外研版英语八年级上册Module 11 Way of life 模块话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．从小在美国长大的Jim要随妈妈来中国探亲，他想了解一些中国的风俗习惯。假如你是他的朋友大明，请根据提示，给Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。根据提示可适当发挥。
提示：1. 与他人第一次见面要问候、握手；
2. 去别人家做客时要带上一些礼物，如鲜花、水果等，不能送钟表；
3. 就餐时最好不要把食物吃光。
参考词汇：eat up吃光
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
2．假设你是李华你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格中的信息写一封回信。词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运等
使用场所 婚礼、春节等
表达方式 中国结、红包等
参考词汇：婚礼wedding；中国结Chinese knot；红包red packet；代表stand for
Dear Tony，
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．大明要去一个美国家庭吃饭。请你根据以下提示告诉他美国的餐桌礼仪和风俗习惯。
1. 可以带一件小礼物，如一束花或者一瓶酒(如果那个家庭喜欢喝酒的话)。
2. 应当按时或者稍迟5～10分钟到达,不要早到。如果将要迟到15分钟以上的话,要打电话告诉他们。
3. 在餐桌旁要尽量随意一些。如果不知道怎样做，就问问旁边的人。
4. 如果喜欢主人准备的食物，要说出来。当然，还应当感谢主人的款待，过后寄一张卡片或表达谢意的纸条也是一个好主意。
参考词汇：knife刀子；fork叉；spoon汤匙；uncomfortable不舒服的；nervous紧张的；host男主人；hostess女主人。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你叫王东，你的一位外国朋友杰斯(Jesse)要来中国参观。在他来中国之前，你想向他介绍一下中国人的习俗。内容包括以下几点：
1．在中国必须靠右行；
2．当你碰到别人时常问好，而不是鞠躬；
3．吃饭时常用筷子，不是一定非得把盘子里的东西吃完；
4．饭后人们通常沏茶喝，临走时要有礼貌地道别。
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暑假就要到了，假设你们学校的外籍教师Miss Green要到青岛旅游度假，她向你(Zhang Ming)了解青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动。请你为她写一封信作简要的介绍，内容包括：
1．青岛位于中国东部，在美丽的海边，这里春天暖和多风，夏天不太热、经常下雨，秋天凉爽，冬天较冷，最低气温在零下4度。
2．夏天是去游泳和划船的最好时间。这里的沙滩很好，适合打沙滩排球(beach volleyball) 。
要求：不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you can have a good time there. Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ming
6．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如见面问候、待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：
What do we do when we meet people for the first time
How do we behave properly at table
提示要点：
1：初次见面：中国人第一次见面应该要礼貌握手，热情谈话；
2：待人接物：做客别人家最好携带礼物，尤其是在春节等节假日，礼物可以是我们的传统食物、手工等；
3：餐桌礼仪：在中国，吃正餐是非常重要的场合，不能用筷子指人，不能在有长辈时第一个动筷，不能敲碗等等；
要求：
1. 短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
3. 短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．2023年10月8日，第19届亚运会在杭州闭幕。请以志愿者的身份，根据下面内容写一篇英语短文。
文化古城：余杭纸伞Yuhang Paper Umbrellas，西湖龙井Longjing tea ...
家庭规则：要求严格，少看电视，少上网，不打耳洞，不吸烟
餐桌礼仪：筷子的使用，不礼貌的行为
畅想未来：展示中国的新发展，传播亚运精神，共创美好未来
要求：
1.书写规范认真，词数不少于80单词，开头己给出，不计入总词数；
2.文章内容必须包含导图内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
The 19th Asian Games closed in Hangzhou on October 8th. As a volunteer, I want to introduce more about China to you.
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________试卷第1页，共3页
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案：
1．
Dear Jim,
Welcome to China. Here are some customs that you should know in China. Hope I can help you.
In China, when people meet for the first time, they usually say hello and shake hands with each other. If someone invites you to his home, it’s polite to take gifts such as some fruit and flowers. But you mustn’t give a clock. While you are eating, you mustn’t speak to others with food in your mouth. What’s more, you’d better not eat up all the food because it is bad manners.
