(共99张PPT)
目录
主题1 个人及学校生活
01
03
02
主题2 中国元素
主题3 人际沟通
主题1 个人及学校生活
01
Writing 1
类型:短文投稿 难度:易 建议用时:15分钟
[2023全国乙卷]学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
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经典3+2
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Learning a New Skill
It is important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life(It作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语).That is why I learned how to cook during the May Day holiday(表语从句).
Since my mother is skilled at cooking(原因状语从句), I decided to learn from her. Early in the morning we bought some ingredients, including some vegetables, meat and a fish in the local market. Once we got back home(时间状语从句), I began to wash and cut them carefully.Under the guidance of my mother, I turned on the gas cooker. I first stir-fried two vegetables. Then I cooked meat with potatoes. The most difficult task to do(不定式作后置定语) was cook fish with tomatoes. However, I finally did it.
The moment I put the dishes on the table(时间状语从句), my parents gave me a thumbs-up. I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents, which also showed I had grown up(定语从句).
Writing 2
类型:短文投稿 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
真题变式:介绍事物类[2024江苏江浙高中(县中)发展共同体联考]假定你在一份面向学生的国际英语杂志上看到一则征文告示,请依据要求写一篇短文投稿。
Articles Wanted!
Write an article about a hobby or leisure activity that you used to enjoy but don't do now.
What did you do Why did you enjoy doing it What made you give it up What do you do now
Send us your article and see your name in print!
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My Favorites
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审题干 写作类型:短文投稿
#b#
时态:叙述过去最喜欢的爱好或休闲活动时以一般过去时为主;叙述现在最喜欢的爱好或休闲活动时以
一般现在时为主
#b#
人称:第一人称
谋布局 要点1:叙述过去最喜欢的爱好或休闲活动以及喜欢它的原因
要点2:介绍放弃这一爱好或休闲活动的原因
要点3:描述现在最喜欢的爱好或休闲活动以及喜欢它的原因
【写作指导】
真题变式
介绍事物类作文
本篇写作要求同学们介绍自己最喜欢的爱好或者休闲活动,而2023年全国乙卷写作要求同学们介绍自己学到的新技能,两篇写作均属于介绍事物类。
【佳作展台】
My Favorites
I would ride my bike a lot when I was a kid(时间状语从句). At 9, I joined an after-school cycling club and took part in races on a regular basis. Cycling would really bring a great sense of freedom.
However, after going to high school, I stopped it. After all, every day I had a lot more homework to do, and I rarely won races because I didn't ride that fast.
Now I've got a new hobby — skateboarding! I can do it at any time, so it fits in better with school(结果状语从句). It's just as much fun as cycling, but I'm much better at skateboarding.
Writing 3
类型:申请信 难度:易 建议用时:15分钟
[2024黑龙江哈师大附中二调]假定你是李华,得知市图书馆正在招募暑期"英语阅读沙龙(English Reading Salon)"活动的主持人,请写一封英文申请信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人情况;
3.活动设想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
To Whom It May Concern,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:申请信
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称为主
谋布局 要点1:点明写信目的——申请"英语阅读沙龙(English Reading Salon)"活动的主持人
要点2:简单进行自我介绍,详述个人优势和对该活动的设想
要点3:表达感谢,期待对方回复
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to apply for the position of the host for the "English Reading Salon" event at the city library this summer.
As for my personal information, I am a college student majoring in English(现在分词短语作后置定语), and I have been actively engaged in a variety of English-related activities, which have greatly enhanced my language skills and interpersonal communication abilities(which引导非限制性定语从句). In terms of the activity plan, I propose to organize a series of interactive reading sessions, where participants can share their thoughts on a selected English book(where引导非限制性定语从句).
