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2025外研版高中英语选择性必修第二册
Unit 6 Survival
Part 4 Writing
生存故事
写作题目
请根据以下内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你在一次地震中的逃生经历,要点如下:
1.时间:昨天晚上;
2.事件发生的过程:地震来袭时,你正在做家庭作业,突然感觉房间在摇晃,一些书从书架上落下来,所以你推测是发生了地震。你听到人们在大声喊叫,便急忙和父母一起下楼;
3.结果:地震过后,建筑和人们都安然无恙。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adv.在室内
2. adj.极其可怕的
3. v.推断,推定
4. 在此期间;与此同时
5. 彻底摧毁,消灭
答案 1.indoors 2.terrifying 3.infer 4.in the meantime 5.wipe out
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍地震发生的时间
(1)I (正在做)my homework last night.
第二段:详细描述地震发生时周围事物的变化以及人们的表现
(2)I felt (我的房间的震动).
(3)The shake (导致一些书掉落)onto the floor from the bookshelf (室内的).
(4)The shake (是如此可怕以至于)I (推测) it was an earthquake.
(5) (与此同时),I (听到一些人在喊), “Earthquake! Earthquake!”
(6)I (急忙下楼) with my parents.
第三段:简要说明地震后的情况
(7)Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough (摧毁) the building.
答案 (1)was doing (2)the shake of my room (3)caused some books to fall; indoors
(4)was so terrifying that; inferred that (5)In the meantime; heard some people shouting
(6)hurried downstairs (7) to wipe out
2.句式升级
(8)用关系代词which合并句(2)和句(3)
(9)用when合并句(1)和句(8)
答案 (8) I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors.
(9)I was doing my homework last night when I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors.
连句成篇
I was doing my homework last night when I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors.
The shake was so terrifying that I inferred that it was an earthquake. In the meantime, I heard some people shouting, “Earthquake! Earthquake!” I hurried downstairs with my parents.
Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough to wipe out the building. The building was still there and everyone in the building was safe.
写作积累
关于生存故事的增分佳句
一、开头:介绍事故发生的时间、地点和人物等基本信息
1.I was doing my homework last night when I felt the shake of my room.昨天晚上我正在写作业,这时我感到我的房间在震动。
2.Last week, I participated in a wilderness survival activity in a camp.上周我在一个营地参加了一次野外生存活动。
3.I was about to go to school when the lift came to a sudden stop.我正要去上学,电梯突然停了下来。
二、主体:描写历险经历和个人感受
1.a terrible storm hit/struck...一场可怕的暴风雨袭击了……
2.I was alone in the lift and felt a bit frightened and worried at first.我一个人在电梯里,一开始感到有点害怕和担心。
3.I managed to make myself calm down.我设法使自己平静了下来。
4.I tried to cry for help, but no one seemed to be able to hear me from outside.我试着呼救,但是外面似乎没有人听到我的声音。
5.With the help of the rescue team, people who were trapped in the flood were saved.在救援队的帮助下,被困在洪水中的人们得救了。
三、结尾:表达自己对历险经历的感悟
1.In conclusion, stay calm in the face of danger and soon we can find a way to protect ourselves.总之,在面对危险时要保持冷静,很快我们就可以找到保护自己的方法。
2.I felt tired and sleepy,but I further realised the importance of being brave and confident.我感到疲倦和困倦,但我进一步意识到勇敢和自信的重要性。
3.It is of vital importance for us to make adjustments when exposed to extreme conditions.遇到极端情况,对我们来说作出调整是极其重要的。
实战演练
假定你是李华,你上周参加了一次野外生存(wilderness survival)活动。请写一篇短文介绍你的体验过程,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.活动过程中你遇到的困难以及是如何克服的;
3.活动带给你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 6 Survival
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Last week, I participated in a wilderness survival activity in a camp. Before the activity, participants were organized separately, meaning we had to cope with any emergency on our own. As for me, the largest challenge was my fear of snakes. I lay in my tent the whole night awake, trying to get rid of the fear which was always surrounding me. The next morning, I felt tired and sleepy, but I further realised the importance of being brave and confident. Finally, I succeeded in finishing all the tasks given to me.
All in all, I believe I will never forget this meaningful experience.
1.重点词汇
①participate in 参加
②separately adv.分别地;单独地
③emergency n.紧急情况
④succeed in 在……方面取得成功
2.亮点句型
①Before the activity, participants were organized separately,meaning we had to cope with any emergency on our own.(现在分词短语作结果状语)活动开始前,参与者被单独安排开,这意味着我们必须独自应对任何紧急情况。
②I lay in my tent the whole night awake,trying to get rid of the fear which was always surrounding me.(现在分词短语作伴随状语;which引导定语从句)我在帐篷里躺着,一夜没睡,试图摆脱一直笼罩着我的恐惧。
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