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题型过关第6讲 书面表达
Starter Welcome to junior high !单元分析
本单元的写作主要是介绍自己,要求同学们认识自我,学会向他人做自我介绍.写作时以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅.
【词句积累】
个人信息:
①My name is ...
②基数词+years old年龄
外貌特征:
①Long hair
②tall and thin
③the tallest in my class
性格特点:
①difficult 难以相处的 ②good 乖的 ③shy害羞的④friendly 友好的 ⑤helpful 乐于助人的 ⑥quiet文静的
兴趣爱好:
①be interested in.….对..感兴趣
②be good at擅长..
③My hobby is ...
【写作提纲】
开头:打招呼,引出话题
Hello everyone! I'm glad to....
Let me introduce myself to you.
正文:根据上方卡片详细介绍自己
①基本信息:My name is… I'm a 13-year-old girl.
②外貌特征:I'm tall with short hair.
③性格特点:I'm helpful in my class
④兴趣爱好:I'm interested in.…I like doing...
⑤经历:I went to…this summer holiday.
结尾:总结并祝福
All in all, I want to make friends with you all.
Unit 1 「A new start」单元分析
本单元以"新的开始"为话题,介绍初中的第一节课，相关要点有：
①第一节是什么课老师是谁
②课堂上发生的事情
③从课堂上学到了什么
【词句积累】
个人信息:
①Chinese 语文 ②Maths 数学 ③English 英语 ④biology 生物
⑤Geography 地理 ④History历史 ⑤Science 科学
学习任务:
①homework家庭作业 ②school task学习任务
③make a profile 创建个人资料 ①write a report写一份报告
学校活动:
①club 社团 ②team activities 团队活动③culture festival文化节
④sports meeting 运动会 ⑤take part in/ join in 参加
时间安排:
①have no time do exercise没时间做锻炼
②make good use of time 充分利用
③make plans for为...制定计
【写作提纲】
开头:开篇引入话题 I will never forget
正文:介绍课堂上发生的事
felt nervous,praised me ,It’s important...
表达看法和感受
learn a lot
Unit 2 「More than fun」
本单元以"爱好"为话题,主要谈论自己和他人的爱好，介绍了爱好带来的各种好处通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己或他人的爱好和养成爱好的故事;
②介绍自己的爱好的好处及其给他人的感受等;
③介绍通过某一爱好结交朋友的经历等.
④从爱好钟或者的知识
【词句积累】
兴趣爱好:
①hobby 爱好 ②interest 兴趣 ③favorite 特别喜欢的人/事④be crazy about.…对.痴迷 ⑤play volleyball 打排球
⑥be interested in...对..感兴趣
谈论好处:
①give us knowledge给予我们知识
②help me keep fit
③bring me a lot of fun 给我带来很多乐趣
④make more friends
交友经历:
①at first 起初
②at last 最后
③make friends 交朋友
④share the joy of.分享...的乐趣
⑤with one's help在某人的帮助下
⑥offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
【写作提纲】
开头:介绍自己并引出个人爱好→Ilike/love/ enjoy...; My hobby is.…
my name ，like fishing，like riding a bike
②经过:
具体介绍自己的做法
learn how to
结果:
表达感想
There is so much fun in ...
Unit 3「Family ties」单元分析
本单元围绕"家庭关系”展开,描述了家人之间深沉而又无私的爱,以及家人之间互相支持的的短文
写作要点
①描述一件家人之间难忘的事情;
②描述家人之间怎样互相支持.
③按时间顺序介绍发生的事情
【词句积累】
人物:
①be strict with sb.对某人要求严格 ②care for 关心;在乎
③be kind to sb. 对某人和蔼 ④work hard 努力工作
⑤be patient with sb.对某人有耐心
经历：
①give up放弃 ②stick to坚持 ③invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
⑥feel like 感觉像 ①give sb. a hand 帮某人一把
⑧with the help of在...的帮助下
感谢祝福:
①thank you for…因….而感谢 ②best wishes 最美好的祝福
③wish sb. sth. 祝愿某人某事①good health身体健康
【写作提纲】
开头:点明最爱的人是父亲并交待对父亲的印象
You are always strict with me and Ithink you don't care for me.