So much for this. I hope you will enjoy your stay in China!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第二人称来写；注意多用提建议的句式，语气委婉。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎并引出话题，表明下文关于要注意的习俗方面的问题；
第二步，具体介绍中国的礼仪和习俗，表达要准确；
第三步，总结并提出祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①for the first time第一次
②such as例如
③you’d better not你最好别做某事
[高分句型]
①Here are some customs that you should know in China.(that引导的定语从句)
②I hope you will enjoy your stay in China!(省略that的宾语从句)
2．One possible version：
Dear Tony，
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
As we all know, Chinese red is one of the most popular colors in China. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and fortune. When the traditional Chinese Spring Festival is coming, Chinese red will come into your eyes wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is Chinese red. On these occasions, Chinese red is put into many things, such as Chinese knots and red packets. Chinese red is not only a color but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目表格中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是介绍“中国红”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国红”的地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式等方面阐述。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①come into one’s eyes进入某人的视野
②such as比如
③Chinese spirit中国精神
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and fortune. (why引导的定语从句)
②When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is Chinese red. (When引导的时间状语从句)
3．例文：
Dear Daming,
It’s a good idea to take a small gift when you go to have a dinner in an American family. Flowers are always nice, or you might bring a bottle of wine if you know that the family like to drink it.
You should arrive on time or five to ten minutes late. Don’ t get there early. If you’ re going to be more than fifteen minutes late, you should call and tell them.
Try to be free at the dinner table. If you don’t know how to use the knife, fork, or spoon, just watch the other people, and follow them. If you still have no idea of what to do, don’t be shy about asking the person next to you. It’s better to ask than to be quiet and feel uncomfortable and nervous.
If you like the food, say so. Of course, you should thank the host and hostess for the meal and their kindness. It’s also a good idea to send a card or a thank-you note the following day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，主要说明美国的餐桌礼仪和风俗习惯。在写作时，根据提示分四点来展开论述：第一段阐述去美国家庭做客带礼物；第二段阐述到达的时间；第三段阐述就餐时要随意；第四段阐述要表达感谢。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来说明要点；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述礼仪和风俗习惯时可以介绍具体的事例；要点需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
4．
Dear Jesse，
I am very happy to hear that you will come to visit China.Now let me tell you some Chinese customs.
When you walk in China，you must walk on the right.When you meet other people，you should say hello to them instead of bowing.When you are eating meals，you should use chopsticks instead of knives and forks.If you are full，you don't need to eat up the food in the plate.After meals，the host often makes tea for you.When you leave，you should say goodbye to the host politely.
I hope you will come to China soon.
Yours，
Wang Dong
【详解】这是一篇要求向自己的外国朋友介绍中国人的习俗。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第二人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语：walk on the right靠右走，say hello to sb向某人打招呼，instead of而不是，eat up吃光
5．Dear_Miss_Green，
Qingdao is in the east of China and it's near the beautiful sea. It's warm and windy in spring. It's not too hot in summer. And it rains a lot. The weather is cool in autumn. It's very cold in winter. The lowest temperature can be －4℃.Summer is the best time to go swimming and boating. The beach is very good and beach volleyball is the most popular sport there.
I_think_you_can_have_a_good_time_there.Best_wishes!
Yours，
Zhang_Ming
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动的信件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
6．例文
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封关于中国社交礼仪的电子邮件，目的是向朋友Chris介绍中国日常生活中的基本礼仪。
② 时态：文章主要使用“一般现在时”，因为介绍的是普遍的社会习惯和行为规范。
③ 提示：文章通过列举几个常见的社交场合，详细介绍了中国的社交礼仪，回答了Chris的提问。要点包括初次见面、待人接物以及餐桌礼仪。
【写作步骤】① 开头部分：简要介绍中国有悠久历史，社交礼仪多样，接下来分享一些常见的礼仪。
② 初次见面时：握手、礼貌问候。
③ 待人接物时：做客带礼物，尤其在节假日。
④ 餐桌礼仪：不要用筷子指人，不要先动筷子。
⑤ 结尾：表示希望这些信息有帮助，欢迎提问。
【亮点词汇】①shake hands握手
②be supposed to应该
③make noise制造噪音
④on time准时
【高分句型】①You are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time.（时间状语从句）
②And don’t make noise when you have your soup.（祈使句）
③It’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. （It作形式主语句式）
7．例文
The 19th Asian Games closed in Hangzhou on October 8th. As a volunteer, I want to introduce more about China to you.
As a famous historical and cultural city, Hangzhou has Yuhang Paper Umbrellas as a beautiful traditional craft. Longjing Tea is also famous and adds a special flavor to our tea time.
For Chinese teeanagers, we have some family rules and table manners to help us be disciplined. We don’t watch too much TV or spend too much time online. We also don’t get ears pierced or smoke. At meals, we don’t tap the bowl with chopsticks, and we don’t talk with mouth full.