Thank you for your consideration, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 4
类型:叙事类 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024内蒙古包头调研改编]假定你是李华,上周你和同班同学参加了一次野外生存训练(wildness survival program),请你给你的英国网友Johnson写一封电子邮件描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受,内容包括:
1.活动的时间和人员;
2.活动过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Johnson,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:叙事类
时态:一般过去时为主
人称:第一人称为主
谋布局 要点1:介绍活动的时间和人员,点明写信目的
要点2:叙述活动的过程
要点3:描述自己的感受
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Johnson,
My classmates and I took part in a wildness survival program from Thursday to Saturday last week. I can't wait to share some relevant details with you.
Before we started, we were equipped with a compass, a map, a first-aid kit, tents, flashlights, some food, some clothes and so on. In the wild, we climbed three hills and swam across two rivers. But then we lost our way in the forest. Luckily, we found the right direction with the help of the compass. As soon as we arrived at the campsite(As soon as引导时间状语从句), we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking. We also learned how to give first aid("疑问词+不定式"结构作宾语).
Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gained in class to solve problems(过去分词短语作后置定语;不定式作目的状语). It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
类型:建议信 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
[2023新课标Ⅰ卷]假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. We're overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us(同位语从句). But learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express my different voice, hoping that this wouldn't offend you(现在分词短语作伴随状语).
To begin with, it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random, so that we can help each other during our practice. Additionally, to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly, I suggest that you put three to four students together, with one as the group leader(with复合结构), in which case we can communicate with each other at a great depth("介词+which+名词"引导定语从句).
Should it be possible(虚拟语气和倒装句), I truly hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 6
类型:建议信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
真题变式:建议信[2024湖北武汉部分学校调研]假如你是李华,收到外国好友Tom的来信,他们学校将举办外国歌曲欣赏活动,他负责中国板块,想请你提供建议。请回复邮件,内容包括:
1.提供建议;
2.表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
真题变式
开放、真实的建议信
本篇应用文写作要求同学们写一封建议信,和2023年新课标Ⅰ卷的应用文写作(Writing 5)考查类型一样。在命题导向方面,本试题也高度契合2023年高考英语应用文写作的新动向,试题给出写作内容提示,但未给出具体的写作内容,同学们需要根据写作情境的要求,结合自己已有的中国音乐知识构思写作内容,充分体现写作的开放性和真实性。
【佳作展台】
Dear Tom,
I'm delighted to receive your letter in which you asked me how to advocate China-style songs(定语从句). My suggestions are as follows.
First of all, it will be a good choice to introduce some popular Chinese singers(it作形式主语,动词不定式短语作真正的主语), who do well in China-style composition. In addition, you can extend an invitation to some singers from the music department to perform live. Last but not least, you'd better hold a speech on the features of China-style songs where people can get more insights about the China-style songs(定语从句).
I'd appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration. I do hope your culture festival will go smoothly!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 7
类型:图表类 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
[2022全国乙卷]学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.______________________________________________
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【写作指导】
根据写作要求,本文的写作内容应包括三项:一是陈述图表呈现的数据,即学生在课外时间学习英语的四种方式——读英语书籍、听英语歌曲、看英语电影和浏览英语学习网站;二是针对这些不同的学习方式进行评论;三是对课外学习英语的方式提出一些合理化的建议。时态:以一般现在时为主。人称:以第三人称为主。语言特点:语言应力求简练,注意描述图表显示的数据时,应避免句式重复,最好使用多种表达方式。段落安排:第一段引出讨论的内容,第二段陈述图表的内容,第三段针对图表内容进行评论,第四段发表个人建议。
【佳作展台】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. As the chart shows, students adopt different ways to learn English beyond the classroom.
The percent of the students who listen to English songs is as high as 65%. 50% of them watch English movies while only 18% read English books. Those who visit English-learning websites account for 12%.
The figures of the chart suggest that there are a variety of ways to learn English beyond the classroom with the development of modern technology. Students can choose what they like to enrich their English-learning experiences.
As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills.