正文:详细描述我和父亲之间的事情
①起因: I got a "c" in English.
②经过: You invited me to climh a mountain/I wanted to give up./ You encouraged me and gave me a hand.
③结果: We got to the top.
④收获:I understood you.
结尾:升华主题并
①升华: Y表达对父亲的感谢和祝福
our love is like a mountain, silent but always there.
②感谢与祝福:Thank you for your help
Unit 4 Time to celebrate
本单元以"过节"为话题,要求学生能介绍自己最喜欢的节假日,并能正确描述与该节假日有关的传统文化及习俗.
与此相关的写作通常有:
①介绍中国的某个传统节日;
②介绍自己最喜欢的节日并说明原因.
在具体介绍某一节日时,通常包含以下要点:
①介绍节日名称以及节日时间;
②介绍该节日的相关习俗或传统;
③表明自己对这个节日的感受或喜欢它的原因.
【词句积累】
①take place 发生 ②last from"to…从..持读到.
③ full on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month在农历八月十五
活动:
①celebrate 庆祝 ②family reunions 家庭团聚 ③get together家庭团聚
have a big dinner 吃一顿大餐 ⑥enjoy the full moon欣赏满月
①stand for 象征;代表 ⑧enjoy delicious moon cakes 享用美味的月饼
感受:
①important 重要的 ②meaningful有意义的 ③traditional 传统的
have a good time/ enjoy oneself⑤make us feel warm in our heart
【写作提纲】
开头:介绍节日的基本信息
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of.…in China
②It falls on/ takes place on…
正文:介绍节日的庆祝活动
get together, have a big dinner, eat moon cakes, enjoy the full moon, think of their relatives and Like the festival, enjoy the delicious food,
结尾:
表达个人感受
bring a lot of pleasure to me, make me feel warm in my heart
Unit 5 Fantastic friends
本单元以"人与动物"为话题,主要回绕了解动物、感谢动物、保护动物等方面展开.相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍濒危动物;
②保护野生动物.
写作时,介绍动物多用第三人称,呼吁保护动物多用第一人称;时态以一般现在时为主.对动物的介绍可从外貌特征、生活习性、生活地区、濒危原因、如何保护等方面来展开.
【词句积累】
外貌:
①fat and hairy 胖胖的,毛茸茸的 ②small ears 小耳朵③black and white黑白相间的 ④short tail 短尾巴
特点:
①cute 可爱的 ②strong强壮的 ③lazy懒愔的 ④eat bamboos 吃竹子
⑤climb trees 爬树 ⑥like sleeping 喜欢睡觉
濒危原因:
①cut down trees 砍伐树木 ②have few babies 幼崽少
③destroy their homes 破坏它们的家园 ④in danger 处在危险中
保护措施:
①try our best to do sth.尽我们最大努力做某事
②stop doing sth.停止做某事
③tell people to do sth.告诉人们做某事
【写作提纲】
开头:引出话题，
--I will give a report about pandas.
正文:详细介绍大熊猫，并列举保护大熊猫的重要性
①外貌:They are black and white.
②特点:They are cute but strong.They like climbing trees and eating bamboos.
③栖息地: They mainly live in Sichuan and Shanxi of China.
④濒危原因:Some people cut down forests.They have few babies.
⑤保护措施:Stop cutting down trees.Build nature reserves.
⑥现状: The number of them grows. There are about 1,900 pandas in the wild.
①重要性: It is important for us to protect them because they are important to nature.
结尾:感谢聆听
Thanks for your listening.
