【期末复习】Unit 6—Unit 10话题写作指南讲义（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】

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【期末复习】Unit 6话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元是围绕将来的目标及实现此目标应采取的措施这一话题展开讨论的。在写关于未来理想和今后打算的作文时,要注意对短文进行整体布局,做到详略得当、心中有数。
【常用表达】
(1) What do you want to be when you grow up
(2)I want to be...
(3)How are you going to ...
(4) I’m going to ...
【典例】
寒假即将来临,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的寒假计划。
1.好好休息和放松;
2.读书,因为读书既能开阔视野,还能学到很多知识;
3.陪父母聊天,帮他们做家务;
4.参加社会活动,认识更多的人
要求:
1.词数:80 左右;
2.可围绕主题作适当发挥。
参考词汇:knowledge知识;social activities社会活动
【模板】这是一篇提示类作文,话题与本单元相符,根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。
【范文】
The winter holiday is coming. I'm going to do what I want to do.①
First②, I'm going to have a good rest and relax. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful because③ it can not only open up my mind but also help me get more knowledge. Next②, I'm going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then②, I'm going to take part in social activities so that③ I can get to know more people.
What do you think of my holiday I hope you will have a happy winter holiday.④
【点评】
①文章开门见山,为下文作了铺垫.
②first与下文中next,then 的使用使文章条理清晰,层次分明.
③because，so that等连接词语的巧妙运用使行文更加流畅.
④最后一段中的问句拉近了作者与读者的距离。作者还表达了自己的祝愿,是我们可以学习的一种结尾方式。
【期末复习】Unit 7话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元以“预测未来”为话题,围绕这一话题的写作任务是:描述未来的生活变化。在写作中，主要使用一般将来时，通过大胆、合理的想象写出未来生活中的情景或变化,同时要注意从多角度展开想象和描述，从而使文章内容更加丰富。
【常用表达】
(1) In ... years, I will..
(2) We will live a ... life
(3) I hope to have a/an ... life in the future.
(4) Now I must ... to make my dream come true.
【典例】
请根据下面表格中的信息,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文介绍自己10 年之后的变化。
In ten years
Age 24
Job teacher
Workplace Beijing
Things will do travel around the world,live in an apartment, keep pets
【模板】这是一篇表格提示类作文,根据题目要求及提示，可用下面的模板。
【范文】
In ten years,I will be 24 years old.①I will be a teacher.I will work in Beijing because② it is a beautiful city.I really love it when I visited is last year.
In ten years,I will travel around the world because② I like to travel.I don’t living alone,so② I will live in an apartment with my best friends.I like keeping pets,so② I will have many different pets.
I’m sure I will have a more wonderful life in ten years.③
【点评】
①文章开门见山,写出来自己10年之后年龄的变化，为下文畅想未来生活做了铺垫.
②because，so等连词语的巧妙运用使行文更加流畅，增添了文章的亮点.
③文章结尾I’m sure引导的从句既体现作者扎实的语言功底又表达出对未来生活的向往。
【期末复习】Unit 8话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元的写作内容是美味佳肴的制作程序或产品使用说明。写作时应注意以下几点:
1.表达要准确。如一些材料用量,切忌表述糊。
2.表达要有逻辑性。多使用表示顺序的词,如 first,，next，then,finally等,便于读者实践。
3.表达要细致。工序说明不颠倒、不遗漏。只有这样,才能指导读者进行合理的操作。
【常用表达】
(1) Do you know how to make ...
(2) Here is one way to make ...
(3) To make ..., we need ...
(4) First, ... Next, ... Then, ... Finally,...
(5) One more thing, don't forget to ...
(6) It's time to ...
【典例】
根据所给提示写一篇短文,描述怎么制作牛肉三明治。
Ingredients(原料):2 pieces of bread; 1 spoon of cheese; 1 green pepper; 1 onion; some mushrooms; 2 pieces of beef; 2 spoons of relish(佐料)
【模板】这是一篇提示性作文,根据话题内容及写作要求可使用下面的模板展开写作。
【范文】
Do you know how to make a beef sandwich ①Now, let me tell you.