Writing 8
类型:图表类 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
真题变式:图表类[2024广东六校联考(二)]学校英文报正在开展以"How would you use your smart phone "为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
学生使用手机情调查(人数百分比)
1.调查结果的描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
How would you use your smart phone
A survey on how students would use the smart phone has been conducted recently. ______________________
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审题干 写作类型:图表分析类
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第三人称为主
谋布局 要点1:引出话题并描述图表的内容
要点2:针对图表内容进行评论
要点3:发表个人的建议
【写作指导】
真题变式
融入柱状图的图表类作文
高考写作的命题形式越来越灵活、多样,不再拘泥于传统的书信体类写作。本篇写作融入柱状图,是图表作文,与2022年全国乙卷(Writing 7)类型相似,引导同学们在语言学习过程中注重辨析语言和文化中的具体现象,梳理和概括信息,从自己的视角正确评判周围事物和不同观念,创造性地表达自己的观点和想法。
【佳作展台】
How would you use your smart phone
A survey on how students would use the smart phone has been conducted recently. As is illustrated in the bar chart(As引导非限制性定语从句), forty-six percent of the students use the smart phone to play games while seventy-five percent of the students tend to watch videos with their phones. Students who choose to keep in touch with others by phone(who引导定语从句) account for eighteen percent and in the meanwhile thirty percent of the students prefer to use their phones as learning tools.
The result of the survey reveals an unquestionable fact that students tend to use their phones more for entertainment than for communication or education(that引导同位语从句). They are likely to overuse their phones or even worse get addicted to them, especially for those who use phones to play games. Fortunately, a wide range of learning apps have boosted the popularity of using phones to promote academic performance(动名词短语作介词of的宾语).
From my point of view, if you are a smart phone addict, it is high time that you set aside the phone and turn your attention away from it(if引导条件状语从句;"it is high time that..."结构). When you want to get relaxation, spend more time on outdoor activities, which will leave you more refreshed and energetic(which引导非限制性定语从句).
创新1+1
Writing 9
类型:报道 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新情境:环保+美育[2024重庆七校联考]假定你是李华,上周六你校举办了一场以"变废为宝"为主题的环保时装秀。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点、参加人员等;
2.活动情况;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A Trashion Show
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审题干 写作类型:报道
时态:一般过去时为主
人称:第三人称为主
谋布局 要点1:简单介绍活动的时间、地点、参加人员等
要点2:叙述活动的目的、过程等
要点3:观众的反应和活动的意义
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
A Trashion Show
Last Saturday, our school hall witnessed a hot "trashion" show, a fashion show featuring outfits made of trash. All our teachers and students took part in the event.
The event was aimed at promoting awareness of the huge amount of waste that we produce in our day-to-day lives, much of which don't get recycled(that引导限制性定语从句;"代词+of+which"结构引导非限制性定语从句). Numerous students volunteered to model for the show. They walked the runway in costumes cleverly put together with discarded items(过去分词短语作后置定语), ranging from plastic bottles to newspapers.
The response from the audience was incredibly positive. Not only did the event showcase the remarkable creativity of our peers, but it also served as a powerful reminder for all of us to reconsider our daily consumption habits("not only...but also..."结构,not only位于句首引起倒装). After all, a sustainable future is shaped by the daily choices we make.
Writing 10
类型:倡议书 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新类型:倡议书[2024广东惠州一调]为了迎接世界读书日,学校英语俱乐部计划以"Reading for Fun"为主题组织一场读书活动,请你写一份英文倡议书。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.发出倡议。
参考词汇:World Book Day世界读书日
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear fellows,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________English Club
April 20
【写作指导】
命题动向
应用文写作新类型——倡议书
本篇应用文写作以世界读书日为写作任务背景,要求同学们写一份倡议书,既契合了2023年高考英语试卷中体现的爱读书主题,又创新了写作的命题类型,丰富写作形式。
【佳作展台】
Dear fellows,
In order to celebrate the upcoming World Book Day, an interesting reading campaign will be launched. Not only can the activity stimulate readers' creativity and shape their character, but it can also enrich their lives in a unique way ("not only...but also..."结构).