Unit 6 The power of plants
本单元以"植物"为话题,主要环绕了解植物,理解的重要性,唤起保护植物的意识等方面展开.写作要点：
①介绍一种或几种植物;
②介绍植物对人类的重要性，对动物的重要性，对环境的重要性。
写作时,介绍植物多用第三人称,呼吁保护植物多用第一人称.时态以一般现在时为主.对植物的介绍可从植物的外形特征、成长特点、生活环境和地区、如何保护等方面来展开。
【词句积累】
外形特征:
①soft fibers 柔软的纤维 ②white fluff白色的绒毛③broad leaves 宽阔的叶片 ④thin stems 细茎⑤hairy seeds毛茸茸的种子
生长条件:
①warm climate 温暖的气候 ②rich soil 肥沃的土壤③dry weather 干燥的天气④little rain 少雨⑤full sun/ enough sunlight充足的阳光⑥suitable water and nutrients 适宜的水分和营养物质
用途:
①make clothes 制作衣服②praduce toys生产玩具
【写作提纲】
开头：总述植物的重要性
中间：分三个方面介绍植物的重要性
结尾：发出号召保护植物
1．假设你是王强，根据下面的提示，写一篇短文介绍自己。
提示：
1. 姓名：王强；
2. 年龄：13岁；
3. 家庭成员：父亲、母亲和哥哥；
4. 爱好：喜欢运动，如跑步、游泳等；
5. 最喜欢的颜色：绿色。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 不少于40词。
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2．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合图片和要点提示，以“My wonderful school life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
注意：
1．所写内容必须包括图中所有信息，并作适当发挥；
2．词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My wonderful school life
I’m Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Vicky给你写信想了解你在新学校的情况，请你根据以下思维导图，选择至少2个方面，用英语写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing You are a middle school student now, right What do you think of your new school life Would you please tell me about your favourites in your new school life I hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Vicky
注意：
1. 词数不少于70，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 邮什必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lots of love,
Li Hua
4．今年的元宵节 (the Lantern Festival) 邻里国际小区将举办中国民俗活动，让生活在小区的外国朋友们欢度佳节。请根据表格中的提示内容，补全英文邀请信。你可以通过想象进行补充描述，注意信息完整，内容连贯和书写规范。
Fun things for the Lantern Festival
make yuanxiao make lanterns guess riddles have a big dinner
Dear friends, Happy New Year! The Lantern Festival is coming. We will have a Lantern Festival party in our neighborhood (小区) on Feb. 24th. We are going to do a lot of fun things together.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Will you _________________________ Please send us an email at 73458971@ by Feb. 4th. Yours, Community Service Center (社区服务中心)
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．现如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮（Jenny），介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)不能照抄原文，文中不得出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
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In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees./ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
Starter Welcome to junior high !单元分析
本单元的写作主要是介绍自己,要求同学们认识自我,学会向他人做自我介绍.写作时以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅.
【词句积累】
个人信息:
①My name is ...
②基数词+years old年龄
外貌特征:
①Long hair
②tall and thin
③the tallest in my class
性格特点:
①difficult 难以相处的 ②good 乖的 ③shy害羞的④friendly 友好的 ⑤helpful 乐于助人的 ⑥quiet文静的
兴趣爱好:
①be interested in.….对..感兴趣
②be good at擅长..
③My hobby is ...
【写作提纲】
开头:打招呼,引出话题
Hello everyone! I'm glad to....
Let me introduce myself to you.
正文:根据上方卡片详细介绍自己
①基本信息:My name is… I'm a 13-year-old girl.
②外貌特征:I'm tall with short hair.
③性格特点:I'm helpful in my class
④兴趣爱好:I'm interested in.…I like doing...
⑤经历:I went to…this summer holiday.
结尾:总结并祝福
All in all, I want to make friends with you all.
Unit 1 「A new start」单元分析
本单元以"新的开始"为话题,介绍初中的第一节课，相关要点有：
①第一节是什么课老师是谁
②课堂上发生的事情
③从课堂上学到了什么
【词句积累】
个人信息:
①Chinese 语文 ②Maths 数学 ③English 英语 ④biology 生物
⑤Geography 地理 ④History历史 ⑤Science 科学
学习任务:
①homework家庭作业 ②school task学习任务
③make a profile 创建个人资料 ①write a report写一份报告
学校活动:
①club 社团 ②team activities 团队活动③culture festival文化节
④sports meeting 运动会 ⑤take part in/ join in 参加
时间安排:
①have no time do exercise没时间做锻炼
②make good use of time 充分利用
③make plans for为...制定计
【写作提纲】
开头:开篇引入话题 I will never forget
正文:介绍课堂上发生的事
felt nervous,praised me ,It’s important...
