外研版英语八年级上册Module 10 The weather模块话题书面表达练习
一、书面表达
1．英国学生Frank计划来中国旅行，但不确定什么时间更好。请你根据以下提示，以李明的名义给Frank写一封电子邮件，给他提供一些建议。
提示：
1.游览的最佳时间；
2.如果想在华南游览，最好带一把雨伞；
3.可以住在旅店，也欢迎住在我家。
要求：
1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：华南South China 与……相比compared to…
Dear Frank,
It’s good to hear that you may visit China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps you. Wish you a great journey.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
2．假如你是大明，英国友人Mike要来参观你的家乡哈尔滨，学校要举办一次作文竞赛，从中选出优胜者作为Mike的导游。请根据提示，给Mike写一封80词左右的信，介绍自己的家乡。要求思路清晰，可适当发挥。
提示：1. 冬天是参观哈尔滨(Harbin)的最佳时间；
2. 天气寒冷，温度大约在-30℃到-20℃；
3．最有趣的事情是体验冰雪世界，例如看冰展、堆雪人、打雪仗……
参考词汇：冰展 the ice sculpture exhibition
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3．书面表达。
请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。70词左右。
提示词汇：below zero，windy，sunny，cloudy，foggy，degree
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4．假如你(Lingling)的英国笔友Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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5．书面表达
你（Li Ming）的美国朋友Jane打算来你居住的城市旅游。她想了解一下你市东方海滩的情况，根据以下信息给她写一封信加以介绍。
1.名称：东方海滩；
2.位置：城东10千米；
3.天气:秋天，既不冷也不热；
4.最适合的运动：游泳、打排球；
5.公用设施：洗手间、更衣室、商店；
6.交通条件:有多辆去海滩的公共汽车，可随时乘坐出租车。
Dear Jane,
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6．书面表达
请你根据表格信息，写一篇关于天气预报的短文，60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
City Weather Temperature
Shenyang Sunny&Windy 15℃～ 4℃
Beijing Snowy 6℃～ 1℃
Nanjing Cloudy 6℃～9℃
Shanghai Rainy 2℃～11℃
Here's the weather report on January 15th. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your watching.
7．书面表达
假如你是Li Na，你要应聘某气象台的天气预报员一职，面试内容是根据下表内容写一篇天气预报广播稿。请你结合所学知识，根据表格内容，写一篇60—80词的天气预报广播稿。
要求：必须包括表格内的内容，可适当发挥。
Weather report for 12th, December
Places Weather Temperature
Morning Afternoon
southeast rainy sunny 10℃-16℃
southwest cloudy sunny 12℃-19℃
northeast cloudy snowy 0℃-4℃
northwest sunny sunny 3℃-9℃
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参考答案：
1．One possible version：
Dear Frank,
It’s good to hear that you may visit China. I think the best time to come is in autumn. In most parts of China, the weather then is neither too hot nor too cold. It’s the most comfortable time to travel. If you want to travel in South China, you’d better take an pared to other places, there’s more rain.
You can stay in a hotel. It won’t cost you much money. You are welcome to stay in my home as well. I would be very happy to be your guide.
I hope this helps you. Wish you a great journey.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是给他提供一些来中国的建议；
第二步，给出一些建议，包括最佳时间、旅游注意事项以及住宿；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①comfortable舒服的
②compare to与……相比
③as well也，还
[高分句型]
①If you want to travel in South China, you’d better take an umbrella. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I think the best time to come is in autumn. In most parts of China, the weather then is neither too hot nor too cold. (宾语从句)
2．例文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to my home town, Harbin. I’m glad to introduce it to you.
Harbin is a beautiful city in the northeast of China. The temperature in Harbin in winter may usually be between minus 30 and minus 20 degrees. Although it is very cold, the best time to visit Harbin is in winter. To keep warm, you’d better bring some warm clothes. As you know, the most interesting thing is to enjoy the beauty of the Ice and Snow World. You can not only enjoy the ice sculpture exhibition but also play with snow. If you like, you can make a snowman or have a snowball fight with your friends. That’s so fun!