The following are activities involved in this reading campaign(过去分词短语作定语). As scheduled, reading clubs are organized in groups for a shared topic in the library every Wednesday afternoon. Participants are welcome to discuss characters in the book, who are the source of motivation to help them beat the difficulties and create miracles(非限制性定语从句). In addition, every participant is required to submit a reading report within given time to enhance their critical thinking ability and writing capability.
All in all, by immersing ourselves in the charm of books, this activity definitely offers endless fun to us. My dear fellows, please join us as soon as possible!
English Club
April 20
Writing 11
类型:短文投稿 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新素养:劳育[2024天星原创]某英文报纸举行"我爱劳动"主题征文比赛,请你结合自己的一次真实的劳动经历写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.具体经历;
2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
The experience I'd like to share is about helping my father water the fields during the summer holidays.
It was a terribly hot, airless day. Having only worked for half an hour(现在分词完成式作状语), I began to feel both tired and thirsty. What's worse, my back started to ache. When we finished the work in the end, I was covered in sweat and mud. At that time all I wanted to do(省略关系词的定语从句) was lie down and rest.
Through the experience, I develop an awareness that how hardworking and great my parents are who manage to bring up the whole family(that引导的同位语从句;who引导的定语从句).
Writing 12
类型:夹叙夹议类 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
新类型:夹叙夹议类[2024重庆三校联考]如何理解"成功",不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。
"Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm(热情)."
—Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求:
1.你对该引语的理解;
2.你的相关经历;
3.恰当的结尾。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that __________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
审题干 写作类型:夹叙夹议类
时态:一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称为主
谋布局 要点1:简述你对该引语的理解
要点2:讲述自己的相关经历
要点3:总结全文,升华主题
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it("so...that..."句型,so位于句首引起倒装). However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control("too...to..."结构). Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going(when引导时间状语从句). With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel that if I had lost heart then, I wouldn't be able to ride a bike now(that引导表语从句,其中包含虚拟条件句).
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it(What引导主语从句;that引导表语从句).
主题2 中国元素
02
经典3+2
Writing 1
类型:告知信 难度:易 建议用时:15分钟
[2024江苏南京六校联合调研]假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Amanda即将回国,你送了她一款具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.礼物介绍;
2.选择原因;
3.表达期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Amanda,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Amanda,
Learning that you are returning to the UK(现在分词短语作状语), I've bought a writing brush as a souvenir for you.
The writing brush, dating back 2,000 years(现在分词短语作后置定语), is ranked as one of Four Treasures of the Study. Actually, in ancient China, calligraphy and paintings were mostly created with it. Considering you are a fan of Chinese culture(现在分词短语作状语), I think the writing brush with Chinese characteristics is a perfect gift for you.
I bet you will fall in love with it. Wish you a safe journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
类型:推荐信 难度:易 建议用时:15分钟
[2024四川成都树德中学阶段性测试改编]假定你是李华,你班交换生Eric想报名参加学校中国文化社团,以便更好地了解中国文化。请写信推荐一个相关社团,内容如下:
1.推荐理由;
2.表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:推荐信
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称和第三人称为主
谋布局 要点1:点明写信目的——推荐学校的一个文化社团
要点2:对该社团进行简单介绍,并给出推荐理由
要点3:表达期待
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【佳作展台】
Dear Eric,
I am glad to hear that you are interested in joining a Chinese cultural club to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. I would like to recommend the Diverse China Club in our school.
The Diverse China Club is an energetic and inclusive community that celebrates the rich diversity of Chinese culture(that引导定语从句). They organize various activities and events throughout the year, such as traditional Chinese music and dance performances and calligraphy workshops. By joining the club, not only will you gain a deeper understanding of Chinese traditions, but also develop lifelong friendships and enrich your overall cultural experience in China("not only...but also..."句型,not only位于句首引起倒装).