表达看法和感受
learn a lot
Unit 2 「More than fun」
本单元以"爱好"为话题,主要谈论自己和他人的爱好，介绍了爱好带来的各种好处通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己或他人的爱好和养成爱好的故事;
②介绍自己的爱好的好处及其给他人的感受等;
③介绍通过某一爱好结交朋友的经历等.
④从爱好钟或者的知识
【词句积累】
兴趣爱好:
①hobby 爱好 ②interest 兴趣 ③favorite 特别喜欢的人/事④be crazy about.…对.痴迷 ⑤play volleyball 打排球
⑥be interested in...对..感兴趣
谈论好处:
①give us knowledge给予我们知识
②help me keep fit
③bring me a lot of fun 给我带来很多乐趣
④make more friends
交友经历:
①at first 起初
②at last 最后
③make friends 交朋友
④share the joy of.分享...的乐趣
⑤with one's help在某人的帮助下
⑥offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
【写作提纲】
开头:介绍自己并引出个人爱好→Ilike/love/ enjoy...; My hobby is.…
my name ，like fishing，like riding a bike
②经过:
具体介绍自己的做法
learn how to
结果:
表达感想
There is so much fun in ...
Unit 3「Family ties」单元分析
本单元围绕"家庭关系”展开,描述了家人之间深沉而又无私的爱,以及家人之间互相支持的的短文
写作要点
①描述一件家人之间难忘的事情;
②描述家人之间怎样互相支持.
③按时间顺序介绍发生的事情
【词句积累】
人物:
①be strict with sb.对某人要求严格 ②care for 关心;在乎
③be kind to sb. 对某人和蔼 ④work hard 努力工作
⑤be patient with sb.对某人有耐心
经历：
①give up放弃 ②stick to坚持 ③invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
⑥feel like 感觉像 ①give sb. a hand 帮某人一把
⑧with the help of在...的帮助下
感谢祝福:
①thank you for…因….而感谢 ②best wishes 最美好的祝福
③wish sb. sth. 祝愿某人某事①good health身体健康
【写作提纲】
开头:点明最爱的人是父亲并交待对父亲的印象
You are always strict with me and Ithink you don't care for me.
正文:详细描述我和父亲之间的事情
①起因: I got a "c" in English.
②经过: You invited me to climh a mountain/I wanted to give up./ You encouraged me and gave me a hand.
③结果: We got to the top.
④收获:I understood you.
结尾:升华主题并
①升华: Y表达对父亲的感谢和祝福
our love is like a mountain, silent but always there.
②感谢与祝福:Thank you for your help
Unit 4 Time to celebrate
本单元以"过节"为话题,要求学生能介绍自己最喜欢的节假日,并能正确描述与该节假日有关的传统文化及习俗.
与此相关的写作通常有:
①介绍中国的某个传统节日;
②介绍自己最喜欢的节日并说明原因.
在具体介绍某一节日时,通常包含以下要点:
①介绍节日名称以及节日时间;
②介绍该节日的相关习俗或传统;
③表明自己对这个节日的感受或喜欢它的原因.
【词句积累】
①take place 发生 ②last from"to…从..持读到.
③ full on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month在农历八月十五
活动:
①celebrate 庆祝 ②family reunions 家庭团聚 ③get together家庭团聚
have a big dinner 吃一顿大餐 ⑥enjoy the full moon欣赏满月
①stand for 象征;代表 ⑧enjoy delicious moon cakes 享用美味的月饼
感受:
①important 重要的 ②meaningful有意义的 ③traditional 传统的
have a good time/ enjoy oneself⑤make us feel warm in our heart
【写作提纲】
开头:介绍节日的基本信息
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of.…in China
②It falls on/ takes place on…
正文:介绍节日的庆祝活动
get together, have a big dinner, eat moon cakes, enjoy the full moon, think of their relatives and Like the festival, enjoy the delicious food,
结尾:
表达个人感受
bring a lot of pleasure to me, make me feel warm in my heart
Unit 5 Fantastic friends
本单元以"人与动物"为话题,主要回绕了解动物、感谢动物、保护动物等方面展开.相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍濒危动物;
②保护野生动物.