First②, put a spoon of cheese on a piece of bread③.Next②, cut up a green pepper and an onion. Add these to the bread. Then②, put some mushrooms and 2 pieces of beef on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally②, put the other piece of bread on the top.
Now you can enjoy it. It's very delicious.④
【点评】
①用疑问句开头,点出写作话题,为下文作铺垫。
②first, next, then, finally的运用使对制作过程的描述条理有序。
③这是一个肯定的祈使句,动词要用原形。文中用了很多祈使句,使语言简洁明快。
④用此句结尾显得亲切、自然,容易引起读者的兴趣。
【期末复习】Unit 9话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元是围绕“发出、接受或拒绝邀请”而展开话题讨论的。在日常生活中,我们经常会邀请别
人或被别人邀请参加某项活动,这是社交活动中经常遇到的事情。当你向别人发出邀请时语气应
该委婉。当别人邀请你而你谢绝邀请时,语气也应该委婉而不失礼貌。
【常用表达】
(1).We'd/I'd like to invite you to. (2).I am looking forward to...
(3).Thanks for ... (4).I’m sorry. I'm not available...
【典例】
亨利(Henry)写了一封e-mail 给凯特(Kate),邀请凯特下周和他一起去爬山,但凯特下周的日程已经排满,没有时间和他一起去。假如你是凯特,请根据下面的日程表,回复一封e-mail给亨利,谢绝他的邀请,并通过说明你下周的日程安排告诉亨利你谢绝邀请的原因。
要求:格式正确,中心明确,要点齐全,行文流畅,书写规范。词数不少于70。
Sunday go shopping in the supermarket
Monday go to Mary's birthday party
Tuesday go to the doctor
Wednesday play tennis with the school team
Thursday have a science test
Friday go to the movies with some friends
Saturday do some washing
【模板】这是一篇表格提示类作文,根据表格内容提示以及写作要求,可使用下面的模板展开写作。
【范文】
Hi Henry,
Thanks for inviting me to go climbing next week.
I'm sorry.I'm not available.① I have a really busy week.② Today I am going shopping in the supermarket, and tomorrow I will go to Mary's birthday party. On Tuesday I'll go to the doctor. On Wednesday I am going to play tennis with the school team and I will have a science test on Thursday. I will go to the movies with some friends on Friday. On Saturday I will have to do some washing.
Oh, it is late.I must stop now.③ I hope you will have a good time.④
Write back soon.
Yours,
Kate
【点评】
①这两句对邀请给予了答复,委婉地拒绝了对方。
②先总述本周的活动,然后在下文中细说具体的活动,层次鲜明。
③借此收笔,构思巧妙。
④用一个主从复合句表示祝愿,不失礼貌。
【期末复习】Unit 10话题写作指南（含范文+点评）【人教八年级上册英语】
【典例导引】
【剖析】
本单元的写作任务是提出设想并讨论结果。写此类短文,首先要正确使用if 引导的条件状语从句。在if引导的条件状语从句中,从句一般用一般现在时表示将来,而主句常用一般将来时。
【常用表达】
(1).If I...,I will...
(2).I think I'll ...
(3).It is best (not) to do ...
【典例】
请根据下列提示,以“If I have a lot of money”为题,写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
1.What will you do if you have a lot of money
2. Why do you want to do that
【模板】这是一篇提示类作文,根据要点提示以及写作要求,可使用下面的模板展开写作。
【范文】
If I have a lot of money
If I have a lot of money, I will have the chance to do what I want to do.①
It is best to do good things with the money.②So I think I’ll give some money to charities to help the people in need. I’ll try my best to help the people who are in trouble.③Then, I will buy a big house with a garden and a swimming pool for my parents, so they will live a happy life.
I'm sure I will enjoy a better life If I have a lot of money.
【点评】
①开篇点题,概述了自己的想法。
②本句灵活运用了“It is best to do ...”句型,学以致用的同时,增加了文章的亮点。
③句中who引导定语从句,是本文的一大亮点。
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