I sincerely hope that you consider joining the Diverse China Club. Looking forward to seeing you become an active participant in the club!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
类型:通知 难度:易 建议用时:15分钟
[2024湖北孝感重点高中开学考]假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了帮助英国交换生更好地了解中国文化,同时培养本国学生的文化意识,学生会将举办一个"中国文化日"活动,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.活动的时间、地点、内容、对象等;
3.期待加入。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Notice
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The Students' Union
审题干 写作类型:通知
时态:一般将来时为主
人称:第三人称为主
谋布局 要点1:介绍活动的时间、地点、目的、对象等
要点2:介绍活动内容
要点3:表达期待
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Notice
In order to make the exchange students from the UK have a better understanding of Chinese culture and develop everyone's cultural awareness, the Students' Union will organize a Chinese Culture Day on the afternoon of October 9th, which will be held in the school hall(which引导非限制性定语从句). Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, various activities will be arranged to experience traditional Chinese culture, such as paper-cutting, kung fu and Chinese calligraphy. What's more, you will be welcome to enjoy the Peking Opera performed by our students(过去分词短语作后置定语).
Wish you would like the activities and join us.
The Students' Union
Writing 4
类型:祝贺信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024安徽摸底联考]假定你是李华,你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的"中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Knowledge Contest)"中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.回顾他的付出和努力;
3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:祝贺信
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称和第二人称为主
谋布局 要点1:点明写信目的——表示对Peter的祝贺
要点2:回顾他的付出和努力
要点3:再次祝贺,期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Knowledge Contest organized by our city(现在分词短语作状语;过去分词短语作后置定语), I'm writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It comes as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it(for引导原因状语). Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
类型:短文投稿 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
[2023全国甲卷]你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇 短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
The Historical Figure in China
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【佳作展台】
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged(定语从句), Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Here are the reasons.
Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty(过去分词短语作状语), Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society(原因状语从句). He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous(动词不定式短语作目的状语). Besides, he proposed the establishment of a national school system, which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system(非限制性定语从句).
What impresses me most(主语从句) is his famous philosophy of life: "Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness." Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character(结果状语从句).
Writing 6
类型:介绍信 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
真题变式:介绍人物类[2024天星原创]假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Jason看完电影《长安三万里》后,对中国诗人充满兴趣,向你询问你最喜爱的诗人。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.喜欢的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jason,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
真题变式
介绍人物类作文
高考作文命题方式越来越灵活,本篇书面表达要求同学们用英文介绍自己最喜爱的诗人,属于介绍人物类作文,融入了记叙文文体的写作特点,类型与2023年全国甲卷(Writing 5)一致。题目所给要点内容比较笼统,需要同学们根据自身的文化素养对人物生平及贡献等内容进行填充。
【佳作展台】
Dear Jason,
Li Bai, a leading role of the movie Chang'an and one of the most famous poets of the Tang Dynasty(两个并列的名词短语作同位语), is my favourite poet.
Li Bai is considered a master of poetry. He wrote over a thousand poems during his lifetime, which are full of romance and imagination(非限制性定语从句), describing everything from nature to politics. He is like the sun shining on Chinese literature, bringing new ideas and beautiful words to his country(现在分词短语作状语).
All in all, from his literary works to his impact on society, Li Bai deserves our admiration and will forever be remembered for his immense contribution to Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
创新1+1
Writing 7
类型:征稿启事 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新情境:征稿启事+热话题+中国元素[2024安徽六校教育研究会入学测试]假定你是李华,某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以"中国科学家精神"(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.作品要求;
3.投稿方式及截止时间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Contributions Wanted
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Students' Union
【写作指导】
命题动向
征稿启事+热话题+中国元素
本篇应用文写作要求同学们写一则征稿启事,创新命题形式,此类型的应用文写作在新高考全国卷中还未涉及过。同时写作任务背景涉及热话题——短视频和中国科学家精神,彰显命题的时代性,契合高考选材方向。
【佳作展台】
Contributions Wanted
Aiming to carry forward the spirit of Chinese scientists and demonstrate the power of moral examples(现在分词短语作状语), the Students' Union is collecting short videos with the theme of "The Spirit of Chinese Scientists".
