judy likes soap operas best because she thinks they are very funny and romantic. Alex's favorite TV shows are sports shows.② He likes doing sports and he wants to know more about sports. Susan likes to watch English shows. She likes English very much. She wants to learn it well and improve her listening.
As for③ me, I like talent shows. I don't mind③ English shows or sports shows but I can't stand③ soap operas because they are too boring.
【点评】
①开篇引出话题,简洁明了。
②Judy likes ...best, Alex's favorite ...等句式的变化,避免了表达句式单一，增强了文章的可读性。
③as for, don't mind, can't stand等短语的运用,体现了作者能学以致用，使文章意思连贯,表达准确。
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