人教版九年级下学期专题复习写作(1)课件(共29张PPT)

(共29张PPT)
How to write an English composition
Fried chicken
Hamburger
A hamburger
Lead-in
Top bread
Bottom bread
Middle part
The beginning
The body
The ending
How do you make your “hamburger” “delicious” and “healthy”
Step 1: 审
审
时态
人称
体裁（记叙文，
应用文，议论文）
Tip：用笔勾画
主题
Presentation
“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文参评。
参考词汇：environmental protection
注意：（1）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名。
（2）文章标题已经给出，但不计入总词数。
（3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
拯救地球
存在的环境问题
1.空气污染；
2.……
解决的方法
1.更多地乘坐公共交通工具；2.…… 3.……
呼吁保护地球
审什么？
1.审人称
2.审时态
3.审体裁
4.审话题
囗第一人称 囗第二人称 囗第三人称
囗过去时 囗现在时 囗将来时
囗记叙文 囗议论文 囗应用文 囗说明文
文章属于哪类常考话题？
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环保类
Para 1: environmental problems
Para 2: the way to solve these problems
Para 3: ask everyone to protect the earth
Step 2: 列
用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
Step 2: 列
Tips: 根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏！
用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
Para 1: __________________________________________________________________________________________
Para 2:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para 3:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
The beginning
The body
The ending
air pollution
water pollution
take more public transportation
plant more trees
don’t pour polluted water into the river
protect the earth and save the earth
Step 3: 加
Para 1: __________________________________________________________________________________________
Para 2:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para 3:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
The beginning
The body
The ending
加主语和宾语，使句子结构完整。
There is air pollution.
There is water pollution.
We can take more public transportation.
We can plant more trees.
Don’t pour polluted water into the river.
Let’s protect the earth and save the earth.
1.表文章结构顺序：First, second…next …then, finally;　
2.表并列补充关系的(递进关系)
not only …but also 不但…而且， at the same time 同时
3.表转折对比关系的：however, but
4.用来陈述正反方的不同观点（一般用于议论文章中）：On the one hand… , on the other hand…一方面，又一方面; Everything has two sides…(事物都具有两面性)
5.表因果关系的：because（不与so连用）, as a result (结果) , thanks to（多亏），because of
Step 4: 连
恰当运用关联词和过渡句，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。
6.表进行举例说明：For example+句子（只举一例） , like, such as…and so on （可举多例）
7.表陈述事实：In fact 事实上, actually
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know, In my opinion 依我看 , To be honest 诚实地说
9.表总结：In a word（总之）, All in all.
There is air pollution. Also, there is also water pollution.
What can we do to save the earth First, we can take more public transportation. Second, we can plant more trees. Third, don’t pour polluted water into the river.
The earth is our home. Let’s protect and save the earth together.
Tom’s composition
Step 4: 连
Para 1: __________________________________________________________________________________________
Para 2:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
Para 3:
____________________________________________________________
The beginning
The body
The ending
恰当运用关联词和过渡句。
There is air pollution.
Also there is water pollution.
First, we can take more public transportation.
Second, we can plant more trees.
Third, don’t pour polluted water into the river.
Let’s protect the earth and save the earth.
What can we do to save the earth
Step 5: 美
美
善用词汇
活用句型
谚语俗语
妙用从句
在有把握的情况下，展示自己的写作功底。
There is air pollution.
There is serious air pollution.
There is serious air pollution which can do harm to people.
There is serious air pollution which can do harm to people. It’s mainly caused by having too many cars and factories.
加形容词或副词
加定语从句
加其他句子补充说明
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Where there is a will, there is a way.
3.It’s never too old to learn.
4.Think twice before acting.
5.No pains, no gains. 6.Knowledge is power.
7.Failure is the mother of success.
8.To see is to believe.
9.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
10. Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
英文常用谚语
There is air pollution. Also, there is water pollution.
What can we do to save the earth First, we can take more public transportation. Second, we can plant more trees. Third, don’t pour polluted water into the river.
The earth is our home. Let’s take action to save the earth.
Group work
Work in groups to help Tom beautify the composition. Use at least one saying and one attributive clause（定语从句）.
Group 1-5: Para 1 and 3; Group 6-10: Para 2
There is air pollution. Also, there is also water pollution.
Nowadays, the environment is becoming worse and worse. There is serious air pollution which can do harm to people. It’s mainly caused by having too many cars and factories.There is also water pollution because many factories pour polluted water into the river.
Para 1
Before:
After:
What can we do to save the earth First, we can take more public transportation. Second, we can plant more trees. Third, don’t polluted water into the river.
What can we do to solve these problems and save the earth First, we can take more public transportation instead of driving cars. Second, we are supposed to plant more trees because trees can provide us with much fresh air. Third, the government should stop factories from pouring polluted water into the river.
Para 2
Before:
After:
The earth is our home. Let’s take action to save the earth.
The earth is our home. It’s our duty to protect the earth. Let’s take action to save the earth. Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
Para 3
Before:
After:
Nowadays, the environment is becoming worse and worse. There is serious air pollution which can do harm to people. It’s mainly caused by having too many cars and factories.There is also water pollution because many factories pour polluted water into the river.
What can we do to solve these problems and save the earth First, we can take more public transportation instead of driving cars. Second, we are supposed to plant more trees because trees can provide us with much fresh air. Third, the government should stop factories from pouring polluted water into the river.
The earth is our home. It’s our duty to protect the earth. Let’s take action to save the earth. Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
Step 6: 查
九查：1.格式、时态是否正确
2.主谓是否一致
3.要点是否全面
4.人称是否正确
5.语序是否有问题
6.语言是否符合习惯　
7.句子结构是否完整
8.固定短语是否恰当
9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
通读全文， 检查复核
Step 7: 誊
书写注意事项：
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。
2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用胶带的情况——给人一种凌乱的感觉。
3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。
If you are the teacher, which one do you like better
回顾初中3年的成长历程，你一定有很多感受。假设你是李华，你将代表你校2024年毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。
注意：（1）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名。
（2）文章标题已经给出，但不计入总词数。
（3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
毕业发言
描述学校
1.校园环境；
2.老师及同学；
回忆学习、生活收获
1.知识方面；2.…… 3.……
表达谢意
1.对老师；
2.……
Practice
审什么？
1.审人称
2.审时态
3.审体裁
4.审话题
囗第一人称 囗第二人称 囗第三人称
囗过去时 囗现在时 囗将来时
囗记叙文 囗议论文 囗应用文 囗说明文
文章属于哪类常考话题？
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毕业演讲稿
My dear teachers and fellow graduates,
Good afternoon! It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2024. Our school is a beautiful place to study in. The teachers always do their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. Our classmates often give us a hand when I have difficulties.
Looking back at these past three years, we have achieved a lot. We have made a lot of close friends. We have taken part in many activities. What’s more, we have improved our learning skills.
At this moment, I would like to thank all of our teachers, our parents and classmates for what you have done for us.
同桌互评
Love English, love writing!
Fried chicken
Hamburger