The video is supposed to be original, positive and to the point, including scientists' major experiences, achievements and the spirit they show on the road to success(省略that/which的定语从句). As a consequence, if you admire a scientist for the above-mentioned aspects(条件状语从句), feel free to submit your excellent work to students'-union @ before September 20th. What deserves your special attention(主语从句) is that your work should be limited to 3 minutes(表语从句).
Your active participation is highly anticipated!
Students' Union
Writing 8
类型:介绍事物类 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新素养:强化语用导向[2024天星原创]你的外国网友Peter在校报作兼职编辑,负责"Traditional Chinese Culture"栏目,请你给他写篇文章介绍一种中国传统文化。要点如下:
1.该文化的重要性;
2.你的体会。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
The traditional Chinese culture I'd like to introduce to you is Chinese calligraphy, a traditional Chinese artistic treasure steeped in history(过去分词短语作后置定语).
It has established itself as the most important ancient Chinese art form alongside Chinese painting. In its distinctive Chinese form, Chinese calligraphy provides an important channel for the appreciation of traditional culture and for arts education. It stands for important aspects of the country's intellectual and artistic heritage.
I've learned it for years. Practicing Chinese calligraphy is a demanding job, which requires a high level of concentration and patience(非限制性定语从句). I benefit a lot when regularly practicing it(状语从句的省略).
主题3 人际沟通
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经典3+2
Writing 1
类型:邀请信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2022新高考Ⅰ卷]假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Caroline,
Being in charge of the English program "Talk and Talk" run by our school broadcast station, I feel much privileged to invite you to our program for a live talk show.
The program, meant to promote the interest of the students in English learning and broaden their horizons, is widely popular among us students. The interview will be held at 9 this coming Sunday morning, lasting about an hour. Your talk show can cover anything related to English, or what school life is like in your country.
I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 2
类型:邀请信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
真题变式:邀请信[2024天星原创]为迎接一年一度的校艺术节,你所在的英语戏剧社要排练一出经典英文戏剧。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,请他指导彩排。内容要点如下:
1.告知时间地点;
2.请他现场指导;
3.期待他的回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
真题变式
邀请信
本篇写作邀请外教指导英文戏剧的彩排,属于邀请信,写作类型与2022年新高考Ⅰ卷的写作(Writing 1)相同,在加强对语言表达能力的考查的同时,强调对应用性和创造性能力的考查。
【佳作展台】
Dear Mr. Smith,
To celebrate the annual School Art Festival(不定式短语作目的状语), the members of our English Drama Club are going to perform the famous English play Hamlet by Shakespeare. I am writing to invite you to give us some guidance.
As planned, our practice will begin in the school hall at 4:00 pm next Thursday and it will last until 5:30 pm. This is our last practice before we act it out on the stage. We would be overjoyed if you could come and give some help(虚拟条件句). Your advice will certainly be of great use to us since you are expert at English plays.
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply(虚拟条件句+形式宾语it).
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
类型:求助信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024福建福州一检]假设你是李华,刚进入高三,在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.说明困难;
2.寻求帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students. _______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade(现在分词短语作状语), I come across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance.
My biggest problem is not knowing how to do well in listening tasks(特殊疑问词+不定式). Native English speakers can talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them(让步状语从句的倒装), they seem to disappear from my mind some time later.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 4
类型:发言稿 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024广东七校联合体联考(一)]假定你是学生会主席李华,下周学校要接待来自澳大利亚的交换生,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Australian friends,
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Thank you for listening!
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Australian friends,
On behalf of our school, I feel greatly privileged to convey a warm welcome to you. We are delighted to have you with us in the following days.
To make your stay here memorable, various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and help you experience different cultures. As planned, we will hold a talent show where everyone can show their outstanding performances(定语从句). Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled, such as paper-cutting, Chinese opera, calligraphy, etc, followed by a gift-exchanging activity(过去分词短语作状语). Additionally, you're invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.
Finally, welcome again and I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves(宾语从句) and hope you have a pleasant journey(宾语从句).
Thank you for listening!