写作时,介绍动物多用第三人称,呼吁保护动物多用第一人称;时态以一般现在时为主.对动物的介绍可从外貌特征、生活习性、生活地区、濒危原因、如何保护等方面来展开.
【词句积累】
外貌:
①fat and hairy 胖胖的,毛茸茸的 ②small ears 小耳朵③black and white黑白相间的 ④short tail 短尾巴
特点:
①cute 可爱的 ②strong强壮的 ③lazy懒愔的 ④eat bamboos 吃竹子
⑤climb trees 爬树 ⑥like sleeping 喜欢睡觉
濒危原因:
①cut down trees 砍伐树木 ②have few babies 幼崽少
③destroy their homes 破坏它们的家园 ④in danger 处在危险中
保护措施:
①try our best to do sth.尽我们最大努力做某事
②stop doing sth.停止做某事
③tell people to do sth.告诉人们做某事
【写作提纲】
开头:引出话题，
--I will give a report about pandas.
正文:详细介绍大熊猫，并列举保护大熊猫的重要性
①外貌:They are black and white.
②特点:They are cute but strong.They like climbing trees and eating bamboos.
③栖息地: They mainly live in Sichuan and Shanxi of China.
④濒危原因:Some people cut down forests.They have few babies.
⑤保护措施:Stop cutting down trees.Build nature reserves.
⑥现状: The number of them grows. There are about 1,900 pandas in the wild.
①重要性: It is important for us to protect them because they are important to nature.
结尾:感谢聆听
Thanks for your listening.
Unit 6 The power of plants
本单元以"植物"为话题,主要环绕了解植物,理解的重要性,唤起保护植物的意识等方面展开.写作要点：
①介绍一种或几种植物;
②介绍植物对人类的重要性，对动物的重要性，对环境的重要性。
写作时,介绍植物多用第三人称,呼吁保护植物多用第一人称.时态以一般现在时为主.对植物的介绍可从植物的外形特征、成长特点、生活环境和地区、如何保护等方面来展开。
【词句积累】
外形特征:
①soft fibers 柔软的纤维 ②white fluff白色的绒毛③broad leaves 宽阔的叶片 ④thin stems 细茎⑤hairy seeds毛茸茸的种子
生长条件:
①warm climate 温暖的气候 ②rich soil 肥沃的土壤③dry weather 干燥的天气④little rain 少雨⑤full sun/ enough sunlight充足的阳光⑥suitable water and nutrients 适宜的水分和营养物质
用途:
①make clothes 制作衣服②praduce toys生产玩具
【写作提纲】
开头：总述植物的重要性
中间：分三个方面介绍植物的重要性
结尾：发出号召保护植物
1．假设你是王强，根据下面的提示，写一篇短文介绍自己。
提示：
1. 姓名：王强；
2. 年龄：13岁；
3. 家庭成员：父亲、母亲和哥哥；
4. 爱好：喜欢运动，如跑步、游泳等；
5. 最喜欢的颜色：绿色。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 不少于40词。
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2．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合图片和要点提示，以“My wonderful school life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
注意：
1．所写内容必须包括图中所有信息，并作适当发挥；
2．词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My wonderful school life
I’m Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Vicky给你写信想了解你在新学校的情况，请你根据以下思维导图，选择至少2个方面，用英语写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing You are a middle school student now, right What do you think of your new school life Would you please tell me about your favourites in your new school life I hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Vicky
注意：
1. 词数不少于70，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 邮什必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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Lots of love,
Li Hua
4．今年的元宵节 (the Lantern Festival) 邻里国际小区将举办中国民俗活动，让生活在小区的外国朋友们欢度佳节。请根据表格中的提示内容，补全英文邀请信。你可以通过想象进行补充描述，注意信息完整，内容连贯和书写规范。
Fun things for the Lantern Festival
make yuanxiao make lanterns guess riddles have a big dinner
Dear friends, Happy New Year! The Lantern Festival is coming. We will have a Lantern Festival party in our neighborhood (小区) on Feb. 24th. We are going to do a lot of fun things together.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Will you _________________________ Please send us an email at 73458971@ by Feb. 4th. Yours, Community Service Center (社区服务中心)
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5．现如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮（Jenny），介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)不能照抄原文，文中不得出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
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In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees.
