(共25张PPT)
话题1 自我认识、自我管理与
自我提升
分析新疆近6年中考真题可知,2024年新疆中考书面表达要求学生从
外貌、爱好、特长三方面介绍自己,从而展现最好的自己;2021年新疆中
考书面表达要求学生从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面描述如何成
为更好的自己。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知,此话题通常有以下命
题角度:1.自我介绍(自身兴趣特长及优势)——主要用于写自荐信;2.
成长与变化;3.自我管理;4.自我提升——如何成为更好的自己。
佳句赏析
自我介绍
(1)基本信息
1.I'm Li Hua, a 15-year-old middle school student from China.
2.Jack is a middle school student who was born in 2010.
(2)外貌特征
1.The man is of medium height with long straight brown hair and
big eyes.(with短语作伴随状语丰富人物特征)
2.He has a round face, wearing a pair of glasses.(现在分词短语作伴
随状语描述人物特征)
3.Mr. Li wears a pair of sunglasses and a cap, which makes him
look handsome.(which引导非限定性定语从句,描述外貌)
(3)性格特点
1.I'm quieter and more serious than most kids in my class. That's
why I like reading books and study harder in class.(①用比较级形成
对比;②用That's+why引导的表语从句替代because引出原因)
2.I am an outgoing boy who can always get on well with others.
(who引导定语从句,说明性格外向的具体表现)
(4)兴趣和能力
1.When I read books, time goes quickly.
2.After I entered junior high school, I took up some hobbies like
painting and playing the guitar.(用like举例)
3.I'm very good at speaking English. And I won many prizes in the
English speaking competitions.
4.I'm fond of reading and it has become part of my life.(be fond of
热爱……)
5.If I'm lucky enough to be given the chance, I will try my best to
help them.
成长与变化
1.He used to be shy and quiet. When he talked to girls, his face
always turned red.[九全Unit 4 2d]
2.She isn't shy any more and dares to sing in front of crowds.[九全
Unit 4 3a]
3.I didn't use to be popular in school, but now I get tons of
attention everywhere I go.[九全Unit 4 3a]
4.Many times I thought about giving up, but I fought on.
自我管理
1.It is reported that many teenagers often depend on their parents in
their daily life these days.(It is reported that…介绍青少年现状)
2.It is also useful to learn to plan our life properly.
3.In a word, if we learn to manage our life from now on, we will
have a better future.(if引导条件状语从句,表达自我管理的作用)
4.I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful
life.
5.It's necessary and important for us to learn to manage our own
life.
自我提升
1.To improve myself, I plan to spend one hour a day in reading the
books I'm interested in.(动词不定式作目的状语前置)
2.Only by improving ourselves can we have the ability to build our
country in the future.(only位于句首修饰状语,引起部分倒装)
3.We are supposed to master better learning methods and develop
more good qualities.
句子仿写
1)我向新朋友介绍自己时,总会面带微笑。[用with短语作伴随状语仿写]
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I always introduce myself to new friends with a smile on my face.
2)制定计划帮助我保持专注并按时完成任务。那就是为什么我在开始一
项任务前会制定计划。[用句型That's why…仿写]
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Making a plan helps me stay focused and finish a task on time. That's why I make a plan before I start a task.
3)在团队活动中,我能和我的伙伴们相处得很好,并且一起完成任务。
[用短语get on well with仿写]
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In the team activities, I can get on/along well with my partners and finish the tasks together.
4)我过去在课堂上很害羞,但现在我已经鼓起勇气举手并分享我的想法,
我学习也变得更积极。[用结构used to do sth.仿写]
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I used to be shy in class, but now I have developed the courage to raise my hand and share my ideas, and I have become more active in learning.
5)自从开始了志愿活动,我不再仅仅用无意义的活动来填满空闲时间了。
[用固定搭配not…any more仿写]
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Since I started volunteer/voluntary activities, I've not just filled my free time with meaningless activities anymore.
6)人在成长历程中犯或大或小的错误是很正常的。[用句型It's+adj.+for
sb.+to do sth.仿写]
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It is normal for people to make big or small mistakes during their growth experience.
7)为了提高我的英语口语技能,我每天都和老师及同学练习对话。[用
动词不定式作目的状语前置仿写]
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To improve my spoken English skills, I practice making dialogues with my teacher and classmates every day.
(2024新疆)假如你是李华,你校英语广播站正以“Bring Out the
Best in Yourself(展现最好的自己)”为主题,面向广大学生开展征文活
动。请你以“Myself”为题目,结合以下提示,用英语
写一篇短文投稿。
提示:
1.What do you look like
2.What's your hobby
3.What are you good at
要求:
1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4.词数80-120。
【审题】
话题:自我介绍
文体:______文
要点:
①介绍自己的外貌;
②谈谈自己的爱好;
③展示自己的特长。
人称和时态:
人称用第____人称;时态用__________时。
说明
一
一般现在
【写作框架】
【润色与升格】
连句成篇 句子升格
Myself I'm Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. ①I am not too heavy and I am not too thin. I am of medium height. And I look smart. But I don't think appearance is so important. ①用“neither…nor…”改写,将
两个句子用一个句子表述,介绍
“我”的外貌信息:
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I am neither too heavy nor too thin.
连句成篇 句子升格
②I prefer people to think I am kind, not just beautiful. My hobbies are reading and running. Reading makes me knowledgeable and running makes me healthy. ②用“rather than”连接两个句子
升格,阐述“我”更看重人的品质,
而不是外貌:
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I prefer people to think I am kind rather than beautiful.
连句成篇 句子升格
③My favorite subject is science. I am good at math. I want to be a scientist when I grow up. I hope to be a useful person for my people and my country.(要点1、2、3:介 绍自己的外貌、爱好及特长) That is me. I am great, aren't I ③用“because”扩写原因升格,说
明我喜欢科学的原因:
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My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders and mysteries.
【誊写】
Myself
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I'm Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. I am
neither too heavy nor too thin. I am of medium height. And I look
smart. But I don't think appearance is so important. I prefer people
to think I am kind rather than beautiful. My hobbies are reading
and running. Reading makes me knowledgeable and running makes
me healthy. My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders
and mysteries. I am good at math. I want to be a scientist when I
grow up. I hope to be a useful person for people and my country.
That is me. I am great, aren't I
(2023山西改编)青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特
殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们
以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题,对1127名学生进行了问卷调查,下图是
部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生,请结合右侧表信息以“I Find Myself Really
Good”为主题,用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.简要说明图表内容;
2.从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什
么积极的影响。
要求:
1.参考图表信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4.词数80-120。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I
Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results.____________________
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86 percent of the
students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53
percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don't like
to complain.
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As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was
chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to
memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a
challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I
made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high
praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in
me all the time.