Writing 5
类型:道歉信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024重庆八中阶段考(一)]假定你是李华,上周末在回家的途中,你把外教Mr. Thompson借给你的一本诗集弄丢了。现在请你给Mr. Thompson写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1.解释并表达歉意;
2.提出解决的办法;
3.再次道歉并请求原谅。
参考词汇:诗集a collection of poetry
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. Thompson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:道歉信
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称为主
谋布局 要点1:点明写信目的——为不小心弄丢对方的一本诗集而道歉
要点2:叙述弄丢诗集后所做的努力,并提出解决的办法
要点3:再次道歉并请求原谅
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Mr. Thompson,
I am writing to extend my sincerest apologies regarding the regrettable incident that occurred last weekend(that引导限制性定语从句). I unintentionally lost the collection of poetry you lent me.
Fully aware of the emotional value and significance of the book to you, I deeply regret the inconvenience and disappointment my action may have caused(省略关系词的定语从句). In an earnest effort to correct the situation, I have retraced my route and conducted a thorough search, yet unfortunately, I have thus far been unable to recover it. Nevertheless, I am more than willing to make up for this loss by personally purchasing a brand-new copy of the exact edition, or alternatively, by buying any book of your preference as compensation.
Once again, I sincerely apologize for my oversight and any trouble caused, and I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 6
类型:询问信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
[2024山东济南摸底考试]假定你是李华,下个月要赴英国参加交流活动,将寄宿在活动负责人Frank家。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.咨询居住条件、交通方式等;
2.期待相见。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Frank,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题干 写作类型:询问信
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称为主
谋布局 要点1:自我介绍,并介绍申请参加交流活动的原因
要点2:咨询居住条件、交通方式等
要点3:期待相见
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Frank,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese Senior Two student. I would like to apply to join in the communication activities in the UK, as I've been longing to take part in international fairs for high school students(as引导原因状语从句). In particular I'm interested in English culture. What's more, I've already got a good knowledge of English customs from the Internet and I'm eager to make friends with young people throughout the world.
However, I find no detailed information included in your advertisement(过去分词短语作后置定语). I would like to know about the living conditions and transportation methods there.
I would appreciate it if I can receive your early reply and I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
创新1+1
Writing 7
类型:建议信 难度:中 建议用时:15分钟
新素养:重视阅读和写作能力[2024天星原创]假定你是李华,目前在新西兰某高中做交换生,发现周围很多当地学生对汉语有浓厚的兴趣。请你给校长Mr. Smith写一封邮件,建议学校增设汉语课。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.增设汉语课的意义;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in your school. ______________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in your school. I'm writing to suggest including Mandarin Chinese courses in our current curriculum, given that many students here show ongoing strong interest in it(条件状语从句).
Known as one of the most spoken languages in the world(过去分词短语作状语) and with its growing in popularity worldwide, Mandarin Chinese has entered numerous classrooms in foreign countries. Besides, due to the rise of China's international influence, speaking Chinese fluently has become a highly valued professional skill. Furthermore, learning Chinese helps open a unique window into one of the world's richest and most ancient civilizations.
I hope you can take my suggestion into serious consideration(宾语从句). Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 8
类型:议论文类 难度:难 建议用时:15分钟
新考向:开放性命题[2024天星原创]某英语论坛正在进行"网友是真朋友吗?"的话题讨论活动,请你据此发一则帖子,内容包括:
1.你的看法;
2.陈述理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Are Internet friends real friends
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【写作指导】
【佳作展台】
Are Internet friends real friends
Online friendships are a wonderful part of many people's lives, but as far as I'm concerned, Internet friends cannot be considered real friends.
While it may be easy to communicate with people online(it作形式主语,不定式是真正的主语), the Internet doesn't provide the same level of personal interaction and emotional connection. Additionally, the anonymity of the Internet can result in difficulties in establishing trust, which makes it difficult to determine the true intentions of an Internet friend(非限制性定语从句). Moreover, though Internet friends seem to keep you company(让步状语从句), they can't provide you with the real support.
Therefore, I think people should make efforts to form real-life friendships rather than online friendships.