Come to Harbin, and you will fall in love with it!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，介绍天气和旅游注意事项；
第三步，结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
① not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
② play with snow 玩雪
③ have a snowball fight with 和……打雪仗
[高分句型]
① Although it is very cold, the best time to visit Harbin is in winter.（although引导让步状语从句，动词不定式作后置定语）
② To keep warm, you’d better bring some warm clothes.（动词不定式作目的状语）
③ As you know, the most interesting thing is to enjoy the beauty of the Ice and Snow World.（动词不定式作表语）
3．Here is the weather report for the next 24 hours in China. Beijing will be __rainy and snowy；the temperature will fall to five degrees below zero. Shanghai will be cloudy and the temperature will be five to eight degrees. Hong Kong will be sunny；the temperature will be seven to ten degrees. It will be foggy in Chengdu and the temperature will be three to six degrees. In Dalian it will be cloudy and cold，and the temperature will fall to three degrees below zero. The weather in Xi'an will be rainy and later sunny. Its temperature will be four to seven degrees.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。文章时态用一般将来时，人称用第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意要连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。
4．例文
Dear Jim,
I'm very glad that you'll come to visit China. You aske me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring,summer,autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It's often rainy. Compared to other seasons,winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows,you can come at this time of year. But it depends on your interest. I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because the weather is not too hot or too cold. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China,such as the Great Wall,the West Lake,Mount Tai and so on. I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Lingling
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向笔友Jim介绍中国的天气情况及来中国的最好时间等。
2.写作指导：本文以第二人称和第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。按照四季的情况来介绍中国的天气特点及来中国的最好时间。写作时要保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
5．Dear Jane,
I'm glad that you will travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about the East Beach. The East Bench is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away from the city center. It's one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, soft and clean. The best time to go there is in autumn. Because it's neither too hot nor too cold. The water is clean, with small waves. It's suitable for swimming and playing volleyball.
You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can take a taxi, too. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a wonderful time there. Welcome to the East Beach!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】本题是一篇书信作文。注意书信格式。本文时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
亲爱的简：
我很高兴你能来我的城市。现在让我告诉你东方海滩的一些情况。东方海滩在我市的东部，离市中心10公里。它是世界上最好的海滩之一。那里的沙子很细、很软、很干净。去那里的最佳时间是在秋天。因为既不太热也不太冷。水是干净的，有小海浪。这里很适合游泳和打排球。
你可以很容易地到达海滩。许多公共汽车可以带你去那里。你也可以乘出租车。那里有厕所、更衣室和商店。我想你在那里会过得很愉快。欢迎来到东方海滩！
你的
李明
【点睛】本文是书信作文，注意文体格式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里。把所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式。写作六步法：1.审题：文体、时态、人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语、定语、连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。文中经典句型：Because it's neither too hot nor too cold. 使用了neither...nor结构表示“既不……也不……”。The East Bench is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away from the city center. 使用方位介词“in the east of”短语。
6．Here's the weather report on January 15th. Shenyang will be sunny and windy, and the temperature will be between 15℃ and 4℃. Beijing, snowy, and the temperature will be between 6℃ and 1℃.Nanjing will be cloudy. While the lowest temperature will be 6℃， the highest temperature will be 9℃. Shanghai will be rainy. The lowest temperature will be 2℃， and the highest temperature will be 11℃.
Thanks for your watching.