参考答案：
1．例文
My name is Wang Qiang. I am 13 years old. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my brother, and me. I enjoy sports like running and swimming. My favorite color is green. I hope to make more friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己的基本信息，包括姓名和年龄；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭成员；
第三步，介绍自己的爱好和颜色。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy喜欢
②like像
③hope to do sth希望做某事
[高分句型]
There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my brother, and me.（there be句型）
2．例文
My wonderful school life
I’m Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful with many tall buildings and green trees. There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. The students here are very helpful and all the teachers are kind to us. They try their best to make their lessons interesting. Among all my subjects, I like Geography best because I love travelling and I’d like to learn more about different places and cultures.
After school, we do lots of after-school activities. I’m a member of the Reading Club, and I go there twice a week. I also play sport in the playground. It’s great fun to play ball games with friends. At weekends, I often go swimming with my best friend Amy.
My school life is really wonderful, and I always have a great time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍校园和友好的老师同学们及最喜欢的科目；
第二步，介绍不同的俱乐部、各种各样的运动及周末活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的学校生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①helpful乐于助人的
②culture文化
③have a great time玩的开心
[高分句型]
①There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. (there be句型；并列句)
②Among all my subjects, I like Geography best because I love travelling and I’d like to learn more about different places and cultures. (原因状语从句)
3．例文
Dear Vicky,
I am so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
My favourite place at school is the library. It is very quiet and has a lot of books. I can read different kinds of books there and gain a lot of knowledge. My best friend at school is Tom. He is a very kind and helpful boy. We often study together and play basketball after school. My favourite teacher is Mr. Wang. His classes are very interesting. He always makes difficult knowledge easy to understand. My favourite subject is English. I like learning about different cultures through English. And I think English can help me communicate with people from all over the world in the future. I also like the club activities in our school. I joined the reading club. In the club, we can exchange reading experiences and share our favourite books.
Lots of love,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己在学校的情况，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达向对方介绍自己的学校生活；
第二步，从最喜欢的地方、朋友、科目及俱乐部等方面介绍自己的学校生活。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②different kinds of不同种类的
③learn about了解
④communicate with sb和某人交流
[高分句型]
And I think English can help me communicate with people from all over the world in the future. (宾语从句)
4．Dear friends,
Happy New Year! The Lantern Festival is coming. We will have a Lantern Festival party in our neighborhood on Feb. 24th. We are going to do a lot of fun things together. You can learn how to make yuanxiao and make beautiful lanterns. We will guess riddles on that day. What’s more, we will have a big dinner together.
Will you join us Please send us an email at 73458971@ by Feb. 4th.
Yours,
Community Service Center
【详解】[总体分析]
②题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍活动的时间和地点；
第二步：具体介绍活动内容；
第三步：邀请他们参加活动，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②What’s more还有
[高分句型]
You can learn how to make yuanxiao and make beautiful lanterns.（and连接并列成分）
5．例文：
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. My favourite animals are pandas. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍自己最喜欢的濒危动物是熊猫，并介绍熊猫的外貌及喜好；
第二步，分析濒危原因；
第三步，提出保护建议。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on 以……为食
②in danger 处于危险之中
③raise money 筹钱
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals. (宾语从句)
6．例文
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
First of all, for humans, plants can meet our basic needs. We can use plants in many ways. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some of plants can be made into medicine and clothing. What’s more, they are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they eat the fruit of plants. Finally, plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away.
In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍植物的重要性，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍植物的重要性；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be made into被制成
②stop...from doing sth.阻止……做某事
③in a word总的来说
[高分句型]
They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away. (动词不定式作目的状语)