In the future, China will keep growing and spreading the friendly spirit of the Asian Games. We want to make a better world where old traditions and new ideas work together.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。开头已给出，引出接下来要介绍更多关于中国的信息。
第二步，具体介绍。根据题目给出的要点展开介绍，包括文化古城、家庭规则、餐桌礼仪、畅想未来几个方面。
第三步，书写结语。以畅想未来结尾。
[亮点词汇]
① a famous historical and cultural city 历史文化名城
② disciplined 遵守纪律的
③ get ears pierced 打耳洞
④ at meals 用餐时
[高分句型]
① As a famous historical and cultural city, Hangzhou has Yuhang Paper Umbrellas as a beautiful traditional craft.（as...介词短语作状语）
② We want to make a better world where old traditions and new ideas work together.（where引导的定语从句）
答案第1页，共2页中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
外研版英语八年级上册Module 11 Way of life 模块话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．从小在美国长大的Jim要随妈妈来中国探亲，他想了解一些中国的风俗习惯。假如你是他的朋友大明，请根据提示，给Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。根据提示可适当发挥。
提示：1. 与他人第一次见面要问候、握手；
2. 去别人家做客时要带上一些礼物，如鲜花、水果等，不能送钟表；
3. 就餐时最好不要把食物吃光。
参考词汇：eat up吃光
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
2．假设你是李华你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格中的信息写一封回信。词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运等
使用场所 婚礼、春节等
表达方式 中国结、红包等
参考词汇：婚礼wedding；中国结Chinese knot；红包red packet；代表stand for
Dear Tony，
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．大明要去一个美国家庭吃饭。请你根据以下提示告诉他美国的餐桌礼仪和风俗习惯。
1. 可以带一件小礼物，如一束花或者一瓶酒(如果那个家庭喜欢喝酒的话)。
2. 应当按时或者稍迟5～10分钟到达,不要早到。如果将要迟到15分钟以上的话,要打电话告诉他们。
3. 在餐桌旁要尽量随意一些。如果不知道怎样做，就问问旁边的人。
4. 如果喜欢主人准备的食物，要说出来。当然，还应当感谢主人的款待，过后寄一张卡片或表达谢意的纸条也是一个好主意。
参考词汇：knife刀子；fork叉；spoon汤匙；uncomfortable不舒服的；nervous紧张的；host男主人；hostess女主人。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你叫王东，你的一位外国朋友杰斯(Jesse)要来中国参观。在他来中国之前，你想向他介绍一下中国人的习俗。内容包括以下几点：
1．在中国必须靠右行；
2．当你碰到别人时常问好，而不是鞠躬；
3．吃饭时常用筷子，不是一定非得把盘子里的东西吃完；
4．饭后人们通常沏茶喝，临走时要有礼貌地道别。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．书面表达
暑假就要到了，假设你们学校的外籍教师Miss Green要到青岛旅游度假，她向你(Zhang Ming)了解青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动。请你为她写一封信作简要的介绍，内容包括：
1．青岛位于中国东部，在美丽的海边，这里春天暖和多风，夏天不太热、经常下雨，秋天凉爽，冬天较冷，最低气温在零下4度。
2．夏天是去游泳和划船的最好时间。这里的沙滩很好，适合打沙滩排球(beach volleyball) 。
要求：不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you can have a good time there. Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ming
6．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如见面问候、待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：
What do we do when we meet people for the first time
How do we behave properly at table
提示要点：
1：初次见面：中国人第一次见面应该要礼貌握手，热情谈话；
2：待人接物：做客别人家最好携带礼物，尤其是在春节等节假日，礼物可以是我们的传统食物、手工等；
3：餐桌礼仪：在中国，吃正餐是非常重要的场合，不能用筷子指人，不能在有长辈时第一个动筷，不能敲碗等等；
要求：
1. 短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
3. 短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.
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I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．2023年10月8日，第19届亚运会在杭州闭幕。请以志愿者的身份，根据下面内容写一篇英语短文。
文化古城：余杭纸伞Yuhang Paper Umbrellas，西湖龙井Longjing tea ...
家庭规则：要求严格，少看电视，少上网，不打耳洞，不吸烟
餐桌礼仪：筷子的使用，不礼貌的行为
畅想未来：展示中国的新发展，传播亚运精神，共创美好未来
要求：
1.书写规范认真，词数不少于80单词，开头己给出，不计入总词数；
2.文章内容必须包含导图内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
The 19th Asian Games closed in Hangzhou on October 8th. As a volunteer, I want to introduce more about China to you.
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