【详解】这是一篇预报天气的短文，所以首先确定本篇文章的时态为一般将来时。信息表中所给的几处地方的天气都要涉及到，描述天气时我们可以用到例如Shanghai will be… The temperature will be…等类似的句型。
本篇作文首先以“Here's the weather report on January 15th.”引出本篇短文的主题。下一段再分别按照先后顺序介绍到Shenyang，Beijing，Nanjing，Shanghai的天气，在介绍温度时分别用到不同的句型，例如the temperature will be between …and…以及the lowest temperature will be…， the highest temperature will be…。句子之间用and…以及while…等连词连接起来，使文章具有连贯性，是一篇比较优秀的短文。
7．例文：
This is the weather report of tomorrow. In the southeast it will be rainy in the morning and in the afternoon it’ll be sunny. The temperature will be between 10 and 16 degrees. In the southwest it will be cloudy in the morning and sunny in the afternoon. The temperature will be between 12 and 19 degrees. In the northeast it will be cloudy in the morning. But in the afternoon it will be snowy. The temperature will be between 0 and 4 degrees. In the northwest it will be sunny the whole day. The temperature will be between 3 and 9 degrees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为广播稿；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“12月12日天气预报”表格中的天气预报要点，适当增加细节，完整表述天气预报内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明是哪天的天气预报，作为开头；
第二步，分地区从“上午、下午的天气、温度”几方面来详细进行天气预报。
[亮点词汇]
①the weather report of tomorrow 明天的天气预报
②between ... and ... 在……和……之间
[高分句型]
①In the southeast it will be rainy in the morning and in the afternoon it’ll be sunny.（will be结构的一般将来时；and连接表等同关系的并列句）
②The temperature will be between 0 and 4 degrees.（介词短语作表语）
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外研版英语八年级上册Module 10 The weather模块话题书面表达练习
一、书面表达
1．英国学生Frank计划来中国旅行，但不确定什么时间更好。请你根据以下提示，以李明的名义给Frank写一封电子邮件，给他提供一些建议。
提示：
1.游览的最佳时间；
2.如果想在华南游览，最好带一把雨伞；
3.可以住在旅店，也欢迎住在我家。
要求：
1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：华南South China 与……相比compared to…
Dear Frank,
It’s good to hear that you may visit China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps you. Wish you a great journey.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
2．假如你是大明，英国友人Mike要来参观你的家乡哈尔滨，学校要举办一次作文竞赛，从中选出优胜者作为Mike的导游。请根据提示，给Mike写一封80词左右的信，介绍自己的家乡。要求思路清晰，可适当发挥。
提示：1. 冬天是参观哈尔滨(Harbin)的最佳时间；
2. 天气寒冷，温度大约在-30℃到-20℃；
3．最有趣的事情是体验冰雪世界，例如看冰展、堆雪人、打雪仗……
参考词汇：冰展 the ice sculpture exhibition
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．书面表达。
请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。70词左右。
提示词汇：below zero，windy，sunny，cloudy，foggy，degree
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你(Lingling)的英国笔友Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．书面表达
你（Li Ming）的美国朋友Jane打算来你居住的城市旅游。她想了解一下你市东方海滩的情况，根据以下信息给她写一封信加以介绍。
1.名称：东方海滩；
2.位置：城东10千米；
3.天气:秋天，既不冷也不热；
4.最适合的运动：游泳、打排球；
5.公用设施：洗手间、更衣室、商店；
6.交通条件:有多辆去海滩的公共汽车，可随时乘坐出租车。
Dear Jane,
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6．书面表达
请你根据表格信息，写一篇关于天气预报的短文，60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
City Weather Temperature
Shenyang Sunny&Windy 15℃～ 4℃
Beijing Snowy 6℃～ 1℃
Nanjing Cloudy 6℃～9℃
Shanghai Rainy 2℃～11℃
Here's the weather report on January 15th. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your watching.
7．书面表达
假如你是Li Na，你要应聘某气象台的天气预报员一职，面试内容是根据下表内容写一篇天气预报广播稿。请你结合所学知识，根据表格内容，写一篇60—80词的天气预报广播稿。
要求：必须包括表格内的内容，可适当发挥。
Weather report for 12th, December
Places Weather Temperature
Morning Afternoon
southeast rainy sunny 10℃-16℃
southwest cloudy sunny 12℃-19℃
northeast cloudy snowy 0℃-4℃
northwest sunny sunny 3℃-9℃
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