2025年中考英语人教版总复习话题写作突破课件：话题5 梦想与目标(共26张PPT)

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话题5 梦想与目标
分析新疆近6年中考真题可知，该话题在书面表达中未作考查。结合
全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此话题通常有以下命题角度：1.梦想与目
标的内容及重要性；2.树立梦想与目标的原因；3.实现梦想与目标的方法。
佳句赏析
梦想与目标的内容及重要性
1.As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My
dream is to be a doctor in the future.
2.Just as President Xi once said, I would like to contribute to my
hometown.
3.No matter who you are and what you are doing, you should have
your dreams and hold on to them because they can give you chances
to taste success.（No matter who表明梦想对每个人都很重要）
4.It's of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve
our dreams.
5.The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their
dreams.
树立梦想与目标的原因
1.More and more young people wish to return to their hometowns
and contribute to their hometowns' development after graduation.
（contribute to促成，有助于）
2.I like talking to people and asking questions, so I want to be a
journalist when I grow up.
3.Since my early age, I have been admiring tour guides who travel
worldwide.（who引导定语从句，解释说明梦想的职业）
4.I dream of being a good teacher who teaches kids not only
knowledge but also the truth of life.
5.The speech given by a famous doctor made me realize my dream
of becoming a doctor to help others.
实现梦想与目标的方法
1.My first plan has to do with my physical health. I will keep
exercising every day to build up my body.（have to do with与……有
关，此处在阐明计划后具体描述实施该计划的方式）
2.To improve myself, I plan to spend one hour a day （in） reading
the books I'm interested in.（动词不定式作目的状语前置）
3.I will make every effort to discover the value of traditional Chinese
medicine and make it more popular in the world.（make every effort
to do sth.竭尽全力做某事）
4.Hard work pays off. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream
will come true some day.（Hard work pays off.天道酬勤。）
5.Stick to your dream, and you are sure to achieve success in the
end.
6.I strongly believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart
into it.
7.If you want to make your dream come true, you should learn all
kinds of knowledge to enrich your brain.（用if引导的条件状语从句描
写实现梦想的途径）
8.I plan to take up some hobbies like painting and taking photos.
（用such as/like对爱好进行举例）
9.I will do the following things to make my dream come true.
10.All in all, I'm sure I will realize my dream as long as I try my
best.
句子仿写
1）拥有梦想和希望对一个人的发展是非常重要的。［用短语be of great
importance仿写］
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It's of great importance for a person's development to have dreams and hopes.
2）我打算成为一名老师,所以我将要在大学学习教育。［用连词so仿写］
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I am going to be a teacher, so I'm going to study education at university.
3）当我长大后，我想成为一个能拯救很多人的好医生。［用who引导的
定语从句仿写］
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When I grow up, I want to be a good doctor who can save many people.
4）我梦想着成为一名钢琴家，因为我真的很喜欢弹钢琴。［用短语drea
m of仿写］
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I dream of being a pianist because I truly/really like playing the piano.
5）为了实现我的梦想，我会认真度过我有限的时间。［用动词不定式作
目的状语仿写］
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To make my dream come true, I ought to spend my limited time carefully.
6）总之，只要我尽最大的努力，我确信我能实现我的梦想。［用连词as
long as仿写］
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All in all, I'm sure I will realize my dream as long as I try my best.
7）我希望我能尽我所能帮助更多生活在山区的学生。［用that引导的宾
语从句仿写］
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I hope that I can try my best to help more students living in the mountain areas.
8）除非你全身心地投入学习，否则你不会实现你的梦想。［用put one's
heart into仿写］
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You won't realize your dream until you put your heart into your study.
（2024山东临沂改编）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给
Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping,
You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really
interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you
to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look
forward to hearing from you soon!
Eric
要求：
1.参考邮件内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4.词数80-120。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【审题】
话题：梦想职业
文体：______文
要点：需要从邮件中提炼要点，邮件中的3个句子即3个要点：
①你选择该梦想职业的原因；
②影响你做此决定的人或事；
③叙述你的经历。
人称:用第____人称
时态：
要点①和②：用__________________时
要点③：用__________时
应用
一
一般现在/一般过去
一般过去
【写作框架】
【润色与升格】
连句成篇 句子升格
Dear Eric, Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. ①I have wanted to be a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. （要点1：选择该梦想职业的原因） Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. ①用结构“dream
of doing sth.”升
格句子：
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I have dreamed/dreamt of being a teacher since I was a child
连句成篇 句子升格
（要点2：影响你做此决定的人或事）She often helps me with my English in her spare time, which has a great influence on me. ②I still remember one thing. Once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. （要点3：叙述经历并升华主题） ②用that引导的宾
语从句连接两个句
子：
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I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.
连句成篇 句子升格
③I know it is not easy to be a teacher. I will work harder to realize my dream. Best wishes! Li Ping ③用although引导的让步状语从句
和短语“make every effort to”升格
句子：
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Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will make every effort to realize my dream.
【誊写】
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. _____________________________________
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I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job.
I have dreamed/dreamt of being a teacher since I was a child,
because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying
with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power
of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with
my English in her spare time, which has a great influence on me.
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Best wishes!
Li Ping
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam
and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to
improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English.
I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I
grow up.
Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will make
every effort to realize my dream.
人类因梦想而伟大，人生因拼搏而精彩。每个人都有一个梦想，你的
梦想是什么？某英语学习网站正在开展“梦想成就未来”的征文比赛，请参
照思维导图，以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1.参考思维导图，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4.词数80-120。
My Dream Job
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It's important for everyone to have a dream. Everyone has his
or her own dream. Dreams make us full of hope for the future.
Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like
her one day. Though my mother is very busy, she often says she
feels happy when she helps patients, which moves me a lot. Here is
my plan for the future job. First, to achieve my goal, I will make
every effort to win a place at a medical university. Besides, it's
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important for me to learn lots of knowledge about medicine through
reading books. What's more, I decide to do some volunteer work in
the hospitals to improve my skills. I'll start preparing for my dream
immediately. As for work, I aim to work in a big hospital in my
hometown to serve my community.
As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor
in the future.